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  • Mr Right or Mr ‘Right Now’

    Short summary : Lois is determined to wait for Mr Right, but it’s so hard when the gorgeous guy who sits opposite looks at her like he wants to take her ‘right now’.
    Title
    : Mr Right or Mr ‘Right Now’
    Author
    : KatherineKent (Victoria)
    Pairing:
    Clois
    Rating
    : PG
    Spoilers
    (when applicable): None


    I'm guessing this will end up AU but to start with I suppose you could say it could fit in around the beginning of Season 9. Hopefully this is going to be short. Not sure if it will go ‘adult’ or not. I’ll post separate sections in the Adult section if it become necessary.



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    Lois was tired.

    Tired of meaningless one night stands with the wrong guy.

    Tired of short-term relationships gone bad.

    She wanted a solid long-term relationship with the right man. No more flirting with every gorgeous guy, no matter how much he smiled at her or flattered her. She was saving herself for Mr Right.

    Oh, but it was so hard when the gorgeous guy sat opposite would give her those looks. When he’d stand beside her and peer over her shoulder, his head next to hers, his mouth inches from her ear. When he’d brush past her on the way to the copy machine. She knew what he wanted and the thought made her heart race. He wanted her ... right here ... right now. But there was no indication that he wanted a ‘relationship’

    So, she had to be strong. It was Mr Right ... or not at all.

    She just had to find a way to resist Mr ‘Right Now’.

    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    Thoughts?

    Comments are my carrot on the end of a dangly stick. They keep me moving forward like a dumb donkey. Umm, maybe I shouldn't call myself a dumb donkey.
    Last edited by KatherineKent; 01-22-2012, 03:54 PM.

  • #2
    ^^ Lol .. I take it Mr Right Now is clark she is resisting.. but poor Lois he is actually Mr Right too. Please! Continue!! *throws cookies rather then carrots* there I will not add to your mental image of being a dumb donkey..cause you're not.

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    • #3
      Good story

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      • #4
        Do it! :P And the mental image (donkey) made me giggle...

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        • #5
          Sounds great!

          Ppms!

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          • #6
            This sounds like a good story so far. Please continue with it.

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            • #7
              Hahaha!!! That just sounds hilarious ........ If Lois knew that Mr. Right Now is also Mr. Right
              I'm loving it Update soon!!!!
              Last edited by MariVe; 04-27-2011, 02:58 PM.

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              • #8
                Sounds good!!

                I see you wasted no time starting a new story... just what I like to see!!!

                Awesome job... looking forward to the next update!!

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by FWvidchick
                  ^^ Lol .. I take it Mr Right Now is clark she is resisting.. but poor Lois he is actually Mr Right too. Please! Continue!! *throws cookies rather then carrots* there I will not add to your mental image of being a dumb donkey..cause you're not.
                  Yup. It's Clark. How long do you think I should take before she realises he is both?

                  Originally posted by Tebow15
                  Good story
                  Thanks.

                  Originally posted by mz-supermanfan
                  Do it! :P And the mental image (donkey) made me giggle...
                  Glad I got you to laugh.

                  Originally posted by TheCloisLover
                  Sounds great!

                  Ppms!
                  Thanks.

                  Originally posted by clarkfan325
                  This sounds like a good story so far. Please continue with it.
                  Originally posted by MariVe
                  Hahaha!!! That just sounds hilarious ........ If Lois knew that Mr. Right Now is also Mr. Right
                  I'm loving it Update soon!!!!
                  Thank you. Yup, he's definitely both.

                  Originally posted by s01itaire90
                  Sounds good!!

                  I see you wasted no time starting a new story... just what I like to see!!!

                  Awesome job... looking forward to the next update!!
                  Thanks.

                  ________________

                  Just to let you all know. This wasn't the story I was going to do when I finished Band of Blue - I've got a different one I've made all sorts of notes on - but I had inspiration for this 2 days ago and just had to go with it.

                  So, without further ado, here is your first update.

                  *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

                  Lois peered through the glass window separating the copy room from the bull-pen. It was her private pleasure spot. From here she could see his desk but the angle meant that he had to choose to turn to be able to see her. That gave her ample warning so that she could look away. Today was a particularly good day for her private pleasure. The light was streaming through the stained glass window directly above his desk. It lit up the whole area around him. There was a glow around his body.


                  God, what a body.


                  She’d had many experiences of what truly hid under those shirts and whenever she brought them to mind she turned to mush. Today she allowed herself to wallow in that mush today by transporting her mind back to cornfields, lakesides and showers. She knew there was a chance she was drooling slightly. She even heard a tiny moan come from her lips when he stood to reach over for some papers on her desk.

                  God, what a backside.


                  Lois thanked God on a daily basis for Clark Kent.

                  She was rudely disturbed when Jeff, the intern, opened the door suddenly. He must have been in a hurry as his arms were full of papers and he couldn’t stop the door from crashing into the wall behind. The sound made Lois jump and she quickly picked up her fake copies and brightened her face, wiping off all possible expressions of guilt.

                  Back at her desk she sat down only to hiccup loudly. She put her hand to her mouth in shock and giggled. That must have been some shock, she thought.

                  “Lois?” came a sexy voice. “Are you ok?” She looked up to see Clark smiling at her.

                  “Mmmm,” she replied, trying to hold her breath. Hiccup.

                  “Do you need a glass of water?”

                  She shook her head. Hiccup.

                  “Maybe I should give you a scare.” He stood and stepped closer to her. When her eyes widened in fear he stopped.

                  “That’s what started them,” she rushed to answer then held her breath again. Hiccup. She released her breath and sighed. “What’s the use?” Hiccup.

                  “Here,” Clark smiled at her again. “My mom had a strange technique that actually sometimes worked on me.” He walked over and then stood behind her. She swivelled in her chair to look at him. He bent down and rested his hands on the arms of her chair. Blue-Green eyes looking into Green-Brown eyes he smirked. “You need to be the other way round,” he said very quietly.

                  Lois found she was holding her breath again but for a very different reason. She could hear her heart pounding. He pushed and the chair turned away. When she was facing her desk again he reached out to her neck and gently moved her hair out of the way.

                  “Mom used to rub the area between my shoulder-blades.” She felt breath on her neck. His mouth must be just there. She closed her eyes. His fingers trailed down her spine till they reached the top of her t-shirt. Tugging it down ever so slightly to reach the appropriate spot he then began the most incredible massage Lois had ever experienced ... and it was only covering two inches of her back. He circled round and round: she drifted in bliss. Her eyes closed she tried to imagine what he was doing, how he was stood, where his fingers were. She was sure his head was dropping slowly. She felt hot breath tickle her neck. A shiver down her spine tingled all the way to her toes. She imagined his lips to be just a hairs-breadth from her skin.

                  “Seems it worked,” came a teasing voice and her eyes shot open. Clark was sat back in his desk. He had a boyish sparkle to his grin.

                  “Huh!” Lois couldn’t form any words, or any thoughts.

                  “The hiccups. They’ve gone.” He nodded at her.

                  “Oh, yeah. Thanks Smallville.” She lifted up her coffee cup and saluted him.

                  Damn it. He does it on purpose.


                  Lois thanked God on a daily basis for Clark Kent. But she cursed the devil hourly.

                  *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*


                  So, I'm going into hospital tomorrow for a nasty operation. Not looking forward to it but hopefully I should be out the same day. Please leave nice comments for me to read when I get home.

                  Also, suggestions are gratefully accepted. I'm not really sure where I'm going with this, or how to get there. I've got ideas but they havn't turned into anything solid yet. So let me know what you'd like to see.

                  Thanks all.

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                  • #10
                    Fab update.. and I thank God regularly too for Clois/Clark and Tom..lol

                    love the last line tho about cursing the devil hourly. Haha great little update and as for Lois realizing.. drag it out a bit but go with what feels natural to the story.. in other words don't think about it yet.. wait a few updates and a see how you feel on it.

                    Sorry to hear about the operation. I will keep you in my prayers and wish you well Victoria! *hugs*

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                    • #11
                      lol, Lois really have the hots for Clark!

                      loved it!

                      ppms!

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                      • #12
                        Clark is just evil.... Lois was putty in his hands hahaha XD!!!
                        I was almost falling off my bed reading Lois thought while she was drooling in her secret spot
                        Great update and I hope everythiing goes well on your operation !!!!

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                        • #13
                          Love it. Update soon.

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                          • #14
                            Awesome start! With it this good I wonder what it would be like in the AFF section.

                            Hope everything good with the operation.

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                            • #15
                              Great story! Hope you have a quick recovery.

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