Originally posted by Iowanmom
Okay!!! Here goes. Too funny, Cardinal. This is so true to form. Remove all the lies, the secrets, the half truths and you have an open, fun loving, gentle teasing relationship just begging to take flight. Beautiful, Cardinal, beautiful. Absolutely funny. Really, this is great!!!
**off to read more**
Okay!!! Here goes. Too funny, Cardinal. This is so true to form. Remove all the lies, the secrets, the half truths and you have an open, fun loving, gentle teasing relationship just begging to take flight. Beautiful, Cardinal, beautiful. Absolutely funny. Really, this is great!!!
**off to read more**
Originally posted by Cardinal
“Why are we meeting Pete? I thought it was going to be just us today,” Lana pouted slightly. At least it’s not Chloe. She couldn’t miss the fact that Clark and I are back together, and she always screws things up between us every time we get close. Well, not this time!
Another thing I’ve just thought of: I found out Clark’s secret before Chloe did! Hah!
I can’t believe myself. With all the things Chloe and her dad have done for me and as close as we have become friend-wise, all it took was one thought of her getting between Clark and me, and I was ready to b*tch slap her into next week.
“Why are we meeting Pete? I thought it was going to be just us today,” Lana pouted slightly. At least it’s not Chloe. She couldn’t miss the fact that Clark and I are back together, and she always screws things up between us every time we get close. Well, not this time!
Another thing I’ve just thought of: I found out Clark’s secret before Chloe did! Hah!
I can’t believe myself. With all the things Chloe and her dad have done for me and as close as we have become friend-wise, all it took was one thought of her getting between Clark and me, and I was ready to b*tch slap her into next week.
To me, those few sentences paint a very nasty Lana, but this is Clana. I guess not all Clana fics can have Chloe in a better light, huh? Don't mind me, I've just been smacked in the face with reality and it stings a bit. I... I... simply don't know what to say. I am shocked.
I mean for me to be putting on my Clana hat, truly enjoying and relishing the Clana on BTBR, and to see my exstatic and very accepting quote above, the few lines from Lana's thoughts have truly left me.....speechless and shaken. Who knew you had it in ya? Not me. But that is the risk of being here where I don't belong. Right?
Anyway, (as I try to shake this depressing and rather painful realization off), I'm going to continue to read because you said I'd enjoy Chloe in this fic, even tho I am weary.
Sorry I seemed to have left it before. I don't know why I did for sure, but I look forward to hopefully seeing in this fic, a Chloe that you have successfully been able to paint for me in the past.
Moving on,
I liked the trust issue being focused on. Lana indeed has been waiting a long time for Clark to be truthful. Wow, this Lana seems.... I don't know, almost gruff.... jealous, ummm I don't know what else...
I thought Pete finding out about Lana knowing was great. Now he has someone to talk to. When Clark turned and called Lana Dearest, that was a hoot. I laughed. Very funny, the exchange between Clark and Lana. You paint a confused Pete very well.
I love Pete. Did you know that???
*will read more soon*
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