Forbidden Allure (Clark & Tess)

[Cat 25]

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[SmallvilleSmall]

I am SO glad that you write a lot! I check on this, thinking there might not even be an update, and there are 7!! Needless to say, I was pumped. I like how you're mixing things up, but still keeping to the episodes. A couple suggestions:
1. Let Lois and Tess fight for their man! (that sounds so weird, but still)
2. Make Lois be all territotial and Tess chill when they confront, but make the subject kind of like a game, instead of outright 'Clark is mine', more like a code word for him, like art or something. (it's cool-sounding)
3. Get more interaction between Clark and Tess. You've built up the background to the story, which is why not that much interaction now is good. But next, bring on the Cless! (please!)
I sound full of myself, but I know that pointing out stuff makes authors happy, and this is an awesome fic!! I wish you luck, and hope that tomorrow brings many updates.
One more compliment: Clark + seduction from the 'dark side'=

[Cat 25]

Thanks for the suggestions, I've been home sick with a sinus infection, ergo, all the updates. Definitely more Cless to come!!! I love writing their scenes together. And yes Tess is a cool (as in calm) character while Lois is totally hysterical. Tess has a lot more maturity and I think Clark is drawn to that. so, anyway. More updates tomorrow. Keep reading!

[Cat 25]

One more thing. I have no idea how to add pages to this thread, could someone help me out? I know you're all probably getting tired of having to scroll down so far (I know I am), please help me out. Thanks!

[FlashInSV]

^^ The pages sort of add themselves, once the posts get too many. Not to worry about it.

Loved the update.

[nas2439]

thanks for the update

[Cat 25]

Thanks. I worry about things too much.
More to come later today. The charity ball (it's gonna be good) and then "Commited". I'm excited. I kept trying to go to sleep and then thinking of new ideas. What fun.

[Young Superman]

LOVE THIS! Update soon.

[Cat 25]

Here is a picture of "Tess'" dress.

[SmallvilleSmall]

it so did not bomb!

[FlashInSV]

Hey, here I am, caught up with the latest updates again. I liked it very much and I can't wait to see what happens next!

[nas2439]

just read both chapters, loved them both

cant wait for the next update

ps you did not bomb

[Young Superman]

WOW! this just keeps getting better.

[Kal-k]

ooooo wow moremoremore....

[Young Superman]

Great update