Ok, I have to say (because I'm a brutally honest person with little tact) while your writing style bugs me as it feels like you are speaking this story to me (and not letting it unfold before my eyes), that I am totally getting hooked on the this premise.
Unexpected fatherhood has never been a big draw for me before in romance writing, but your setup of this and her automatic pining for him and his connection with the kids already has me very interested.
So basically that's my bass ackwards way of saying I like it, keep it up.
Unexpected fatherhood has never been a big draw for me before in romance writing, but your setup of this and her automatic pining for him and his connection with the kids already has me very interested.
So basically that's my bass ackwards way of saying I like it, keep it up.
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