To Dodden
This is actually in response to Dodden's lengthy review at LaneKent.com , but I thought that yall would benefit from my synopsis of my journey through the book with the different characters.
*Note: MY words are in BOLD*
Dodden: Gotta love Jimmy. Now that he's not your typical happy go lucky photgrapher, it's interesting to see how his character could be viewed should action and tradegy arise. It's not often that someone involves Jimmy in the meat of a story. Usually he's just a backround character with a pippy attitude. Well done on creating a solid story for the man.
A very touching scene with April in the hospital room. My lord, how one comes out of an ordeal like that is beyond me, but here's hoping that he turns evil...well, maybe not. Can't wait to see what comes to follow since there really isn't any indication of what could possibly happen. I think that open sense of future is what really has me most drawn into the Jimmy storyline. It's very unique. I would have cried because of that scene at the hospital, but like I have said before, I'm emotionless and cold.
so far, Jimmy seems the most open-ended character right now. He has so much angst tugging at his heart like an anchor, and, yet, we have had glimpses of him still being a little carefree at work (chap 1)... and still we can see that the events of the past year have been traumatic to say the least. I continue to enjoy writing his story.
Dodden: This Jordan characer is very very peculiar. You gave us a great first glimpse into her earlier, but we finally got to learn a little more about her. Is she a meteor freak? I wouldn't begin to speculate because there could be so many reasons for her abilities. It's good to know that she can affect Clark. An impenatrable Clark Kent is much too boring. It's good to see that he still somewhat human. The involvment between Donovan and the woman is something I'm looking forward to knowing more about.
"Dr." Jordan Welles is something of a mystery... including Donovan, who apparently shares some link between her AND Lex. I have them both pinned down to long archs, but sadly memory "restoring" is not one of Jordan's powers... so no instant fix for Clark OR Lex. I guess the questions right now about them... 1) What is Jordan's agenda with Donovan, Lex, Clark and Lois? 2) What is Donovan's agenda pertaining to Clark and Lex and Luthorcorp and Level 33.1? 3) How did Donovan and Jordan come to be connected in this timeline?
Those are major questions that will come into play further along in this and the other books.
Dodden: Lois and Cark. Now there are some answers that were given, but there are sill a lot of questions hanging in the air. There seems like there is a lot more angst to come, and personaly, I can't wait for it. I'm sure that one of your next chapters will explore that more thuroughly, althought the last few paragraphs with Lois and Clark seemed to relay a lot of what is to come. I'm a little hesitant with Lois blaming herself. It seems she has pulled a Clark Kent guilt routine. I'm not saying that it isn't her fault, but I just hope she doesn't hit the floor sulking. It can be expected though, she inadvertanly caused him to forget their relationship. Sad, but very interesting.
What I love is that even though the characters tend to lose memory frequently on the show, Clark is usually the only one who gets those memores back. In your fic it seems as if that might not be possible. Living a long period of time without certain memories is more captivating to me than him getting them back instantly. As much as I would love to see him remember it all again, I just find the fact that he can't, and he might not ever be able to, so much more intriguing.
I don't see Lois as the type to blame herself for what happened, but I'm sure she's going to be upset no matter what. Jordan really ripped one of the happiest (albeit violent periods) chunks of Clark's memory away: being with Lois. She still has no clue how much was taken and if it's permanent. According to Jordan or her thoughts on Lex, it seems VERY permanent.
Dodden: Lana it seems is finally gone. I can't say that I'll miss her, but there will be a small emptyness were I won't be able to feel distain towards the woman anymore. Her ghost drove Lex to madness, and I only hope he doesn't suddenly go all soft. "Always a Luthor" Are the words I like to hear. 7 years completely gone, yikes.
Yes, Lana is gone. She won't be coming back... which marks my transition from Smallville-esque book style to the Clark as Superman style. Lana, in my mind has always been Smallville and now that this book is definitely away from Smallville (aside from mother Martha) she's finally getting the boot. The mental instability of Lex was really just a catalyst to show his true nature. Now... it's as if he never had that second chance at life that Season 1's pilot episode had given him. He hasn't learned a lesson from Clark saving him from the porsche crash. He's very much a wild card right now- will he act like season 6 Lex? like season 1's Lex? or maybe something completely different?
Dodden: On a side note...I can personaly do without Chloe. It's important to make sure Clark and Lois is the main attraction.
I do understand about Chloe. She still has a major part to play, but her storyline is less of an importance than previously. Her questions are less about what she's doing and more about who she will end up with. She thought Bruce was for her, but the break up has her facing important questions. She's already figured out what she wants to do with her life and how she's going to do it (journalism, the daily planet) and now it's more of finding the different pieces of her personality/fulfillment.
AUTHOR'S NOTE
This next chapter will be back at our present time- the year after Revenge... which i'm now referring to as Present Time and then i give the number of days from that point onward. Their maybe a few more flashbacks ahead in the book, but the major ones i've gone through and they've now dealt with the major questions.
Thanks for your awesome review, Dodden/Verk
Merry Christmas everyone!
This is actually in response to Dodden's lengthy review at LaneKent.com , but I thought that yall would benefit from my synopsis of my journey through the book with the different characters.
*Note: MY words are in BOLD*
Dodden: Gotta love Jimmy. Now that he's not your typical happy go lucky photgrapher, it's interesting to see how his character could be viewed should action and tradegy arise. It's not often that someone involves Jimmy in the meat of a story. Usually he's just a backround character with a pippy attitude. Well done on creating a solid story for the man.
A very touching scene with April in the hospital room. My lord, how one comes out of an ordeal like that is beyond me, but here's hoping that he turns evil...well, maybe not. Can't wait to see what comes to follow since there really isn't any indication of what could possibly happen. I think that open sense of future is what really has me most drawn into the Jimmy storyline. It's very unique. I would have cried because of that scene at the hospital, but like I have said before, I'm emotionless and cold.
so far, Jimmy seems the most open-ended character right now. He has so much angst tugging at his heart like an anchor, and, yet, we have had glimpses of him still being a little carefree at work (chap 1)... and still we can see that the events of the past year have been traumatic to say the least. I continue to enjoy writing his story.
Dodden: This Jordan characer is very very peculiar. You gave us a great first glimpse into her earlier, but we finally got to learn a little more about her. Is she a meteor freak? I wouldn't begin to speculate because there could be so many reasons for her abilities. It's good to know that she can affect Clark. An impenatrable Clark Kent is much too boring. It's good to see that he still somewhat human. The involvment between Donovan and the woman is something I'm looking forward to knowing more about.
"Dr." Jordan Welles is something of a mystery... including Donovan, who apparently shares some link between her AND Lex. I have them both pinned down to long archs, but sadly memory "restoring" is not one of Jordan's powers... so no instant fix for Clark OR Lex. I guess the questions right now about them... 1) What is Jordan's agenda with Donovan, Lex, Clark and Lois? 2) What is Donovan's agenda pertaining to Clark and Lex and Luthorcorp and Level 33.1? 3) How did Donovan and Jordan come to be connected in this timeline?
Those are major questions that will come into play further along in this and the other books.
Dodden: Lois and Cark. Now there are some answers that were given, but there are sill a lot of questions hanging in the air. There seems like there is a lot more angst to come, and personaly, I can't wait for it. I'm sure that one of your next chapters will explore that more thuroughly, althought the last few paragraphs with Lois and Clark seemed to relay a lot of what is to come. I'm a little hesitant with Lois blaming herself. It seems she has pulled a Clark Kent guilt routine. I'm not saying that it isn't her fault, but I just hope she doesn't hit the floor sulking. It can be expected though, she inadvertanly caused him to forget their relationship. Sad, but very interesting.
What I love is that even though the characters tend to lose memory frequently on the show, Clark is usually the only one who gets those memores back. In your fic it seems as if that might not be possible. Living a long period of time without certain memories is more captivating to me than him getting them back instantly. As much as I would love to see him remember it all again, I just find the fact that he can't, and he might not ever be able to, so much more intriguing.
I don't see Lois as the type to blame herself for what happened, but I'm sure she's going to be upset no matter what. Jordan really ripped one of the happiest (albeit violent periods) chunks of Clark's memory away: being with Lois. She still has no clue how much was taken and if it's permanent. According to Jordan or her thoughts on Lex, it seems VERY permanent.
Dodden: Lana it seems is finally gone. I can't say that I'll miss her, but there will be a small emptyness were I won't be able to feel distain towards the woman anymore. Her ghost drove Lex to madness, and I only hope he doesn't suddenly go all soft. "Always a Luthor" Are the words I like to hear. 7 years completely gone, yikes.
Yes, Lana is gone. She won't be coming back... which marks my transition from Smallville-esque book style to the Clark as Superman style. Lana, in my mind has always been Smallville and now that this book is definitely away from Smallville (aside from mother Martha) she's finally getting the boot. The mental instability of Lex was really just a catalyst to show his true nature. Now... it's as if he never had that second chance at life that Season 1's pilot episode had given him. He hasn't learned a lesson from Clark saving him from the porsche crash. He's very much a wild card right now- will he act like season 6 Lex? like season 1's Lex? or maybe something completely different?
Dodden: On a side note...I can personaly do without Chloe. It's important to make sure Clark and Lois is the main attraction.
I do understand about Chloe. She still has a major part to play, but her storyline is less of an importance than previously. Her questions are less about what she's doing and more about who she will end up with. She thought Bruce was for her, but the break up has her facing important questions. She's already figured out what she wants to do with her life and how she's going to do it (journalism, the daily planet) and now it's more of finding the different pieces of her personality/fulfillment.
This next chapter will be back at our present time- the year after Revenge... which i'm now referring to as Present Time and then i give the number of days from that point onward. Their maybe a few more flashbacks ahead in the book, but the major ones i've gone through and they've now dealt with the major questions.
Thanks for your awesome review, Dodden/Verk
Merry Christmas everyone!
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