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    loved the last updates!
    especially the last three ones!
    and the one with Clark's dream remimded me an amazing scene from the tudors! ohhh! amazing work anne!!! keep going!!!

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    Love the update!.. First the dream and then the not quite a date!.. So fun..I love how Lois can get him to do things. Like others my only worry is if he finds out she was set up to meet him..

    Great story..please post more.. I am greedy!!..FEED ME!

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    So Clark is dreaming about Lois now. yay!! Can't wait to see them interact more. ppms!
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    That was lovely! I knew the first scene had to a dream, and the jump over the falls was very romantic! PPMS!!!

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    Hee, I love the way Lois is caught staring at his pecs. Well, who wouldn't? It's so sweet the way Clark is falling for her. But why do I get the feeling this is too easy?

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    Clark dreams about her ...Thats good ..

    great update please post soon

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    Quote Originally Posted by TeamClois View Post
    I loved it, Anne. And while it wasn't Clois first date or any date for that matter, it was the next best thing. It's so great
    to see them so comfortable and trusting of each other in addition to the sparks they feel. And while it's obvious the King is smitten with Lois, I think she's going to realize soon that her feelings are no longer part of the charade.
    Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you're right it wasn't their first date but that's coming

    Quote Originally Posted by MariVe View Post
    Lois is teasing him insanely, those comments with double meaning are going to keep him awake at night Fantastic, you need to update soon!!!
    Haha I'm so glad the teasing is coming across, cause I picture it in my head and hope I'm conveying it with my words<3

    Quote Originally Posted by Tiggers View Post
    Interesting. Can't wait for more. ppms!
    Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by LoisLane24 View Post
    Super good!!
    Thank you!!

    Quote Originally Posted by rindra453 View Post
    awesome !! looks like they're both falling hard for each other...ppms
    hehe, of course... and that's where things get messy

    Quote Originally Posted by clarkfan325 View Post
    Great chapter.
    Thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by cathy14 View Post
    she sure knows how to play her cards, huh? she was taught well and paid attention to the classes
    he's absolutely head over heels for her and i know some of his ''advisors" are going to be against it... and i'm sure they'll do anything to ruin it
    Haha well it is Lois :P Like I said above I'm so glad the teasing and games Lois is playing are coming across in the writing, because you can picture it in your head but if it doesn't translate it's pointless.

    Quote Originally Posted by maevelin View Post
    loved the last updates!
    especially the last three ones!
    and the one with Clark's dream remimded me an amazing scene from the tudors! ohhh! amazing work anne!!! keep going!!!
    Thanks so much!! Yes!! I did take inspiration from that scene in the Tudors... one of my favorite scenes in the entire series!

    Quote Originally Posted by FWvidchick View Post
    Love the update!.. First the dream and then the not quite a date!.. So fun..I love how Lois can get him to do things. Like others my only worry is if he finds out she was set up to meet him..

    Great story..please post more.. I am greedy!!..FEED ME!
    So glad you enjoyed it!! I actually am very excited to write the climax scene for sure!

    Quote Originally Posted by clois38 View Post
    So Clark is dreaming about Lois now. yay!! Can't wait to see them interact more. ppms!
    So glad you're enjoying!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Miray View Post
    That was lovely! I knew the first scene had to a dream, and the jump over the falls was very romantic! PPMS!!!
    I feel like there's always waterfalls in my story but they are so romantic to me haha!!

    Quote Originally Posted by phoenixnz View Post
    Hee, I love the way Lois is caught staring at his pecs. Well, who wouldn't? It's so sweet the way Clark is falling for her. But why do I get the feeling this is too easy?
    For real! i know I'd be guilty of it... almost like the scene in pride and prejudice 1995 haha! Oh trust me there will be plenty of bumps ahead

    Quote Originally Posted by SleepingBeauty View Post
    Clark dreams about her ...Thats good ..

    great update please post soon
    Getting ready to update now=]

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    Chapter 8

    “What do you make of Wayne’s cousin Luthor?” Zod questioned from his seat in the empty council room. Meetings had let out for the day leaving the two schemers behind.

    “I’m suspicious. Wayne has never mentioned his family at all, let alone this cousin whom he supposedly loves like a sister.” Lex said honestly.

    “And look at how flippant the King has become over her. It’s almost as if he could care less about the realm.” Zod shook his head in disgust. “A true King doesn’t let a woman affect his rule.”

    “We have to dig deeper into this, there’s a story here.” Lex ran his hand along his chin in thought.

    “Don’t you have some lowly men that would do anything for a royal pardon and maybe some titles?” Zod questioned looking up at Lex. The young bald man smiled deviously and nodded his head slightly.

    “That is something that can absolutely be arranged.” Lex grinned before mumbling to himself and disappearing from the room.

    ~~

    Two days later Lois was looking at some new fabrics and designs with her seamstress’. Lois felt she had more dresses then she could wear in a year but Bruce and Oliver insisted on her having even more gowns. “You seem to favor dark blues and reds my lady,” one seamstress spoke, “What about this green?”

    Lois scrunched her face slightly at the color of the fabric, it reminded her of vomit. “I don’t think green is really my color Molly.” Lois smiled.

    “Very well,” Molly smiled tossing the color to the side, “No more green.”

    The girls all shared a giggle when there was a knock on the door. Lois turned and smiled as she saw Alfred at the threshold, “I beg your pardon my lady but Sir Tolmey is here to see you.”

    “Sir Tolmey?” Lois questioned, her brows furrowing with confusion.

    “He is the head of the King’s royal guard.” Alfred informed her causing Lois’ heart to skip a beat, had they been found out somehow? Lois excused herself from her seamstress’ and followed Alfred to the drawing room.

    “Ah Lady Lois.” The knight smiled, his white cloak floating behind him as he approached her. His calm nature soothed Lois immediately; she knew he meant her no harm. “I am here on command of the King. He’s asked to see you and demanded his royal escort to accompany you. He sends his apologies that he could not accompany you himself.”

    “No apologies are necessary Sir.” Lois said politely. “Has the King asked me to bring anything?”

    “No my lady.” Sir Tolmey smiled. “Just yourself.”

    “Very well then, please allow me to grab my cloak before we depart. The autumn has suddenly turned chilly.” Lois smiled as she turned to Alfred who already had her black velvet cloak waiting for her. “Thank you Alfred.” The old man simply nodded.

    “Let us depart then.” The middle aged knight said signaling for Lois to walk in front of him. She was amazed at the sight when the front door was open and she saw the royal escort for the first time. It was immense, about a hundred men all in their royal armor seated on horseback waiting to escort her to the palace. Lois noticed that her silver was saddled and waiting for her, the stable boy gave her an apple box to help her mount the tall thoroughbred. As soon as she was seated and settled at the center of the escort she heard a command shouted and they began to move.

    This time the journey to the palace was far more tedious and lengthy, as the royal guard never went above the pace of a walk. It was frustrating to Lois but there was nothing she could do about it. After tripling the time it would take for an average trip they breeched the palace walls. Lois pulled her horse up and with help dismounted. Sir Tolmey appeared before her once more, “I’ll bring you to the King now Miss.”

    Lois nodded her head before turning to the knights and men that had escorted her, “Thank you all.”

    They weaved in and out of hallways and corridors, the golden sun lighting up the palace as if it was in the center of a flame. Lois felt comfortable there, she felt welcomed. Finally the knight stopped at a closed oak door before pulling it open, Lois stayed where she was as he spoke.

    “Your Majesty, I present to you Lois Lane.” He said chivalrously as Lois crossed the threshold and entered the room. She quickly realized they were in the King’s dining hall. In the center of the room was a massive long table to accommodate hundreds, it was decorated with white candles and their flickering flames. The scents of meats and fruits reached Lois’ nose and made her stomach growl, despite having ate a hearty breakfast.

    Then she laid eyes on him and all the surrounding elements were merely the background of a painting. He was dressed in an elegant royal blue jacket and white undershirt, his trousers were fitted and black, it was as if he was awaiting far ore royal company than Lois. His blue green eyes sparkled in the candlelight and his smile warmed her to the core. “Clark.” Lois curtseyed to him, remembering he didn’t like when she called him by his proper title.

    Clark closed the gap between the two of them and took her hands in his. “Lois.” He spoke huskily before turning to Sir Tolmey. “Thank you for bringing her here Tolmey, it will not be forgotten. You’re dismissed.”

    “Majesty.” The man bowed before turning and leaving the room, closing the door as he went.

    “Are you expecting company?” Lois questioned looking at all the food.

    “Only you.” Clark said satisfactorily, his thumb brushing her knuckles in a teasing manner.

    “Only me?!” Lois said somewhat shocked before chuckling. “Well now I feel under dressed.”

    “Under dressed?”

    “Had I know I was to dine with the King, and all the hard work he put forth I would have worn something more fancy than a light blue gown and pearl earrings.” Lois spoke clutching her cloak around her. Clark smiled before stepping behind her, his hands slowly wrapping around her neck to untie her heavy cloak.

    “Trust me my Lady, you are perfect.” Clark said affectionately as he pulled a string in his hand, loosening the bow that held the cloak on. He then slowly slipped it off her shoulders before handing it off to a servant. Clark came before her again and took her hand in his. “Come sit next to me.”

    Lois followed him as he pulled out a golden plush chair with a red cushion. Once she was seated he pushed the chair in before taking his seat at the head of the table. “You know Clark you didn’t have to send the entire royal guard to escort me here, I know the way I could have come myself, and at a much quicker pace.”

    Clark let out a laugh, “And let who knows what, gypsy’s, thieves, or rapists try and unsaddle you? No I couldn’t allow that to happen. I had to make sure you were safe.”

    “Next time promise me you will only send a few guards then, a hundred is too much.” Lois said softly taking her hand in his. He seemed to soften before he sighed defeated.

    “Okay fine, twenty guards next time.” Clark submitted.

    “Twenty?!” Lois’ eyes widened still feeling it was too much. But Clark wouldn’t lower the number for anything.

    “Yes twenty, don’t push me or it’ll be back up at a hundred.” Clark teased her. He reached for a pitcher and poured some red liquid in a crystal glass handing it to Lois.

    “I told you I have no head for wine.” Lois shook her head softly, blush creeping up her cheeks.

    “I remember.” Clark smiled. “And this isn’t wine, this is a fruit concoction my cooks have come up with, similar to wine but no alcohol to be found.”

    “Really?” Lois grinned reaching for the glass tentatively before raising it to her nose. It smelled absolutely delicious, she brought it to her lips and took a small sip.

    “Do you like it?” Clark questioned.

    “Like it? This is like the nectar of the gods!” Lois said happily. “Thank you. What is in it?”

    “It’s a mixture of pomegranates, cherries, blueberries and lemon.” Clark explained.

    “But it’s so sweet.” Lois said confused after finding out the ingredients were so bitter.

    “Things tend to be a bit sweeter here in the realm.” Clark said cheekily.

    “Oh do they now?” Lois smiled taking another sip of her wine.

    Soon their main dishes were brought out, tender lamb in a delectable sauce with some side vegetables. Lois had tried to keep her moans to herself but the meal had probably been the best she had ever had in her entire life. Everything from the appetizers, to the drinks, and now this. “So tell me a little about you Lois.”

    “About me?” Lois questioned, he had caught her off guard.

    “Yes, your cousin has told me a little but I figure why not get answers from the woman who would know them best.” Clark smiled taking a drink of the juice then he looked at Lois, waiting for her story.

    “Well,” Lois began. “My mother and father died when I was very young, both of illness. Bruce’s parents took me in, I had no where to go and no other family, my mother was closest to her sister, Bruce’s mother. They provided me with a great education and plenty of opportunities, especially since I was not a Lord’s daughter, simply the daughter of an upper middle class citizen. While I enjoyed all of the great things they provided me, I felt as if the world was calling me…”

    “And that’s why you went and traveled the world?” Clark asked.

    “Yes.” Lois smiled but her heart was aching over the fact that it was all a lie. For a moment she wanted nothing more than to jump into his arms and tell her the truth and beg him to still feel the way about her that he did at that moment, but she couldn’t muster the strength. “I traveled the world, I wanted to see how people in other countries lived, their customs, their education.”

    “And what did you learn on your travels Lois?” Clark eased closer toward her.

    “I learned that people are struggling a lot more than people notice.” That part wasn’t a lie. “Especially the working people. I wanted nothing more then to be able to help them in some way, but alas a lot of rulers don’t listen to foreign women. I also learned that people are very similar despite their upbringing, if they have wealth or if they’ve worked on a farm their entire life. At their core people are all looking for similar things.”

    “What’s that?” Clark cocked his head.

    “Happiness.” Lois said softly. “In any form they can find it, their health. But most of all it seemed as though all people want to love, and be loved.”

    Clark remained silent but Lois could feel his eyes on her. She continued to speak. “My cousin told me that you are planning on having public housing for the working citizens. I think that is a great thing.”

    “I think I would like to hear more of your ideas Lois Lane.” Clark said affectionately. Lois looked up before blushing.

    “Oh, no I couldn’t. I’m just a usual woman whose cousin happens to be a Lord. I’m not fit to give ideas or suggestions to a King.”

    “You are fit if I deem you so.” Clark spoke, Lois sensed that he meant that in more ways than one. He quickly stood up causing Lois to lean her head back to see all of him. He extended his hand to her, Lois placed her hand in his and he pulled her up to him. He gently pushed a perfect spiral curl off her face, causing Lois’ eyes to flutter shut. “You are unlike any woman I’ve ever met Lois Lane.”

    “I hope that is a good thing.” Lois chuckled breathily.

    “It is.” Clark spoke caressing her face between his rough hands. Lois tried to search his eyes for what he was feeling but he was not easy to read at that moment. It looked as if he wanted to speak, but was afraid of the words. “Lois, I want to court you. I don’t care if you’re not of royal blood.”

    Lois smiled, her eyes glittering slightly. “Well you are the King, I think you can do and take whatever you want.”

    Clark sighed heavily, his eyes locking with hers then her lips. “I think I can see something I want to take.”

    He leaned down painfully slow and just before their lips touched, Lois whispered, “Then take it.”

    That sent Clark over the edge and he captured her lips with his, something that he had wanted to do since he first saw her. It was better then heaven and dreams combined. Her lips were so plush and soft and her tentative nature intoxicated him even more. He took a leap of faith and slowly parted her lips with his own, but he didn’t use his tongue. He wanted to take it slow and not scare her off, he was content for now. Lois let out a sigh and he pulled away from her slowly, her already luscious lips were slightly swollen and the sight only made him want to claim her lips once more, but he held back. “I’ve wanted to do that since I saw you standing on the top of the castle at my birthday masquerade.”

    “I hope I didn’t disappoint.” Lois smiled up at him.

    “You never could.” Clark said happily, and with that Lois’ heart dropped somewhat, immediately grounded from the high she had just experienced.

    ~~

    Later that night, true to his word, Clark had only sent twenty men back with Lois to Wayne estate. He had wanted to take her back himself but was interrupted by Jimmy on an apparent urgent matter. Lois walked into the home and leaned against the door softly touching her lips with her finger.

    “Well?” A voice shocked Lois out of her reverie, Oliver’s voice, with Bruce standing next to him.

    “Well what?”

    “How was your dinner with the King?” Bruce walked towards her helping her out of her cloak.

    “It was delicious.” Lois said somewhat testy.

    “Lois.” Oliver said defiantly.

    “It was great. He asked about my life and I told him exactly what we went over. I told him that the public housing was a great idea. Then he said if I ever had any ideas to better the realm he would listen. And then he asked to court me and finally he kissed me!” By the end of Lois’ explanation she was shouting angrily. Finally she rushed back to her chambers and locked the door behind her.

    “This isn’t good.” Oliver ran his fingers through his hair. “Well, it’s good but it’s not good.”

    “She seems to be getting attached. And that’s where we could get into trouble.” Bruce observed casting a worried look in Oliver’s direction. Oliver paced back and forth trying to think of something.

    “We’ll send her to my estate for a few weeks. We’ll tell the King that she had to visit another cousin in an emergency. Hopefully the time apart will break the attachment on her end and strengthen it on his.” Oliver voiced his idea.

    “Do you think that’s wise? We do not want to anger her and therefore make everything we’ve built up come crashing to the ground.” Bruce advised. Oliver was always someone who didn’t think much before he acted and Bruce was the complete opposite, it was why they worked so well together.

    “You’re right.” Oliver sighed. “We’ll talk to her tomorrow.”

    Bruce seemed to accept that and nodded. Oliver clapped him on the shoulder before leaving the estate to make his way back to his own. They needed to tread lightly, everything was just beginning to go as planned, they couldn’t allow the heart to come into play, that’s where plans fail.

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    Well what did you all think!? They finally have a proper date but things are starting to get a bit sticky! let me know what you think! Loved it? Hated it? Questions? Suggestions? Leave me some comments and let me know!!

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    Loved it. I know that Bruce, Oliver and Jimmy have a good 'end goal' but I'm worrying a bit about their manipulations now, especially as they do not want Lois's heart to be involved and they are talking of sending her away.

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    Oh dear, Lois is falling for him and feeling guilty for the little deception.

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    Aw Poor Lois, this is what i've been worried about!.. And Bruce and Oliver..grrr you better find a way to make it up to Clois in the end..of course the heart is gonna get attached..u dolts!! Great update!! PPMS!

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    Wonderful chapter, Anne!

    Lois and Clark's dinner date sounded absolutely divine! And the kiss...whew! That just blew me away as I knew it would. *sighs* But when it comes to the "affairs of the hearts" things can only get complicated from here.

    Already, Lois is torn between her agreement with Ollie and Bruce and her growing feelings for Clark. I'm not sure what she's going to do, but I hope it doesn't cause more damage than good. *crosses fingers*

    Now as for Lex and Zod, what exactly are they planning? As two very power hungry people, which of the two is greedier? That's what I want to know. I cannot wait to see how everything plays out and if their greed will eventually cause a major rift in their alliance. Either way, it should be interesting because they are my two favorite villains.

    Update soon!

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    That isn't good They better don't go as they are thinking....Clark and Lois are falling hard and that kiss was just too much, I loved it!!!PPMS!!!

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    That's great Anne¡¡
    They kissed, YAY¡¡ but now things starts to get complicated.... I am afraid that Lois want to run away from all the situation if things keep getting worse.
    Can't wait for more.
    Please PPMS

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    Quote Originally Posted by KatherineKent View Post
    Loved it. I know that Bruce, Oliver and Jimmy have a good 'end goal' but I'm worrying a bit about their manipulations now, especially as they do not want Lois's heart to be involved and they are talking of sending her away.
    If you're feeling that way then I'm doing something right

    Quote Originally Posted by phoenixnz View Post
    Oh dear, Lois is falling for him and feeling guilty for the little deception.
    Yes and yes=]

    Quote Originally Posted by FWvidchick View Post
    Aw Poor Lois, this is what i've been worried about!.. And Bruce and Oliver..grrr you better find a way to make it up to Clois in the end..of course the heart is gonna get attached..u dolts!! Great update!! PPMS!
    Haha boys are stupid... obviously!

    Quote Originally Posted by TeamClois View Post
    Wonderful chapter, Anne!

    Lois and Clark's dinner date sounded absolutely divine! And the kiss...whew! That just blew me away as I knew it would. *sighs* But when it comes to the "affairs of the hearts" things can only get complicated from here.

    Already, Lois is torn between her agreement with Ollie and Bruce and her growing feelings for Clark. I'm not sure what she's going to do, but I hope it doesn't cause more damage than good. *crosses fingers*

    Now as for Lex and Zod, what exactly are they planning? As two very power hungry people, which of the two is greedier? That's what I want to know. I cannot wait to see how everything plays out and if their greed will eventually cause a major rift in their alliance. Either way, it should be interesting because they are my two favorite villains.

    Update soon!
    Awee!!! So glad you liked it!!! And glad the kiss didn't disappoint, I put it off so there would be a buildup. Stay tuned for the rest=]

    Quote Originally Posted by MariVe View Post
    That isn't good They better don't go as they are thinking....Clark and Lois are falling hard and that kiss was just too much, I loved it!!!PPMS!!!
    Awe!! So glad you liked the kiss!

    Quote Originally Posted by MrsWolverine View Post
    That's great Anne¡¡
    They kissed, YAY¡¡ but now things starts to get complicated.... I am afraid that Lois want to run away from all the situation if things keep getting worse.
    Can't wait for more.
    Please PPMS
    Yes of course some bumps are gonna be in the road. So glad you enjoyed!

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