View Full Version : Clark and Lana: Season 4--Clana Style
svfan3594
09-24-2006, 03:48 PM
Backgrounds: This takes place after crusade and gone.Lana and Clark are still together.She never met Jason.Clark does play football for the crows.Pretty much everything is the same except for Clark/Lana/Jason part.
Parings:Clark/Lana all through senior year
Disclaimers: I dont own smallville or any of the actors/characters
Chapter 1:Facade
-----------Freshman Year 2001-----------------------------
Whitney: I cant hear ya! Whos gonna be the state champions?
Crowd: The Crows!
Whitney: I needa brave freshman to step up.
Whitney: Alright whch one of you guys think you are a better QB than me?
Whitney looks at Clark.
Whitney: Kent how about it?
Clark: Um..no its okay.
Whitney: Hey too busy milking cows come try out for the team the least you can do is show some school spirit.
Whitney hands the football to Clark.
Whitney: Am I right? Crowd cheers.
Whitney: Alright Kent wanna take a shot at the hottest freshman in Smallville High.
Clark looks at the dunk tank. Lana is on it.
Lana: Come on Clark!
Lana: Just take your time. C'mon Clark you can do it.
Clark is about to throw the football just before the mascot interrupts.
Mascot: Caw!Caw! Support the team! Go Crows! Caw! Caw! Woo! Go Crows! Crowd cheers.
Whitney: Look its the crow! Lets see who the lucky freshman is this year.
Football Player: Probably the biggest loser like every year. C'mon take it off.
Clark: Hey leave her alone.
Mascot: C'mon uys leave me alone alright.
Football Player: Or what we always torture the mascot every year.
Mascot: Leave me alone.
The football player takes off the mask. Scabby Abby!
Football Player: Hey its Scabby Abby! he raises up the mask screaming Scabby abby. The crowd follows except for Clark.
Scabby Abby runs away crying.
Football Player: Put yor mask back on Scabby Abby!
Whitney: Alright whos next?
-------------------Now-----------------------------------------
Abby's Mom: Poor Abby its taken 3 years but you finally let mommy help you. Alright sweetheart i wont let you watse your senior year like you did all the others.
Abby: you promise people will like me?
Abby's Mom: Oh they will. I promise. Just like they did me.
Abby's Mom: Everyone will love the real you the one thats been inside all along.
Abby's Mom: You are going to have a senior year no one will ever forget.
-------------Kent Farm-----------------------------------------------------
Clark is out on the farm picking up the football. he throws it. He speds and catches the football himself. He sees a tire swng throws the football and makes it in the loop.
Lois: Nice arm farm boy. Whens the first game?
Clark: Im not on the team.
Lois: Why not? An arm like that is a et outta geek free pass.
Clark: Well even if I wanted to play.
Lois: Which you do
Clark: That wouldnt be the reason. Thanks I really dont consider myself a geek.
Lois: So what do you consider yourself as?
Clark: I dont know. An outsider I guess.
Lois: Thats a recipe for wedgies if Ive ever heard one.
Clark: Have I told you how much Im gonna miss you?
An army truck pulls up in the drive way.
Lois: Daddy. Dont you have 3,000 guys to babysit? Do you really need to keep checking up on me?
Lois's dad: It would appear that way.
Lois: I know that Im late but i can still make it to campus for orientation.
Lois's Dad: Save yourself a trip. MetU just yanked your acceptance.
Lois: What? They cant do that.
Lois's Dad: They can if you dont have enough credits to finish high school.
Lois: I know I missed a few classes but
Lois's Dad: Lo you failed the last semester.
Clark laughs. Lois's Dad gives Clark a mean look and Clark stops laughing.
Lois's Dad: Not to worry though Im sure that Clark will be happy to show you around.
Lois and Clark: Around where?
Lois's Dad: Bright and early tomorrow morning you start Smallville High.
Clark puts his head down.
Lois: Great.
--------------------Smallville High-----------------------------------------
Lois and Chole drive up in the parking lot.
Chole: You know beside hallpasses this place isnt all that bad.
Lois: Its the varsity version of Donte Seventhring.Chole laughs.
Chole: C'mon do you know how many people would kill to relive their senior year in highschool.
Lois: Make that semester. 5 more credits and I am outta of this cow pile.
Chole: wait a minute 5 credits for one semester. Lois the only way you are gonna do that is if you ciricular to your class load. Like say maybe writing for The Torch.
Lois: Ah no hard feelings for you cuz but unlike you the last thing I wanna be is a reporter.
Chole: Yea. It could be worsuncovering the truth and protecting the public.
Lois: Or sticking your nose in other people's business.
Chole: Like I said you'd be perfect.
The bell rings.
Chole: C'mon lets go. Its gonna be reat having you here.
Clark sees a sign that says football tryouts. Everyone whistles and says new girl. Clark turns around. Its Scabby Abby.
Abby: Hi Clark.
Clark: Abby?
Abby: Actually its Abbigale.
Clark: I almost did reconize you.
Abby: After an entire summer good. With any luck this old locker will be the only thing that stays the same tjis year.
Clark: Yea..um..that shouldnt be a problem. So huh why the..
Abby: Change. I guess just one day you realize you can spend another year being resentful of what everybody else has or you can do something about it. Its out senior year Clark this is my last chance.
Lana: Hey Clark! Hey Abby.
Lana: Whoa she changed.
Clark: Yea i know
They met up with Chole and Lois.
Chole: Is that Scabby Abby?
Clark: Yea.
Chole: Either she spent an entire summer at a silicon farm or im shoppong at the wrong ****er.
Lois turns around to look at Abby.
Lois: How old is she 17. Thats like messing with the batter before the cookies are even baked.
Chole: Dont tell me that the world isnt nicer to pretty people. Besides you know I mean its her body. Its makes her feel better and its none of out business.
Lois gives Chole a strange look.
Chole: What?
Lis: Im just stunned that miss letter to the editor doesnt find it one bit distressing that a girl would get nipped and tucked to transform into some plastic...
Clark: I think she looks reat.
Lana: Clark remember me?
Clark: Of course i do.
Lana: Just making sure.
Chole: Lis it sounds like you have got your first article. See you at The Torch.
Chole,Lana, and Clark walk way.
Lois: Okay. Ill write for you but you better give me extra credit.
Lana and Clark walk down the hallway holding hands.
Clark and Lana walks into the coach's office.
Lana: Why are we coming in here.
Coach: Hi.
Clark: Hi Coach!
Coach: What can i do for you?
Clark: Im Clark Kent. I want to try out for the football team.
Lana had a surprised look on her.
Coach. You look big enough, sure.
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Shall i continue?
eriii1
09-24-2006, 04:31 PM
OF COURSE!! You don't even have to ask! PPMS!!
Smallville4
09-24-2006, 05:50 PM
wait so in the beggining lana is with whitney and then shes with clark?
in the beginning its like in the episode... its a flashback to s1... so yeah Lana was with Whitney...
Good start... maybe re-read to add the missing letters and change your Chole to Chloe ;)
(thats constructive advice ;))
PPMS :D
svfan3594
09-24-2006, 06:38 PM
yea i never proofread but ill make sure i do next time! :D
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-24-2006, 06:49 PM
gr8 start can twait for more and di you say they will be together only in season 4?
svfan3594
09-24-2006, 06:56 PM
well this fic is only for season 4 for now but they will together through it so dont worry
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-24-2006, 07:04 PM
thats gr8!
smallvillewolf17
09-24-2006, 07:30 PM
Loving it so far. Keep it up. PPMS!
clark&lanafan06
09-24-2006, 08:59 PM
Great Start ! PPMS !!!!!!!!!
clana_never_give_up
09-24-2006, 11:20 PM
Awesome start!
You should definitely continue!
svfan3594
09-25-2006, 02:05 PM
----------Kent Farm----------------------------------------------
Johnathon: The Talon?
Martha: Lex..uh..agreed to let me manage it. I was lucky to find a job at all Johnathon.
Johnathon: Sweetheart if we are are so worried about money why dont we just go through the books again? We'll find some other places to cut.
Martha: Like where? We've been over it every week for 2 months. There's no way we can get out from underneath these hospital bills. Im not blaming you. I just dont want to keep waiting risk losing the farm. You worked too hard.
Johnathon: Yea so that you wouldnt have to.
Martha: Its not so bad right now. You have the farm and Clarks gonna go off to college next year. I need something of my own.
Johnathon: But why does it have to be with the Luthors?
Martha: Ill be selling expressos Johnathon not master minding hostile take overs.
Johnathon: Well Ive always known that you wanted to have more than just this old farm. Im not going to be the one to stand in your way.
Martha: Thank you (as they hug)
Johnathon: Your welcome.
-----------The Boys Locker Room--------------------------------
Coach: Hey Kent I need your permission sip.
Clark hands it to him.
Coach: What positions have you played?
Clark: None actually. Ive never been on the team before. My father wasnt too key on the whole idea.
Coach: Your dad doesnt you're here does he?
Clark: Im not doing this for him.
Coach: You know Ive seen a lot of guys join the team just so they can walk around in a leatherman's jacket because they want people to look at them differently. Football is just a game. If you want to change you have to do that yourself.
Clark: Thats why Im here.
Coach: Alright. We'll see what you got.
-------------Football Field---------------------------------------------
Coach: Alright Kent prove something to us.
Clark: Alright guys on 2. Hut Hut!
Clark passes the ball.
Coach: Alright. That will work. Line up again guys.
Brett: Check out Scabby Abby
Brett: Man is she hot.
Abby is at her locker.
Brett: I didnt mean to scare you. I cant stop thinking about you.
Abby: You mean the girl you nicknamed Scabby Abby.
Brett: Yea I totally deserve that. Maybe if I would had more patience I would have seen who you really are the most beautiful girl in school.
Lana walks by.
Brett: What do you sat we go to a place more quiet?
Abby smiles.
Abby: So where are we going?
----------Boys Locker Room--------------------------------------------
Abby takes off Brett's jersey. Abby undoes her ponytail. She takes off her shirt also. He kisses her neck. She bumps into the shower nob and turns it on. He kisses her shoulders. Abby's necklace falls into the shower drain. He kisses her on the lips.
Brett: What are you doing?
Abby: You didnt feel that?
Brett: Of course i did.
Abby: I should go.
Brett: Whats going on? Abbigale wait. Oh I get it new face same old boring scabby.
He comes up behind her.
Brett: Hey
He looks into the mirror.
Brett: Oh my god whats happening? Oh my god! My face! What did you do to me? No my face!
Lois is driving in car. Brett runs out in front of it. She doesnt see him and runs him over. Her windshield is cracked.
A few minutes later the ambulance takes him away. Abby sees his body.
Clark: Lois whats going on?
Lois: He just ran right out in front of me. I dont know they said he's going to be okay physically anyway. The cops think he could have lost it.
Clark: Who Brett? I just saw him at practice an hour ago. He was fine.
Lois: You sure about that?
Clark: Yea.
Lois: Think about it Clark its the start of a new season scholarships, the entire town counting on you to be their hero.
Clark: No way if anything Brett is too over confident. He probably just didnt see you.
Lois: yea that might explain the broken windsheild but do you want to tell me why he was running around half naked soaking wet. Who would do that?
-------------------Boys Locker Room------------------------------
Lois: Excuse me? how well did you know Brett Anderson?
Boy: Not as well as I'd like to know you.
Lois: Charming. Look Brett ran in front of my car. Do any of you guys know what was about?
Clark walks off. he finds blood on Bretts jersey. Clark also finds Abby's necklace in the shower drain.
----------------Talon---------------------------------------------
Lex is opening a box of books.
Lana: You make a habit of going through other people's mail.
Lex: Sorry the..uh..box was adressed to the talon. Whats with the fascination of ancient writings?
Lana: School project.
Lex: Must be the same project Clark's always working on. For two people so dfferent you have similar interest. Still amazes me with what you did to this place.
Lana: Remember Lex me and Clark are together. Huh this is the side of Lex Luthor Ive never seen before.
-----------------Kent Farm----------------------------------
Johnathon: Coach Cringley called you made the football team.
Clark: you dont have to worry dad. Im not going to hurt anyone. I know how to control my abilities.
Johnathon: the person Im worried about Clark is yourself. You're going to be tempted to run just a little bit faster or throw the ball far enough just to win every game.
Clark: You think Im going to cheat? I wont cross that line.
Johnathon: yu dont even know where that line is Clark. C'mon think about it you're out there your friends and Lana are giving it their all. You're going to do whatever it takes to win. Thats football son. With you its never going to be a fair competition.
Clark: Well lets talk about whats fair. Whats the first thing you remember about high school when you think back?
Johnathon: I dont know.
Clark: Dont tell me its not football. I want that too dad and im sick of begging for the chances that you just had. I want my own life.
Clark walks away leaving Johnathon standing on the front porch alone.
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Lana is laying on a table while Abby's mom is checking out the symbol on her back.
Abby's Mom: Whatever this pigment is someone left a mark you would never forget.
Lana: But you can still remove it right?
Abby's Mom: Ill have to send this tissye sample off to the lab, we'll see.
Abby's Mom: You go to school with my daughter dont you? Ill never never forget a face epecially a perfect one like yours. It must get you anything you want.
Abby walks in.
Lana: abby. Hows Brett? I saw you two in the hall.
Abby: I dont know what you're talking about.
Lana: Ill talk to you later. Thank you. Um..Bye.
Abby: What did you do to me? I kissed this guy and he freaked out. It was like he went insane or something.
Abby's Mom: You were my first trial at this.
Abby: Brett's at the hospital because of me.
Abby's Mom: Brett! Isn't that the boy who named you Scabby Abby? Maybe he got exactly what he deserved and Lana should too.
Abby: Lana? But Lana never did anything to me.
Abby's Mom: Lana saw the two of you together. Shes already asking questions.
Abby: You think she knows?
Abby's Mom: This is a very serious problem abbigale. If Lana sats anything to anyone about whats happened between you and Brett. They'll take all of this away from me and without your treatment you're going to be exactly who you used to be. Is that really what you want?
Abby: No.
Abby's Mom: I have done everything for you and now I need you to do something for me.
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Yea i know there wasnt clana in that update but there will be some clana in the next update.
Hope you like it!
Clana227
09-25-2006, 02:31 PM
Cool. great first two updates!
clana_never_give_up
09-25-2006, 03:07 PM
Great update. Hope to see more clana!
tophat
09-25-2006, 03:19 PM
good story update soon
so she went to France got the tattoo and came back to Clark...
Now... this was interesting...
I wonder how you will write the rest of the season...
PPMS
clana_never_give_up
09-25-2006, 04:50 PM
So Lana went off to Paris, got the tattoo and then came back to Smallville without meeting Jason?:confused:
svfan3594
09-25-2006, 06:20 PM
yea it has to be like that for me to write the rest of the episodes its going to be exactly like season 4 even the alicia part and clark will know about lana's tatoo
clana_never_give_up
09-25-2006, 08:05 PM
Sounds like it will be an interesting story!
svfan3594
09-26-2006, 07:26 PM
------Smallville High----------------------------
Clark: This is the old drama room.
Lana: Wow. Ive never seen this place before.
Clark: I discovered it a few days ago. I kinda found it when I was in the coach's office.
Lana: I love that you brought me here Clark.
Clark: Well of course. Clark kisses Lana on the lips passionately.
Lana: I missed us and you while I was in Paris. I love you Clark.
Clark: Everyday I would think about you and wondered what you were doing. I love you too.
Clark: So what did you do in Paris?
Lana: Clark I have to tell you something.
Clark: Hold that thought. put this blind fold on. Im going get your surprise.
Clark walks out of the room.The door opens.
Lana; Clark? Hello? Clark what are you doing?
Abby kisses Lana on the lips. Lana thinks its really Clark. Lana takes off her blind fold.
Lana: Abby
Abby: Im sorry Lana.
Lana looks in the mirror terrified.
Lana: Oh. Lana freaks out. She falls to the floor. A mirror falls on top of Lana.
--------Smallville Medical Center--------------------------------------------
Clark: I dont know if you can hear me Lana. I love you.
Lex interrupts.
Lex: How is she doing?
Clark: The doctors say she will be okay. they dont know whats wrong with her.
Lex: Well thats good i guess.
Lex leaves. Clark goes back to holding Lana's hand.
------------------The Torch----------------------------------------
Lois is checking out Abby's Mom's surgery website. She makes an appointment with her.
-----------------Smallville Medical Center--------------------------------
Chloe: Hey how is she doing?
Clark: She's pretty cut up. They gave her medicine but they said she keeps saying "dont let him see me."
Chloe: Its like some kind of break down.
Clark: When they brought Brett in he was acting the same way.
Clark: Well Brett and Lana are hardly canidates for plastic surgery.
Chole: Yea but Abby was. Didnt Lana say she saw Brett with Abby right before he went crazy. Maybe this procedure made her more beast than beauty.
Clark looks at Lana lying in the hospital bed.
-----------Abby's Mom's Office-----------------------------------------
Lois: My parents dont understand. They say Im too young for plastic surgery.
Abby's Mom: Well some parents dont remember what its like. When I was your age I wasnt exactly homecoming queen. I worked harder than all the pretty girls and watched everything get handed to them. 7 surgerys in 2 years changed all that.
Lois: You know I was actually interested in that new procedure um you used on Abby. Is it really true that you only have to come in once.
Abby's Mom: Its why I develop the process. I didnt want to watch my daughter go through the pain I went through. Lets get you scheduled here.
Lois: Yes please.
Abby's Mom sees a recorder. Lois notices this.
Lois: You know actually Im running a little late.
Abby's Mom: You recorded this?
Lois: Im going to expose you.
Abby's Mom: Who are you to stop people from being their best.
Lois: Call me crazy but Ive always believed that beauty is on the inside.
Abby's Mom pulls Lois's hair and injects her with a shot. lois passes out.
---------------------The Torch---------------------------------------------
Clark: Maybe Abby was a trial run.
Chloe: Shes passing something to people.
Clark: That makes sense if she kissed Brett but what about Lana.
Chole: I dont know. All i do know is that Abby's not going crazy. Maybe all Lana and Brett need is a dose of that serythro medication.
Chloe: It looks like Lois is one step ahead of us.
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Hope you like it! It had some clana!
clana_never_give_up
09-26-2006, 07:58 PM
Awesome job, keep it up!
Clanafan24/7
09-27-2006, 02:46 AM
uppdate soon:)
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-27-2006, 02:55 PM
yea na dsome abana
Clarkfan3000
09-28-2006, 09:38 AM
YAY! CLANA! heh awesome! PPMS
svfan3594
10-04-2006, 04:35 PM
---------Abbys Moms Office------------------------------------
Lois is lieing on a surgery table. Abbys Mom is looking over her.
Lois: What are you doing?
Abbys Mom: Giving you the inside scoop. You want to know what it was like for Abby all those years you going to find out.
She turns on the machine. Lois is strapped down. Lois struggles to get out but she cant. Clark shows up. He looks around he sees the computer with a camera veiw of Lois. He speeds and break through glass. he takes off the thing that is covering lois.
Lois: Clark?
Its starts spraying kryptonite gas. Clarks grows weak. Abbys Mom hits him in the head with a hammer. Lois sticks out her foot and kicks her.
Lois: Clark are you okay
Clark: Get me out of here.
Abbys mom come up behind them but lois kicks her back to the floor.
-------the talon--------------------------
lana: hey clark
clark: hey how are you feelin?
lana: good now that you're here.
clark kisses lana with passion.
clark: so what is it you wanted to tell me?
lana: um...dont worry about it.
clark: well im going to be late.
lana: late for what?
clark: the pep rally at school.
lana: oh i totally forgot about that.
they both left the talon with their arms around each other.
--------------the farm-------------------------------------------------
clark and lana pull up in the red truck.
lana: what are we doing here?
clark: hold up a second i have to talk to my dad about football.
lana: okay ill wait for you.
johnathon: i guess practice ran late.
clark: im sorry i disappointed you but im staying on the team, im tired of living my life on the sidelines.
johnathon: i realize that clark. i also realize that you're a senior in high school from now on you'll be making a lot of your own decisions but if you want to be seen as an adult in this family then you're gonna have to start acting like one.
clark shakes his head
johnathon: adults in this family just dont run off without discussing them first.
clark: i know. thats why i have one question for you. you're gonna let some asistance coach from metropolis teach a boy how to play football.
johnathon takes the football from clarks hands.
johnathon: go deep
clark runs all the way to the barn. johnathon throw a pass. clark catches it. clark dunks the football in the basketball goal.
johnathon: yea!
-----------------smallville high-----------------------------------------
lois is looking at her coolumn she wrote in the torch newspaper. chloe walks up behind her.
chloe: admiring the genius with in huh
lois: i had a typo
chloe: nice try. i followed up on the abby story line and it looks like mother makeover is gonna be playing mirror mirror on the sikeward wall from now on.
lois: is abby going to be ok
chloe: yes she'll be back next week. so are you excited for your first pep rally
lois: not exactly the friday night ive been dreaming of
chloe: oh come on its your dayview smallville's newest celeb.
lois: yea right one plastic piece and they're going to be holding tables all over town for me.
chloe: you'd be surprised but you've got fan mail.
lois: i didnt even expect anybody to read this.
chloe: whatever say what you you want but i know on the inside its getting to you. welcome to the bowl pin miss lane. now im off to see clark kent in a wet t-shirt care to join me.
lois: like ive never seen that before.
-------------pep rally_football field-------------------------------------
clark is sitting in the dunk tank. lana misses the target the first time.
clark: come on lana you can do this
lana: ok i can do this (she lets out a laugh)
lana: you're going down.
clark: prove it.
lana throws the football and hits the target as clark drops into the water.
lana: woo!
lana runs up to clark smiling and so is he. she gives him a big kiss on the lips. they both let out a big smile.
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Hope you liked it!
clana_never_give_up
10-04-2006, 04:44 PM
I liked it but what happened to Chloe and Lois?
You said they were going to go see Clark in a wet t-shirt and then they disappear.
What's with that?
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
10-04-2006, 04:51 PM
thats what happended!! and great update
clana_never_give_up
10-04-2006, 04:52 PM
yah but it's just strange
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
10-04-2006, 04:56 PM
well w/e
ppms!
svfan3594
10-04-2006, 09:16 PM
yea i know i left that part out lets just say they went to the pep rally and seen clark in a wet t-shirt i changed it a round cause Lois is the one that dunks him in the water
clana_never_give_up
10-04-2006, 09:19 PM
ok
Clanafan24/7
10-05-2006, 04:33 AM
i hope there will be another uppdate soon,because my t.v station cut off smallville n it was up to the prom!
svfan3594
04-11-2007, 11:50 PM
I havent updated this in a VERY long time so i thought i would..alright heres chapter 2.
Chapter 2- DEVOTED
The Smallville High Crows are practicing while Clark is sitting on the benches.
Coach Johnson: Hey Clark how you holding up?
Clark: Just enjoying the view from the bench.
Coach Johnson: Listen I talked to the coach about you but you know him..he's old school, so he feels like he's got a squad for the season, but just hang in there for me alright.
Clark looks dissappointed.
Mandy is a cheerleader. Mandy kisses her boyfriend Danny, the quarterback for the Crows.
Danny: Cut it out Mandy.
Mandy: Sorry. So what are you doing Saturday night?
Danny: Uh, we aren't doing anything. I'm hanging out with Nate and the boys. Didn't I mention that to you before?
Mandy: It's okay, I just want to make you happy.
Danny: Alright.
Mandy: I got you a drink.
The green substanced drink seems to make him attracted to Mandy more.
Danny: You know what screw the guys.
He kisses Mandy on the lips.
Danny: I want to hang out with you on Saturday night.
Mandy: Why wait til Saturday?
Danny: Whatever you want baby. Well imma go hit the showers.
Mandy gives a thumbs up to the other cheerleaders on the sideline.
Clark: Where you going? Fields this way.
Danny: Yea I'm going shopping with Mandy.
Clark: You're what?
Mandy passes by.Clark looks at her.
Danny: You're checking out my girlfriend Clark?
Clark: What are you talking about? I'm dating Lana.
Coach Johnson walks up.
Coach Johnson: If you leave this field Danny, you're riding the bench Friday.
Danny walks off the field anyway.
Coach Johnson: Well, looks like a spot just opened up Clark. Won't cha hop in there.
Football Player: Don't get to comfortable out there Clark. Danny is this team's quarterback.
Clark runs into two of his teamates.
Football Player: Let's get him boys.
Clark: Blue 19 hike!
Clark throws a long pass to a wide reciever and he catches it.
Coach Johnson: Nice throw Kent. Keep it up.
Clark smiles.
Clark: Alright.
---------------Boy's Locker Room--------------------------------------
Clark is tying his shoe. He hears a noise. Someone points a gun at him and shoots but missed. he shoots again and misses. It's Danny.
Clark: Whoa Whoa Danny put the gun down and lets talk about this.
Danny: It's too late Clark you shouldn't have hit on my girl.
Danny shoots again. Clark dodges the bullets and uses heat vision to heat the gun. danny drops the gun and falls to the floor.
-----------------------The Loft--------------------------------------------
Clark is standing in his loft staring at the stars when Lana climbs up the stairs.
Lana: Hey, I heard what happened. Are you okat?
Clark: Yea I'm fine.
Lana: Are you sure, it sounded pretty dangerous from what everyone told me.
Clark: Yes Lana I'm fine.
Lana: Why would Danny want to kill you?
Clark: i have no idea, he thought I was hitting on his girlfriend but of course I'm in love with you Lana.
Lana kisses him Clark kisses her back with more passion then Lana kisses him back. She stops to breathe.
Lana: Can I stay here with you tonight, to make sure you're okay.
Clark: Of course you can, but I'm going to be okay.
Lana grabs Clark and hugs him. Clark kisses her on her forehead.
They fall asleep on the couch.
--------Next Day----------Smallville High--------------------------------
Lois is walking down the hallway talking on her cell phone.
Lois: Well can you please tell the dean there's been an error. I belong at Metropolis University not walking the halls of Smallville High. Well yes I'm sure that we can work this out if you could just get him to call me back. Thank you.
Lois slams her cell phone closed. Clark walks up behind her.
Clark: You know if you spend as much time studying as you did trying to leave you'd be in college already.
Lois: And where did you get that prowl of wisdom..a farmer's almanac.
Clark smiles.
Clark: So what do you think(refreing to his football jacket)
Lois: They're not really your colors.
Clark: They're the school's colors.
Lois: I'm glad you made the team Clark, but why be a conformist, at least with the whole farm boy plaid thing as lame as it is...it completely belongs to you.
Clark: In the future let's restrict our conversations....hello and goodbye.
A couple cheerleaders walk by. Then Lois and Clark see football players doing chores for the cheerleaders.
Lois: Where are we? Some kind of freakish parallel universe.
Clark sees Lana in the hall and goes talk to her. Lana notices his jacket.
Lana: wait you made the team?
Clark: Well didn't I tell you?
Lana: No, i guess we've both been a little busy. I miss being with you Clark.
Clark gives her a short but sweet kiss.
Clark: How bout you come by my house before the game.
Lana: Alright sounds good.
Clark smiles and grabs Lana's hand and they walk hand and hand into the Torch.
Lois: Hey Chloe, have you seem the way these football players are acting?
Chloe: Yea and I noticed one of them unloaded a shotgun in the boys locker room. I was thinking of doing an article on it.
Clark: Yea he unloaded it at me.
Chloe: Well why would he unload a gun on you?
Clark: He thought I was hitting on his girlfriend which I wasn't)Clark said reassuring Lana)
Chloe: Pretty strange for a quarterback.
Clark: So do you like my new jacket? What do you think?
Chloe: It's not exactly your colors.
Clark: Why does everyone keep saying that?
Lana: Well Clark, I think the colors look great on you.(Lana says laughing)
Clark smiles.
Chloe: Anyway, lois I need you to go to the Smallvile Medical Center. Apparently our gun toating ex-quarterback woke up this morning and he's feeling stings of second degree burns. He's been apoligizing non stop so.
Lois: I'm sure he doesn't love the prospect of playing a tight end for the Kansas boys home.
Chloe laughs. Lois's cellphone rings, she answers it.
Lois: Hello..yes I will hold for the dean...I've gotta go.
Chloe: Alright I guess I'll go to the Smallville Medical Center. Clark I need you to talk to Coach Johnson, after all you were there.
Clark: Actually Chloe with this whole football thing, I'm gonna have to dial back my time at the Torch.
Chloe looks upset.
Chloe: Oh, I guess I've got my work cut out for me.
Clark: I'm sorry you know my priority is..
Chloe: You know what...don't worry about it. This is going to be a pretty big deal for you, I mean you're the new starting quarterback right. It's gotta be pretty exciting.
Clark: It is, but I'm just not sure the other guys want me around.
Chloe: They've been playing together for three years. you're on the team for two weeks and all of a sudden, you're starting. What did you expect, hugs and kisses.
-----------Boys Locker Room-----------------------------------------
A football players pulls out a helmet in a box.
Football Player: Nice.
He throws it to someone else. All the football players are checking out their new gear for the season. Clark walks in.
Clark: What's going on?
A football player hands Clark his jersey.
Football: You owe me one Clark. I saved it from the toliet.
Clark: Thanks.
Coach Johnson: Alright ladies listen up. You're obvisiouly found the new jerseys. I want to introduce the man thats responsible for them..Lex Luthor.
Everyone claps except for Clark.
Lex: The coaches tell me this is going to be a rebuilding season and I want to encourge you to keep adding. In my life, I've learned that you can never give up on something that means alot to you, even when you're coming off a loosing season. You keep trying, I guess sometimes you just need a fresh start. So please, enjoy the new uniforms.
Coach Johnson: Alright...Alright!
Everyone claps except for Clark again.
Clark: I know what you're trying to do, but you can't buy back my friendship.
Lex doesn't say anything. Clark leaves and heads for the field.
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I know huh...pretty crappy. I'll write it better for my next update.
Comments??Concerns??
:D :D
clana_never_give_up
04-12-2007, 07:51 PM
I thought it was great.
Not to be mean or anything but if it would be way better if you described characters emotions and describe the surroundings, i think you would draw more people to read your story if you did that!
It's just a suggestion but I think it would help.
PPMS :D :D :D :D :D
svfan3594
04-12-2007, 09:29 PM
haha you're not being mean i think you're completely right..i knew that when i was writing it but i didnt feel like expressing their feelings and stuff because i was really tired.So yeah the next update will be much better.
Thanks!!:D :D :D
smallvillewolf17
04-12-2007, 09:52 PM
PPMS!
smallvillewolf17
04-20-2007, 09:55 AM
Where's the update?
Jim-El 1025
04-22-2007, 09:35 AM
ppms
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