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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepingBeauty View Post
    "But you are marrying Lana Clark and I am just the woman who you fall into her arms at night.
    I am not the one who stands beside you and I am not the one who will have your name and will be able to carry your babies under my heart".
    This bit and the entire first chapter reminded me of one of my favourite books: Dune.

    At the end of the book Lady Jessica - "concubine" of the late (and never married) Duke Leto Atreides and mother of his heir - talks to Chani, who is the "concubine" of her son and soon-to-be emperor Paul Atreides who has to marry a daughter of the emperor (Princess Irulan) to get the throne:

    'See that princess there, so haughty and confident. They say she has pretensions of a literary nature. Let us hope she finds solace in such things; she'll have little else.' A bitter laugh escaped Jessica. 'Think on it, Chani: that princess will have the name, yet she'll live as less than a concubine - never to know a moment of tenderness from the man to whom she's bound. While we, Chani, we who carry the name of concubine - history will call us wives.'

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    Quote Originally Posted by Clois4ever<3 View Post
    Nice! Does Clark also have superpowers in this story??
    thanks hmm Iam not sure myslef yet

    Quote Originally Posted by princesskagome100 View Post
    Nice, I like it, however I hope Lois does something, maybe starts ignoring him to make him choose what is right in front of him and not the Pink Princess. Cant wait till next update!!
    Its not easy to ignore the one person you love the most :S but dont worry about Lois she will find a way to make Clark see who and what is right for him



    Quote Originally Posted by DJ Doena View Post
    This bit and the entire first chapter reminded me of one of my favourite books: Dune.

    At the end of the book Lady Jessica - "concubine" of the late (and never married) Duke Leto Atreides and mother of his heir - talks to Chani, who is the "concubine" of her son and soon-to-be emperor Paul Atreides who has to marry a daughter of the emperor (Princess Irulan) to get the throne:
    Never heard of these books before but its sounds interesting after reading some of it on wiki so its now on my To read list


    I updated Possessing you now first somehow I found myself writing for it and not for this one but I will try to update this story tonight or tomorrow

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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepingBeauty View Post
    Never heard of these books before but its sounds interesting after reading some of it on wiki so its now on my To read list
    It plays in a distant future where mankind is scattered throughout the stars but the ruling system is like the deudal system of the late middle ages with Houses and feuds and so on.

    Here's the movie intro of that story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VZ2Nfvc8WMw#t=37s

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    Hi guys here is the next chapter I hope you all enjoy it !
    Oh and this Jeff is not the one from SV...


    Chapter 2

    Gulping down the last bite of her breakfast Lois jumped down of the tool she sat on in front of the huge kitchen counter.


    She was already late and had to work now faster to bring all the food up to the dining room.


    Picking up her empty plate she took it to the kitchen sink and put it in.


    "Oh Lo leave it all behind I will clean it all up you better sit down again and taste my new pancakes I changed some of the recipe "


    Turning around to the older woman who was the mansions cook Lois put her hand over her stomach and grimaced.


    She loved the grey haired woman she was like a grandmother to her but all the food she had to taste and eat was just too much for Lois small body she knew Clara just liked to pamper her but sometimes Lois wished she would find another way to do it than this.


    "Oh Clara no not now I am already stuffed"


    Clara put her hands on her plump hips and looked at Lois like she was a small kid that was not doing what her grandmother wanted her to.


    "Tell you what you do" she walked up to her and put one arm over Lois shoulders.

    "You will sit back down eat some more and then go to work"

    "But Clara"! Lois tried to protest but Clara stopped her with her index finger pointing at her face.


    "You work too much and need the energy. I don’t want you to breakdown again".


    Lois rolled her eyes at that "I only fainted once and it was a long time ago there is no need for you to hold it over my head all the time".


    "Nah shh shh I don’t want to hear another thing".

    Clara dragged her behind her back to the tool at the counter.

    "Sit I will get you the pancakes" Clara put a huge plate of pancaked in front of Lois.

    "I need to leave you a minute alone now but I will be back in a second"

    The minute Clara turned her back to her Jeff came back into the room.


    "Oh Jeff you just came to the right time"!

    "I did"? Jeff looked behind him a little irritated by the look of Lois shiny mischievous dark green eyes .

    Grinning she nodded "Yes just perfect..." Lois stood up walking up to him she put one arm around his shoulders just like Clara did only she had to reach up to him much more.


    "Come on you can sit down here" she pushed him down on the tool and stepped back.

    "Clara made some special pancakes for you that you need to taste"

    "For me"? Jeff’s green eyes narrowed as she said that.


    Clara loved Lois but him, not so much.


    They had a love hate relationship maybe it was like that because Clara felt like Lois was her little daughter and he was only the rude boy who was always after Lois.


    Every man in Clara’s eyes is a pig and she often told Lois just that.


    The best it would be is if she stayed away from all of them and that included him as well but Jeff knew that behind all the bickering and teasing they did Clara still had a soft spot for him just like he had for her.


    "Yes for you"


    Jeff brought his face closer to hers so his nose lightly brushed hers and said in a quiet voice "Then why are you whispering"?


    Lois opened and closed her mouth again he drew his head back and smiled knowing at her.


    "Ahh I see you are using me again to escape her".


    "Oh Jeff lower your voice or she will be back here. Please help me I need to work and she won’t let me go until I eat some more" she pouted and Jeff sighed "Fine go but if she hits me with her wooden spoon at the back of my head again I can’t promise you anything"


    "She won’t do it again she promised me that" she grinned up at him and as she heard the footsteps from Clara who came back to the kitchen Lois quickly took some plates with her and made her way to the other door out of the kitchen.


    Jeff looked after her and laughed out loud as he saw her running away like a little child from the old woman.


    Flinching slightly as he felt the wooden spoon hit lightly his back he turned around "Och Clara what was that for"?


    He rubbed his back and looked at the older woman who swung the wooden spoon back and forth in front of his face.


    "You are sitting on Lois seat and eating her breakfast"!

    "Yeah the breakfast she does not want"

    "She needs to eat"

    "But not so much that soon you can roll her around"

    "Ha ha funny"

    "I am serious"

    Jeff quickly stood up and picked the plate up walking to the door.


    "Hey where are you going to and where are you taking my pancakes to"?


    Clara shambled behind him and Jeff laughed as he turned around and saw her walking after him.


    "I better take them with me before you need help with your rolling around" he winked at her and smiled broadly flashing her his pearly whites.


    "Oh you unruly boy"!!



    Clark sat down at the edge of the bed as he heard the shower stop running he turned his face to the side to look at Lana who walked out of the bathroom her middle only wrapped in a white towel.


    She smiled as she saw him "Morning"

    "Morning" he smiled briefly back at her before he stood up and walked to the bathroom.

    Lana stopped him from entering it by stepping right in front of him blocking him his way in.


    "Where did you go to this morning"? she pouted her lips while one of her hands brushed from his chest up to his chin.


    Tapping her thumb on his lower lip she let the towel fall down her body.


    Looking seductively up at him through her long black lashes she said "I wanted to have breakfast in bed with you ..."


    Clark took her hand in his and lowered it down to her side he not once glanced down at her naked body.


    She was a beautiful woman but she had no effect on him not like Lois had she could make his blood boil with only one look of her beautiful big green eyes.


    "I could not sleep and needed some fresh air so I went for a walk"

    "That’s ok we can skip breakfast and stay in bed now what do you say"?

    Lana looked up at him with her cat like dark brown eyes and rose one eyebrow up.


    "That’s tempting but my parents are already waiting and I don’t want them to ask why we did not come down or worse my father coming up here to see if everything is fine"


    He walked around her and into the bathroom.


    Lana picked up the towel from the floor and followed him "And that’s why I always tell you that we should move out of her after we are married or better yet before we do"


    "We can’t Lana"

    "And why"?

    Clark looked at the mirror and saw how Lana was leaning at the door frame crossing her arms she waited impatient for his answer.


    "You know that my mother is sick she wants us close to her and at a time like this I won’t leave her alone" besides the fact that he would never leave Lois here alone.


    "We can visit her"
    "That’s not enough"


    "Clark-"

    "Lana this discussion ends now. I already told you I am not moving out"!

    He turned around and looked her hard in the eye "but of course you are free to go whenever you want"


    With a huff Lana turned around and walked back into the bedroom.


    Ohh how she hated him when he talked to her like that.


    She laughed bitterly to herself as she walked into the walk in clothes to change.


    Never would she leave Lana was not dumb she knew that he did not love her and never really did but she was
    fine with that as long as she would be his wife.


    Since her parents died she was depending on other people.


    She always thought that her parents had money enough as they lived but that was not truth.

    Her father was just good at hiding it all from them.

    Lana’s father had loved to play and spend all his fortune on young women and all casinos around the world.


    One day after the world knew of his death all creditors of his had stood on her door step and quickly all the money she had was gone.


    She needed Clark and no matter what he said and did would make her leave him.


    Lana already knew that he had laid his eyes on the little servant Lois long before she had decided to make him hers but that did not stop her to make a move on him.


    Somehow she succeeded with her little plan and he had fallen into her trap.


    Visiting him every day at the mansion had been the first step.


    One day as she drove to the mansion she had seen how he and Lois stood at the back garden.


    Obviously they had been quarreling because Lois swung her arms in the air loudly and passionate talking to him.


    Her flashing green eyes looking up at him as her wild brown long locks flew around her as she shook her head vigorous.


    Clark just had been standing in front of her a frown on his forehead and with narrowing stormy blue eyes had he been looking angrily at her.


    Lana had laughed as she had seen how Lois run klutzy away from him.

    She never could understand what he saw in someone like her she was such a hoyden.

    The moment Lois left Lana had gone to him.


    Walking to the water fountain where he stood she pretended that she did not know what upset him.


    She made it look like she wanted to cheer him up from whatever was bothering.


    Somehow she got him to drive with her to Metropolis going to a club she let him drink some alcohol.


    Never had she seen that he was drunk or anything he always had himself under control but not this night.

    Luckily for her.

    Then the alcohol in his blood made him touch her.


    He had acted like a complete different person and Lana never enjoyed his company more than on this night.


    The only thing that annoyed her was that somehow the name Lois always was said but with some more champagne she made him forget her as well.


    Clark wanted to stay the night in Metropolis but she demanded from him to drive back to Smallville and they did.

    Back at the mansion he had led her to a guestroom.

    Yes they had kissed but from his side Lana knew that nothing more would happen.


    She already could see it in his face that he regretted kissing her.


    The minute they had entered the mansion he sobered up and had looked at the direction where she knew Lois bedroom was.


    Lana had let him led her to the bedroom and as he was about to leave after he let her in.


    She had took his hand in hers and pulled him back into the room.


    Telling him she was not feeling well she persuaded him to stay with her the night.


    He consented and laid down next to her in the bed fully clothed.


    Waiting until she felt him falling in a deep sleep she had stripped of her clothes and his as well.

    Satisfied with herself she had snuggled up against him.

    Oh the next morning was more fun than the night before.


    Everything could not have gone better than this.


    Clark’s father had stormed into the room catching them sleeping together naked with only one cover over their bodies.


    His father of course assumed that they had slept together.


    And Clark could not really deny it because he had not been sure what really happened the night before.


    The Lang’s and the Kent’s were since long years befriended.


    His father could not believe that his son would use Lana like this.


    Clark and she had sat in the salon and his parents had stared at them for a long time and then they wanted answers to what their behavior meant.


    Lana had glanced to the side to look at Clark and she had seen that inside his head he had an own conflict going on.


    Taking the chance she told his parents that she loved Clark and that she did not regret what they had done.

    At that Clark had looked shocked at her.

    There was no out of it now what would his parents think about him when he told them that he does not love her back and had only used her.


    That it had been a mistake.


    He did not get the chance to say anything because Lana saw a slim figure standing at the doorframe holding a tray of lemonade in her hands.


    She had said it all over again a little louder this time "I love Clark Mr. Kent and I don’t regret ever spending the night with him"!


    The tray with the lemonade fell down to the floor and all heads turned back too look.


    How Lois tried desperate to pick up the shattered glass with shaking hands.


    She had stuttered how sorry she was and as she felt that they all kept on staring at her.


    Lois had looked up first she had seen Clarks guilty looking face and then Lana’s who had smiled triumphantly at her.


    Standing quickly up Lois had left all the shattered glass down on the floor and had run out of the salon.

    Clark stood up and run after her Lana had followed him out.

    He called out to Lois pleading with her to wait but Lois did not stop she run up the stairs and Clark wanted to go after her but Lana had stopped him laying her hand on his upper arm.


    Clark had angrily turned to her he wanted to push her hands off him but his parents had followed them out and he tried to stay calmly in front of them.


    Since that day he had started to date her.


    Lana knew that he was still seeing Lois but she did not care as long as she would just keep his warm bed and nothing else.


    "Are you ready"?


    Clark’s voice broke her out of her thought.


    She turned to him and nodded.


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    God Lana is worse here than in the show, and I didnt even know that was possible...oh I hope Clark gets rid of Lana soon cause, he better before things get too late

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    Great Chapter. I donīt understand why Clark keeps on this fake relationship with Lana....please give a us Clois scenes next chapter!!

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    Unbelievable wow more soon

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    So, Lana's evil plan separated Clois. I hope we'll see more Clois background and interactions. PPMS

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    I so hate that b****!!!!Let me get my hands on her, and teach her some things, that will make her regret the day she was born
    She's only there for the money and with Clark being an idiot, well there isn't a chance for Lois to get her happy ending.....

    Please update soon *pout*

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    great update.ppms

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    So, looks like Clark doesn't have his powers here, right?

    you know what intrigues me? Wth Clark is still with Lana. I mean, i don't agree but i can see his point "accepting" their commitment, at first, because of his parents but they're together for a while now, right? He could simply say that he 'fell out of love' with her....

    and i just have to quote MariVe's post because i do feel the same


    Quote Originally Posted by MariVe View Post
    I so hate that b****!!!!Let me get my hands on her, and teach her some things, that will make her regret the day she was born
    She's only there for the money and with Clark being an idiot, well there isn't a chance for Lois to get her happy ending.....

    Please update soon *pout*

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    I can't wait for more... Susu please update soon

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    Nice update. That pink princess need to be taught a lesson or 10.000! (if that can do it)

    So sad about Lois, she must be heartbroken. Do we get to see how they made up in the next chapter??

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    Hey guys I am so sorry for the long wait but I am promising you one new chapter for tomorrow!!

    Oh and I have posted a new CL/Lois story in the adult section so if someone is interested you can read it here its called
    The beautiful taste of sins

    http://www.ksitetv.com/forums/showth...thor-Lois-Lane

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    yay can't wait update

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