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    The One Chosen
    Author: BkWurm1
    Characters: Moira & Chloe Sullivan
    Timeline: Day of the first meteor shower.
    Summary: This is the story of Moira Sullivan and her soon to be four-year-old daughter Chloe as they are driving through Smallville on that fateful autumn afternoon. Perhaps the question that haunted Chloe years later had actually been answered right at the beginning. Clark found Johnathan and Martha Kent…but who found Clark?

    “…as great as this power is, it does come with a lot of consequences…”
    “Does that mean you're never gonna use your abilities again?”
    “It means I'm more confused now than ever. Out of the entire catalog of meteor abilities, why was I the one chosen to be in charge of such an amazing gift?”


    Smallville, Oct 7th, 1989.


    Almost home.

    No, not home. Home was a cozy two bedroom in Metropolis with Gabe and Chloe where the toilet always ran and the elevator never worked, but the moment Moira’s tires left the smooth tar of the impeccably maintained state highway and met the old crackled pavement of the county road leading out of Smallville, the familiar hum sent a pleasant punch of anticipation to her solar plexus. Funny how some feelings never changed. She hadn’t lived in the old white house in Granville since right after college, but some places always stayed tangled up in your heart.

    Of course, her mom still lived there. A couple years ago, after Dad’s accident, Aunt Marion moved in, taking over the front bedroom Moira had shared with her little sister Ella. The move had been as much for Aunt Marion’s benefit as it was Mom’s. Poor Aunt Marion, it was getting harder and harder for her to remember the little things. Cousin Tandy repeated a family legend about some crazy great, great, aunt kept locked in a pantry and blamed heredity but Mom often mentioned Marion and her childhood paint chip snacking habits. Moira had her own suspicions based on Marion’s permanent flower child status. For Marion, the world was spiraling back to the Summer of Love but for the rest of the planet, life was all about change.

    Moira Sullivan glanced over at the passenger seat where her daughter was slowly waking from her long nap. A familiar warm glow lodged beneath her heart. Her baby was getting so big.

    Moira had collected her Bachelor of Arts degree and moved away from home before Ella even graduated high school, but Ella had been the first one to get married and the first one to give Mom and Dad a grandchild. Chloe showed up about a year and a half after her cousin Lois screamed her way into the world. Dad had been so proud of his two new girls. She wished she could tell him how much Chloe reminded her of him. She was so grateful he’d been able to see as much of Chloe as he had before he’d died. Ella and Sam had lived too far away for him to see Lois very often and he never even had the chance to meet Lucy.

    Lucy was a very pretty baby, but colicky from the start and still so very demanding now. Dad’s death had hit Ella hard; it had hit them all hard, but Ella had never stopped being his little girl. Between losing Dad, a tough pregnancy and an equally tough time after, she never really returned to the bubbly girl Moira had watched grow up. She sometimes wondered if Lucy got extra attention to make up for the wonderful grandfather she never got the chance to know. Her second birthday had been celebrated months ago, but she was still firmly the baby of the family.

    News that Sam was being stationed back in Metropolis had brought relief. She worried about her younger sister. Ella always sounded tired when they talked on the phone. Life was rough for the wife of a career soldier, with army politics, the constant moves and the isolation from friends and family. She couldn’t be getting much help with the girls from Sam, especially now that he was on the short list to make General. The three-hour road trip back home had been planned to give Ella a chance to catch her breath as well as give them a chance to catch up and show off the girls to mom and Aunt Marion.

    Like the poet said…best laid plans of mice and men… and this time Moira felt like she’d been the one caught in the trap. She shook her head. No point in dwelling on that now.

    Her attention shifted to back to Chloe. With eyes still half closed, her daughter stretched her little arms over her head and arched her back in that totally committed, muscle shuddering way only little children really do. She yawned and scratched at her scalp, tugging at the hair near the base of her French braid. Moira winced but held her tongue. Despite this morning’s craziness, the braid remained in relatively good shape and she’d like to get Chloe to Mom’s without her looking like something adopted by wolves.

    When Chloe noticed she was being watched, she stopped fussing with her hair and smiled her sunny smile. Not a trace of this morning’s upset remained, but then Chloe was like that, bouncing back to her normal calm and cheerful self quicker than it took to percolate a pot of coffee. Still in the process of waking up, she reached for the precious library book she’d checked out with her very own library card and cuddled it to her chest like a stuffed teddy bear.

    They’d be in Granville in less than twenty minutes and past experience taught Moira that Chloe would spend every remaining minute reading and asking questions. She really was so much like Dad. Three years old and she was already obsessed with books.

    Three and a half, Mommy!


    Moira smirked and turned her attention back to the empty highway in front of them. Even in the privacy of her mind, her daughter’s strong voice insisted on being heard. Truthfully, Chloe was nearer to four than three with a birthday coming up later in the month. Four was perilously close to five, and just like that, she would be off to school.

    Moira sighed. She was being hypocritical, complaining, even silently to herself, about Ella babying Lucy. It left an ache, knowing your baby wasn’t a baby anymore. Chloe wouldn’t even let her call her baby without a show of righteous toddler indignation. Maybe it was time to think about a brother or sister for Chloe, though how she would keep up with Chloe and another child she couldn’t imagine. Ella certainly found her two tough to manage.

    Lois was the flipside to Lucy’s clinginess. Five going on forty, as Gabe put it last time she stayed with them for the weekend. Loud, independent, bossy and secretly so lonely it broke Moira’s heart. Too often, her self-sufficient ways meant being ignored unless she caused trouble. Hopefully as Lucy got older, Ella would be able to give Lois the attention she needed, lord knows it wasn’t going to come from her father, not with his schedule and definitely not when the army was always going to be his first priority. She and Gabe had always talked about having another child but what if that meant not being able to give Chloe the kind of attention she needed?

    She was probably overreacting. She and Ella managed to grow up sharing Mom and Dad’s attention just fine. Having siblings was the normal way of life, not the other way around. And didn’t Chloe and Lois always get along well together? Lois ate up the attention and Chloe liked her cousin’s company. Lois, being Lois, thought she should be in charge but Chloe was no pushover. If Chloe wasn’t interested in Lois’s plans, she’d do her own thing or convince Lois to switch her plans. Lord knows Chloe could be very single minded.

    Gabe was a lost cause, but Moira constantly reminded herself not to let the wavy blond hair and big, innocent, green eyes fool her. Chloe’s angelic looks hid a stubborn streak and a curiosity that bordered on devilish. She wasn’t a bad child, there wasn’t a mean bone in her little body, but oh, when she wanted to know something, she wanted to know it now!

    Chloe rubbed the last bit of sleep from her eyes and then opened her book and turned the pages, studying the words and pictures.
    All parents probably thought it, but Chloe was special. She craved knowledge the way most kids craved candy and most of the time her daughter’s thirsty intellect made her proud, but her fearless pursuit of answers sometimes caused problems. She was forever wandering off, impatient to discover what, and why, and how. That impatient intellect kept Moira from returning to work once Chloe was old enough for pre-school. Not only did her daughter have a habit of wandering off (and a Houdini like ability to get out of closed spaces – the gym day care refused to watch her anymore) but also a knack for pulling trouble out of a hat.

    This morning Chloe started with a vanishing act at Aunt Ella and Uncle Sam’s new house on the army base. It was mortifying that before Sam officially took command he had to call out the MP’s. When they turned up nothing, the Colonel enlisted a full company of new recruits to extend the search. The entire base was under lockdown for four hours. Of all people, it had been little Lois to find her cousin in the backyard in a crawl space beneath the garden shed. Actually, since no one bothered to tell the five year old what was going on, she joined her cousin beneath the shed and stayed for hours to listen to the wild story Chloe spun speculating on what each of the line of ants she’d followed in there were doing underground in their colony.

    Around noon, Lois wandered in through the sliding patio door, brushing dirt off her blue sweatshirt and matching corduroys, asking for a glass of water. No one really paid attention to her until she tried to bring a glass outside “cause Chloe was probably thirsty too.”

    Chloe still took coaxing out, but a question about if she had to go potty did the trick. She wiggled out and scampered straight into the house. Things got a little tense when Sam returned home and grounded Lois for not immediately reporting back on Chloe’s location and a little more tense when Chloe stamped her feet and used her favorite new word, “Unfair!”

    Both girls said they never heard anyone calling. Moira tended to believe them. One glance out the window at the barren lot and the padlocked shed had been enough to foolishly rule out the backyard. She blamed herself. Samuel Lane was a lovely man but Col Sam Lane was, well, she was as fond of the star spangled red, white, and blue as anyone but she wondered as a woman if all military men were that ridged in their thinking. Chloe was definitely an out of the box kind of child.

    Chaos ensued. While Lois begged her dad to still let her go see her Granville Granny, Chloe plucked a daisy from a vase on the kitchen table, tucked it under her barrette and began alternately shouting “Flower Power!” and “Fight The Power!”
    The first one was clearly Aunt Marion’s influence but it took Moira a moment to recognize the origin of the other slogan Chloe used in her one toddler sit in. The teen next door blasted the new type of music every time his parents left the apartment.

    Laughter, even tinged with hysteria, had not endeared her to her brother-in-law. By the time she had Chloe under control, Lois was confined to her quarters, Lucy was lying on her back, waving her fists, kicking her feet and crying hysterically and Ella looked exhausted. The end result, Ella and her girls stayed home leaving Moira and Chloe to make the long drive out to Granville alone.

    When she drove off base, she felt as exhausted as Ella looked and it had taken most of the drive to repair her strung out nerves. She glanced through the windshield at the cloudless blue sky.
    Thank goodness they had beautiful weather. She didn’t think she could handle one more surprise to her day. They’d get to Granville, let Mom and Marion fuss over Chloe, have dinner, maybe that picnic her mother had suggested. She’d call Gabe and tell him she wasn’t up to driving back tonight like planned, and tomorrow maybe she wouldn’t feel like a guitar string tweaked too tight.

    “Mommy, what does a-l-i-e-n spell?” Chloe asked, pointing to a caption beneath a cartoon spaceship with a green, three-eyed, creature waving its tentacles. Chloe was a precocious reader but her vocabulary was still limited.

    “Alien, sweetheart. That means someone who comes from a place far away.”

    “Like us when we go see Granma?”

    “No, much, much farther away.”

    Chloe glanced down at the picture in her book. “Like ‘nother planet?”

    “Yes, but we don’t actually know if anyone lives on other planets, honey.”

    Chloe scrunched up her forehead and chewed on the side of her lip. She silently studied the images in her book for a minute, turning pages and examining pictures of solar systems, types of stars and the shapes of galaxies. Then she announced. “I think they do.”

    “It’s a nice thought.”

    “Can our car fly?”

    “What?” By now, Chloe’s odd questions shouldn’t surprise her, but flying cars? She shook her head. “No, honey. Our car is just a car. It stays on the ground.”

    “But it looks like the flying car in the picture.”

    Moira glanced at the blue spaceship Chloe pointed at in her book and laughed. The front ribbon of lights beneath an aerodynamic shaped body did look remarkably like their new car. She felt a little more of this morning’s tension fade away.

    “That’s a picture of a spaceship, though they don’t normally look like a 1989 Mercury Sable.” Before Chloe could ask, she added, “A spaceship is kind of like an airplane but made to travel outside the earth’s atmosphere.”

    At Chloe’s confusion, she simplified her explanation. “To travel up where the stars and other planets are.”

    “Oh.” Chloe fingered the page for a moment and then looked up. “What’s a right spaceship look like?”

    “In books and movies they can look like anything. Big, small, long, short, round, square. Years ago, the real ones looked like funny, club houses sitting on top of huge rockets. . Now they strap a squat airplane to the side of the huge rockets.”

    Chloe frowned at the less than satisfying answer.

    “You know sweetie, I think it’s a case of you’ll know it when you see it, but until then, I wouldn’t worry about the mysteries of outer space. There are lots of hidden secrets to uncover right here on the planet.”

    Chloe snapped her book shut and hugged it to her chest. Excitement made her eyes sparkle. She bounced up and down in her seat as much as her lap belt would allow.

    “Like what the ants do in the ground!”

    Moira stifled a sigh; she didn’t want to suppress Chloe’s avid curiosity, but she also did not want a repeat of this morning. She’d explained over and over about not wandering off, but she wasn’t going to rely on the hundredth lecture to do the trick. Time to squash the budding entomologist.

    “Lots of people have already studied what ants do under the ground. And other insects,” she added for good measure. “I can get you a book about them from the library if you like.”

    Chloe frowned and stopped wiggling around. “Oh. Ok.”

    Moira focused on the road in front of her and repressed her smile. That should keep Chloe from chasing butterflies half way around the world. For Chloe, the excitement came from the finding out. She much preferred to learn than to be taught, so while Chloe’s curiosity would prompt her to read more about the secret life of bugs, knowing the mysteries were already solved would shift her fierce attention elsewhere.

    Chloe turned to stare out the window; the side mirror reflected back her thinking face though just the tilt of her head and the tap of her finger on the cover of her book (a habit she copied from her father) would have given that away. Since Chloe was in a contemplative mood, Moira took advantage of the silence and turned on the radio. She tried adjusting the dial to pick up the local station but nothing but static was coming in.

    “Mommy, what’s that?” Chloe asked.

    “Static, the radio’s not picking up a signal.”

    “No, what’s that!” Chloe pointed at her side window.

    Moira glanced over. “I’m sorry, but I can’t tell what you are looking at, baby.” She cringed waiting for Chloe to have a mini meltdown about being called a baby, but surprisingly, she paid no attention to the pet name. Instead, Chloe twisted partly around in her seat and pointed out the back.

    “The lines, Mommy, the lines in the sky.”

    Moira looked in the center rearview mirror. She could make out the diagonal trail left by the vapor of an airplane buzzing low to the ground. She blinked and noticed another streak in the sky above where downtown Smallville nestled. In the space of another heartbeat, another line formed. It couldn’t be the contrail of a plane; the lines appeared too fast, the trail was too dark to be vapor and the path too steep.

    “Oh, look at all of them!” Chloe cried out more in wonder than in fear, but Moira felt the fear her daughter lacked.

    It was as if something evil clawed at the sky. Nearly a dozen dark tears raked sharply through the pure blue of the afternoon sky. Balls of black, hurtling toward the ground. Although they were miles from town, Moira felt the rattle of impact coming up through the wheels of her car. Where the lines met the earth, angry orange blooms of fire rolled back up into the sky.

    My, god, what was she seeing? Bombs? A missile strike? Why would anyone want send missiles to Nowheresville Kansas? There were rumors about old warheads buried beneath the cornfields, could they have been accidently launched? No; the angles were wrong and there were too many and the missiles would rise into the sky, not flame down from it, right?

    “Mommy, watch out!”

    The steering wheel yanked away from her hands as the front wheels caught the loose gravel lining the edge of the road. They caught and pulled them up over the grassy ridge and down into the steep, yet thankfully dry, drainage ditch. She hit the brakes, but they were moving too fast and the rear of the car fishtailed to the right, the back end climbing up the edge. She fought with the wheel; Chloe’s screams bounced off the windows. If the car twisted too much in either direction they were going to flip. Moira turned into the slide, rapidly yanking the steering wheel the other way when they swerved too hard in the opposite direction. Finally, her correction held and they came to a shuddering stop.

    She shut off the engine and quickly released her seatbelt and reached for Chloe. “Baby, are you ok? Tell me you are ok.”

    Chloe’s green eyes had never looked so large; she was clutching her space book to her chest and clinging to the shoulder strap of the seatbelt that that was too large to work normally. She nodded her head.
    “I’m ok.” An awed look crossed her little features. “Did we crash?”

    She didn’t wait for an answer before she unbuckled her seatbelt and stood up on the seat and craned her neck, trying to see out of the car.

    “What was in the sky, Mommy?”

    For a second, Moira had forgotten the phenomenon that had so thoroughly distracted her. She followed Chloe’s line of sight but realized they were too low in the ditch to see out and she was having a hard time filtering out the rapid pounding of her heart from the low vibrating impacts of the strikes.

    “Stay in the car Chloe.”

    Her hands trembling, she pushed her door open. The steep incline of the hill stopped her from opening it up all the way, but it was enough to slip outside. Grateful she was still wearing the tennis shoes she’d changed into during the earlier search for Chloe, she chose her footing and scrabbled up to the road.

    More grey streaks now crossed over lines left from the earlier projectiles. At the scene of the strikes, balls of fire and smoke billowed up to the heavens. More disturbing, the black contrails that raced across the sky seemed to be getting closer to where she stood. She took a step back, slipped on the loose rocks and then found her footing again. Maybe it was just her imagination. Why would anyone target a country road surrounded by nothing but wheat and cornfields?

    The sound of fast moving footfalls scrambling up the side of the hill made her spin around.

    “Look, look, I figured out what’s falling!” Chloe held her space book open to a page diagraming the life cycle of a comet.

    Moira half slid part way down the incline. She grabbed Chloe by her thin shoulders. “I told you to stay in the car!”

    “But mommy, the c-o-m-e-t!”

    “It can’t be a comet,” she snapped and tried to drag her daughter back to the car.

    “It has a long tail!” Chloe insisted stubbornly and dug her heels into the ground. Moira took a deep breath and tried to calm down. Give her the answers and she’ll start listening again.

    “It could be a meteor, chunks of rock falling from space.” She was reaching for answers out of thin air but that actually could be it. A meteor shower was hitting the town, though she hadn’t heard of any shower containing this many big strikes. Then again, all she knew about meteors came from her freshman college geology class.

    “Mommy, look!”

    Moira’s eyes followed the direction Chloe was pointing. She hadn’t been imagining it; the meteors really were getting closer. Frozen, she watched in horror as meteor strikes rained down in ever advancing explosions parallel to the county highway. She could hear them now, a hissing, burning roar pressing against the sound barrier.

    “Oh, my god!”

    In the distance, she made out some doomed souls in a red pick-up truck desperately trying to outrace death. Beside her, Chloe whimpered and looked up at her with watering eyes that understood too much. A fireball screamed in over their heads, splintering the old familiar corn themed billboard welcoming visitors to Smallville. Shrieking in on its tail was an even larger threat.

    They were out of time.
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  • #2
    Oh, wow. This is...phenomenal!

    The writing is superb. Your use of words and language is like a painter using pigment on a canvas. You've painted a brilliant portrait, a veritable masterpiece.

    I really love how you've made the characters come to life. The scenario before the meteor shower is very mundane in terms of everyday life or 'normal life' but that's what makes it great. You can see everything you've described happening to the Sullivans and Lanes or any family for that matter. It's a slice of life, and it's very relatable.

    I especially love that you introduce us to all the major players, or at least the well known characters from SV, and you can already see that, even though they're younger than on the show, they're still essentially the same, only less developed. I mean, Lucy is a brat, Lois is moody and bossy and independent, and Chloe is extremely curious and inquisitive and independent and stubborn and virtually unflappable. I also like that we get to see what Moira was like before she went all catatonic. She really was a great mom and a wonderful person, which makes what happens to her so much more heartbreaking.

    What I love the most is your portrayal of Chloe. I swear, she's exactly like the Chloe we know and love only smaller. I especially enjoyed the 'ant incident' where she disappeared, had everyone worried sick and was simply watching ants do their thing because she was curious. That's Chloe to a tee; ignore pretty much everything in pursuit of knowledge. I thought it was fitting that Lois was the one who found her. You can already see that the two of them are like sisters.

    Speaking of Lois... I actually feel bad for her here. I mean, she's already showing signs of neglect and is desperate for love and attention, but Lucy is getting it all. It's no wonder Lois turned out the way she did. I think her bed hopping and tough exterior were just her way of protecting herself from being disappointed/hurt by people she thought cared about her, or simply keeping people from caring about her at all.

    Back to Chloe. I loved the part where she and Moira were in the car, both before and during the meteor shower. Chloe is like a little adult, so astute and articulate. Although, her vocabulary is a bit limited, but she's only three-going-on-four. Still, being able to spell the words that she can't pronounce is astounding. She's a little genius! I especially liked her calm in the face of danger. I get that she didn't know what the streaks in the sky were, but it just seemed fitting that she wasn't afraid of them. It also seemed fitting that she was the one who noticed them first. And after the car ended up in the ditch, I couldn't believe how calm she was, and her saying 'Did we crash?' was just...OMG. I think most kids her age would've been crying, but not her. And I couldn't believe she was looking for answers, an explanation to what they were seeing in the sky right after the accident and while the meteors were still falling. She just never quits with the seeking of knowledge, does she? Of course, I was kinda surprised and shocked by her reaction to seeing the Kents trying to outrun the meteors and about to fail. I didn't think a three year old could grasp such dire circumstances and conclude what would most likely happen to the occupants of the vehicle, but she seemed to understand that things were gonna end badly for the Kents, and it broke my heart.

    What I'm wondering is what part with Chloe and Moira play in Clark's first few moments on earth? I mean, Clark was sent to the Kents, and as far as I know, they were the first people he saw/met. If Chloe is the first to find him in this story, how will that change things? Will she also find his ship? Will Moira see the ship and grasp that Clark came out of it and isn't human? With Moira and Chloe involved, how will that affect the Kents decision to take Clark and raise him as their own? And how will Moira and Chloe be exposed to kryptonite and thus gain their powers?

    Speaking of Moira and Chloe's powers, you've lined things up perfectly for Moira to develop the power to control other meteor infected individuals. I mean, we've already seen that Chloe doesn't exactly do as she's told, especially when her curiosity takes over, so it's only natural that Moira would want to control Chloe, to be able to get her to listen so she doesn't get into trouble and/or get hurt. What I don't know is why Chloe develops the power to heal, unless Moira or one of the Kents is severely injured and she wants to help, thus she heals them somehow. Of course, if Chloe's power manifests now, then why would it be dormant for so many years afterward? Maybe Moira had something to do with it? But I'm getting way ahead of myself.

    This is a very unique and inventive idea, and you've executed it perfectly thus far. I'm definitely curious to see where this goes and how Clark fits into it. I assume he must, because you've posted it in the Chlark section. Fantastic work, Mel, and I can't wait for more!

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    • #3
      Thank you my dear Sky for your lovely review. I want to go into all kinds of detail but I'm currently stuck away from my regular computer. Which means I have to wait probably a few more days before I'll be able to post the second half of this story.


      You may be right about Chloe not being old enough to comprehend what was going to happen to the Kent's and definitely not the specifics. Still her mom probably telegraphed her horror and Chloe had seen that the meteors go in a straight line and break things. As for her being unflappable, part of that comes just with her unique personality but also her assumption that nothing bad will happen to her cause Mommy is there combined with all the very distracting new experiences.

      I'm so glad you liked Moira's musings. I wanted to touch on why Lois would never be emotionally suited to a relationship with a Superhero and also where Chloe would have heard that lunacy ran in her family since we later found out Moira wasn't crazy. I also accidentally came up with a reason why Chloe would wear those awful flowers barrettes all the time. Subconsciously she associates them with fighting for the truth.

      Sorry again that I can't post the rest of the story for a few days but at least I can tell you it is already done.

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      • #4
        Wow... This is a great story.. I like how you portray little Chloe.. It surely reflects her adult self in the future.. I love this story and I can't wait for more..

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        • #5
          Nice. More please.

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          • #6
            Lovely fic! While I'm not as verbose as Sky, rest assured that I appreciate the effort you put into writing this and would enjoy more if you wrote it.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by BkWurm1
              Thank you my dear Sky for your lovely review.
              You're quite welcome, m'dear.

              I want to go into all kinds of detail but I'm currently stuck away from my regular computer. Which means I have to wait probably a few more days before I'll be able to post the second half of this story.
              I hope you being away from your regular computer is just a minor inconvenience and not something serious. Either way, I very much look forward to you going into 'all kinds of detail' and posting the second half of the story, whenever you're able.

              I'm so glad you liked Moira's musings. I wanted to touch on why Lois would never be emotionally suited to a relationship with a Superhero and also where Chloe would have heard that lunacy ran in her family since we later found out Moira wasn't crazy.
              Mission accomplished on both fronts.

              I also accidentally came up with a reason why Chloe would wear those awful flowers barrettes all the time. Subconsciously she associates them with fighting for the truth.
              Hey, at least it was a happy accident. And I love the thought of Chloe as a pint-sized flower child, even if she's about two decades too late. Flower Power!

              Sorry again that I can't post the rest of the story for a few days but at least I can tell you it is already done.
              No need to apologize, Mel. You've got a life outside of fanfic, which is more than some can say. And while waiting isn't my favorite thing to do, at least I know I won't be waiting weeks, months or years for the rest of this amazing story.

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              • #8
                How did I miss this??!? How did I miss this?!?

                Did you not post to this to LJ, Mel? I really don't remember seeing this!

                But I'm here now, and I must say that I am HOOKED! Goodness me, woman, you write like no other. This is sheer PERFCTION.

                I'm halfaway through chores so I'll be back with detailed reviews later. It's so good to read your awesome work again, Mel, and I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! *huggles* As Sky said, I understand that you have a life outside of fanfic (and with my 4-month delay between updates myself, I'm hardly one to point a finger ), so we're more than happy to wait for the next installment.

                Thanks so much for sharing your awesome work with us!

                *subscribes to thread*

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by shoot
                  Wow... This is a great story.. I like how you portray little Chloe.. It surely reflects her adult self in the future.. I love this story and I can't wait for more..
                  Trinna Nice. More please.
                  Darkfirelight Lovely fic! While I'm not as verbose as Sky, rest assured that I appreciate the effort you put into writing this and would enjoy more if you wrote it.

                  First, I am so sorry for not putting up the second half of the story earlier. I had some earlier excuses but in the last few weeks I just plain forgot I hadn't posted it. Thank you all for reading and commenting. I'll have the second part up in a little while.

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                  • #10
                    The Fallen Sky And while waiting isn't my favorite thing to do, at least I know I won't be waiting weeks, months or years for the rest of this amazing story
                    And I officially suck! I am so sorry I didn't get the rest of the post up before. I was away for a couple weeks and then when I got back I second guessed chunks of it and then an immediate obligation to post a fic for another fandom popped up and I pushed this to the back burner and then crap I just forgot (here is where I feel the most guilt)

                    Well at least it was only weeks I keep you waiting.

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                    • #11
                      BabyDee How did I miss this??!? How did I miss this?!?

                      Did you not post to this to LJ, Mel? I really don't remember seeing this!
                      You're right, I didn't post it to LJ. I tried back around when I posted the first part here but LJ wouldn't show me any love and I ran out of time trying. It still seems to hate me but I'll try to get a link to it later on.

                      But I'm here now, and I must say that I am HOOKED! Goodness me, woman, you write like no other. This is sheer PERFCTION.
                      Aww! Let me just say, right back at you!

                      Mel, and I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! *huggles* As Sky said, I understand that you have a life outside of fanfic (and with my 4-month delay between updates myself, I'm hardly one to point a finger ), so we're more than happy to wait for the next installment.
                      I still hate to have kept you all waiting. I really thought I had it done done instead of oh I should fix a few things still done. Sometimes it is very hard to be done, done. And then I went and flaked out.

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                      • #12



                        “Get down!” Moira screamed and pushed Chloe forward. She wedged her daughter’s little body in the gap between the incline of the hill and the undercarriage of the car. She barely had time to throw herself over Chloe when a shadow passed in front of the sun and time horrifically slowed down. Please, she cried silently out to the universe, let my baby live.

                        The ground lurched when the meteor hit and she heard the explosive roar of a thousand freight cars punctuated with the sub-harmonic screech of what sounded like twisting metal. The force from the impact pressed her harder against the side of the car. Her cry of fear rose in the air and mixed with Chloe’s thin wail. The tremors in the ground built until the air itself vibrated around them. Was the meteor skidding down the highway?

                        She got her answer when a wave of heat reached them; the meteor jumped the ditch and plowed into the cornfield. The debris cloud followed. Dust billowed up, clouding the air, making it gritty. She choked and gasped trying to breath, pulling in air but not feeling the oxygen reach her lungs. Colored spots popped up behind her closed lids. A new noise, like tuned crystal rang and then there was silence except for the clatter of pebbles and other specs of dirt still raining down.

                        She felt light headed as if she would pass out when suddenly, something inside her changed and her lungs cleared. Hungrily, she gasped in life sustaining air, hearing Chloe draw breath just as desperately. A breezed slithered past them, clearing up the last of the dust cloud. She tentatively lifted her head, brushing at the dirt clinging to her black turtleneck, and to her hair. Above her, smoky grey contrails still crisscrossed the sky, but no new threats burned through the atmosphere. She heard a whimper and turned back to the car. She pulled Chloe out from under the sedan. A fine layer of dust clung to Chloe head to toe.

                        “Chloe, baby, are you ok?” She asked while brushing at the coating of dirt. Chloe’s eyes were still huge but her little adventurer was never one to cower.

                        “I’m ok.” Despite the brave face she was adopting, a thin tremor threaded through her voice. Moira enfolded Chloe in her arms and rocked her against her chest. Chloe’s thin arms tightly looped around her neck.

                        “Oh Sweetie, I promise you everything is going to be fine.” She pulled back and smoothed Chloe’s bangs to the side. “All the scary stuff is behind us now, okay?” Chloe’s nod looked a lot more convincing this time. “That’s my good girl.”



                        Moira looked around. Glancing down the length of the ditch, she saw what might have been a flat spot about a half mile down the road. If they were lucky and she didn’t puncture a tire or scrape off something important, perhaps they could drive out of the ditch. She needed to see the land strip from a better angle and she needed to see if the danger had really passed. They couldn’t stay here for long; something just didn't feel right. She gently took Chloe by the shoulders again. “I want you to stay with the car, Chloe. I mean it; promise me you won’t follow me.” She waited for Chloe’s nod before kissing her on the temple. “Good. Mommy will be right back.”

                        Chloe leaned against the side of their car as she watched her mommy carefully climb out of the ditch. When she couldn’t see her anymore, a funny feeling twisted in her tummy. She took a step toward the hill closest to the road and then stopped. Mommy said not to follow her and she made Mommy a promise. Besides, she wasn’t allowed that close to the road anyway. Mommy had been real mad before when she’d climbed the hill to show the picture of the c-o-m-e-t in her book.

                        Her book! She whipped her head around. Where was her book?

                        It was a library book and Daddy said if she didn’t take good care of library books, the library wouldn’t let her get other books. Her bottom lips wanted to stick out and her eyes got swimmy, but she wouldn’t cry. She’s wasn’t a baby. Lucy was the baby.

                        She’d lost books before and Daddy always asked when did she have it last? She had it before she and mommy jumped back in the ditch but she didn’t see the book anywhere now. The ground got shaky when the meaty oar crashed. Maybe it bounced around? She dropped to her stomach and checked under the car. Nope. She wiggled out on the other side. Not there either. The swimmy eyes were coming back.

                        Daddy always said just keep looking. She chewed on her bottom lip to keep it from sticking out while she looked all around. Side to side, up and down. There! The corner of the shiny plastic cover was sticking out on top of the hill. This side of the ditch wasn’t by the road, so she scampered up the steep hill and dived for her prize.

                        She whimpered again. It was only the plastic cover. She was going to be in trouble. She wasn’t s’posed to ever take the plastic cover off. But Mommy fixed it once before when it accidentally came loose. The book was more important.

                        Just keep looking.

                        Everything looked strange now. The tall green cornfields that stretched up to tickle the sky were squashed like a giant stomped all over them and in the middle of the field, there was a long ditch made of dirt and rocks. No wild flowers, grass, or nothing. The meaty oar made the plants go way. Did it make her book go way too? She frowned hard. It wasn’t a paper cover book. It was a real book with a hard cover. It was strong.

                        Just keep looking.

                        She stepped over the flattened corn, careful not to get her sneakers stuck in the gaps or trip over the lumpy ears; she looked side to side and all over like she had before. Soon she came to the new ditch. It was wide and flat to start with and then farther away the sides got higher and it turned so she couldn’t see the end of it. She decided it was easier to walk on the new dirt path than on the fallen down corn. It kind a looked like the dark springy path at the playground near the bakery Mommy sometimes took her to, though at the park they used chopped up tire pieces, not black dirt that made her white tennis shoes quickly turn grey.

                        She hadn’t taken three steps when she spotted her book. She squealed in delight and raced further down the path to where it lay open with the wind blowing its pages back and forth. She quickly snatched it up and hugged it to her chest. She was so excited that she called out for Mommy twice.

                        That’s when she heard the voice. At first, it was just a sound that made her turn and look farther down the path. Then it was a knowing. She knew something important was just around the curve. She didn’t know how she knew, but she knew. The sound came again and this time she knew it was someone talking to her, calling to her. The ground made crunching noises as she walked further down the path.

                        When the voice came again, she stopped and cocked her head to listen harder. The sound was funny; it was like when she played Grampa’s old harmonica with her teeth touching the metal, the sound bounced around in her head. The voice calling was deep and urgent and a little strange like the man talking had a…what was the word? The men on the funny show she watched with Daddy each had one too. Money Python. She heard the voice again. This time she understood what he was begging her to do.

                        “Come! Save my son!”

                        The library book slipped unnoticed from her fingers.

                        Her rubber soled sneakers dug into the dirt as she ran down the dark path. Her own voice inside her head reminded her she wasn’t ever, ever, ever s’posed to go with strangers but it wasn’t really a stranger and she couldn’t ignore how much he needed her.

                        HE.

                        Not the one calling for her help, but the one waiting for her to come. She could feel him, feel his loneliness, feel his fear, feel his longing and his growing pain. The daddy’s voice - that was still there too, whispering secrets now. Making her understand without hearing the words. HE He lay sleeping after a long journey, a special sleep that let him dream and learn until he was safe, until he was found. Until she found him.

                        There, at the end of the path, covered in little green stones, there was the ship he’d traveled in from so far, far away. It wasn’t very big; HE was still little and didn’t need a big ship. But HE needed her. First as a friend and then…

                        Hurry, hurry! Something was wrong. He hurt.

                        She whimpered and rushed closer. The dark metal on top was splotchy beneath the bright colored rocks, so bright they looked like they were glowing, but it was the funny shapes cut into the edge of the ship that most caught her attention. Her little fingers knew exactly which symbols to push but the daddy’s voice made her wait until the ship blasted a cool foam all over its surface. She didn’t want to wait, something was very, very wrong; she could hardly feel HIM anymore. The foam melted away and finally the ship was safe to touch. HE would wake up once she opened his ship.

                        Quickly! Before it was too late.


                        She traced her finger over the important symbols and held her breath as the top of the ship pulled back. Some dirt and rocks fell inside but all she saw was the boy. She hopped up and down and clapped her hands. She’d found him. Now he would wake up and he wouldn’t be lonely anymore ever again. Eyes wide, squirming with excitement, she waited.

                        Nothing happened.

                        The wind puffed its breath in her face, making the little pieces of hair that had fallen from her braid float in the air. It was so quiet.

                        So quiet.

                        Even the voice that sent her to HIM was silent. Why wasn’t HE moving? A strange new feeling sat in her tummy, one worse than when mommy left her alone in the ditch.

                        “No.”

                        Her voice sounded funny to her ears, thin and watery and too little for a big girl. She shook her head. She wasn’t the baby. She stomped her feet in the dirt. It was unfair. HE was supposed to wake up.

                        “Chloe! Where are you baby?”

                        “Mommy?”

                        Her mother’s voice wiped away her mad and made her feel little all over again. She was so confused. She wanted her mommy more than she’d ever wanted her before – something real bad was happening, but she couldn’t leave HIM like this; she wouldn’t, no matter what. Something was going to happen. It wasn’t over. It was why she was chosen to find him. She knew it, like she’d known the ship was at the end of the path and that HE needed her. HE would wake up. She just had to believe. Fighting back swimmy eyes, she answered her mother’s next call but crept closer to the boy. He would wake up; she just had to wait longer.

                        ****

                        Moira hated having to leave Chloe at the car but she wasn’t sure what she’d find when she climbed out of the ditch. She was shaking from fatigue and stress by the time she reached the top of the hill. The day’s repeated rush of adrenaline quickly followed by a crash of relief had left her wrung out. She just wanted to scope out the damage and see if they could make a break for Granville. Pausing at the top of the ditch, she brushed off her hands on her pants, straightened up and surveyed the land around her.

                        The pavement immediately adjacent to the ditch was ruined. Buckled and scorched. She turned and looked at the road leading to Granville. It looked open. The same couldn’t be said about the stretch of highway behind them. She cursed softly under her breath. No more than a hundred feet away, lying in a deep black trough, flipped upside down with the tires still spinning was the same red pickup truck she’d seen earlier trying to outrun disaster. They didn’t run fast enough.

                        She started down the highway toward the vehicle. When she got close enough, she could see through the windows that there were people still trapped inside, but neither the passenger nor the driver were moving. She closed her eyes and took a moment to gather her courage. She’d been the first person on scene to accidents before. It usually wasn’t pretty. She dug her nails into the fleshy part of her palms, took a deep breath and stepped forward, desperately hoping the man and woman were only unconscious when suddenly Chloe’s voice echoed across the desolated highway.

                        “Mommy! Mommy!”

                        She recognized the excited urgency in her daughter’s tone. Torn, she stopped at the top lip of the trough cradling the truck. She glanced between the exposed undercarriage of the flipped truck and the ditch where she’d left Chloe. She fisted her hands again and then pivoted around. As much as she wanted to be a Good Samaritan, her child took precedence over strangers. She rushed back down the highway. She slid down the side of the ditch and then froze. She didn’t see Chloe anywhere.

                        She double checked inside the car and all around and then cried out, “Chloe! Where are you baby?”

                        “Mommy?”

                        She lifted her head. The call came from in the cornfield. She scrambled up the other side of the ditch. Cornfield? There was no cornfield.

                        Only beyond the black scar driven through the flattened field were there any surviving plants standing upright and those stocks looked blackened and ruined. When the meteor hit, it scoured the earth leaving a long dark furrow that curved at the end. Chunks of rock burned and steam hissed on a path that could have doubled as the road leading into the underworld. She shivered. She had a bad feeling about this. A moment later, the feeling solidified. Because of the depth and the angle, she couldn’t see past the curve, but right where the field line should have been, half hidden next to a mound dirt, laid Chloe’s library book, the pages fluttering in the wind.

                        “Chloe?”

                        “Here Mommy!” Chloe’s voice rang out confidently, coming from the direction Moira’s feet did not want to travel. Tentatively, she stepped onto the blackened path.

                        Between the bits of smoking, smoldering earth and the pop and hiss of steam rising from the ground, she expected the black mark to radiate heat, but apart from a few isolated flames, it was unexpectedly cool and the scent of freshly turned soil nearly masked the acrid smell of spent charcoal.

                        She followed the path until it opened up and there at the end she spotted Chloe half draped on a mound of dirt.

                        No, not just dirt.

                        Moira froze. The object near her daughter had shape and curve and a dull metallic…

                        “Chloe get away from there!”

                        Chloe’s little blond head turned toward her voice but she didn’t move away from the… Moira couldn’t even put name to what she was seeing. She had to be hallucinating. Or going mad. Like Aunt Marion. Maybe Tandy was right; maybe it was hereditary after all.

                        “He’s gonna wake up soon.” Chloe wiped a grubby fist across her eyes leaving behind a streak of dirt on her cheek.

                        He?

                        She had to get Chloe away. Hands shaking, heart pounding, and mouth drier than sand, Moira pushed past her fear and closed the distance between her and her daughter. Five steps forward and she saw what held Chloe captivated. Shock buried the fear for a little while.

                        It was a boy, a child no more than Chloe’s age. He was curled on his side, naked except for a few rocks that left dirty smudges on his skin. How could a boy be here in the middle of the field, lying inside of a... She still couldn’t put a name to what she was seeing but she quickly knelt next to daughter. Chloe barely noticed, she was half inside what Moira would only think of as a strange cradle, stroking the boy’s cheek.

                        “He’s so pretty,” she whispered.

                        Thick, dark hair, a sweetly chubby boyish frame, and full lips any mother would want to eat right up. Yes, he was an attractive child, but his skin was too pale and he wasn’t moving. Moira touched the side of his neck, looking for a pulse. His was cold.

                        “He crashed, like we did,” Chloe explained.

                        “I…I don’t….” She couldn’t get the words to form, didn’t know what to do for the poor child. If there was a child. She slowly shook her head. This couldn’t be happening.

                        “Cars can’t fly.”

                        “What? No, no of course not.” She answered automatically but a little sharper than she intended. Chloe and her silly questions. She needed to think but she couldn’t form a straight thought. Chloe nodded. She hadn’t really been asking a question. What rabbit hole had her little mind hopped down now? At least it was keeping Chloe calm and occupied, she didn’t need a hysterical child on top of her own mental breakdown.

                        “He crashed his spaceship.”

                        Chloe’s words made her head swim. Swim. Moira had heard the expression before but she’d never experienced the sensation. Early in her pregnancy with Chloe, she’d felt dizzy a few times but this was so much worse. She’d been fighting against the swirling currents of the impossible only to have the undertow drag her down. Her mind was spinning, still rejecting what couldn’t be true…but was. And Chloe said it like she’d said trees had leaves.

                        It made sense in a funny way. Chloe was too young to know spaceships couldn’t possibly crash into cornfields. For god’s sake, this was Kansas! Nothing ever happened in Kansas, at least not outside of Metropolis. Had other little boys rained down during the meteor shower? An army of naked alien children? No, she dismissed the thought for the absurdity that it was. Besides, that last meteor had been different. Louder, bigger, brighter.

                        Chloe was still talking. What was she saying? Somehow hearing a word like ‘spaceship’ casually roll off the tongue of your almost four year old made it hard to hold onto the topic of conversation. Moira forced herself to really look at the thing the boy was lying within. She quickly closed her eyes. Yep, spaceship. Boy oh boy do you know it when you see it.

                        “I found him. He should wake up.”

                        The intensity behind Chloe’s words set off an internal alarm, but it was lost among all the other screeching sirens. They needed to get out of here. They shouldn’t be seeing something like this, shouldn’t know about something like this. It would ruin their lives.

                        “Why won’t he wake up?” Chloe asked. A sudden stream of hot tears cleaned a path through the muddy streaks on her cheeks.

                        Moira’s heart clenched in feeling both for the confused anguish her daughter was feeling and for the poor distant mother forced to send her child away. Any woman who would put their child in a spacecraft all alone had to have been beyond desperate. At least she would be spared the knowledge her baby hadn’t survived the landing. Moira reached for Chloe’s shoulder.

                        “Honey, there’s nothing we can do.”

                        “No!” Chloe threw off her hand and turned back to the boy. She ran her fingers through his dark hair, mimicking the way Gabe would ruffle her hair, making the unearthly child’s hair stick up in spikes. Then she started picking little rocks off the boy’s body and flinging them away. “Dirty rocks. Don’t belong here,” she muttered.

                        Moira watched as if in a trance. She knew she should stop this, that they should leave but she hesitated, unable to deny the child or the lost child’s unknown mother the comfort and strange dignity that came with Chloe’s small rituals. Chloe next used the sleeve of her checkered shirt to wipe away the dirty smears that had maligned the boy’s skin. Sadly though, beneath the dirt lay dark ugly bruises that Chloe’s tender attention couldn’t chase away.

                        Chloe didn’t seem to notice. She seemed pleased with the results. She leaned closer, patted his cheek and crooned, “It’s time to wake up now,” sweetly imitating the same sing-song voice Moira used each morning. There was no response.

                        “Honey, you have to stop.” She couldn’t watch Chloe go on like this.

                        “You don’t understand.” Chloe was insistent. “Hes s’pose to wake up now. The voice said so.”

                        “What voice?”

                        “A daddy’s voice.” She pointed to the little spaceship and explained in a rush of broken breathy words. “I followed the voice. I found him. The top opened. He s’pose to wake up.”

                        Another chill went down her spine. Voices? Chloe was hearing voices? Alien or imagination, neither option was comforting. The feeling that they shouldn’t be there was growing stronger by the second. By now, Chloe was practically lying on top of the child, her arms wrapped around his body as she mourned a boy she never knew. Enough was enough. Moira tugged at Chloe’s shoulders, trying to pull her away but Chloe snaked her arms around the boy’s neck and his added weight and the awkward angle she was forced to stand on the mound of dirt surrounding his vehicle made lifting her away impossible.

                        “Let go Chloe!”

                        “No!”

                        She tried to change tactics and pry her little fingers open but Chloe twisted around and kept her hands out of reach.

                        “Stop it Chloe. We have to go.”

                        “NO! Not until he wakes up. He has to!”

                        “He’s not going to wake up.”

                        “Yes he will!”

                        “He can’t. He’s dead!”

                        Chloe stiffened all over. Dead was a word Chloe knew. Dead was what happened to her goldfish. And the neighbor’s cat when it ran into the street. And to Grandpa when he had his accident. Dead meant gone. Dead meant never seeing them again.

                        “But I found him.” Chloe’s lower lip quivered and fresh tears spilled. Shaking her head, she refused to believe. “No. No. I just found him. What?” Chloe turned her head like someone else was speaking but Moira didn’t see or hear anything. The hair on the back of her neck stood up; something terrible was about to happen.

                        Chloe cocked her head to the side. “Oh. I can save him.”

                        Suddenly, Chloe tipped her head back and shrieked like she was being tortured.

                        “CHLOE!” A hand reached inside Moira’s chest, sunk claws in to her heart and squeezed. Before she could do anything, her baby girl went limp, like a puppet with its strings cut. Moira’s terror and anguish were pushed aside as one thought screamed through her mind.

                        Run!

                        They had to leave this place, this thing, this unearthly child. She scooped Chloe’s body up in her arms. She was so light, so little, it was impossible to believe she was the same being Moira had been unable seconds ago to pry away from the ship. She should have tried harder. Should have grabbed her and left the second she spotted the ship. She turned her back on the impossible thing in the field and raced as fast as she could toward her car.

                        Chloe still wasn’t moving.

                        No, no, no.

                        She couldn’t even hear her breathing. The boy had been still. The boy hadn’t been breathing. Moira touched her hand to Chloe’s forehead. Her skin was cold. A sound of raw pain slipped from between her lips. The boy had been cold. All she could do was keep moving. Get away. Find help.

                        She fought back the next anguished cry that wanted to escape, if she let that one out she would never stop wailing. She left the ditch and bounded over the fallen corn. At the edge of the ditch, she leaned her weight back onto her heel and surfed down the side of the hill and then finished her sprint to the car, She maneuvered them together in through narrow opening of the driver’s door, carefully set Chloe on the seat next to her, and twisted the keys in the ignition. The engine roared to life.

                        The sides of the ditch were too steep for the Mercury to climb, but the bottom was mostly level, so she put the car into gear and slowly pressed the gas pedal. The tires spun for a second and then found traction. The land bridge she’d spotted connecting a farmer’s field to the highway couldn’t be too far away. Just a little further. Going slow was killing her. She read the clock and was shocked to realize how few minutes had passed since she skidded off the road. None of it felt real.

                        The seconds felt like an eternity but finally, the grade of the ditch began to ease and yes, yes, the car climbed the gentle slope and she was back on the highway. She pushed the accelerator to the floor. Smallville and the hospital were impossible to reach; the road behind them was obliterated. Granville was still ten miles away and their med clinic even farther away on the other side of town.

                        Seventy, eighty, ninety.

                        The speedometer climbed. Didn’t Dr. Granger live on the outskirts of town? Yes, right. After he retired, he bought a hobby farm and started raising show chickens, something her mother mentioned every time they passed junction 18. She could be there in five more minutes.

                        Five more minutes of her baby not breathing. What was she thinking?

                        Moira hit the brakes. The car threatened to fishtail but she didn’t have time for that and yanked it under control. Leaving the car running in the middle of the highway, she slammed the gear into park and ran around to the other side of the car. Air, her baby needed air. Oxygen to keep her maddeningly curious mind alive. She yanked open the door, pinched Chloe’s nose...

                        “Mommy, what are you doing?”

                        “Chloe? Oh, god, baby, my baby.” She clutched the now warm little body to her chest. A miracle! She couldn’t explain it any other way.

                        “I’m not a baby! Mommy, you’re squeezing me to death.”

                        She pulled back and smoothed a loose strand of Chloe’s fly away blonde hair. She looked fine. Her cheeks were still smudged with dirt but they were pink and warm and Chloe’s attempt to squirm out of her hold confirmed she was moving. “Oh baby, you’re really awake.”

                        “I’m not a baby.” She repeated and twisted around to look in the back seat. “Where is he? Did he wake up? We have to go back.”

                        A dark fear twisted threw her body. Go back?

                        Never.

                        Moira again stroked Chloe’s hair and then laid a hand on each of her baby’s slim shoulders. She shook her head.

                        “We can’t. We can’t go back.” Tears shimmered in Chloe’s eyes and she started squirming in an earnest attempt to escape.

                        “Noooo! I can’t leave him. He needs me. I found him.”

                        Moira refused to loosen her grip. She gave her daughter a quick shake. Fear and determination combined to harden her tone. “Chloe Anne Sullivan, for once in your life you are going to listen to me.”

                        “But Mommy…”

                        “NO! I said LISTEN TO ME!” She shouted through clenched teeth. Her fingers curled into the fabric of Chloe’s blouse. “You are going to do exactly what I tell you to do, do you understand me?” Miracles of miracles, Chloe stopped fighting her and simply nodded. Moira swallowed hard and struggled to slow her ragged breath and pounding heart. God, she wished none of any of this had happened. No one could ever know it had.

                        “The boy, the spaceship, the meteor’s – you will forget any of this ever happened,” Moira found herself saying. “I don’t want to hear another word about it. It was just a dream. You fell asleep after we left Aunt Ella’s house and didn’t wake up until we got to Granville. We saw nothing; it’s all just a dream, the kind you can’t remember when you wake up.” Oh god, if only it was a simple as wishing it all away. She waited for Chloe’s tirade but it never came. Instead, Chloe calmly nodded.

                        “Yes mommy, I’m just having a dream.”

                        Moira yanked her hands back from Chloe’s shoulders and then watched in disbelief as Chloe rubbed her eyes and mumbled, “Still sleepy.” A huge yawn cracked her jaw wide open as she curled up against the car seat and closed her eyes. Almost immediately, her blond head lolled to the side. Panic swamped Moira in the instant before Chloe drew up her legs, snuggled deep against the cushions and started making soft, sleepy sounds.

                        Moira felt her daughter’s forehead. Warm, but not too warm. Seconds later, she heard the familiar even sound of Chloe breathing while asleep. Asleep? How could she be asleep? Puzzled, but no longer alarmed, she carefully buckled the belt around Chloe’s sleeping body and quietly closed the car door. She slid in the driver’s side and looked at Chloe again. Still breathing, sleeping like the angel she looked like. It made no sense. How could Chloe just drop off to sleep like that? Normally she fought it every step of the way and that was on good nights. The nights something fired Chloe’s tenacious will, well, no one slept then.

                        Moira resumed driving, but this time under the speed limit. Not five minutes down the road and she had to pull over again. Her last reserve of adrenaline wore off and her hands were shaking too violently for her to drive. The tears came next. She couldn’t control them as all the day’s fear crashed over her. They’d almost died. For a few minutes, she thought Chloe had. As she wept, she hit the steering wheel. She was a terrible mother. She’d almost gotten Chloe killed and then yelled at her when she was alive, probably traumatizing her for life.

                        And oh god, the boy.

                        Maybe she should have done more. But all her instincts had cried out that he was beyond her help. And Chloe - her reaction to the child terrified her. The instant connection, the voice she heard, how she kept repeating ‘I found him’ like she was claiming him forever in some kind of alien ritual.

                        She leaned over to the glove compartment to get the box of tissues. Chloe didn’t move. Moira wiped her eyes, blew her nose and looked at her daughter again. Still asleep. She reached for a packet of wet wipes and used it to clean the dirt from Chloe’s face and hands. She didn’t even stir.

                        This was insane. Ever thing was insane. Chloe falling asleep like that made no sense but then neither did a spaceship where a cornfield should be and a little boy where nothing should be. It really did sound like a crazy dream. Maybe she was the one dreaming. Maybe she was home asleep in her bed. That was easier to believe than anything else. She glanced in the rearview mirror. Faint trails of ash still marked the path the meteors had taken across the sky.

                        Ok, so not a dream, but what about the crash? Could she have hit her head during the crash and blacked out, only to imagine everything? She felt for any sore spots beneath her pinned up hair, but found nothing.

                        So she didn’t bump her head but it might still have been a hallucination. Right after the last meteor hit, there had been a moment when she was seeing spots and couldn’t breathe. Had some kind of gas come down with the meteors? Or maybe chocking on the dust triggered an oxygen deprived delirium. It hadn’t felt like a dream. In fact, nothing from her past had ever stood out in sharper relief.

                        She glanced out the window and noted the sign at the next intersection. She wasn’t very far from home. She grabbed her purse and pulled out her make up bag, letting the simple, everyday routine calm her. A glance in the mirror told her she looked like the emotional disaster that she felt.

                        A dab or two of liquid makeup to even out the blotchy red spots left from crying, a dash of mascara and a quick swipe of lipstick and she looked closer to normal. A bubble of hysteria threatened to erupt. Normal? What was normal? She forced the unhinged emotion back down. Holding up her compact, she looked at herself in the mirror.

                        “Moira Sullivan, you are clearly suffering from stress and shock. The spaceship, the boy, Chloe not breathing, all of that, it had to be some kind of hallucination. It’s all over. There’s no need to think about it anymore. Everything’s fine now.” For second she felt strange, kind of tingly all over, and then it was as if a weight vanished.

                        She snapped the compact closed and dropped it back into her purse. She glanced over at Chloe and smiled. She was still asleep. She must have been exhausted after her antics this morning at Ella’s and Sam’s house. She’d be disappointed to find out she slept through a meteor shower and a car crash. Oh well, it was probably for the best. Some of those meteor strikes looked awfully close to Smallville. People probably got hurt. It would probably be on the news but that wasn’t the kind of news Chloe should be watching.

                        She would bring out Dad’s old collection of Daily Planet clippings again. Chloe had loved looking through all the incredible stories he’d saved from his favorite paper. Maybe she would grow up to be a reporter and channel all her fierce curiosity and stubborn devotion somewhere safe. She was already half way there, investigating and then reporting back the facts. Gently, she brushed the loose strands of blond hair off Chloe’s rosy cheek. She slipped the car back into gear and smiled at her little cub reporter as she started to drive.

                        Almost home.


                        Epilogue


                        HE woke up alone but he didn’t feel alone, not anymore. He had been dreaming for a long time. Sometimes the long face of a woman with light colored hair flashed through his mind. The picture made him sad but a word went with the picture, Lara. The word made him remember softness and warmth and sweet smelling breath and that made him feel safe and loved. As the dreams were ending, the voice that had kept him company went away. That voice didn’t make him feel the same warmth as memories of Lara did, but without the voice, he felt very alone and afraid.

                        Then a new voice came to him. A sweet voice, little, but strong. She promised to find him. She promised he would never have to be lonely again. He felt a surge of happiness. SHE was the one chosen. He couldn’t wait to see her. She wasn’t like Lara, there was warmth and softness and love but she was something brand new and all his own. Then the pain came and it hurt so much it was hard to remember anything that came before. Something happened and everything went away, but somehow SHE brought him back.

                        He opened his eyes expecting HER to be there but she was gone. He kept smiling though. How could he not? Somewhere out there, SHE was waiting for him. He turned his face to the sky. The light falling on his skin felt good all the way deep. He’d traveled far and long to reach the light and it was his reward for waiting. Finding SHE who made him feel good all the way deep might also take him on a journey far and long, after all, the pain and the nothingness would make remembering HER harder, but one day he would turn in her direction and recognize the warmth and love of SHE, the One Chosen.

                        He tucked that vow deep into his subconscious and climbed out of the dreaming place into a brand new world. SHE was in this world so that made it home. Fearlessly, he set out, taking the first steps on his life’s greatest journey.

                        ~ The Beginning ~

                        Author’s note: I’m sure I left people with a few questions. So a few thoughts. Ok, more than a few.
                        First off: My reasoning on how meteor powers form.
                        Exposure is the first part. Since Chloe had such a pure concentration in her heart, it seemed logical that she was more than just exposed to it, but that she breathed it in right from the source and it got into her blood stream.
                        After exposure, the second part of acquiring a meteor power comes from something around the subject or on their mind. Surroundings, location, activity, a fear, a great need, a lingering thought- there is always some kind of connection. It seemed logical to me that Moira’s ability was triggered when she desperately needed Chloe to obey her. So what would trigger Chloe’s ability to heal even death? Someone had to need healing, even from death. That brings us to Clark and his ship.

                        We know the ship could be harmed by kryptonite (a kryptonite key would make the whole thing explode) and a ton of the rock came down with the meteor shower so it made sense that it would harm the ship’s systems, in this case, the life support. The ship didn’t wake him from his induced slumber and then to make matters worse, chunks of green rocks actually fell on him. I theorized that at that stage – before the yellow sun had time to fully charge up his cells, Clark would be extra vulnerable to the rocks, hence the kryptonite out and out killed him rather than just making him sick and hurt and therefore it took Chloe’s special intervention to revive him, not just the removal of the green rocks.

                        When the ship came down and the kryptonite exposure started to harm it, I figure Jor-El AI would come on line . He reaches out and his plea for help and glimpse into Clark’s mind affects Chloe in a deep and profound manner. She has no self-serving (or self-protecting) barriers. She’s completely open and in an instant, a powerful connection between she and Clark is made. Jor-El doesn’t trigger her powers but her need to save Clark at all costs does. Speaking of her power.

                        Between the two times Chloe used her power on the show to revive first Lois and then Lex, the toll on her jumped exponentially. So working backward, I calculated that the very first time she used her power she would have only been “dead” for a few minutes.

                        Then Moira activated her power and buried that ability and everything connected to it. And yes, Moira used her power of persuasion on herself as well so neither Chloe nor Moira remember what happened, but nothing was ever the same again. Moira leaves her family for the first time about a year later when Chloe is five. (Then came back until she committed herself when Chloe was eight, but she must have stayed in some kind of contact since Chloe said she last saw her mom when she was 12.)

                        So that’s what was going through my mind. I’d love to hear your thoughts and comments.
                        Thanks
                        Last edited by BkWurm1; 03-19-2014, 05:58 AM.

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                        • #13
                          Wow. Absolutely stunning piece of work here, Mel. I'll have to come back and leave a detailed review, but I just had to come and doff my hat to you for giving us the true origin of Chlark in all its glory. This is my canon from now on!

                          Well done, babes. Loved it; Chlark at their absolute best.

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                          • #14
                            Absolutely delightful, not to mention a great explanation of the origin of Chloe and Moira's meteor abilities.

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by Jlvsclrk
                              Absolutely delightful, not to mention a great explanation of the origin of Chloe and Moira's meteor abilities.
                              Totally off topic, but I adore your Tommy icon, Jen. He looks like the very definition of SQUEE!

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