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Do You Wanna Dance (Clark & Tess)
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Awww. She trusts him
“Please, it’s Clark. No one can dance as good as he can,” Oliver murmured and made a rude face at the ham and cheese sandwich he was slapping together. “So focused, so skilled.”
I see the revenge went well. I like the Tess/Ollie banter. It's cute and funny. And Clark Luthor is scary. So glad she won. More please.Comment
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More will be on the way soon. But in the meantime, I found this really hilarious woman who recaps Smallville episodes (which I do not own or anything so don't sue) and she did "Luthor", so here's a link:
My favorite line is on page 8. Goes something like "Clark's voice was so silky you could make lingerie out of it."
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More will be on the way soon. But in the meantime, I found this really hilarious woman who recaps Smallville episodes (which I do not own or anything so don't sue) and she did "Luthor", so here's a link:
My favorite line is on page 8. Goes something like "Clark's voice was so silky you could make lingerie out of it."
She makes a little sound of surprise and then his mouth is all over hers and she starts kissing him back, either to play along or because hey, a hot guy is kissing her.
He narrows his eyes at her. "Where's the box, Tess?" Heh. Heh. Ahem. Tess must have the fortitude of a saint, because Clark's all sprawled out on the sofa by this point, looking like about eight miles of arms and legs. Woof.Comment
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OMG that whole thing lol.. loved it .. the lingeria line and these below
She makes a little sound of surprise and then his mouth is all over hers and she starts kissing him back, either to play along or because hey, a hot guy is kissing her.
He narrows his eyes at her. "Where's the box, Tess?" Heh. Heh. Ahem. Tess must have the fortitude of a saint, because Clark's all sprawled out on the sofa by this point, looking like about eight miles of arms and legs. Woof.
"Lionel looks at the page. "Ah, the little Greek tragedy you've been trying to drag your brother into." Doesn't this make you want to watch about ten more episodes about the other Tess and Clark and their weird-hot relationship? It does me."
I would certainly pay to see that.Comment
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Wow. That was really great. I love how you had written the memory going right along with the dance and then once she had gained her power back against Clark Luthor she was able to give into Clark Kent and trust him and let him lead her so they could dance as one. Awwwwe. That's so beautiful.Comment
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Those comments were funny. She also brought up something in page 9 that I wanted to see more of:
"Lionel looks at the page. "Ah, the little Greek tragedy you've been trying to drag your brother into." Doesn't this make you want to watch about ten more episodes about the other Tess and Clark and their weird-hot relationship? It does me."
I would certainly pay to see that.Comment
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