Title - RUSH *The Non-Angsty Version*
Rating - Still in progress...but for now PG/PG-13
Disclaimer - A Clana fan's dream...but no I don't own anything
Summary - umm basically I'll be showing what the series would have probably been like if Clark and Lana went on there date as planned in 'Rush'. Pete and Chloe might not be the ones who get infected by the cave worm. They might, they might not. Or maybe it's...Lex? Martha? Lana?...Can the worms even affect Clark? And what's up with Pete? Can he fool everyone with his wild act or does one person see right through it? AND is Chloe backing off on Clark, and accepting his new status change with Lana, or will she just cause a little drama?
CH 1
RAVE IN A CAVE
Pete’s car pulls up near the caves entrance. Pete looks around with worry as he notices that there are a lot of other cars and then it finally hits him…
The rave is held in the cave?! Pete then began to think of what Clark’s reaction is going to be Hmm lets see, Clark has super-strength…so something will probably be broken by the time he hears “rave” and “cave” in the same sentence.
Pete and Chloe finally get out of the car.
Sounding upset and a little angered Pete simply says “I don’t believe this.”
Not taking notice that Pete is upset or angry Chloe just replies “I know. Isn’t it awesome? A rave in a cave.” Clever, I wonder how many horny teenagers it took to create that piece of art.
Now sounding more annoyed then upset “Why didn’t you tell me it was here?”
“I didn’t know. I just downloaded the directions from the internet.”
Pete knowing just how important the cave is to Clark is now really worried about what Clark will do when he finds out “Clark’s gonna go crazy.” I hope I’m not anywhere near him when he finds out, he can get scary now and then.
Curious, Chloe asks “What is his obsession with these caves?” Well Clark does find astronomy fun, so I guess it’s not that surprising that he finds some hundred year old caves interesting. He is a pretty big dork.
Knowing he can’t tell Chloe the real reason he plays dumb “I don’t know. I think Kyla really got to him.” Needing to warn Clark about this, Pete reaches for his phone. “I better give him a call, give him a heads-up.”
Chloe grabs Pete shoulder, getting his attention and says “These caves survived hundreds of years.” Now just looking forward in having some fun Chloe seals the deal with “I don’t think a little Moby’s gonna hurt them. Okay?” With her now leading the way into the cave says “Let’s go.” Chloe turns around, smiles at Pete and says “Come on” before being engulfed by the loud music, blasting from the cave.
CH 2
THE PAINTINGS
Lights flashing around the cave, in every direction. Tons of teenagers are dancing to the music that’s playing. Pete and Chloe squirm there way through the crowd. Spotting a couple sucking face right against a cave painting, Pete goes over to them, worried they’re messing up the painting.
“Excuse me.” The couple continues making out, oblivious of Pete’s nagging or even presence. Okay I can see that there mouths are occupied but there ears should be working. Determined to keep the painting safe, Pete tries once more. “Hey, excuse me.” Now seeing he got the couples attention “Can you please step off the walls. The paintings” Pete tries to explain, with the couple being the horny teenagers they are, the continue swapping spit.
Amused Chloe says “Pete, I really don’t think they care about the cave paintings.”
Pointing to the painting “Yeah, but, Chloe, these pictographs are sacred.” Explains Pete. We got to save these painting from these horny teenagers…whoa okay don’t hear that everyday…I’ve been hanging around Clark to much.
Now a little more understanding, Chloe walks back over to the couple. “I’m sorry, do you guys know that the clay doesn’t wash out of your clothes?” I just have a way with words. A little mad by this new piece of info, the couple walks away. Chloe turns back to Pete and is now smiling proud of her job well done “Just gotta hit them where it hurts.”
A little more relaxed now, Pete starts getting into the music playing and joins in on the party.
<Tell me what you guys think...I already posted some of this on sweet and I thought that I should post it here also>
Rating - Still in progress...but for now PG/PG-13
Disclaimer - A Clana fan's dream...but no I don't own anything
Summary - umm basically I'll be showing what the series would have probably been like if Clark and Lana went on there date as planned in 'Rush'. Pete and Chloe might not be the ones who get infected by the cave worm. They might, they might not. Or maybe it's...Lex? Martha? Lana?...Can the worms even affect Clark? And what's up with Pete? Can he fool everyone with his wild act or does one person see right through it? AND is Chloe backing off on Clark, and accepting his new status change with Lana, or will she just cause a little drama?
CH 1
RAVE IN A CAVE
Pete’s car pulls up near the caves entrance. Pete looks around with worry as he notices that there are a lot of other cars and then it finally hits him…
The rave is held in the cave?! Pete then began to think of what Clark’s reaction is going to be Hmm lets see, Clark has super-strength…so something will probably be broken by the time he hears “rave” and “cave” in the same sentence.
Pete and Chloe finally get out of the car.
Sounding upset and a little angered Pete simply says “I don’t believe this.”
Not taking notice that Pete is upset or angry Chloe just replies “I know. Isn’t it awesome? A rave in a cave.” Clever, I wonder how many horny teenagers it took to create that piece of art.
Now sounding more annoyed then upset “Why didn’t you tell me it was here?”
“I didn’t know. I just downloaded the directions from the internet.”
Pete knowing just how important the cave is to Clark is now really worried about what Clark will do when he finds out “Clark’s gonna go crazy.” I hope I’m not anywhere near him when he finds out, he can get scary now and then.
Curious, Chloe asks “What is his obsession with these caves?” Well Clark does find astronomy fun, so I guess it’s not that surprising that he finds some hundred year old caves interesting. He is a pretty big dork.
Knowing he can’t tell Chloe the real reason he plays dumb “I don’t know. I think Kyla really got to him.” Needing to warn Clark about this, Pete reaches for his phone. “I better give him a call, give him a heads-up.”
Chloe grabs Pete shoulder, getting his attention and says “These caves survived hundreds of years.” Now just looking forward in having some fun Chloe seals the deal with “I don’t think a little Moby’s gonna hurt them. Okay?” With her now leading the way into the cave says “Let’s go.” Chloe turns around, smiles at Pete and says “Come on” before being engulfed by the loud music, blasting from the cave.
CH 2
THE PAINTINGS
Lights flashing around the cave, in every direction. Tons of teenagers are dancing to the music that’s playing. Pete and Chloe squirm there way through the crowd. Spotting a couple sucking face right against a cave painting, Pete goes over to them, worried they’re messing up the painting.
“Excuse me.” The couple continues making out, oblivious of Pete’s nagging or even presence. Okay I can see that there mouths are occupied but there ears should be working. Determined to keep the painting safe, Pete tries once more. “Hey, excuse me.” Now seeing he got the couples attention “Can you please step off the walls. The paintings” Pete tries to explain, with the couple being the horny teenagers they are, the continue swapping spit.
Amused Chloe says “Pete, I really don’t think they care about the cave paintings.”
Pointing to the painting “Yeah, but, Chloe, these pictographs are sacred.” Explains Pete. We got to save these painting from these horny teenagers…whoa okay don’t hear that everyday…I’ve been hanging around Clark to much.
Now a little more understanding, Chloe walks back over to the couple. “I’m sorry, do you guys know that the clay doesn’t wash out of your clothes?” I just have a way with words. A little mad by this new piece of info, the couple walks away. Chloe turns back to Pete and is now smiling proud of her job well done “Just gotta hit them where it hurts.”
A little more relaxed now, Pete starts getting into the music playing and joins in on the party.
<Tell me what you guys think...I already posted some of this on sweet and I thought that I should post it here also>
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