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Hahaha, another hilarious one-shot. I know I am super late to the party and I imagine the OP doesn't even post here anymore but anyways...A great follow-up to the last. It's really too bad that after "Crimson", they sort of stalled Clois development. It's definitely in keeping with their characters to deny to each other about their feelings. Good parallels with the underwear, Lois and Clark's subconscious or perhaps not so subconscious desire for each other is revealed, and paralleled. Lois and Clark really like driving each other crazy...in more ways than one haha. I kind of figured something would happen to prevent them from kissing, and Martha walking was hilarious. It also was a nice nod, intentional or not, to "Gone", where Lois and Clark are seemingly caught together having a shower together .
Anyways, I know there is another sequel, so that should be a good read too.
I so wish that you were still writing. I love how fun and fresh and wonderful this is. Your dialogue and flirty banter are perfect and I just miss your characters.
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