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*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-12-2006, 08:59 PM
well i havent really writin any of the story yet i just want to give you an idea of wat the story will be like if u guys think that i should write it

ok well here is the prelogue


Clark and Lana had just broken up because Claek said he didnt love Lana so lana is thinking of ways to make clark tell her his secret so.....

========Chloe and lanas dorm=========


"I wish that clark would just tell me his secret already, its not that I am going to die if i knew his secret!"lana told Chloe

"well lana there is a lot you dont know about clark maybe he is just trying to protect you."

"I dont need protection I want to be in the arms of the man that i love!"

"well maybe you should get some sleep, as you know it is 12:30 and I have Classes tommoro."

"ok i will do that, thanks for being a great friend chloe."

"well you are like the sister i never had, so its easy to be a great friend."

"good night chloe."

"night lana."

They turned out the lights and chloe had gone to sleep, but lana however was thinking of a plan to win clarks love and trust.

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well wat do u think, should i post more or not ur feed back inspires me

Venezuelan Lana
08-12-2006, 09:34 PM
yeah! you should definitely post more!!! I'm really interested in this story! PPMS

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-12-2006, 09:46 PM
ok will do i will stay up all night writing the story so i will be done by tommoro morning and please some ideas ion how the story would like to turn out

clana1fan4ever
08-12-2006, 09:47 PM
yeah go for it!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-12-2006, 09:50 PM
will do

maitriniazngurl
08-12-2006, 10:06 PM
Great story!! I think it's very interesting!! :D :D

PPMS!!

emogirl*88
08-12-2006, 11:11 PM
great stuff!

emsfan
08-13-2006, 01:07 AM
great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 08:00 AM
while thinking of plans to win back CLarks love and trust, lana, decides to get a little devious.(shes thinking of lieing to clark saying that she knows his secert already so she could get altlle more info) after thinking of the plan she slowly drifts off to sleep......

**Dream sequence**


Lana is in clarks loft and she is with clark.

"hey lana" clark say to lana in a dissapointed manner

"hi clark, you said you wanted to peak to me about something"

"yea....... i wanted to tell you that i dont think we should see eatch other anymore."

"What!!!!! why ould you want that?"

"because if i let you in it might be dangerous and i couldnt live with myself if got killed because of my secret"

"clark that is my choice to make, at least give me the chance to know you a little better, like telling me you secret"

"im only trying to protect you lana"

"no, look me in the eye and tell me that you dont love me"

Clark turns to face lana and he says

"i dont love you"

** end dream sequence**


Lana wakes up screaming, and chloe comes runnning in.

"lana whats wrong?"

"i just had the nightmare when clark told me he didnt love me"

"oh....you have had that nightmare ever since that day, maybe you just need to talk to him"

"ok, I will do that, but later i need to get some sleep"

"me two i so exaughsted"

"good morning....or night i dont even know what to say considering that it is 4:58"

"same here"

They turn off the lights once more and chloe and lana slepp peacefully for another two hours



========Clarks loft=========

"oh lana i didnt see you there"

"hey clark"

"hey"

(this goes on for another few minutes or so)

"listen clark i know your secret"

"so you that i have super-powers and i arrived in the first meteour shower that killed your parents"

lana takes a few steps back trying to hold the tears in.

"yea I do know"

"look now that you know our secret maybe we should try again......you know, at our relationship?"

"maybe... i dont know, let me think about it"

"ok"

"well see you later clark"


Lana walks out of the loft amazed that she finds out that the man that she loves is an alien that afct that he has super-powers and that that the first meteour shower was used to disguise his arrival on earth.



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well should i continue, your feed back gives me inspirastion

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 08:39 AM
It's really good!! And everything seems like it's going Okay. And I'm glad Lana found out Clark's secret. :D

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 08:48 AM
too bad she had too lie about it

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 08:53 AM
Yeah!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 08:57 AM
hey mai i really like your avi

i will post more soon like in a few hours

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 09:03 AM
Thanks!! I just got it!! And I can't wait for more!!

Btw, did u really stay up all night?? Your truely devoted!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 09:28 AM
yea i went to be at 630 or arounf there i waled up to my bedroom and passed out as soon as i hit the bed

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 09:54 AM
I've never actually pulled an all nighter.. only till about 4:00. You need some sleep!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 10:10 AM
=====in lanas car=====


her cell phone rings and she answers, its lex.she answers in a disgusted voice......

"so lana, i just heard that clark broke up with you?"

"yea he did but we had a nice talk"

"well thats always good"

lana could always tell when someone was lying to her and she had just gotten that felling

"well i guess..."

"so i was thinking that we could go out on a date, you know for dinner"

"lex... I appreciate the offer but i need some time to think things over...ok?"

"ok"

she hangs up the phone and enters the dorm room. she lays out on the bed stretching her legs and arms as long as they can go. then chloe walks in the room.

"so lana, i guess you found out everything?"

"well i guess so i just cant believe that hes an alien the man i love is an alien and the first meteour shower and that meteour shower killed my parents. i mean i know that it isnt his fault, theres no way he can control that and but know i see why he kept it a secret, he kept it a secret because he was afraid that was going to get hurt or i wouldnt approve of him so he would rather let me go know that he still loves me and me living a normal life. But see, i dont want a normal life i want a lfe with clark and he wont let that happen. so i dont know what i should do."


"well i can see why you need some time to think about after all he did try and ask to see if you wanted to try again,didnt he?"

"yea he did"

then lana turned on the radio and as if on cue this song came on and reminded her of clark, everything by life house.

Find Me Here
Speak To Me
I want to feel you
I need to hear you
You are the light
That's leading me
To the place where I find peace again.

You are the strength, that keeps me walking.
You are the hope, that keeps me trusting.
You are the light to my soul.
You are my purpose...you're everything.

How can I stand here with you and not be moved by you?
Would you tell me how could it be any better than this?

You calm the storms, and you give me rest.
You hold me in your hands, you won't let me fall.
You steal my heart, and you take my breath away.
Would you take me in? Take me deeper now?

How can I stand here with you and not be moved by you?
Would you tell me how could it be any better than this?
And how can I stand here with you and not be moved by you?
Would you tell me how could it be any better than this?

Cause you're all I want, You're all I need
You're everything,everything
You're all I want your all I need
You're everything, everything.
You're all I want you're all I need.
You're everything, everything
You're all I want you're all I need, you're everything, everything.

And How can I stand here with you and not be moved by you?
Would you tell me how could it be any better than this?
How can I stand here with you and not be moved by you?
Would you tell me how could it be any better than this?

<background>How can I stand here with you and not be moved by you?
Would you tell me how could it be any better than this?

Would you tell me how could it be any better than this?


and when that song ended her eyes were about to EXPLODE with tears. so she ran to her car in the pouring rain and drove to the kent farm.

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well feed back works guys

emsfan
08-13-2006, 11:09 AM
Is just simply amazing loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 11:29 AM
thanks

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 12:04 PM
Great update!! Loved the song!

PPMS!! :D

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 12:23 PM
on the way to the kent farm lana realized that she had forgotten her cell but she didnt think that it mattered and it didnt.


======***Kent Farm***======


lana knowcks on the house door and no one answers so she decides to go to the loft where she finds clark....


"hey clark"

"hey lana"

"look... I..think that we should get back together"

"REALLY?!?!!!??!!?"

"yes really clark.... you know that i have always loved you ever since that day in the graveyard i have been in love with you, no matter hom many other guys i have dated i have always wanted to be with you"

"really?"

"yes really"

"well i have been in love with you since i was 5... alittle weird huh?"

"well i guess so"

"you I thought you and lex were in a relationship, so i thought you have moved on"

and as if on cue the song "move along" b the all american rejects came on and they burst out laughing

Go ahead as you waste your days with thinking
When you fall everyone sins
Another day and you've had your fill of sinking
With the life held in your
Hands are shaking cold
These hands are meant to hold

Speak to me, when all you got to keep is strong
Move along, move along like I know you do
And even when your hope is gone
Move along, move along just to make it through
Move along
Move along

So a day when you've lost yourself completely
Could be a night when your life ends
Such a heart that will lead you to deceiving
All the pain held in your
Hands are shaking cold
Your hands are mine to hold

Speak to me, when all you got to keep is strong
Move along, move along like I know you do
And even when your hope is gone
Move along, move along just to make it through
Move along
(Go on, go on, go on, go on)

When everything is wrong we move along
(Go on, go on, go on, go on)
When everything is wrong, we move along
Along, along, along

When all you got to keep is strong
Move along, move along like I know you do
And even when your hope is gone
Move along, move along just to make it through
[x3]

(Move along)
(Go on, go on, go on, go on)
Right back what is wrong
We move along

they talk alot more and clark asks if she would like to sleep over..


"so lana do u wanna sleep over just so lex wont know where you are"

"um.....ok i guess so"

so i will take the couch and you take my room"

"no... i will only stay over night with you if we sleep in the same bed and we hold each other"

"ok..... do you want me to get some clothes"

"no i think i will wear one of your shirts if thats ok with you"

"definatly"

Clark said that very exidtley because he thinks that when a girl wears a mans shirt its sexy


****later that night****

Clark and Lana are in bed together and clark is holding lana. oh how he has longed to hold her, and the same with lana. then they decided to explore eatch others tounsels and then they explored every other place on there body, together they were so close its almost like they were one

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 12:29 PM
You just keeping coming up with more aren't you?? Well it's short but nice!

PPMS!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 12:44 PM
hey read again

i accidently posted it

here is the rest

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 12:51 PM
Just did!! Great update!!

So sexy.. loved the song too!!

PPMS!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 01:03 PM
i do like music there will be alot of music in my fics

clana1fan4ever
08-13-2006, 01:11 PM
Great update!!!
PPMS!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 01:17 PM
i will post the next update tonight

maitriniazngurl
08-13-2006, 01:18 PM
Yeah.. I love music.. so there was a tons of songs on my fics.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 01:29 PM
really cuz i didnt see many songs in ur fics

i have 2 more updates for the day so be prepared

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 03:27 PM
After that special night lana had asked clark a question he wishing she would forget about......


"hey clark?"

"yes baby?"

"why wouldnt you make love to me after that summer?"

"well, i was afraid that i would hurt you"

"but we made love before why werent you afraid then?"

"well that summer my real father Jor-El had taken away my powers"

"why would he do that"

"well after the second meteour shower i went to see my father and he said to return to me after i checked up on things here in smallville but i didnt i was with you helping you with the talon and things so he took my powers away from me. and that was when i was finlly able to be intimate with you, it was the best thing that had ever happended to me."

"well that would make sense"

"yea i t would"

Clark then rolled over and turned his radio on and........


"lana have i told you how beutifle you look"

"no i dont think that you have"

"well miss lana lang you are very beautifle"


and then She will be loved from Maroon 5 came on the radio and almost fitted their situation perfectly

Beauty queen of only eighteen
She had some trouble with herself
He was always there to help her
She always belonged to someone else

I drove for miles and miles
And wound up at your door
I've had you so many times but somehow
I want more

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
She will be loved

Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful
I know I tend to get so insecure
It doesn't matter anymore

It's not always rainbows and butterflies
It's compromise that moves us along, yeah
My heart is full and my door's always open
You can come anytime you want

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved

Then clark started to sing the rest of the song to her and she was amazed by how nice his voice was and she started to laugh profusely

I know where you hide
Alone in your car
Know all of the things that make you who you are
I know that goodbye means nothing at all
Comes back and begs me to catch her every time she falls

Tap on my window knock on my door
I want to make you feel beautiful

I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved
And she will be loved

[in the background]
Please don't try so hard to say goodbye
Please don't try so hard to say goodbye

Yeah
[softly]
I don't mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain

Try so hard to say goodbye

Then after their laughing clark had gotten a call from chloe

"hello?"

"hey clark, its chloe"

"oh hey clo wats up?"

"oh well lex just stopped by looking for lana, do you know where she is?"

"ummmmm........ i think so oh wait here she is"

"ok well can i talk to her?"

"of course"

clark had given lana the phone and.....

"hello?"

"hey lana....why are you at clarks house?"

"oh!!....I...kinda...of slept over..?

"WHAT?!!?.....ok did you guys.....you know..."

"well maybe.... why wats up"

"well lex came by looking for you"


sudenlly they saw a black ferrari pull up at the kent farm......



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well i hope you guys liked it.. it was a long update for me feedback helps me if you any ideas that you would like to add to the story plz write back

Nemu
08-13-2006, 03:31 PM
ok ill tell you the same thing i told mai... please use songs in small quantities because it makes the actual updates a lot shorter... (but it is my opinion anyway...)

you have a very interesting story...

PPMS...

clana1fan4ever
08-13-2006, 04:05 PM
Nice update!!!
PPMS!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 05:16 PM
thakns guys

101 post in a week

the more you update the better

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 06:50 PM
"oh my god clark what are we going to do?"

"did you tell lex where we were going to be?"

"no I swear!"

"ok i belive you"

"clark we have to get out of here! lex still thinks that we are broken up!"

"ok get dressed as fast as you can i can fly us out of here."

"ok......wait did you just say you can fly???!!!"

"yes we are going to the kawatche caves"

as soon as they take off lex comes up the stairs to loft and fells a sudden burst of wind and walks away as if nothing

"oh my god clarks...this is amazing. when did you learn to fly."

"i never learned..... i thought of you one night and i had found myself floating so after last night the only thing i could do is think of how wonderfull you are. so thinking of you made me fly."

"wow i didnt know that i could have such an effect on people or aliens"

"well at least you know that am always capaple of doing things that human males cant think of."

"im so glad that i fell in love with you"

"well i kind of didnt have a choice."

"what do you mean"

"well you are just so beautifle that i couldnt take my eyes off you even though i was only five yars old i knew that right then and there that you were the one i want to spend the rest of my life with."

"awww... toddler love"

clark blushed as they reached the kawatche caves and he held his hand up the groove where the octagonal key was supposed to be and they were instantly transported to the FOS.

"Clark where are we??!!"

"well we are in the fortress of solitude"

"how did you know about this?"

"well i built it"

"how did you build this? and why is it so cold?"

"well were in the arctic. cmon i have to show you something"

"wat is it" lana said amazed

"well its an apartment that i made a while back when it was first created"

"so are you saying that......we are going to live here?"

"yes we are only until we throw lex off our trail"

"ok"

"i am going to get some clothes from your dorm, ok?"

"ok, but what about you?"

"well i have had clothes here since i built it so i dont need to back to my house"

"ok"

"stay here i will be back in 30 minuets or so, ok?"

"ok"



====== the dorm room======


"chloe can you help me gather lanas stuff for like a week?"

"of course but why?"

"I took her to the FOS to throw lex off our trail."

"oh I see"


******* FOS *******


"clark your back"

"yes and i brought clothes"

"good......Hey clark?"

"yes?"

"i love you"

"i love you to lana... more than you will ever know."


********==== back at the kent farm ====********

lana was still amazed at the fact that they had stayed in a ice place for a week with nothing but themselves, and they had been intimate

"hey clark im going to get a pregnacy test..ok?"

" definalty, i will come with you"

"deal......lets go to the market"


======at the market======


"hey clark come here"

"yea?"

"i found one"

"lets go checkout ok?"

"yea i feel like were being watched... i want to leave."


little did they know was that they were being watched and from afar.


======kent farm======

"hey clark it would be better if i did this alone"

" hey dont worry i get the point, i will leave to give you some privacy."

"thank you clark"

====1 hour later====

it had been the longest hour of clark and lanas life. finally with the results....


"CLARK COME HERE QUICK"

he superspeeds to the bathroom....

"wat is it lana?!"

"clark...I...a..am...pre..pregnant!"



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i hoped you liked it alot it was pretty long

feed back inspires me

clana1fan4ever
08-13-2006, 06:54 PM
awsome update!!! I think Lex was the one watching them....
PPM!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 06:59 PM
hey do u even like my story cause if you dont i will stop writing

let me guess your name is miesha right?

clana1fan4ever
08-13-2006, 07:50 PM
i do like ur story
yeah that is my name

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 08:36 PM
thats good because ur the only peson that seems to like it

Nemu
08-13-2006, 08:49 PM
it is a very interesting story... and since you update often it is good...

so PPMS...

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 09:18 PM
I AM WORKING opn a update now

Venezuelan Lana
08-13-2006, 10:02 PM
WOW!!! I missed a lot of updates today!!!! Your story's amazing!!!! PPMS!!!

happycamper
08-14-2006, 12:53 AM
It's hard to keep up with the volume of your updates...:p

Great story so far, although I was wondering why Lana and Clark thought they had to run from Lex?

Lana is pregnant - not a big surprise :( given what they've probably spending their time doing while at the FOS. :) But what are they going to do now? :(


:D :D


PS - did write a response to your comment on 'Sacrifice'. I guess that our definitions of what constitutes Clana just differ. :)

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 09:01 AM
i guess your right

Amazed at these words Clark cant but help wonder how??

“wow Lana this is great”

“I know I cant wait for it to be born”

“we should call Chloe…if its alright with you I would want her to be the god mother of our child”

“well Clark I think that, that is a wonderful idea”

“ok well I am going to go call her and I think that you should get some rest”

“and again I totally agree with you”

“Lana…..I am so glad that this has happened to us.”

“me too”

“I love you Clark Kent”

“oh but I love you so much more Lana Lang.”


Lana did not know the surprise that she had coming for her that night….the whole Lana Lang business was about to change… hopefully.

“Chloe its me Clark!”

“oh hey Clark”

“I have big news for you.”

“you do???”

“yea I need you to take Lana out to go shopping for one of two reasons…”

Chloe at this point is dying to know what the reason is

“what is Clark!!!??”

“well first she is pregnant.”

Chloe’s mouth is dropped to floor at this time

“and im going to ask her to marry me”

“of course I will help you Clark….but you owe me big time for this.”

“well get ready for this you are going to be the god parent of our child”

Chloe squeals in happiness almost well…. Like a pig…so Clark being Clark couldn’t help but chuckle at this noise

“wow Clark Im honored”

“you shouldn’t be…. You have always been there when I needed you most so I am grateful to have you in my life”

“well this has to be the greatest moment in my life…..so far”

“what’s that supposed to mean?

“well I havent lived a full life yet clark”

“no problem I understand.”

“good so will be there in an hour and 30 minutes, ok?”

“of course.”


They hang up the phone, and clark is going to tell lana that chloe is going to take her shopping…….

“hey lana, are you awake?”

“yeah I am.”

“ok well get dressed, chloe is taking you shopping.”

“awesome!”

“then we are going to have a wonderful dinner that I will make, and we will eat it up in the loft!”

“sounds like magic”

“hopefully it will magic, but first I think that we should snuggle, if you know hat im saying.”

“oohhhh I like them frisky!”

“well then you are going to enjoy this a lot”

“I know I will.”



They explore eatch other in way that they have been doing a lot lately, but every different time seems like anew.



******** At the Mall ********


"chloe do you think that this looks good"

"lana anything tight on you looks good"


And a certain someone with a very shiny head also agrees. Lex soon realizes that lana got back with clark. considering that they were both gone for a week so Lex just put the pieces together......


"hey.... nemu i need you to watch over some people."

"yea what ever you need lex"

"their names are Clark Kent and Lana Lang."

"yup i got their names...... now what kind of surveilence do you want me to do?"

"i just want them watched and to know what their doing at all times."

"this can be done with ease.... and what exactly is the profit for this job?"

"I will give you $2000 a day, sound good?"

"deal..... when do you want me to start"

"when i call you back, that is when you start."

"ok sounds good."


Lex hangs up the phone with Nemu. But little did lex know was that Chloe and Lana were watching him from the floor below him.


"I hope that scumbag isnt making the call i think he is"

"i hope not either, lana.... that man deserves to die."

"lets leave and maybe we can tell clark what we think lex is up too."

"yeah lets head over to my place and well call clark."

"yea good idea"
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Mean while Clark was at the jewlery store buying a ring for lana to ask her to marry him after he found the perfect one he is about to get in the car and when he recieves a phone call that he will not like at all.

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I hope you guys like it the next update will be about the ohone call and the dinner and nemu and the engagement and lex being evil and wanting lana

Nemu
08-14-2006, 10:57 AM
please never associate my name to the bald bastard... please!!!!

unless you plan on using that character to destroy Baldy...

I could see it in this story... oh what a grandiose thing it would be...

now... PPMS!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 11:01 AM
well lex is gonna be killed but there will be a new bady not baldy bady so prepare



and nemu ur character is gonna help destroy him

bady: like a bad guy

Nemu
08-14-2006, 11:24 AM
thank you

buddy232
08-14-2006, 11:57 AM
Good!

Update!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 12:53 PM
no problem i will update in a few hours

off to play kingdom hearts 2

maru11
08-14-2006, 04:01 PM
great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 04:22 PM
i will update in the next hour or so

maru11
08-14-2006, 04:27 PM
mas bienn!!!!!!!!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 04:32 PM
huh wat was that

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 06:05 PM
i will update soon i am having writers block

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 09:43 PM
"hello?" as clark aswers his phone.

"hello, Clark Kent?"

"this is he"

"hello my name is Nemu and i was just hired by a certain lex luthor to spy on you and miss Lana Lang."

"ok..... why are you calling me?"

"i just wanted to tell you that he will think that i am spying on you, but i wont be."

"why arent you getting paid to do this?"

"well yes i am but i want you to know that i will not be spying on you!!" Nemu said getting a little agry

"dude cool your jets!" says clark not realizing how much he sounds like bart.

"ok, just listen to me i want you to play into lex."

"ok"

"and i will tell you on what to do, just call me back on this number"

"gotcha... now if you will excuse me i have a very big day ahead of me. Tank you ...nemu"

"glad to help."


Now as clark is off to plan for his date with lana he goes to the chinese resurant and gets the peking duck, some egg foo yung, and some chow mein.... And the most beautifle dress you have ever seen in your life


"hey mom... i need you to do me a favor."

"sure clark what it is?"

"when lana gets home from the mall with chloe... i need you to prevent lana from going outside at all costs"

"may i ask why?"

"im am setting up a nice dinner date with lana, and i going to ask her to marry me"

"wow....... ok i will try very hard to keep her from doing so."

"oh and can you also send her up to my room she something to wear so i bought her this dress that will blow your mind away"


so lana returns home with chloe and realizes that she is gonna need time to get ready so she says.....

"hey lana i would love to join you but i have some things at the daily planet that i need to take care of"

"dont worry i will be cool"

"good see you later"

"later clo"

the moment lana opens the door she is greeted by martha

"oh lana, clark has a suprise waiting for you on the bed of his room he wants you to go try it on."

"ok"

==== clarks bedroom ====


"man clark sure knows me pretty well, its a perfect fit"

just then martha gets a call from clark on the house phone and martha quickly answers it and says

" hey clark are you ready"

"yea... send lana to the loft"

as he says this lana comes down from clarks bedroom...


"wow lana you look amazing"

"well thank you do you know where clarks is?"

"yes actually i do, hes in the loft... waitin for you"


===== the loft =====

"wow lana you look amazing"

"and the same with you, Mr.Kent"

"why thank you miss lang"


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i will update on the marriage tomorro

i hope you guys liked it

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 11:24 PM
man dont hold back on the feedback or anything

emsfan
08-15-2006, 08:54 AM
loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

clana1fan4ever
08-15-2006, 09:23 AM
Nice update!!
Update soon!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-15-2006, 10:46 AM
i will update later i need some inspiration so please a little help and ideas?

treker
08-15-2006, 02:00 PM
Lex's head on a stick?

clana1fan4ever
08-15-2006, 02:54 PM
Originally posted by treker
Lex's head on a stick?
haha i like that idea:rotfl:

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-15-2006, 06:50 PM
"wow clark this is amazing did you do this your self?"

"no i had a little help from chinatopia it was really easy."

"wow!!! how did you know that chinese food was my favorite?"

"lucky guess"


After dinner clark cleans the loft superspeed style and asks lana a question... he gets down on one knee and....


"lana lang, love of my life. will you dance with me?"

then clark put a cd in the disc player and the song iris by the Goo Goo dolls plays


And I'd give up forever to touch you
'Cause I know that you feel me somehow
You're the closest to heaven that I'll ever be
And I don't want to go home right now

And all I can taste is this moment
And all I can breathe is your life
'Cause sooner or later it's over
I just don't want to miss you tonight

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And you can't fight the tears that ain't coming
Or the moment of truth in your lies
When everything feels like the movies
And you bleed just to know you're alive

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

"i love you clark"

"i love you lana"

(break and solo)

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am

After the song ends they share a deep and passionate kiss and then clark gets on one knee and again asks her a question....

"lana lang love of my life... i have loved you since i layed eyes on you at the age of 5, i took one look at you and thought she is the gilr i am going to spend the rest of my life with..... will you marry me?"

lana taken aback by this question anwers...

"i...i...i would love to marry you clark!"

"he almost squelas like lana does at the answer of this question.

"YES!!!"

"i love you clark"

"oh, but i love you so much more."


****** 2 days later at the luthor masion *******


Lex luthor recives an interesting phone call....from a certain someone named....nemu


"hello" answers lex

"hey lex its nemu."

"is there a problem nemu to be calling me?!"

"yes lex.. my machines have broken down... i cannot spy on them until next week."

"that is fine i hope you get it done thats all"

"will do and thank you"

"no problem just get the job done"

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i hope you like i have had no ispiration latley and im hoping i can make this story the way you want it so plz leave feedback

emogirl*88
08-15-2006, 07:03 PM
i loved it!

maitriniazngurl
08-15-2006, 07:44 PM
good update!!

PPMS!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-15-2006, 08:48 PM
thanks school starts tmmoro for me so i wont be on until 4pm eastern love the feedback

clana1fan4ever
08-15-2006, 08:50 PM
Great update!!!

emsfan
08-16-2006, 11:55 AM
nice update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-16-2006, 02:37 PM
woking on an update

<Nimrod>
08-16-2006, 05:21 PM
Okay I'm going to tell you two words <which happen to be two of my most favorite words>...anyway here it is...UPDATE and CLANA

Update- cause I need you to update:D

Clana- cause I mean come on...Clana's sweetness speaks for itself:rolleyes:


||UPDATE||

Nemu
08-16-2006, 06:01 PM
lol Nimrod... too true...

Well... I might have come up with some better reason thana material defect but it is good... he should stage something with them like a break up or something just to draw baldy out...

PPMS :D

happycamper
08-16-2006, 06:12 PM
Very Nice!

Is Lex's agent who I think it is? :p

And why didn't he ask? :lol:

Looking forward to your next post!



:D :D

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-16-2006, 06:52 PM
hey guys im grounded... my mom said that i can write cause i spend too much time on the computer so i will update tomorro!!

-clanafan99210

<Nimrod>
08-17-2006, 01:08 PM
^Sucks that you're grounded:( ...BUT it's awesome that you're going to update soon:lol:


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*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-17-2006, 05:15 PM
sorry guys im working on an update but it wont be until later that i get to post im still grounded rfom the computer and i am sneaking on right now but even though im grounded i can always look at my desktop heres the link just look at kristin she is so beautifle and thats what i have been looking at all day long

i swear to you guys i think im in love with her i mean ive met her before she got the cutest little accent and she has the most beautifle eyes ever and her nose really krinkles up when she laughs or gets serious. her hair is the most beautilfe locks that i have ever seen. and her body oh man she is soooo hot...she is perfect in every way that ive seen at least *has michievious grin on face*

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-18-2006, 02:09 PM
im updateing later today

<Nimrod>
08-19-2006, 09:35 PM
^Aww it does sound like your in love:lol:, but then again who doesnt love Kristin ...but anyway its nice to know your going to be updating soon:)


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*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-22-2006, 06:04 AM
yuo have no idea she is perfect in everyway and i am i love with her

sooooo BOOYA

Jersey Girl
08-22-2006, 07:54 AM
just started reading the story....its great
keep posting
im dieing to see what happens

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-24-2006, 02:25 PM
i will update when i get the chance

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-05-2006, 04:47 PM
~*~*~*~*~*~* The loft ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

3 months later
lana has the very same powers as clark does and she is using them ......ALOT!!! clark and lana make love twice a day and she is loving every minute of spending time with clark and the baby. they have named the the baby Kal Jonathan Kent.

******* Lex's mansion**********

nemu and lex are having a "creative disscussion" while just as nemu is saying something a big alien spaceship comes crashing through the fairly big window in lexs' office.

"holy choclate starfish!!!'' says Nemu

lex is keeping his cool bcuz he knows who they are: Zod and Braniac.

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dum da dum dum DUM!!!

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thats all i have for now off to read

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-07-2006, 09:57 AM
i am at school on this site that is soooo leet