Hey, there! This is something I've spent along time thinking about doing. A rewrite of season 10! With a Chlark romantic angle. Now, keep in mind that this will not be fully Chlark based. Other relationships will be important. But the main romantic relationship will be our favorite couple. Clex will also be in the forefront. Hints of Clois, Clana, Lexana, Chimmy, Chlollie will be something that echoes throughout this story.
Now, my great hope is that this will be a very interactive process between us. I really want to have a full 22 episode season. And that's something I know I just can't do on my own. So, I call upon you my fellow Chlarkers! I hope that this is allowed, because I want us to pull our resources and work together as a writing staff. I'm just not that very good of a writer myself, so it's important to me to have you guys here. I'm an idea man guy mostly, but I still do write. Just not very well. I've got some strange ideas. Ideas that may seem off-putting. But I need you guys.
The way this will hopefully go is that I'll provide a basic outline for each episode, or maybe just an idea, to you, or a few of you, and you go and write it. Write it in whatever style you want. It doesn't have to be in the format I put mine in. I'm just not good enough to write it as fanfiction usually is. Obviously you will post it as your own story, on fanfiction.net or any other site, but please acknowledge the joint effort placed into it by the collective group. As will I. If you wish we can all come together and figure something out as a group if we're stuck on a storypoint or a piece of characterization. I myself may need help with the completion and polishing of this episode, but we'll cross that bridge when we come to it. Oh! And maybe one of you video maker Chlarkers can make previously on recaps. Lol.
Darksied will remain the villain. And my ideas will include Batman, Wonder Woman, Green Lantern, Brainiac, the return of Lindsey Harrison (Fake Kara from Covenant), Etrigan the Demon, Morgan Le Fey, Mxlpxlt (or however you spell it. lol), Krypton backstory, Zod, Jay Garrick, the Anti-Life equation, the Flashpoint Paradox storyline, and Inza.
Pleas enjoy and spread the word my fellow Chlarkers!
SEASON 10.
EPISODE 1: LAZARUS.
TEASER
EXT. SMALLVILLE-OCTOBER 1989.
MOIRA SULLIVAN stands outside an auto body shop on a payphone, talking to her husband, smiling.
MOIRA: Yes. Okay. You were right Gabe. Going to see my sister and her ass of a husband, definitely not one of my best ideas. Yes. Yes, she's fine.
Moira looks down at her daughter, little CHLOE, clutched to her mother's wrist, but still looking off and tilting her head inquisitively at her surroundings.
MOIRA: She had the sniffles for about a day, but that's about it. Oh, and you can only imagine how much (uses air quotes) "The General" freaked about having a "contaminated individual" around his pregnant wife. I swear I thought for a second he might have us quarantined. (she laughs) Anyway I'll be home as soon as the mechanic fixes our tire-(sees the mechanic walking up to her) wait a second, here he comes. (to mechanic) Is it fixed?
MECHANIC: Yeah.
MOIRA: Thank God. We're on our way honey. Love you. Bye. (lowers phone to Chloe) Say bye to Daddy little cub.
CHLOE: Bye Daddy. Love you too.
MOIRA: Okay. Let's get out of here.
Moira hangs up the phone, and starts to go to her car, when she catches the mechanic staring up at something in the sky, confused and almost terrified all at the same time. She looks too, TO SEE A METEOR FALLING AND THEN OBLITERATING a couple as they stand next to their car. The ground shakes, and it's then that Moira realizes that HER DAUGHTER IS GONE.
MOIRA: Chloe? (FRANTICALLY LOOKS AROUND AND THEN YELLS OUT) CHLOE!
Moira looks over and sees Chloe standing in the middle of the street, as more and more meteors fall around them. Chloe looks around, seeing something swoop far above her head, which she catches out of the corner of her eye, causing her to stare up in wonder at what appears to be a ship. Unbeknownst to her a meteor is headed right in her direction. Moira suddenly grabs Chloe and pulls her out of the path of the meteor. It hits the ground, breaking apart, kryptonite flying everywhere, even around Moira as she shields Chloe from the blast. Moira cringes in pain and looks down at her legs, which are hurt. She looks back to Chloe, who is perfectly fine, with exception being very upset.
MOIRA: Chloe, sweetie, I need you to go get help, okay?
CHLOE: No, Mommy, I don't wanna leave you.
MOIRA: Chloe. Please. I need you to be a big girl, okay?
Chloe tearfully nods.
MOIRA: Okay. Go.
Chloe takes off to look for help running past fires, destruction and many hurt people, including a crying girl in a fairy princess costume. Suddenly a beaming white light pulls her focus, almost out of her control, into the sky, to see the white light coming straight towards her.
CHLOE'S POV: The white light rockets toward her. Coming closer and closer, consuming more and more of her vision, until there is NOTHING BUT WHITE.
INT. WATCHTOWER-PRESENT DAY.
Chloe types away at her computer, examining any and all security footage around the area where Oliver taken, and finding nothing but static. She quickly goes back to the last recorded message, hoping to find something.
OLIVER: Chloe, they're not Kandorians! I love you!
Chloe looks down at that, a look of guilt being displayed on her features. She snaps out of it, and rewinds the message.
OLIVER: They're not Kandorians! (rewinds again) Not Kandorians!
CHLOE: Then what the hell are they?!
Chloe furiously smacks some things off of the table. She takes a deep breath to regain her composure, then hearing something garbled in the background in the last beat of the recording. She quickly does what she can to modify the sound and make it clearer. And she mostly succeeds. She's able to hear the almost sickly sweet voice of an old woman.
OLD WOMAN: Don't worry Mr. Queen, you'll have the company of your friends soon enough.
Fear washes over Chloe's face, an understanding of how dire the situation is.
COMPUTER: Unknown energy anomaly detected in sector 12.
CHLOE: Sector 12? (realizing) Clark.
Chloe swiftly pulls up any camera feeds around that area. She does, but it is too far away, so she magnifies it. The image of Clark and Zod fighting appears on the computer screen as the energy of the book of Rao shoots up into the sky. Suddenly Zod stabs Clark with the blue kryptonite knife! Chloe gasps in horror as Clark falls off of the building.
CHLOE: Clark!
EXT. METROPOLIS.
Clark falls, the blue k blade stuck in his gut. He falls to the ground, SMASHING INTO A PARKED CAR, CRUSHING THE ROOF AND OBLITERATING THE WINDOWS! Clark's lifeless body lays, broken, beaten, and nearly dead.
INT. WATCHTOWER.
Chloe activates her communication link to the team, as she grabs her jacket and car keys, and heads out the door.
CHLOE (into her com-link): Any and all available members, I need your help! NOW!
JOHN JONZZ'S com-link suddenly comes online.
JOHN: Chloe? Chloe, is that you?
CHLOE: Oh, thank God. Something's happened. We need to get Emil.
-LATER-
Chloe re-enters the watchtower holding the the blue k knife. She quickly places it into a lead container. Clark's blood on her hands gives her pause, which she quickly jerks herself out of, staying on point.
CHLOE: Okay.
John and DR. EMIL HAMILTON enter, carrying Clark. They lay him on one of the tables. Emil quickly opens his bag, pulling out a pair of scissors, which he uses to cut open Clark's shirt and examine him.
CHLOE: Why isn't he healing?
EMIL: It seems his body has already begun to shut down. (becomes choked up a bit) I don't think there's anything we can do Chloe.
CHLOE: NO! There has to be a way!
John steps up to Chloe to try to calm her.
JOHN: Chloe, Emil could be right. And as hard as it is for me to say it, we have to focus on the others. I've lost contact with AC, Dinah, Bart, and Cyborg. Oliver's the only one who knows-
Chloe angrily pulls herself away from John.
CHLOE: Oliver was taken! Probably by whoever took the others.
John takes a step back.
JOHN: What?
CHLOE: That's why we need Clark. He's the only chance we have at finding them.
EMIL: Chloe...
CHLOE: No! I'm not gonna hear it! There's another way, and if both of you are just going to accept this, then I guess I'm the only one not giving up. (looks to John, and extends hand) Key. Now.
John looks at her with pity in his eyes.
CHLOE: You did get it from the barn, right?
JOHN: Yes. Just like you told me. (takes octagonal disc out and places it into Chloe's bloody hand) But Chloe, I don't-
CHLOE: Jor-El brought Clark back once and he can do it again. And if you won't help me to get to the cave, then I can easily call Hawkman or dri-
Suddenly the octagonal disc emanates light that consumes Chloe, and reaches out, like an arm, taking Clark as well, transporting them-
INT. KAWATCHE CAVES-CAVE WALL.
-into the cave wall. Light shines down upon Chloe as she shields her eyes to keep herself from being blinded by it, glancing down to see Clark laying at her feet, his condition still critical and quickly kneels down next to him.
JOR-EL: Chloe Sullivan.
Chloe's head jerks up at Jor-El's voice.
CHLOE: JOR-EL! You have to save Clark! Your the only one who can!
JOR-EL: I am sorry. But even this is beyond my ability.
Fury ignites behind Chloe's eyes.
CHLOE: "Sorry?" "Sorry?!" I am tired of this crap! I'm tired monsters, and kryptonian warlords, and meteor freaks, and losing people I love! I'm tired of Clark having to clean up after your planet's failures! And I'm tired of you sitting back and doing nothing but dolling out punishment, giving hypocritical lectures, vague warnings, and spouting contradictory nonsense! Now, you listen to me: You will save Clark, you will do this one good thing for Clark, the only good thing you've done since you impregnated your wife, who from everything I know was ten times the person that you are, or were, or so help me I will hack into the pentagon's database and launch every nuke at you and your damn fortress!
JOR-EL: I understand you are in pain, but your attack would do no good, as my connection to the fortress was broken when Zod destroyed the main console, that I am barely sustaining my energy here. And you must know that there is nothing in any universe more precious to me than my son. And if there was any way, including the destruction of myself, I would do it... but I know of none.
Chloe starts fall apart into a look of defeat, tears flowing freely down her cheeks.
CHLOE: Then why'd you bring us here.
JOR-EL: The key sensed Kal-El's DNA on your hands when you touched it. He was brought to be given a proper kryptonian burial, and you because it sensed your infection.
CHLOE: Infection?
JOR-EL: The same one you had when I saw you last.
Chloe attempts to snort up her tears as she wipes them away from her eyes and then stands up.
CHLOE: Send us back.
JOR-EL: I cannot.
CHLOE (emotionally raw and broken): Please. I will find a way to save Clark. I can.
JOR-EL: Okay.
Chloe reacts with surprise at that, but it strengthens her resolve.
CHLOE: I will.
JOR-EL: I pray you do.
CHLOE: Can an A.I. pray?
JOR-EL: This one will.
The bright white light washes over Chloe and Clark, taking them back to the Watchtower, leaving one final warning from Jor-El:
JOR-EL: Remember this: Kal-El has only twenty-four earth hours before there is no saving him.
PLEASE, PLEASE REVIEW!
Not a very good starter, I know, but hopefully it's appreciated what I'm trying to accomplish here. There's more to come. Brace yourself for more of my dribble. Lol. Thank you.
Now, my great hope is that this will be a very interactive process between us. I really want to have a full 22 episode season. And that's something I know I just can't do on my own. So, I call upon you my fellow Chlarkers! I hope that this is allowed, because I want us to pull our resources and work together as a writing staff. I'm just not that very good of a writer myself, so it's important to me to have you guys here. I'm an idea man guy mostly, but I still do write. Just not very well. I've got some strange ideas. Ideas that may seem off-putting. But I need you guys.
The way this will hopefully go is that I'll provide a basic outline for each episode, or maybe just an idea, to you, or a few of you, and you go and write it. Write it in whatever style you want. It doesn't have to be in the format I put mine in. I'm just not good enough to write it as fanfiction usually is. Obviously you will post it as your own story, on fanfiction.net or any other site, but please acknowledge the joint effort placed into it by the collective group. As will I. If you wish we can all come together and figure something out as a group if we're stuck on a storypoint or a piece of characterization. I myself may need help with the completion and polishing of this episode, but we'll cross that bridge when we come to it. Oh! And maybe one of you video maker Chlarkers can make previously on recaps. Lol.
Darksied will remain the villain. And my ideas will include Batman, Wonder Woman, Green Lantern, Brainiac, the return of Lindsey Harrison (Fake Kara from Covenant), Etrigan the Demon, Morgan Le Fey, Mxlpxlt (or however you spell it. lol), Krypton backstory, Zod, Jay Garrick, the Anti-Life equation, the Flashpoint Paradox storyline, and Inza.
Pleas enjoy and spread the word my fellow Chlarkers!
SEASON 10.
EPISODE 1: LAZARUS.
TEASER
EXT. SMALLVILLE-OCTOBER 1989.
MOIRA SULLIVAN stands outside an auto body shop on a payphone, talking to her husband, smiling.
MOIRA: Yes. Okay. You were right Gabe. Going to see my sister and her ass of a husband, definitely not one of my best ideas. Yes. Yes, she's fine.
Moira looks down at her daughter, little CHLOE, clutched to her mother's wrist, but still looking off and tilting her head inquisitively at her surroundings.
MOIRA: She had the sniffles for about a day, but that's about it. Oh, and you can only imagine how much (uses air quotes) "The General" freaked about having a "contaminated individual" around his pregnant wife. I swear I thought for a second he might have us quarantined. (she laughs) Anyway I'll be home as soon as the mechanic fixes our tire-(sees the mechanic walking up to her) wait a second, here he comes. (to mechanic) Is it fixed?
MECHANIC: Yeah.
MOIRA: Thank God. We're on our way honey. Love you. Bye. (lowers phone to Chloe) Say bye to Daddy little cub.
CHLOE: Bye Daddy. Love you too.
MOIRA: Okay. Let's get out of here.
Moira hangs up the phone, and starts to go to her car, when she catches the mechanic staring up at something in the sky, confused and almost terrified all at the same time. She looks too, TO SEE A METEOR FALLING AND THEN OBLITERATING a couple as they stand next to their car. The ground shakes, and it's then that Moira realizes that HER DAUGHTER IS GONE.
MOIRA: Chloe? (FRANTICALLY LOOKS AROUND AND THEN YELLS OUT) CHLOE!
Moira looks over and sees Chloe standing in the middle of the street, as more and more meteors fall around them. Chloe looks around, seeing something swoop far above her head, which she catches out of the corner of her eye, causing her to stare up in wonder at what appears to be a ship. Unbeknownst to her a meteor is headed right in her direction. Moira suddenly grabs Chloe and pulls her out of the path of the meteor. It hits the ground, breaking apart, kryptonite flying everywhere, even around Moira as she shields Chloe from the blast. Moira cringes in pain and looks down at her legs, which are hurt. She looks back to Chloe, who is perfectly fine, with exception being very upset.
MOIRA: Chloe, sweetie, I need you to go get help, okay?
CHLOE: No, Mommy, I don't wanna leave you.
MOIRA: Chloe. Please. I need you to be a big girl, okay?
Chloe tearfully nods.
MOIRA: Okay. Go.
Chloe takes off to look for help running past fires, destruction and many hurt people, including a crying girl in a fairy princess costume. Suddenly a beaming white light pulls her focus, almost out of her control, into the sky, to see the white light coming straight towards her.
CHLOE'S POV: The white light rockets toward her. Coming closer and closer, consuming more and more of her vision, until there is NOTHING BUT WHITE.
INT. WATCHTOWER-PRESENT DAY.
Chloe types away at her computer, examining any and all security footage around the area where Oliver taken, and finding nothing but static. She quickly goes back to the last recorded message, hoping to find something.
OLIVER: Chloe, they're not Kandorians! I love you!
Chloe looks down at that, a look of guilt being displayed on her features. She snaps out of it, and rewinds the message.
OLIVER: They're not Kandorians! (rewinds again) Not Kandorians!
CHLOE: Then what the hell are they?!
Chloe furiously smacks some things off of the table. She takes a deep breath to regain her composure, then hearing something garbled in the background in the last beat of the recording. She quickly does what she can to modify the sound and make it clearer. And she mostly succeeds. She's able to hear the almost sickly sweet voice of an old woman.
OLD WOMAN: Don't worry Mr. Queen, you'll have the company of your friends soon enough.
Fear washes over Chloe's face, an understanding of how dire the situation is.
COMPUTER: Unknown energy anomaly detected in sector 12.
CHLOE: Sector 12? (realizing) Clark.
Chloe swiftly pulls up any camera feeds around that area. She does, but it is too far away, so she magnifies it. The image of Clark and Zod fighting appears on the computer screen as the energy of the book of Rao shoots up into the sky. Suddenly Zod stabs Clark with the blue kryptonite knife! Chloe gasps in horror as Clark falls off of the building.
CHLOE: Clark!
EXT. METROPOLIS.
Clark falls, the blue k blade stuck in his gut. He falls to the ground, SMASHING INTO A PARKED CAR, CRUSHING THE ROOF AND OBLITERATING THE WINDOWS! Clark's lifeless body lays, broken, beaten, and nearly dead.
INT. WATCHTOWER.
Chloe activates her communication link to the team, as she grabs her jacket and car keys, and heads out the door.
CHLOE (into her com-link): Any and all available members, I need your help! NOW!
JOHN JONZZ'S com-link suddenly comes online.
JOHN: Chloe? Chloe, is that you?
CHLOE: Oh, thank God. Something's happened. We need to get Emil.
-LATER-
Chloe re-enters the watchtower holding the the blue k knife. She quickly places it into a lead container. Clark's blood on her hands gives her pause, which she quickly jerks herself out of, staying on point.
CHLOE: Okay.
John and DR. EMIL HAMILTON enter, carrying Clark. They lay him on one of the tables. Emil quickly opens his bag, pulling out a pair of scissors, which he uses to cut open Clark's shirt and examine him.
CHLOE: Why isn't he healing?
EMIL: It seems his body has already begun to shut down. (becomes choked up a bit) I don't think there's anything we can do Chloe.
CHLOE: NO! There has to be a way!
John steps up to Chloe to try to calm her.
JOHN: Chloe, Emil could be right. And as hard as it is for me to say it, we have to focus on the others. I've lost contact with AC, Dinah, Bart, and Cyborg. Oliver's the only one who knows-
Chloe angrily pulls herself away from John.
CHLOE: Oliver was taken! Probably by whoever took the others.
John takes a step back.
JOHN: What?
CHLOE: That's why we need Clark. He's the only chance we have at finding them.
EMIL: Chloe...
CHLOE: No! I'm not gonna hear it! There's another way, and if both of you are just going to accept this, then I guess I'm the only one not giving up. (looks to John, and extends hand) Key. Now.
John looks at her with pity in his eyes.
CHLOE: You did get it from the barn, right?
JOHN: Yes. Just like you told me. (takes octagonal disc out and places it into Chloe's bloody hand) But Chloe, I don't-
CHLOE: Jor-El brought Clark back once and he can do it again. And if you won't help me to get to the cave, then I can easily call Hawkman or dri-
Suddenly the octagonal disc emanates light that consumes Chloe, and reaches out, like an arm, taking Clark as well, transporting them-
INT. KAWATCHE CAVES-CAVE WALL.
-into the cave wall. Light shines down upon Chloe as she shields her eyes to keep herself from being blinded by it, glancing down to see Clark laying at her feet, his condition still critical and quickly kneels down next to him.
JOR-EL: Chloe Sullivan.
Chloe's head jerks up at Jor-El's voice.
CHLOE: JOR-EL! You have to save Clark! Your the only one who can!
JOR-EL: I am sorry. But even this is beyond my ability.
Fury ignites behind Chloe's eyes.
CHLOE: "Sorry?" "Sorry?!" I am tired of this crap! I'm tired monsters, and kryptonian warlords, and meteor freaks, and losing people I love! I'm tired of Clark having to clean up after your planet's failures! And I'm tired of you sitting back and doing nothing but dolling out punishment, giving hypocritical lectures, vague warnings, and spouting contradictory nonsense! Now, you listen to me: You will save Clark, you will do this one good thing for Clark, the only good thing you've done since you impregnated your wife, who from everything I know was ten times the person that you are, or were, or so help me I will hack into the pentagon's database and launch every nuke at you and your damn fortress!
JOR-EL: I understand you are in pain, but your attack would do no good, as my connection to the fortress was broken when Zod destroyed the main console, that I am barely sustaining my energy here. And you must know that there is nothing in any universe more precious to me than my son. And if there was any way, including the destruction of myself, I would do it... but I know of none.
Chloe starts fall apart into a look of defeat, tears flowing freely down her cheeks.
CHLOE: Then why'd you bring us here.
JOR-EL: The key sensed Kal-El's DNA on your hands when you touched it. He was brought to be given a proper kryptonian burial, and you because it sensed your infection.
CHLOE: Infection?
JOR-EL: The same one you had when I saw you last.
Chloe attempts to snort up her tears as she wipes them away from her eyes and then stands up.
CHLOE: Send us back.
JOR-EL: I cannot.
CHLOE (emotionally raw and broken): Please. I will find a way to save Clark. I can.
JOR-EL: Okay.
Chloe reacts with surprise at that, but it strengthens her resolve.
CHLOE: I will.
JOR-EL: I pray you do.
CHLOE: Can an A.I. pray?
JOR-EL: This one will.
The bright white light washes over Chloe and Clark, taking them back to the Watchtower, leaving one final warning from Jor-El:
JOR-EL: Remember this: Kal-El has only twenty-four earth hours before there is no saving him.
PLEASE, PLEASE REVIEW!
Not a very good starter, I know, but hopefully it's appreciated what I'm trying to accomplish here. There's more to come. Brace yourself for more of my dribble. Lol. Thank you.
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