God, this is some of the most bland, poorly-written pap I've come across in years.
A character will flip-flop on a major behavioural position at the drop of a hat. On top of which, it seems that most of the dialog in the entire soap operatic drivel is 'You LIED to me', 'Stand DOWN!', 'Thea, please' or 'I just can't take this right now'.
Please, please try to write something that humans might say.