View Full Version : Clark and Lana: The College Years
svfan3594
09-17-2006, 08:16 PM
hey im new here.I dont really write fan fics and this is my first one.I hope its not that bad.
Heres a summary about my fan fic:
This is after the episode Arrival.Clark lost his powers.He never gave up football.He is the starting QB for MetU.His first game is against Kansas A&M.Its a rival game.He is back together with Lana also.Lana,Chole, and even Lex and his family will be cheering him on as he gears up for his first football ame without powers.
Yea i know its not the greastest but it will have to do for now.
Shall i continue with this fan fic?
clark&lanafan06
09-17-2006, 08:27 PM
Please continue !
svfan3594
09-17-2006, 09:10 PM
really i havent wrote it yet i need some more people interested
Chapter 1 GAME TIME
Its the first game of the season for Clark Kent.It could get ugly since he cant use his powers but like that will slow him down.
Clark is still sleeping when Lana walks into is dorm room and wakes him.She gives him a slight kiss on the forehead.
Lana:Clark,honey wake up.
Lana:Clark wake up
Clark: (mumbuling) what time is it?
Lana:Its time for you to wake up.
Clark: ok
Lana: are you ready for your first football game?
Clark:Idk. Will you be there?
Lana:Of course i will ill be cheering you on.
Clark:Then of course im ready for it now that i know you will be there.
Lana gives him a short kiss on the lips.
Lana: well i will leave and let you get ready for the big day.
Clark: ok and kisses lana goodbye.
this is all i wrote so far i have school tomorrow. Hope you like it!
clark&lanafan06
09-17-2006, 09:26 PM
Good start ! PPMS !!!!!!
svfan3594
09-17-2006, 09:44 PM
Chapter 1 GAME TIME (part 2 of 5)
Clark arrived at football practice.When Clark got there he noticed someone he never seen before.He looked about like clarks age.He had dark curly hair and was medium sized.
Clark: Are you new here? Whats your name?
Joey: Hi my names Joey Jackson.Im the coach's son.
Clark: Nice to meet you as he shakes joey's hand.Im Clar....
Joey: I know who you are.Ive heard so much about about you from my dad.
Coach blows the whistle screaming Clark get over here.
Clark: Well i guess ill talk to you later and gives a smile.
Joey: That would be cool and smiles back at clark.
Clark races to the football field so he doesnt get in trouble.
Coach: Clark are you ready? I see you have met my son.
Clark: Yea he seems nice.
Coach: Now get on that field Clark the team needs you.
Clark warms up and throws a couple passes to the wide recievers.Clark thinks he is doing pretty good without his powers.He wished it had always been that way.
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LUTHER MANSION.Lex is betting that Kansas A&M will beat MetU with Clark Kent as their starting QB.
Lex calls a dealer that gambles for football games.
Lex: Hello. This is Lex Luther
Dealer: Hello Mr.Luther Nice to do business with you. Let me guess you are betting that MetU will beat Kansas A&M.How much will you bet?
Lex: Actually im betting the opposite. I bet 5,000 that Kansas A&M will win.
Dealer: Im surprised at your choice Mr.Luther. Arent you smarter than that. Well the bets on. Pleasure doing business with you Mr.Luther.
Lex.You too.
Lex hangs up the phone thinking he will win or will he lose?
Hope you like it!
clark&lanafan06
09-17-2006, 09:47 PM
Nice update ! PPMS !
svfan3594
09-17-2006, 10:09 PM
what does PPMS mean?
Chapter 1 GAME TIME (part 3 out of 5)
LANA AND CHLOE'S DORM ROOM:
Lana walks in the room.She just got back from shopping.
Lana: Hey Chloe!
Chole: Lana! Where have you been?
Lana: Oh shopping.
Chole: Are you ready to watch clark play his frst big game?
Lana: Yeah i guess (with a small smile on her face)
Chole: Whats wrong?
Lana: Im scared he will get hurt.
Chole: You didnt care about that when i played for Smallville High (giving a small laughter)
Lana: Yea but Chole i was dating Jason at the time and i did care just not as much.
Chole: I understand. Wow im pumped up about the game. Get to see Clark Kent the farm boy play football.(giving a laughter)
Lana: Yea i guess its good to watch my boyfriend play football.
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MetU FOOTBALL FIELD.
Clark races to his cell phone when its starts ringing hoping it was Lana.But it wasnt it was someone else.
Martha: Hi Clark! I guess your getting ready for the big game.
Clark:Hi Mom! Yea im am.
Martha: How are you doing with out tour powers?
Clark: Im having fun.Its better playing football without my powers.
Martha: Well i guess thats good to hear.
Martha: I have some bad news.
Clark: What?! (with a surprised look on his face)
Martha: Me and your father wont be able to come to your game today.
Clark: Why (with a sad look on his face)
Martha: The doctors shceduled an appointment for your father.
Clark: Is he okay?
Martha: Yes he is fine they might want to do an operation on him.
Clark: Really i wish i wasnt playing today.
Martha: Its not your fault Clark.
Clark: I guess its not.
Clark could hear the coach yelling at him.
Clark: Mom i have to go. Bye!
Clark hung up is cell phone.
Clark wondered if his dad will be alright.Then he thought to himself well i still have the lofe of my life coming to the game!
Hope you like it!
clana1fan4ever
09-17-2006, 10:50 PM
i like it!!! ppms!
Clanafan24/7
09-18-2006, 04:25 AM
i don't like ur story,i LOVE it!:D uppdate soon as you can
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 05:04 AM
Chapter 1 GAME TIME (part 4 out of 5)
Its almost game time at MetU stadium.Clark wished he could see Lana right before the game starts but he had to go to the locker room and get ready.Meanwhile Lex arrived there acting like he was pulling for MetU when he had really betted that Kansas A&M was going to win.Why would he bet against his good old pal Clark Kent?Guess we will have to see.
MetU STADIUM.Lana,Chole,and Lex have arrived at the game ready to see Clark play football.Its kickofff time at MetU.The teams comes out of the locker room.You can hear Lana screaming GO CLARK!The MetU bulldogs get the the ball this means Clarks plays frst.
Clark is very nervous about this but he thinks he will do fine.Clark looks into the stands.He finds Lana waving at him.He cant wavw back since hes about to play.
Clark: BLUE 42 SET HUT (they snap the ball to clark)
Clark looks around for a wide reciever.Finds find and guns him the ball.He catches it.Clark kent and his team move up 10 yards.
Clark: BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clark hands the ball off to the running back.He gains 5 yards.
Clark: BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clark finds a reciever.He throws him a short pass.Just enough for the first down.
Clark: BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clarks throws it to a wide reciever thats wide open.They about 30 yards on that play.Its first and goal.
Clark: BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clark gives the ball to the running back.He gains 7 yards on the play.
Clark: BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clark finds a receiver in the end zone.He throws it to him TOUCHDOWN METU BULLDOGS!LANA IS JUMPING UP AND DOWN HAPPY FOR CLARK.
Hope you like it! My next update will be pretty big!
Smallville4
09-18-2006, 05:34 AM
wow i like your speedy updates anyway i love it
clana1fan4ever
09-18-2006, 08:27 AM
that was a nice update!!! i liked it!
ppms!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-18-2006, 02:05 PM
hope ully youre right
maru11
09-18-2006, 03:03 PM
great !!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 03:09 PM
Awesome story!!!!!
Update Soon!!!
:D :D
Clana227
09-18-2006, 03:11 PM
just got caught up.great job. update soon please
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 03:15 PM
no! i just updated and finished it and it told me i wasnt logged in! So now i have to retype everything! I didnt write it either i just typed it! Im never gonna remember everything i just typed!
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 03:17 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
no! i just updated and finished it and it told me i wasnt logged in! So now i have to retype everything! I didnt write it either i just typed it! Im never gonna remember everything i just typed!
Why don't you do it on Microsoft Word and then paste it in the reply.
Thats what I do fo my story, its way easier. Then you won't have to worry about being logged in or not!!!!:D
maitriniazngurl
09-18-2006, 03:28 PM
hey, good story so far.
Keep it up the speedy updates.
I wonder if Joey hs something to do with it.. hem.
Oh.. and in case your wondering.. P. Please P. Post M. More S. Soon.
I think that's what it means. PPMS!!
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 03:30 PM
Originally posted by maitriniazngurl
Oh.. and in case your wondering.. P. Please P. Post M. More S. Soon.
I think that's what it means. PPMS!!
Thats what I think it means too!!!:D
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 03:39 PM
Chapter 1 GAME TIME (part 5 of 5)
Lex wasnt as happy as Lana was.He was loosing the bet.
Lana: Clark is really good at football! I love watching him play.
Chole: Hes pretty good for a farm boy! I do too.
they had to yell at each other bacause the crowd was going so wild over the touchdown.The crowd started yelling CLARK! Clark knew nothing could ruin this day.The tigers now had the ball.Clark hoped the bulldogs defense would hold them back. They got 4 first downs.They were now on the bulldogs teritory.The running back ran it in for a TD.
Lex now had a smile on his face since Kansas A&M got a TD.Clark knew he had to work extra to get a TD.He had to move down the field fast since there wasnt much time left intil halftime.
Clark: IOWA 80 IOWA 80 SET HUT
Clark passed it to a reciever.He gained 10 yards on the play.
Clark: IOWA 80 IOWA 80 SET HUT
Clark looked for a reciever down field.he connected with him.He gained 30 yards on the play.They were now on the tigers teritory.
Clark: IOWA 80 IOWA 80 SET HUT
Clark knew he couldnt give it to the running back it would watse more time inless the running back went out of bounds.Clark faked it to the running back turned around and passed it to a reciever in the end zone.All of sudden Clark got hit hard.
TOUCHDOWN BULLDOGS! The crowd went wild until they noticed their star QB had been hurt.
Hope you like it! I have way more by the way!
Yes you will learn about joey later.He not the nice person you know!
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 03:43 PM
Cool story, I like how it's going.
PPMS!!!
maitriniazngurl
09-18-2006, 03:44 PM
good update.. if you can please update again... I'm thinking Joey hit him..
But this is coming from a person who.. "Who does not keep her update promises." :)
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 03:45 PM
Originally posted by maitriniazngurl
But this is coming from a person who.. "Who does not keep her update promises." :)
Bad, Bad, I usually keep my update promises. I update almost everyday.
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 04:17 PM
Lana: OMG is he okay? I knew this would happen.
Chole: Im sure Clark will be fine Lana.He always is.
The coach ran up to Clark.
Coach: Are you alright Clark?
Clark: Not really.
Coach: Whats wrong?
Clark: Its my arm as he held it in pain.Its also my throwing arm too.
Coach: Oh no.Do you think its broken clark?
Clark: No.I think its a slight fracture.
Coach: Thats not good.
Clark: Im sorry i didnt see the guy coming for me.
Coach: Its not your fault.Come on lets get you up and take you to get checked on.
The crowd clapped as clark ot up.Clark mouthed to Lana "its okay im will be fine"Lana could understand what he was saying.It made her feel a bit better.Lex was happy he knew for sure he was going win the bet.Dont be certain of that Lex.
It was now halftime.The checked out clark's arm.He was right its a slight fracture.Clark still wanted to play the 2nd half of the game.He walked up to his coach.
Clark: I want to play the 2nd half of the game.
Coach: Clark you are hurt you cant play.
Clark: Yes i can my arm is fine> i dont want to let my team down coach.Can i warmup to make im okay.
Coach: Sure.But if your arm hurts dont play the 2nd half.
Clark was running to go warm up as he just saw Joey.
Clark: Hi Joey!
Joey: Hey Clark! I got worried when ever you got hurt.Who was that girl yelling at you and waving?
Clark: The love of my life.
Joey: Whats her name?
Clark: Lana.
Joey: Whos that blonde chick sitting next to her?
Clark: Thats Chole.She is me and Lana's best friend.
Joey: Cool i think i like her.
Clark let out a small giggle.
Clark: I have to warm up.See ya!
Joey: Bye!
Clark was passing with his recievers.he was feeling good but his arm wasnt.Clark still wanted to play even though if was hurting.
Halftime was over.The Tigers got the ball the ball first.They made a TD.Now the game was tied 14-14.
Clark ran out onto the getting in postition.Lana was surprised he was playing.She was afraid he would get hurt again.
Clark: BLUE 42 BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clark gave it to the running back.He ran for 8 yards.
Clark: BLUE 42 BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clark passed it to the running back.This gained 10 yards.
Clark: BLUE 42 Blue 42 SET HUT
Clark gave it to the running back.He broke free and gained 25 yards.They were now in the tigers teritory.
Clark: BLUE 42 BLUE 42 SET HUT
Clark looked for a reciever in the end zone.he found one and TOUCHDOWN BULLDOGS!
After this the game wasnt too exciting.None of the teams got touchdowns.The crowd got dull until Clark ran it into teh end zone for a TD!The bulldogs beat the tigers.
Lana: Thats my boy!
Lex threw his paper down.He lost 5,000 dollars.He thought im never betting against Clark Kent again.
Lana couldnt wait to see Clark after the game.As soon as she saw him she ran up to him and gave him a passionate kiss.
Clark: Hi Lana!Easy remember im hurt.
Lana: Hi Clark! Oh yea sorry right.You did great.
Clark: Yea thanks to you! Clark gives lana a passionate kiss for a while.
Joey: Get a room!
Lana: Clark who us that?
Joey: Im Joey Jackson the coach's son as he stuck his hand out.
Lana: Im Lana Lang.Nice to meet you!
As soon as Joey saw chole his eyes lit up.He ran over to her.
Joey: Hi im joey jackson and your chole right.
Chole: yes im chole sullivan.Lana and Clark should get a room.
They both laughed.
Joey: I think this is the srat of a new friendship.
Clark and Lana hopped into clarks truck and drove to clarks form room.When they got there they started kissing passionately.they slowed down.
Lana: Clark you want me to bandage your arm?
Clark: Sure that would great!
Lana raps a bandage and starts wrapping clarks arm.
Lana: i was worried when you hurt.
Clark: Lana its okay im still here.He gives Lana a kiss.
Lana: There all done!
Clark: Now we can go to bed.
Clark and Lana suggled up in the bed.Lana was holding on to clark tight.She never wanted to let him go through the night.
Hope you liked! I stilll think the one i did before was better though.
REMEMBER JOEY IS THE COACH'S SON. Yea i know i didnt keep my promises i just keep getting new ideas i guess.
clark&lanafan06
09-18-2006, 07:35 PM
Great Updates ! PPMS !!!!!!!!
maitriniazngurl
09-18-2006, 09:06 PM
cool.. good update. :D
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 09:10 PM
Great update!!! Keep it up!!!
:D :D
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 09:56 PM
ok im about to write the next episode/chapter. Do yall want clark to get his powers back or continue to stay mortal?
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 09:59 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
ok im about to write the next episode/chapter. Do yall want clark to get his powers back or continue to stay mortal?
I think he should stay mortal unless Clark tells Lana about his powers when he gets them back.
But it's all about what you want!!!!! Thats just what I think!!!
:D :D :D :D
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 10:01 PM
i was thinking that too but i want this episode/chapter to be kinda of like hidden. i like to see lana like that when clarks hurt!
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 10:02 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
i was thinking that too but i want this episode/chapter to be kinda of like hidden. i like to see lana like that when clarks hurt!
That would be cool. Right it like that!!!
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 10:12 PM
really i prolly will. Do you think its good for my first fan fic? I have been reading yours its really good.
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 10:29 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
really i prolly will. Do you think its good for my first fan fic? I have been reading yours its really good.
Yah, I think it's really good for your first fan fic.
Thanx for reading my story, it's my first fan fic too.
So It means a lot that your reading it too, you should reply, and give me feedback on it.
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 10:35 PM
i meant to reply but i forot. I got ahead of myself.I will prolly reply when you do ya next update.
clana1fan4ever
09-18-2006, 10:38 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
i like to see lana like that when clarks hurt!
lolz not reallie its kinda sad to see lana sad when clarks hurt but hope u update soon!!
clana_never_give_up
09-18-2006, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
i meant to reply but i forot. I got ahead of myself.I will prolly reply when you do ya next update.
Awesome, by the way my name's Jenni.
you know since we're both kinda new to the fan fics we could help each other out by helping each other with decisions for our stories. I know sometimes I can't decide on something to do.
So you want to do that?
I'ts ok if you say no, It was just an idea.
:D
svfan3594
09-18-2006, 10:47 PM
actually im not gonna say no! I think its a great idea! :D
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 06:55 AM
Originally posted by svfan3594
actually im not gonna say no! I think its a great idea! :D
So I guess we could PM (Private Messege) each other our ideas so that no one finds out what we're planning.
If that doesn't work we could email them to each other. You choose?
svfan3594
09-19-2006, 01:46 PM
we could prolly PM. and plus i need some help rite now! :D
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 04:12 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
we could prolly PM. and plus i need some help rite now! :D
I PM'd you back!!!:D
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 06:08 PM
great updATE
Clarkfan3000
09-19-2006, 06:20 PM
PPMASAP
svfan3594
09-19-2006, 07:05 PM
I can give yall hints about what will happen in this season/story.
Lana will find out clarks secret.Chole will get a boyfriend.Lex will try to destory Clark everyway he can since he thinks clark has the perfect life.
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 07:18 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
I can give yall hints about what will happen in this season/story.
Lana will find out clarks secret.Chole will get a boyfriend.Lex will try to destory Clark everyway he can since he thinks clark has the perfect life.
Awesome!!!
I PM'd u!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:07 PM
man not again. no omre lex. lex shouldnt even be allowed in fics
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:09 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
man not again. no omre lex. lex shouldnt even be allowed in fics
I 2nd that. Lex should get into an accident so he couldn't hurt anyone. Life on Smallville woulld be much better that way!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:15 PM
yea no more lexana. but from what we know pete is gonna come back and lex is gonna be way to evil and no mo lexana and no more Clana...... *sobbing loudly*
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
yea no more lexana. but from what we know pete is gonna come back and lex is gonna be way to evil and no mo lexana and no more Clana...... *sobbing loudly*
Are you serious no more Clana......*sobs*.......Thats horrible.
But I heard that Lana's going to find out his secret this season somehow!!!!! So there's a chance they may get back together!!!:D
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:20 PM
no theres no chance...*sobbing harder*
pete is gonna come back and clois is gonna happen lex is evil and lana moves on
maybe in clarks dreams in the first epi. like when he gets out of the PZ?!
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:21 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
no theres no chance...*sobbing harder*
pete is gonna come back and clois is gonna happen lex is evil and lana moves on
maybe in clarks dreams in the first epi. like when he gets out of the PZ?!
I don't believe it. Everyone knows their still in love with each other so how could they move on!!!!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:22 PM
no clark is still in love with lana. lana even said and i quote, "how could i've ever loved you." and the begging of vessel
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:25 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
no clark is still in love with lana. lana even said and i quote, "how could i've ever loved you." and the begging of vessel
I don't remember that, are you sure you're quoting it properly????
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:26 PM
yes..... i remember i just watched it an hour ago
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
yes..... i remember i just watched it an hour ago
Just cause she said that doesn't mean she doesn't love him. She could've just said that because she didn't want to say how she really feels. Like in Season 3, remember when they kiss close to the end of the season. She loved him then and expressed her feelings differently!!!!:D
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:34 PM
no johnathon was acting all weird and clark wanted lana casue he didnt want to look back on life and see things that he wanted and didnt get. if i remember correctly and thats when she made the decision to go to PAris, remember?
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:39 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
no johnathon was acting all weird and clark wanted lana casue he didnt want to look back on life and see things that he wanted and didnt get. if i remember correctly and thats when she made the decision to go to PAris, remember?
Yah but she still loved him and expressed her feelings differently?
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:40 PM
doesnt matter she left him for paris and jason. now im not trying to be the one to take clarks side, but after all that has happended i think she doesnt deserve clark. and im not a chlarker but chloe deserves him more
svfan3594
09-19-2006, 08:46 PM
OK people. This is what i think will happen in season 6 yes clark still loves lana and yes lana still loves clark but deep down shes with lex to get revenge at clark. Lex and Lana will be together till mid/end of the season. Lana will find out Clarks secret at the end of the season. Clark will be forced to tell her. Lana and Clark will be like they were at the end of season 4. Thats what i think.
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:47 PM
i disaggre i think lexanaa will end in the second epi.
well while she might be with the bald bastard... the little vid i saw tonight made me happy... her trying to kill Zod in baldy's body kinda put a smile on my face...
now... PPMS
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:49 PM
whrer kan i find this video???!!!!
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:51 PM
I agree with both of you, Lexana will end in the 2nd episode and in the middle of the season Clark will tell Lana his secret and they will get back together.
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:52 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
whrer kan i find this video???!!!!
I want to know too!!!!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:53 PM
no i dont think that they will get back together!!! gosh!!! clois will already be happining.DUH!!!
svfan3594
09-19-2006, 08:54 PM
That highly wont happen because lana will eventually move in with lex.It doesnt matter if he hurt her when he was zod because lana knew that wasnt him. Lana doesnt really care about clark right now. Lana will stay with lex until the mid/end season. After this clark and lana will et back on track once she knows his secret but this will be at the very end of the season. I think clark will be alone this season and continue to develope into superman.
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:54 PM
Originally posted by Nemu
its very short though...
So PM it too me.
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:55 PM
i think that he developes super breath or something like that
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:56 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
That highly wont happen because lana will eventually move in with lex.It doesnt matter if he hurt her when he was zod because lana knew that wasnt him. Lana doesnt really care about clark right now. Lana will stay with lex until the mid/end season. After this clark and lana will et back on track once she knows his secret but this will be at the very end of the season. I think clark will be alone this season and continue to develope into superman.
Maybe but I want more Clana in this season than Lexana!!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:56 PM
yea maybe
svfan3594
09-19-2006, 08:56 PM
yea PM it to me too. Im sorry i havent updated ive been so busy.
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by Nemu
its very short though...
LOVED IT!!!! ahHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by svfan3594
yea PM it to me too. Im sorry i havent updated ive been so busy.
thats ok, as you can see there is an insane conversation that *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#* and I are having!!!!:D
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-19-2006, 09:04 PM
yea its great oh and never give up, you only need to more posts for 2oo
im done for the night
clana_never_give_up
09-19-2006, 09:10 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
yea its great oh and never give up, you only need to more posts for 2oo
im done for the night
Oh come on, you could last for a little bit longer!!!
maru11
09-20-2006, 02:19 PM
upate soon!!!
svfan3594
09-20-2006, 02:38 PM
Episode 2 HURT
The next morning Lana and Clark wake up together in bed.Lana held onto clark all last night never letting him go and clark seemed to like that.
Lana: Did you have a good night sleep?
Clark: Of course i was with you the whole. It possibly couldnt be any better.Lana smiled at Clark and gave him a kiss.Clark didnt want this to end but he had to go see Lex.
Clark: Lana i have to go
Lana: Go where?
Clark: To Lex's
Lana: You understand im not the good of friends with him right now.
Clark: Yes,but i have to tell him something please forgive me.
Lana: Who ever said you had to apologize its okay but ill be here thinking about you every minute.
Clark: I love you.Clark gives Lana a kiss.
Clark: I have more then that came from when i get back.Lana smiled.
Lana: I love you too.She said it just in time as clark headed off to Lex's place.
Clark was used to getting there in a second now he has to drive.
Before Clark arrived Lex was sitting at his desk doing business work.Clark slammed through his door.
Clark: Lex we need to talk.
Lex: hey Clark ood game last night.
Clark thanks. did you know since had a son his name is Joey Jackson.
Lex: He does thats odd
Clark Yea but thats not what i came to talk about.
Lex: Well what do you want to talk about?
Clark: Stay away from Lana.She doesnt want to be near you right now.Im protecting her from you.
Lex: Clark theres one thing you forgot you are not the boss of me and i can do whatever i want.
Clark: Stay away from Lana i mean it!
Clark stormed out of Lex's place.Meanwhile since Clark told him about Joey Jackson.He though he was very odd. He searched his name in the phone book.He gives him a call.
Lex: Hello this Lex Luthor. I need you to do me a favor.
Joey: Wow Lex Luthor. Well what to do you want me to do. How do you know me?
Lex: I want you to kill Clark Kent.
Yea i know i dont Lex either but he makes it more interesting> Trust wont be friends with Lana in my story. She will start to hate him.
Hope you liked it!
Clana227
09-20-2006, 04:39 PM
Wow great update please post more soon.
smallvillewolf17
09-20-2006, 05:41 PM
VERY GOOD. PPMS!
why is lex asking joey to kill clark?
svfan3594
09-20-2006, 06:00 PM
because Lex doesnt want to kill Clark himself and it makes the story more interesting
Clarkfan3000
09-20-2006, 08:24 PM
awesome PPMASAP!!!
clana_never_give_up
09-20-2006, 08:25 PM
Hey Great Update!!!:D
buddy232
09-20-2006, 11:03 PM
PLEASE UPDATE!
happycamper
09-20-2006, 11:25 PM
Great update!
Lex is already resorting to murder. Definitely not a good friend :lol:
Just one question, exactly who is the father of Joey Jackson?
Clarkfan3000
09-21-2006, 05:21 PM
PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PP MASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-22-2006, 02:16 PM
its alittle forward. but good
maru11
09-22-2006, 03:52 PM
update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-22-2006, 04:27 PM
update
svfan3594
09-23-2006, 10:11 PM
Ok heres one quick update!
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Joey: I cant kill Clark he is my friend.Why cant you just kill him yourself?
Lex: You have too i will ruin my image and get thrown in jail if i do it.
Joey: Ill ruin my life too if i do it and clark is my friend and man you are selfish.
Lex: I will make you a deal.
Joey: Whats the deal?
Lex: Ill give you 6,000 dollars if you kill Clark Kent.
Joey: Im not going to do it but my friend can do it for adn you have to give me money also.
Lex: Its a deal.
Joey: great. I fell guilty but i always like getting money when i dont do anything.
Lex: Bye.
Joey: Bye Lex.
Lex hangs up the phone with an evil look in his. Thinking to himself Lana wont have her love of her life anymore cause clark will be dead and i will make my move. Clark Kents life will be gone forever.
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Clark arrived back at lana's dorm room hoping lex would stay away from Lana but he knew it would fail and he couldnt do anything about it since he doesn't have his superpowers.
Clark: Hi!
Lana: Hi Clark glad to see you i missed you! As she gives him a kiss on the lips.
Lana: So what did you and lex talk about.
Clark: Nothing really.Trying to dode what they really talked about because he thought lana would get mad at him for telling Lex what he told him.
Lana: Well thats nice yall must have gotten along with each other.
Clark: Yea. I guess.
Lana: Listen Clark i need to go to the library today i need some books for school.
Clark: Ill come with you and make sure you are safe clark said with a smile on his face.
Lana: That would be great. I do need help finding books.
Clark and Lana walked out of her dorm room onto the campus holding hands.Suddenly Clark bumped into a student and all his books dropped from his hands.
Clark: Oh sorry let me help you there.As he was giving the boy a hand.
Student: Thanks i appreciate that.
Just as Clark and Lana were about to leave the boy pulled out his gun and hit Clark with a bullet that pierced the right side of his chest.
Sorry i havent updated! Hope you like it!
happycamper
09-23-2006, 10:36 PM
It's definitely not good to be without powers...
Lex really is evil, and I hope his plotting does not succeed!
:D :D
clana_never_give_up
09-24-2006, 01:44 AM
Great update.
I hope Clark is ok!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-24-2006, 07:08 AM
yea me too
Clarkfan3000
09-24-2006, 12:53 PM
me 3! PPMVVVVVS
smallvillewolf17
09-24-2006, 07:38 PM
me 4! PPMS!
buddy232
09-25-2006, 02:53 PM
Please continue!
maru11
09-25-2006, 03:49 PM
udpate please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
buddy232
10-07-2006, 06:07 PM
Please don't abandon this fic! It has a great story
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
10-07-2006, 06:21 PM
you said that about the pther fic!
clana_never_give_up
10-07-2006, 10:54 PM
Update Soon!!
:D :D
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
10-08-2006, 08:25 AM
Updater soon:D:D :rotfl:
clana_never_give_up
10-08-2006, 02:23 PM
Waiting patiently for an update!!!
svfan3594
10-08-2006, 02:28 PM
alrite im update date today! i havent been on in a while i promise ill update today! :D
svfan3594
10-08-2006, 03:47 PM
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Lana: Clark! No!
Clark dropped to the ground with Lana by his side. Lana sat up with Clark as she held up his head. Clark was gazing off.
Clark: Lana. Clark said in a soft voice. "I love you"
Lana felt so hopeless for Clark as she answered him " Yes Clark im here, I love you too" Lana was crying her eyes out. Clark stopped breathing. Lana felt this.
Lana: someone call an ambulance! lana was crying even more now. She wasnt going to leave Clark no matter what.
Lana: clark please come back to me.
The ambulance arrived.
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They brought clark in on a strecher with Lana by his side. Jonhathon and Martha were waiting in the lobby room when they saw Clark they ran by his side.
Nurse: I going to need yall to stay in the waiting room. they took Clark away.
Martha: Lana what happened?
Lana: Me and Clark were going to the library when this guy came and shot clark. lana started crying again.
Martha: Why would he do that to clark?
Martha and Johnathon held each other while Lana went sat and calmed herself down.
Lana decided to sneek into Clarks room without anyone knowing. Lana walked in and saw clark lying on a hospital bed she couldnt help but cry.
Lana: Clark i dont even know if you can hear me but i want you to know that i love you and im here for you no matter what happens i just wanted you to know that.
Clark wakes up and sees Lana by his side and smiles and she smiles back.
All of a sudden Clark flatlines. the doctors walk in. Lana steps outside and is crying even more now hoping Clark is ok.
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Yea i know its a really short update but hope ya like it!
Clana227
10-08-2006, 04:07 PM
Yeah great update, loved how it resmebled Hidden that was one of my favorite Clana episodes
clana_never_give_up
10-08-2006, 04:18 PM
That was so nice, I like this version of Hiiden much better than the original one.
Awesom update. Can't wait for more.
Clarkfan3000
10-08-2006, 07:12 PM
awesome! PPMS
buddy232
11-07-2006, 09:33 AM
Please update!
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