Thanks Badtoad.
I would have knocked off 1-2 minutes of Chloe and spread that around between Jimmy & Lois (maybe Jimmy could have initially helped Lois get in to the Black Creek then stayed behind while she went in).
I would have scraped the Tess/Reagan DP scene altogether and added an extra DP scene with Clark getting interviewed and showing off his insane typing speed before getting hired.
Other than that.. I think they handled things well screen wise.
I would have knocked off 1-2 minutes of Chloe and spread that around between Jimmy & Lois (maybe Jimmy could have initially helped Lois get in to the Black Creek then stayed behind while she went in).
I would have scraped the Tess/Reagan DP scene altogether and added an extra DP scene with Clark getting interviewed and showing off his insane typing speed before getting hired.
Other than that.. I think they handled things well screen wise.
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