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    AUTHOR: LoisforPresident
    TITLE: Daddy's Little Princess...
    DISCLAIMER:Sorry, babes. Smallville belongs to someone else. 'Cept Jennifer Olivia Queen and Taylor Kent who I engineered all by myself – proud of it, b!tches...
    PAIRING:Chlollie.
    SPOILERS:No one,sadly.
    A/N:This is my first fic ever.

    Jennifer Olivia Queen was Not happy. Actually, she was furious. How dare they do this to her, it was just not fair, wasn't she and Mommy and Daddy a big enough family.
    She didn't want to share Mommy and Daddy with someone else. Didn't Daddy always say she was the the most specialist little girl ever? How could she be the bestest if there was someone else who would probably be smarter, and beautifuller, and much more special then she was or could ever be?

    Why'd she have to have a little brother or sister anyway?

    When Mommy and Daddy told her they'd made it sound so great; "Your gonna have a baby brother or sister sooon!" "You'll get to be a big sister!" "Think about how much fun their going to be!" Yada yada yada, she knew what it really meant. Ever since Mommy found out she'd been getting less, and less attention (being the only child of a billionaire she received quite a lot ) because of the baby, stupid thing seemed to come from H-E-double toothpicks.

    This baby thing was really starting to become a problem. Everyone was ignoring her, and even worse Daddy had called it (once they learned the gender) his 'Little Princess'. That crossed the line, she was Daddy's princess not this stupid little invader. Once she heard him say that she shrieked, "NOOOOOOOOO!" and ran out of the room crying.

    He didn't even tell her everything was O.K, all he did was lecture her on the way she'd acting lately and how since she was four she was a big girl and needed to learn the world wasn't all about her and like it or not the baby was staying.

    No one cared about her anymore, not even Auntie Lois, or Uncle Victor and Aunt Dinah, or Uncle Bart, not one stupid person. It made her want to cry, didn't she still matter?

    When she told her best friend in the whole-wide-world Taylor, Taylor said she was probably suffering from Only-to-Oldest child syndrome.Taylor was very smart, and sometimes it really sucked having a best friend who was very smartert than you.

    Three months later:

    "Jen, honey, come look at your new baby sister!"
    She looked down at Sophia Marie Queen, a wrinkly little thing with crazy blonde hair sticking out in random directions.This stupid, stupid little brat took her parents away from her, made no one else pay attention to her, and took away her role as 'Daddy's little princess'.She glared at the litttle twerp in her Mommys arms, "I hate you."

    Jen really tried to win back her Mommy and Daddy and be the bestest little girl ever again.She even tried to help Dopey-Sophie out. She gave her a hair cut (Mommy had never yelled to her like that before), and teach her how to make prettyful pictures, (At the time using the beige hallway wall seemed like a great idea), and play hide-and-go seek (she even helped her hide by putting her in the closet).

    She really didn't understand why Mommy and Daddy had been so angry, then it hit her. Mommy and Daddy had another little princess, they didn't need or love her anymore.
    As she realized this, the devils spawn herself crawled into the room followed by Daddy. He lifted up the little drooler and spoke to Jen, "Hi Princess, you want to go get some ice cream with me while Mommy watches Sophie?"

    She had to repeat that question mentally, Daddy still liked her? He wanted to spend time with her? Maybe she'd been looking at this wrong, Sophie wasn't actually that bad. She had been more upset about no one loving her anymore but if they still did...
    She smiled at her Daddy feeling better than she had since this whole mess started, "Sure Daddy!"

    The End.

    A/N:
    Please Review. Thanks.
    Last edited by LoisforPresident; 01-06-2011, 08:26 AM.

  • #2
    very cute story! and this is your first ever?? congrats!! i myself was recently thinking about venturing into the fanfic writing world. but that probably will never happen. anyways, good job.

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    • #3
      Valerie, this was really really cute . Do another one. Please? Pretty please ?

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      • #4
        Originally posted by SVfan87
        very cute story! and this is your first ever?? congrats!! i myself was recently thinking about venturing into the fanfic writing world. but that probably will never happen. anyways, good job.
        Thanks,and you definetly should try,its soo much fun!!!!

        Originally posted by ebatcl
        Valerie, this was really really cute . Do another one. Please? Pretty please ?
        Thanks,and yeah,I'm goin to write another one!!!!

        [SPOILER]Maybe is a Clois one*winks*...[/SPOILER]
        Last edited by LoisforPresident; 01-06-2011, 10:00 AM.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by LoisforPresident
          Thanks,and you definetly should try,its soo much fun!!!!
          so i decided to follow your example and start a fanfic *GASP* it's called "When He Knew". only a few paragraphs right now but i posted it anyway. couldn't wait . gave u a shout out too .

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          • #6
            Awww this is an AMAZING story the only thing is i wish you would have taken more time to sort out the ending. But for your first Fic AMAZING

            I wanted to see more a little kid jsut dosent hate there sister and all of the sudden one little remark makes them all better hm.. but its as realistic as it gets i even saw parts that werent mentioned

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            • #7
              Awwwwwwwwwwe. This is so adorable. It sounds just like a little girl who is expecting a little sister. Fantastic job!

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              • #8
                Aww, the little girl is so adorable. Sibling rivalry at its best.

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                • #9
                  oooooh! this is sooo cuute! *-*
                  Just like Ollie, I have to say! lol
                  great, valeriee! thx!

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                  • #10
                    This is so cute and true I remember when I wasn't the baby anymore I acted just like that lml

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