*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-10-2006, 03:25 PM
this takes place during/after extinction and i have sone of the stroy done i will try and update when ever i can
********Smallville high swimming pool*********
Lana is about to have a nice swim in the school pool. she jumps in and hears the water splash after she is in the water.
lana: hello? hello? Blahaahhahaa!!! help Help!!!
lana is about to fasint when she fells let go of and she sees the blood in the water. she loooks to the vents to see a mysterious figure in the vents.
***the next day at school***
Pete: loks like you have a pinch hitter in th hero arena.
Clark: i dont know if I'd call him a hero pete. Im just glad lanas ok.
Pete: yeah, I know. have you seen her?
Clark: Im not exactly the person lana wants to see right now.
there are a whole bunch of people surrounding Jake's locker.
Sherrif Adams: Keep it moving.
Pete: I still cant believe that jake turned Swimfan on Lana.
Chloe: yeah but i dont think that Jake Pollen was exactly your average teenager.
Clark: Why would you say that?
Chloe: other than the meteor rock labled freak laying next his body? You remember thet field trip to crater lake where I so gracefully dropped my keys off the pier?
Pete: Yea i thought you were gonna call the nave SEALS.
Clark:Yeah, Jake fished them out.
Chloe: Right, he was under water for six minuets.
*** 1 hour later at the Talon ***
Lana: hows lex doing?
Clark: Its not like the first time lex has been in the cross-hairs.
Lana: are they sure Van is the killer?
Clark: I am. Lana i know he saved your life, but i dont think that was his intention.
lana: right, it was just a happy accident.
Clark: Im sorry, i didn mean it like that.
Lana: Clark i really thought that i was going to die.
Clark: You've been through worse.
Lana: Yeah, because you've been there to protect me, but i knew you werent coming this time. So when Van showed up, I was just glad that there were others out there like you.
Clark: Hes not like me. Lana you have to see him for what he is, hes a killer. Lana, its okay or you to be mad at the people that try to hurt you but its not fair to take it out on everyone affected by the meteors.
Lana: life would be so much better if the meteors never happended.
Clark shows a look of dissapointment.
Clark: I have to tell you something.
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tbc
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should i continue??
need feedback
********Smallville high swimming pool*********
Lana is about to have a nice swim in the school pool. she jumps in and hears the water splash after she is in the water.
lana: hello? hello? Blahaahhahaa!!! help Help!!!
lana is about to fasint when she fells let go of and she sees the blood in the water. she loooks to the vents to see a mysterious figure in the vents.
***the next day at school***
Pete: loks like you have a pinch hitter in th hero arena.
Clark: i dont know if I'd call him a hero pete. Im just glad lanas ok.
Pete: yeah, I know. have you seen her?
Clark: Im not exactly the person lana wants to see right now.
there are a whole bunch of people surrounding Jake's locker.
Sherrif Adams: Keep it moving.
Pete: I still cant believe that jake turned Swimfan on Lana.
Chloe: yeah but i dont think that Jake Pollen was exactly your average teenager.
Clark: Why would you say that?
Chloe: other than the meteor rock labled freak laying next his body? You remember thet field trip to crater lake where I so gracefully dropped my keys off the pier?
Pete: Yea i thought you were gonna call the nave SEALS.
Clark:Yeah, Jake fished them out.
Chloe: Right, he was under water for six minuets.
*** 1 hour later at the Talon ***
Lana: hows lex doing?
Clark: Its not like the first time lex has been in the cross-hairs.
Lana: are they sure Van is the killer?
Clark: I am. Lana i know he saved your life, but i dont think that was his intention.
lana: right, it was just a happy accident.
Clark: Im sorry, i didn mean it like that.
Lana: Clark i really thought that i was going to die.
Clark: You've been through worse.
Lana: Yeah, because you've been there to protect me, but i knew you werent coming this time. So when Van showed up, I was just glad that there were others out there like you.
Clark: Hes not like me. Lana you have to see him for what he is, hes a killer. Lana, its okay or you to be mad at the people that try to hurt you but its not fair to take it out on everyone affected by the meteors.
Lana: life would be so much better if the meteors never happended.
Clark shows a look of dissapointment.
Clark: I have to tell you something.
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tbc
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should i continue??
need feedback