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redraven
10-18-2007, 04:10 PM
Okay, so here's my latest fic. I'm sure that there's a few of you who will already be turned off from this fic considering who the author is. :\ But I figured out my problem with abandoning fics- I would start one, and have absolutely no idea of where I wanted to go with it. Well now, I wrote quite a bit of this and have an outline of where I'm going to go with it. So, this one will be completed. Okay, rant over. If you're willing to read it here it is. :)

~Part One~

3 months. It’s been 3 months since Lana was officially declared dead, and it definitely hasn’t gotten any easier for Clark. For the first couple of months he was trying to take everyone’s advice-- move on and get on with his life. But how was he supposed to do that when inside he knew that Lana was out there somewhere, and very well alive. For the past few weeks, he’s been putting in a lot of effort into searching for her, looking for clues, anything. He’s been grasping at straws trying to find even a hint about where she’d be. Lately, however, he’s been beginning to listen to what Chloe and his mother had been telling him--that he was in denial.

Beep. Beep. Beep. “Ugh…” Clark turned off his alarm clock, which read six thirty A.M., and shifted in his bed, opening his eyes up to bright rays of sunshine coming through his window. He yawned and swung his legs over the side of the bed, glancing at a picture of Lana as he stood up. “I’m not giving up on you.” He said to himself quietly. Clark quickly got dressed in a tight, white tee shirt and blue jeans. He made his way out to the barn and saw Kara come out holding a man up in the air by the back of his jacket.

“Kara…who is that?” Clark asked.

“I-I don’t know. I heard the dog barking and saw him sneaking around inside, so I hit him in the head to knock him out.” Kara wore a triumphant smile.

“Did you use your powers? Did he see you use them?”

Kara’s smile faded. “Didn’t we already have this discussion, Clark?” She rolled her eyes. “Don’t worry, he didn’t see anything.”

“Good. Um, come on, we should set him down in here.” Clark led Kara into the barn. Kara set the man down on a wooden chair while Clark left to get some cold water. He dumped it onto the man’s face to try and wake him up.

The intruder coughed and shook his head as a reaction to the cold water; after that the man just glared at Clark and Kara with out saying a word.

“Who are you?” Clark asked in a low, demanding tone.

The man said nothing.

Clark pulled the man out of the wooden chair by his suit collar and asked again, “Who are you!”

Still nothing.

“Just tell him before I kick your ass!” Kara shouted. Clark turned around and narrowed his eyes at her before continuing with interrogating the intruder.

“I’ll ask one more time…who are you?”

The man clenched his jaw before responding. “I…I am not authorized to tell you anything, sir.”

“Have it your way.” Clark smirked and tossed the man across the barn, but carefully as to not injure him too much.

The man groaned as he rolled himself off of the debris. “B-but Luthor isn’t worth it. I’ll tell you what you want to know.”

Clark kneeled down beside the man. “Did you say Luthor? As in Lionel Luthor, or…” Clark gritted his teeth. “…Lex.”

“Luthor, as in Lex Luthor.”

“He sent you here? Why?”

“To look for Lana Luthor.”

“It’s Lang.”

“What?”

“Her last name, it's...forget it, why did he want you to look for Lana? Is she alive?”

“Yes. He traced her to somewhere in China, but he doesn’t know her exact location. He wanted us to find some clues here that would lead us to her.”

Clark thought for a moment and a smile came to his face. ‘I knew it. She is alive.’ His thoughts turned back to the man in the barn and Lex. “How do I know you won’t go running back to Lex and telling him about this?”

“Because there’s nothing to tell. I didn’t see anyone or anything that would lead to Mrs. Luthor.” He smiled slightly. “I’m leaving the country, anyway. I’m his right hand man and I’ve seen him kill his old assistants for disobeying the slightest order. After my next pay check I’m gone.”

Clark nodded his understanding. “Sorry about--” Clark gestured to the old table he threw the man into.

“It’s nothing.” The man brushed himself off and then left the barn to go tell Lex of his ‘failure’.

*-*-*-*-*-*-*
24 hours later
*-*-*-*-*-*-*
Woof…WOOF!

Clark laughed and scratched Shelby’s back. “You’ll get used to her Shelby. Kara’s not that bad, you’ll see.” He finished up tightening the bolts on old farm equipment and stood up. “Hey, you scared Shel—” Clark’s eyes widened and the smile on his face disappeared. He dropped his wrench and stepped forward. “Lana.” He caressed her cheek just to make sure he wasn’t just seeing things.

Lana leaned into his touch and smiled. He dropped his hand and pulled her into a tight hug, lifting her off the ground. She ran her hand through his hair, and pulled away just enough to look into his eyes.

After Lana was set firmly on the ground Clark led her into the living room, over to the old worn couch.

Lana turned to the side so that she could face Clark.

“You know…I never really believed you were gone, but at the same time I can’t believe you're sitting here in front of me.” Clark grinned and placed his hand on Lana’s thigh. “I’m so happy you’re back.”

Lana smiled wide in return. “I’m happy to be back, Clark.” She cleared her throat. “When I was in China all I could think about was you, and I felt so bad about not telling you the truth... but I was doing it to protect you.”

Clark shook his head. “It’s feels so strange hearing it the other way around. I guess you kind of have a taste about how it feels to be Clark Kent, huh?”

“I guess so. I really am sorry, Clark.”

“Don’t be. I’m actually proud of you, it was really selfless how you…” Clark paused and swallowed hard. “…Married Lex and came up with some scheme to get out from under his grasp, and then not tell me for my protection. Just please don’t do it again.” He chuckled. “I love you too much to let you go through something like that alone.”

“Well we’re a couple now aren’t we? We’ll make decisions together from here on out, promise?”

“Promise.” Clark grinned and leaned in for a kiss.

*****
Feedback, please! :D I know it's short, the updates will get longer.

Chlollie
10-18-2007, 04:23 PM
Great start. :)

smallvillewolf17
10-18-2007, 05:03 PM
PPMS!

clanaalltheway
10-18-2007, 08:52 PM
ppms!

maitriniazngurl
10-19-2007, 07:24 PM
Great start! I hope u write clana the way it suppose to be... not how the writers are doing it... :)

I can't wait for more

clana1fan4ever
10-20-2007, 10:16 PM
Great start!!!
Can't wait for more

superman_lives_on
10-21-2007, 12:38 PM
Nice...promising start, very promising. I hope this is only a taste of future goodness. :)

treker
11-14-2007, 06:29 AM
Originally posted by redraven
Okay, so here's my latest fic. I'm sure that there's a few of you who will already be turned off from this fic considering who the author is. :\ But I figured out my problem with abandoning fics- I would start one, and have absolutely no idea of where I wanted to go with it. Well now, I wrote quite a bit of this and have an outline of where I'm going to go with it. So, this one will be completed. Okay, rant over. If you're willing to read it here it is. :)



it's been almost a month.....I thought you said you knew where you were going to go with ths story and had quite a it written on this story....why have you abandoned it? :confused:

svclanas5
11-26-2007, 08:51 AM
plz update!! this fic is really good so far!

smallvillewolf17
11-26-2007, 04:47 PM
Are you going to update this century?

treker
11-26-2007, 05:21 PM
Originally posted by smallvillewolf17
Are you going to update this century?

my opnion is no........

has she ever finishd a story?

The Black Cat
11-27-2007, 12:27 AM
I like it so far. Please continue!!!

redraven
12-01-2007, 09:08 PM
Originally posted by treker
my opnion is no........

has she ever finishd a story?

Hey now...don't need to be so blunt Treker. :\ I'm going to finish this one, for sure.

And I actually didn't mean to NOT update this, I had actually completely forgotten about it. :lol: I'll add a couple of long updates tomorrow, I've recently moved my files around and I'm having a tiny bit of trouble locating them.

treker
12-01-2007, 09:36 PM
Originally posted by redraven
Hey now...don't need to be so blunt Treker. :\ I'm going to finish this one, for sure.

And I actually didn't mean to NOT update this, I had actually completely forgotten about it. :lol: I'll add a couple of long updates tomorrow, I've recently moved my files around and I'm having a tiny bit of trouble locating them.

Would you rather I lied to you? Tell you it's all good when everyone knows it's not?

Have you considered doing what I am doing.....set a day that you will update and stick to it? You don't have to update every week (like I do); you could update once every 2 to 3 weeks and then stick to the schedule...that way your readers know what to expect.

Show your readers that you care enough to make the effort to post the story you promised them....

Is that too much to ask?

redraven
12-01-2007, 10:44 PM
Originally posted by treker
Would you rather I lied to you? Tell you it's all good when everyone knows it's not?

Have you considered doing what I am doing.....set a day that you will update and stick to it? You don't have to update every week (like I do); you could update once every 2 to 3 weeks and then stick to the schedule...that way your readers know what to expect.

Show your readers that you care enough to make the effort to post the story you promised them....

Is that too much to ask?

No, you're right. I'll do that, but I will update often once I get everything re-written which I have to do from memory.

It turns out that when my brother cleaned out the computer (we had 1% free space left on our C: Drive) he deleted "useless" things like my Microsoft word files along with everything else he didn't use. :mad:

So yeah, I'm going to go a different direction with this, so be prepared for some memory wipes in future updates. :\

redraven
12-02-2007, 04:17 PM
Okay, here's part two. Now this chapteris a bit rushed, because I wanted to move on to another part of the fic. ;) Feedback's apprieciated.

~Part Two~

SLAM! …Was the noise of a book, well, slamming on the ground. Clark jerked his head away to see what the lovely noise was that interrupted him and Lana’s kiss.

“Kara.” Clark forced a smile and glanced at Lana, noticing her reaction towards Kara, very obviously showing jealousy. “Uh this is m-my cousin Kara. She’s…my cousin” He flashed a big grin to her after emphasizing ‘cousin’. “Kara this is Lana, my girlfriend.” He turned his attention to Kara.

“What are you doing?” He asked in a harsh whisper.

“I’m…training to be the next Miss Sweet Corn.” She grinned.

“I don’t think that’s such a good idea. You know what we talked about before…about staying out of the spotlight?”

“Undercover.” Kara replied.

“Yes! Undercover. This is…well…not covered. You think you can go upstairs and get changed?”

“Fine.” Kara gritted her teeth and sped upstairs.

“Guess I don’t have to ask which side of the family she’s from.” Lana grinned and stepped closer to Clark. She grabbed his shirt collar and leaned in for a soft kiss, which Clark gladly returned.

*****

The next couple of months went by blissfully for Clark and Lana. For some others, not so much…Chloe and Jimmy went their separate ways, Kara left to go explore the world, and Lois is now competing with Chloe to see who will get out of the Daily Planet basement the quickest. A few weeks prior, Clark had defeated Bizarro using the blue kryptonite ring that his mother gave him, and with the help of Martian Manhunter, he sent Bizarro into the Phantom Zone.

*****

Clark and Lana lay in bed, both out cold from all of the previous day’s activities.

Clark was awakened by the sound of Jor-El’s voice, “My son, your training awaits you. Your destiny, awaits you as the protector of this Earth.”

This wasn’t the first time Jor-El has waken Clark up, either. For the past week he’s been getting this same message from Jor-El and it was driving him crazy. He super sped into a t-shirt and jeans before speeding off to the fortress.

“What do you want, Jor-El?” He asked in a loud voice, hearing his question echo three times afterwards.

“Activate the crystal, Kal-El. And you may proceed to your training.”

Clark stared at the dark blue-colored crystal that appeared before him.

”There has to be some other way!”

”There is no other way, Kal-El. With out activating this, you will not be able to accomplish your destiny as protector of the Earth; your enemies will recognize you, and your loved ones will in turn, have the potential of being killed. Is that what you want, my son?”

“No. But why can’t it be just my enemies who won’t know who I am, why my mother, why Lana?”

“I cannot pick and choose, Kal-El. It is either everyone, or no one… that will remember.”

“So everything that happened…not a single person will remember anything about me, anything that I’ve done except…me?” A silent tear found its way down Clark’s cheek.

“Yes, I’m sorry my son. There is no other way.”

Clark hesitantly reached his hand out to the crystal, activating it with the slightest touch from his hand, causing a bright white flash to occur wiping the most insignificant memory of him from everyone’s minds.

~Part Three~

10 years later.

Metropolis. The lovely city of Metropolis is where the equally lovely Miss Lana Lang resides and is currently competing for the next Daily Planet headline with her rival, Lois Lane.

Other then her best friend and fellow reporter, Chloe Sullivan, and only a having been on a handful of dates within the last 10 years, she has a rather non-active social life although the options are very much available to her.

“Lana. You dropped this.” The newest junior editor, John, handed her a manila folder, which encased her rough draft of her latest story, “LEX LUTHOR’S FAILED JAIL BREAK!” One thing she was extremely happy to write about. After Lex was found guilty of the murders of various people three and a half years ago, along with the torture of many other people in 33.1 facilities across the United States, it was a great feeling knowing that a sick man like that was behind bars. With the Luthor Corp. stock having plummeted a year before his trial, he couldn’t afford the best lawyers to save his bald arse, and he was sentenced to life in prison with out the possibility of parole—causing him to futilely try and escape.

Lana flashed a smile and took the folder, placing it into her bag. “Thanks, definitely don’t want to lose this.”

“Your welcome and I’m glad I’m the one that found it.” John gestured behind him to Lois going through stacks of papers. “I hear Lane over there is having trouble getting her hands on any story that’s even remotely interesting.”

“That’s comforting to know.”

“It wouldn’t matter anyway, you’ve got more talent in one finger than Lois does in her entire body.”

“Hey, you’re her editor, too…are you picking favorites?” Lana said in a flirty tone, which was enough to drive any man mad. Hell, it was enough to turn any gay man straight! But everyone that worked in the Daily Planet already knew Lana Lang as a tease—she might flirt a little, maybe go on a date, but it wasn’t going to go anywhere. She was just emotionally unavailable. Still, that doesn’t stop every guy that gets the chance to try and woo her, and her editor was no different.

“Maybe…” He grinned. “In all seriousness, Miss Lang, I’d like to know if you had any plans tonight.”

Lana gulped. She was not going there. No way. And as much as she knew that this would get her any headline that she wanted, she wasn’t going to jump his bones like she knew Lois would if the chance ever came. “I uh…well, you see…I do, actually.”

“Really now?” Even after being rejected his bright white smile didn’t fade. “Because I was hoping that we could discuss a pretty big story opportunity.”

“Like?”

“Like, I’ll tell you at dinner. Tomorrow night; I’ll pick you up at your apartment at around seven.” With a wink, John walked upstairs to his office.

“I-I…wait!” Lana groaned. What’s worse, the fact that she this is her first date in 5 years, or that it’s with her editor? Then again, it’s not a real date. It’s a business date…to discuss a potential story opportunity. Yeah, that’s it.

Lana made sure she had everything and left the Daily Planet to go get some much needed sleep. Reaching her arm out to trying to get a taxi, one thing that after living in Metropolis all these years she still hasn’t gotten skilled at, she noticed a loud noise come from the alleyway nearby. Surprisingly, a taxi actually stopped within the first five minutes of her standing there, but angrily drove off once they realized she wasn’t getting in.

Lana slowly neared the alleyway and saw two men try and get up from the trashcans that they were apparently thrown into. She turned around to see two police cars stop on the street behind her. When she turned her attention back to the two men she saw Superman holding the two up in the air with a hand on the back of each of their necks. He carried them over to the police car only glancing at Lana on the way.

Lana narrowed her eyes at him; after seeing him on the news and in every major newspaper in Metropolis many times over, she never felt the sense of familiarity that she felt now after seeing him up close.

*****

clana1fan4ever
12-03-2007, 12:39 AM
Jor-El sucks...This is getting interesting..I can't wait to see Clark come back. So Lana is now working at the Daily Planet wow.!

Thanks for the update!! :D