koolgirl
02-24-2007, 05:24 AM
I writing a story:
The First and Last
Chapter one
"New kids," madilin rolled her eyes as her and andrea tryed to squeeze through the croud towards there lockers. Madilin was five feat tall with chin length red hair,
she had gray eyes, but they were not dull. She had nice curves, a nicley shaped face, and diffrent you could say. She was unique but didnt stand out, she made people laugh
without them thinking it was her, she was kind to everyone and everything, and she had diffrent intrests.
This is the way people who knew her inside and out would describe her, but Andrea on the other hand was five foot seven, waist lenghth black hair, and grean eyes.
She also had much of the same charteristics but less mysterious, and more intrest in boys. "Well rumor is he's very cute if we get a chance to see him." Andrea off course was
right every girl in 7th and 8th grade would be after him.
"knowing girls in school its going to be monthsdesprete girls stop fallowing him everywere he go's"
"Yeah ............. usualy i'm the one fallowing boys," Andreas comment made madilin laugh, because it was true because once Andrea had her mind set on a boy the
only way you could get it off was with another boy.
They said there goodbyes and headed to homeroom. She had Mr. Richman, who was an english teacher that exspected you to use good grammer no matter what.
The nest few classes went by slowley. until lunch finaly came. Here she spent another ten minutes in line getting chicken sticks.
"Madilin wait up," she looked back to see micheal her freind scince kindergarten, she was five foot five, had hazel eyes, and shoulder lenghth burnette hair that was
curley.
"Hey," she said as micheal caught up.
"Hi, so waz up."
"Nothing much you."
"same so any cute boys you plan on taking to the valintines dance."
"not so much," micheal and her usually just made small talk at school they were more of phone buddys. Though they couldent be seperated.
"Were are we going to sit," micheal looked around all the tables were full.
"Outside," without waiting for an awnser she headed towards the door. She didn't see the chocklate milk on the ground and slipped dropping her tray which slid
across the floor. She almost had her balance when she got bumped and went slidding across th floor.
she closed her eyes as she prepared to fall to the floor, but as her body went flying forward she hit something and strong arms caught her. she tryed to get her
breath back as she scaned the cafiterea she could see every eye was on her.Then glancing up she saw the new kid and almost melted, he had brown hair a little shorter than
hers, with brown eyes, and was about five foot eleven. Making him tall, dark, and handsome. She cursed under her breath as she remembered the silent room they were know
in filled with whispers.
"is that so," he said only loud enough so she could hear. He had to seen her from across the room, and had to see her but as he had tryed to beat her to the door
she had fell and was know in his arms. She had an angel face, stone eyes, short red hair, and a lot of curves. He didn't mind the hieght he probley actually liked it.
"Im garet," he said letting her go.
"Madilin," she said and turned arond to find macheal when she did all she said was, "some first impression."
For the last three days all she's been hereing were clumsy jokes but dereks cut her to the nerve, "if you likes me would you fall into my arms," he said.
"I don't like him," madilin snapped a little to quickly.
"Well thats too bad," she turned around to see garet standing there. looking at her he found she had a way of looking elegant yet wild, and still had on stylish cloths
without looking like a skank.
"What do you want," she demanded sticking her chin up to see into his eyes.
"You," he said, "but this is my class."
"i hate you."
"Anything else."
"I hate chocklate milk too."
"Your funny," he said with a chuckle and walked into the class room
The First and Last
Chapter one
"New kids," madilin rolled her eyes as her and andrea tryed to squeeze through the croud towards there lockers. Madilin was five feat tall with chin length red hair,
she had gray eyes, but they were not dull. She had nice curves, a nicley shaped face, and diffrent you could say. She was unique but didnt stand out, she made people laugh
without them thinking it was her, she was kind to everyone and everything, and she had diffrent intrests.
This is the way people who knew her inside and out would describe her, but Andrea on the other hand was five foot seven, waist lenghth black hair, and grean eyes.
She also had much of the same charteristics but less mysterious, and more intrest in boys. "Well rumor is he's very cute if we get a chance to see him." Andrea off course was
right every girl in 7th and 8th grade would be after him.
"knowing girls in school its going to be monthsdesprete girls stop fallowing him everywere he go's"
"Yeah ............. usualy i'm the one fallowing boys," Andreas comment made madilin laugh, because it was true because once Andrea had her mind set on a boy the
only way you could get it off was with another boy.
They said there goodbyes and headed to homeroom. She had Mr. Richman, who was an english teacher that exspected you to use good grammer no matter what.
The nest few classes went by slowley. until lunch finaly came. Here she spent another ten minutes in line getting chicken sticks.
"Madilin wait up," she looked back to see micheal her freind scince kindergarten, she was five foot five, had hazel eyes, and shoulder lenghth burnette hair that was
curley.
"Hey," she said as micheal caught up.
"Hi, so waz up."
"Nothing much you."
"same so any cute boys you plan on taking to the valintines dance."
"not so much," micheal and her usually just made small talk at school they were more of phone buddys. Though they couldent be seperated.
"Were are we going to sit," micheal looked around all the tables were full.
"Outside," without waiting for an awnser she headed towards the door. She didn't see the chocklate milk on the ground and slipped dropping her tray which slid
across the floor. She almost had her balance when she got bumped and went slidding across th floor.
she closed her eyes as she prepared to fall to the floor, but as her body went flying forward she hit something and strong arms caught her. she tryed to get her
breath back as she scaned the cafiterea she could see every eye was on her.Then glancing up she saw the new kid and almost melted, he had brown hair a little shorter than
hers, with brown eyes, and was about five foot eleven. Making him tall, dark, and handsome. She cursed under her breath as she remembered the silent room they were know
in filled with whispers.
"is that so," he said only loud enough so she could hear. He had to seen her from across the room, and had to see her but as he had tryed to beat her to the door
she had fell and was know in his arms. She had an angel face, stone eyes, short red hair, and a lot of curves. He didn't mind the hieght he probley actually liked it.
"Im garet," he said letting her go.
"Madilin," she said and turned arond to find macheal when she did all she said was, "some first impression."
For the last three days all she's been hereing were clumsy jokes but dereks cut her to the nerve, "if you likes me would you fall into my arms," he said.
"I don't like him," madilin snapped a little to quickly.
"Well thats too bad," she turned around to see garet standing there. looking at her he found she had a way of looking elegant yet wild, and still had on stylish cloths
without looking like a skank.
"What do you want," she demanded sticking her chin up to see into his eyes.
"You," he said, "but this is my class."
"i hate you."
"Anything else."
"I hate chocklate milk too."
"Your funny," he said with a chuckle and walked into the class room