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  • Forbidden Allure ~ The Remix

    Deleted due to author's wishes.
    Last edited by Cat 25; 03-03-2011, 07:33 AM.

  • #2
    loved it! i really liked the different way you had tess finding out clark's secret it was perfect .... ps. chants loudly sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • #3
      Originally posted by lana4ever
      loved it! i really liked the different way you had tess finding out clark's secret it was perfect .... ps. chants loudly sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      I liked it too, especially the different version of Tess finding out his secret, but there were some parts from the original that didn't make it into this one that i loved as well. Can't remember what they are, i'll have to go back and read it again to find which ones.

      I also chant 'Sequel'

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      • #4
        Thanks guys! You never know, I might continue the sequel...

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        • #5
          I really liked the remix. I'd had wanted Tess to find out about Clark's secret differently in the first story and this one did that nicely . A sequel would be awesome or just more Clark/Tess in general would be just as awesome!

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          • #6
            Awesome.

            Was Tess saying "Checkmate" when about to shoot Lex an alluding to the sequel?

            A sequel with absolute justice would be nice, with the JL guys owning the JSA guys instead of getting tutored. :P

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            • #7
              I liked the changes that you made and I agree w/ the others about Tess finding out about Clark's secret was better this time around. Although, I did like the "Hex" chapter from the previous version because it was rather entertaining even though it was from Chloe's POV.

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              • #8
                That's the first Cless fanfiction I've ever read and I was hooked after the first chapters. Thanks for making a Cless shipper out of me, Cat.

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                • #9
                  i loved this story before and after you made the changes... great job

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