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DeVinde
07-28-2006, 12:58 AM
Hi, for all of you that don't know, I'm not new to these forums, just a silent or more accuratly used word "lazy" reader. I've finally decided to put up some ideas of a story I might create if anyone is intrigued by them.
Anyhow, this story's only true connection to the tv show of smallville is it's characters and points of interest. I've varied certain characters and their attributes.
And finally my ideas:
-Clark Kent chooses to play football as a quaterback on a one year scholarship to the University Of Miami (Heard he liked this school, don't recall from which episode though, not an avid watcher)
-Pete Ross decides that he'd rather go to the University Of Miami to be with his best friend then go to Met U.
-Lex Luthor hears about Pete's predicament with raising money for going to the college of his choice, so offers to pay all of Pete's tution, dorm, and meal plan fees for as many semesters as he'd like as a final offer of friendship.
-Chloe Sullivan decides she'd rather stay near home and goes to Met U and chooses to have a random dorm partner who she quickly becoems best friends with named
-Lana Lang who is an attractive girl currently dating Dan Elrod the star defensive linemen of Met U's football team.
All of them will be freshmen except for Lex Luther and Dan Elrod who will be a sophmore. Met U is ranked #1 in the preseason with Miami going in at #3.
Please tell me if you like my ideas, if I should continue and write the story. Most importantly, I haven't had a chance to read all the fanfictions so if you find any of my ideas to resemble one of your stories too closely, then tell me and I'll have it changed! :D
CLANAobsessed
07-28-2006, 11:59 AM
sounds like a great start, but there is Clana right??
maru11
07-28-2006, 12:23 PM
sounds interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeVinde
07-28-2006, 12:38 PM
Of course there's Clana, but like any great novel, there must be a conflict!
P.S. I'll post my first installment as soon as I can.
tygershot
07-28-2006, 12:46 PM
I'm up for it! Bring it on!
maru11
07-28-2006, 12:48 PM
yeaaahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
maitriniazngurl
07-28-2006, 01:54 PM
Cool!! Sounds interesting!! Can't wait to read the story post it soon DeVinde.
clana1fan4ever
07-28-2006, 01:55 PM
im up for it too post it!!!
lanalang1234
07-28-2006, 02:41 PM
yea totally just bring clana sooner than normal because i need my clana fix bad with a new story that will catch my intrest so plz post soon
DeVinde
07-28-2006, 04:30 PM
Chapter One
Pete: Hey my man! Heard ya got the starting quarterback position and you’re a freshman, remember me when you’re acceptin’ your trophies.
Clark turned around staring at Pete with an amused look in his eyes.
Clark: Oh you mean all those times that you told every woman on campus about how you sent me through ‘grueling’ football exercises?
Pete: Hey man, some girls like the man who’s in power, but I’ll be willing to rake in all the ones who like the man behind the power.
Clark: Sometimes I think you should be the one playing football, I mean, can you repeat the entire offensive and defensive playbook for me again? I mean, I’m sure all the ladies love your acute description of which way the linemen should be positioned doing a HB Slam.
Pete playfully sent a punch to Clark’s shoulder.
Pete: Ha ha, well excuse me that I can’t just lift up my shirt and have the entire female population bow down to me.
Clark: Well, I think I’ve learned my lesson on that after jogging shirtless one morning and finding twenty women have a simultaneous decision to go jogging right behind me that morning.
Pete: I don’t get it man, you have this entire campus in the palm of your hand, you’re invited to every single party here and every woman on this campus hits on you whenever they can. Yet, you just smile politely at them and never show any interest. I mean what human won’t take at least one of them in?
Clark smirked at the irony of Pete’s last sentence. They’ve been friends since they were little kids. Yet, Clark’s always felt that Pete would have a tough time handling his secrets so he’s always kept them within him, his parents, and his other best friend, Chloe Sullivan.
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A sharp knocking was heard across Chloe’s makeshift office in the back of her dorm.
Chloe: Come in, the door’s open!
Lana: Hey Chloe, I hope I’m not interrupting anything.
Chloe: How many times do I need to tell you Lana? My room is your room. So what brings sleeping beauty to my room so early on a Saturday morning?
Lana grinned sheepishly and glanced over at the clock.
Lana: It’s only one, give me some slack! I’m sorry my body doesn’t Awaken seven in the morning every single day like yours.
Chloe: Well you know they’ve invented these things called alarm clocks? They go ring, ring, ring till you wake up?
Lana: Shhhhh! Those are only made for class days. Anyhow I came by because Dan gave me his family seats for this season, and there’s still an extra seat. Was wondering if you’d like to come to the games with me?
Chloe: Well I’ve never exactly been a huge football fan, but I’d love to accompany you to some of the games. The first one is next Saturday right?
Lana: Yeah, but it’s out of town. The second one is at home though, I’ll pick you up?
Chloe: Yeah, sure. Anyhow who are they playing at that game? Gotta make sure I don’t accidentally wear clothes that make it look like I’m supporting the other team.
Lana: Let me see, I have a schedule in my purse.
Lana reaches into her purse and ruffles through it for a second before finding the schedule.
Lana: Aha! It’s the University of Miami.
Chloe: Hey, I have a couple of friends who go to that school; maybe I can give them an excuse to come visit me.
Chloe grinned at herself, knowing that Clark has to come, rather he wants to or not and that Pete wouldn’t be far behind.
Ok, post comments, ideas, suggestions, whatever you want about the story! Just give me an idea of what y'all think!
devoted2clark
07-28-2006, 06:13 PM
cool! PPMS!!!!
maru11
07-28-2006, 08:41 PM
great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
clana1fan4ever
07-28-2006, 11:16 PM
nic start!!!
PPMS!!
ajfinn
07-29-2006, 08:56 AM
Welcome to the madness of writing Clana, DeVinde!! :) Looking forward to reading more of your story :D
deanyouk
07-29-2006, 09:39 AM
post more soon...
clana4ev3r
07-29-2006, 11:27 AM
Great start, I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Update more soon!! :D :D
treker
07-29-2006, 11:36 AM
Originally posted by ajfinn
Welcome to the madness of writing Clana, DeVinde!! :) Looking forward to reading more of your story :D
madness? did she say madness??? <begin evil laugh> :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
devoted2clark
07-29-2006, 01:45 PM
its a great story!!! please continue!!!
DeVinde
07-29-2006, 03:12 PM
Chapter Two
Lana: Whew, glad I found you Chloe. I’ve been running around greeting all of Dan’s friends at this party.
Chloe took a sip from her drink and laughed.
Chloe: Well, that’s why I stick to my corner. Not a big fan of holding a conversation with a bunch of jock straps.
Lana: Why’d you even come here though? You rarely ever make an appearance at these parties.
Chloe: Well you know how a few players from the away team always get invited? Seems to be a small world.
Lana nodded her head at Chloe.
Chloe: Well, I decided to use that as an excuse to invite Clark and Pete, I’m sure they can snake their way in here.
Lana: Yeah, I can’t wait to meet your friends. You haven’t stopped talking about them since I mentioned us playing Miami. Where are all the guys from Miami anyway?
Chloe: Usually the away team huddle around each other. Don’t want to get lost in the crowd and get hurt before the big game, eh?
As Chloe finished her sentence two guys strolled through the doors. One was about her height and had a giant grin on his face as he walked over to the Miami players and slapped each of their hands. Lana then glanced at the other one who was about 6’3 and had this great black hair. The thing she most noticed about him though was how his blue T seemed to mold around his muscles.
Chloe noticed Lana’s attention divert over to the door and grinned when she saw Clark and Pete stroll in. She then laughed quietly at how long Lana’s been staring at Clark.
Chloe: Earth to Lana! I’m sure Dan’s going love seeing you gawking at someone from Miami.
Lana snapped out of her trance as her cheeks became a slight hue of red.
Lana: I was.. um.. just… looking over at the clock.. yeah.
Chloe rolled her eyes at Lana and smirked again when she saw Clark approaching. Lana became even more flustered and looked away when she saw he was heading straight toward them.
Clark: Chloe! It’s so good to see you!
He said while gripping her in a death tight hug.
Chloe: Hey Clark, how’s life in Miami? By the way, meet my friend/dorm partner, Lana Lang.
Clark shot out his hand and flashed her what Chloe calls the Kent Charm Smile. He noticed the girl become flustered even more as she stuck out her hand to shake his. This is the first time he saw her face. He gasped to himself a little noticing how beautiful she was. The way her raven black hair whipped around as she gave me a small smile. He noticed how good she looked in the cream spaghetti strap top she was wearing. Her curves perfectly seen in the denim jeans she was wearing.
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While over in a different corner of the party
Dan: Man, my girl looks smokin’ hot tonight. Don’t ya think so Sam?
Sam: Yeah, so when are you going pull her into your bed?
Dan: Every time I bring it up, she comes up with some excuse. I’m getting tired of it so I think I might slip somethin’ into her drink tonight. Ya know, get her a little tired? Then it’ll be all easy from there.
Sam sent him a high five while grinning.
Sam: That’s my man! But, hey man, why does she and that dude standing next to the reporter chick keep glancing at each other? Every time they lock eyes though, they start doing something else.
Dan: What? You know what no more waiting. I’m going over and slipping it into her drink right now. Once she gets tired I’ll escort her back to my room.
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Dan: Hey babe, havin’ a good time?
Lana: Hey Dan, yeah was wondering where you were.
Dan: Oh, I was just talking to Sam about some um guy stuff.
Clark glanced down at where Lana put down her drink to notice Dan slip something into her drink which dissolved quickly. He looked up wondering if Lana noticed, and she was too busy talking.
Dan: Hey babe, I’m going go refill my drink. How ‘bout you finish yours and I’ll go get you another one?
Lana: Well, I’m not that thirsty but-
Clark: Hey! I’m pretty thirty! How bout I finish it!
He drank down the entire thing before anyone could protest or respond.
Clark: Good stuff, good stuff!
Chloe leaned up to whisper something in his ear.
Chloe: Smooth move, now they’re looking at you like you’re a bit strange..
Clark: Well I um.. I saw-
Chloe: Don’t worry, I saw him slip the stuff into her drink too. I’d know your heroics would act up and you would do something about it. You never let the smallest thing slip around you.
Clark: You act like he’s done this before.
Chloe: Yeah, he’s always pulling stuff like this. He’s just a jock strap horndog. He goes through girlfriends faster then your family goes through trucks. Lana’s nice… just a bit naïve.
Dan knew that somehow that Clark must have saw him put the drugs in her drink. Dan was starting to lose opinion of Clark. The fact that he keeps checkin’ out his girlfriend is getting on his nerves. So he walked toward the refreshment table only to turn and lock eyes with Clark and shoot him a venomous look and mouth out “It’s coming to you on Saturday. I’m going break every bone in your body.”
Post comments and suggestions! Anything you want to say about my story! :D
maitriniazngurl
07-29-2006, 03:39 PM
I've got to say it's Great!! Your story definitly's got my interest. And I love the whole thing about Dan thinking he can crush Clark.. I'd like to see him break every bone in his body!! :D :D
deanyouk
07-29-2006, 03:45 PM
I'm liking ur story, its good to see something new thats actually good on here....
No offence to some people...
lanalang1234
07-29-2006, 04:01 PM
u should make clark break every bone in his hand so he cant throw the ball and because he tried to drug lana that bastard
200th POST YAY WOOT WOOT
maru11
07-29-2006, 04:52 PM
awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like the way clark protect lana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeVinde
07-29-2006, 06:33 PM
Spoilers For Next Update:
Dan becomes suspicious of Clark after seeing him lift up the side of an SUV to pick up something he dropped under it
A surprise happens doing the football game (Miami Hurricanes at Met U)
Clark is exploring Metropolis one night and finds Lana being mugged in an alleyway.
P.S. Does the Met U in any superman story have a mascot? And if so, what is it?
Kryptonite 1
07-29-2006, 07:50 PM
They are called Met U Bulldogs since you wated to know
DeVinde
07-29-2006, 10:28 PM
Thanks for the info Kryptonite_1! You'll all soon learn I'm not that smart.. Can't even recall which episode I got the whole Miami Hurricanes thing from.
P.S. What's Buffering? (Not Kidding) :p
closetfan
07-30-2006, 12:27 AM
Spoilers For Next Update:
Dan becomes suspicious of Clark after seeing him lift up the side of an SUV to pick up something he dropped under it
jeez clark didnt know u could be that stupid u BDA!!
lol cant wait
maitriniazngurl
07-30-2006, 08:14 AM
Oh.. Can't wait for an update!! And Clark!! lifting a truck up to get something?? I mean if it's to impress a girl... that's one thing.. but to get something??? Anyways PPMS
And I have to say your story is really great!! I really like how you have her with a horrible boyfriend, getting save by Clark, and stuff. :D
DeVinde
07-30-2006, 11:49 AM
Chapter Three
Dan is walking back to his dorm after the party
‘I’m going rip that guy to shreds next Saturday. No one gets between me and my girlfriend!’
As Dan turned the corner he saw Clark standing next to a SUV talking to someone on his cell phone.
Clark: Chloe, you really need to stop talking about this on the phone. Think about if someone heard you!
Dan jumped behind a car in the row next to where Clark was standing.
‘I think I’m just going jump this guy, once he gets off the phone, bam! He’s done for the week.’
Dan watched anxiously waiting for Clark to end his phone call.
Clark was nodding into his phone when it slipped out of his hand and bounced under the SUV.
Clark: Whoops… One second Chlo’ dropped the phone.
Dan noticed Clark glance around in every direction wondering what he could be looking for.
‘What the heck?!’
Dan gasped in surprise when Clark placed his hand behind his back and tilted the SUV on two wheels, reaching under to retrieve his phone and return the SUV onto all four wheels.
Clark: Sorry bout that Chlo’ anyway what were we ta-
Clark instinctively tuned his super hearing in the direction where he thought he heard something. It sounded like a scurry of footsteps, but he shrugged it off saying it was probably just a squirrel.
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Dan: Dude, I saw it with my own eyes! He lifted up the side of an SUV with one hand! I think he might have somehow got our stuff! Sam, he must know the same people we do!
Sam: You’re being irrational, man. He’s from Miami, the junk we put in those doses come from Smallville. All those meteor things are from over a decade ago. There’s no way. I mean most of the rocks have scattered by now. The town got picked clean by LexCorp. The only rocks left are out in the woods and in deep gashes in the land. Anyway, I looked over at him when he yawned and his shirt lifted. No green scar on his waist.
Dan: …Were you checking him out?
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Chloe: So Lana… what’d you think of Clark?
Chloe was bemused that how whenever his name got mentioned Lana would become flustered and start fumbling with something.
Lana: Um.. I don’t know. I only saw him for a second. He uh seemed like a nice guy.
Chloe: Yeah, yeah.. I guess all those sideway glances in his direction were to see if the refreshment table was getting restocked, huh?
Chloe let out a grin that went from ear to ear as she saw Lana slip and her entire face turned beet red.
Chloe: Smoke’s going come out of your ears, if you get anymore redder my friend. Anyway, the game’s about to start. Wouldn’t want to miss scoping out the other team’s offence, right?
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“And Announcing True Freshman Quarterback, CLARK KENT! At 6’3, 200 pounds, he’s expected to lead Miami to a great season! Clark ran out onto the field. There was nothing compared to hearing his name called for the first time in front of a live audience. He waved at where the group of Miami fans was, cheering at him.
Miami won the coin toss and opted to have the ball first. The kick soared out of the end zone so they were placed on the 20 yard line.
Clark: Ok guys, we’re going hit them hard in the first play. You remember your routes on the Deep Cut play? Good! Break!
Clark ran behind the center and grunted as he felt a slight bit of discomfort wondering what it was. He just shook it off as nerves as he looked up and saw Dan Elrod pointing to the ground and mouthing out “You’re going down bud”
Clark hiked the ball and ran backwards, faking a handoff to the tailback which one of the defensive linemen bit and tackled him. Clark ran to the side waiting for one of his wide receivers to get open, and spun around a linebacker who blitzed. Clark saw Dan Elrod toss an offensive lineman to the side and started charging him. Clark decided to wait to throw the ball as Dan Elrod was coming toward him. He wanted to prove to Dan that breaking his bones wasn’t going be as easy as Dan would hope. Using his powers for a split second surely wouldn’t be noticed. Dan grinned as he squared his shoulder with Clark’s stomach and rammed it into his gut. Clark grunted as he felt himself lift into the air and hit the ground with a sickening thud as he felt the ball slip out of his grasp before a part of his body hit the ground. He turned and saw Dan running off with the ball into their end zone. All the Met U fans started cheering at a defensive touchdown while the Miami fans ooohed at Clark’s limp body on the ground.
Clark stood up shaking off his head as he felt a bone fracture mend it’s self back together.
‘What the.. He’s only wearing his uniform, how could my invulnerability just disappear like that? There’s no Kryptonite on him.’
The rest of the first half went the same way. Dan was somehow overpowering his aura and resulted in constant problems for Clark and the Miami offence. Dan mysteriously went out with stomach problems at the beginning of the third quarter and Clark brought his team on a miraculous comeback. They still lost 38-31 though.
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Clark was walking around the town that night with a million questions flowing through his head.
‘How did Dan do that? Is there something Kyrptonian about him? How am I going face the team after embarrassing them the first half? Did anyone notice my sudden hot streak happened right after Dan left the game? How did Dan get a mysterious stomach illness halfway through the game? Why did-‘
His thoughts were suddenly interrupted as he heard a scream come from the alleyway. He snapped out of his trance and super sped around the corner.
Thug: Stupid Girl, tell me where your little boyfriend is keeping the meteor rocks! They rightfully belong to us! We know him and his friends have some!
Girl: I don’t know what you’re talking about.. Please… Stop this! Please!
Clark turned into the alleyway right as he heard a sickening thud and feet scampering away. He ran into the alley and saw blood on the wall and looked down into her face and noticed she looked familiar.
‘Hey that’s Chloe’s friend! Lana Lang!’
He made his way over to her to make sure she was out cold and sped her to the hospitial.
Like always, comments, suggestions, and anything else to do with the story are appreciated!
:D
deanyouk
07-30-2006, 12:08 PM
good update
emogirl*88
07-30-2006, 01:06 PM
great update!
ajfinn
07-30-2006, 01:15 PM
Originally posted by DeVinde
P.S. What's Buffering? (Not Kidding) :p
You might have been reading some older stories to see some "buffering." Don't worry about it now, we no longer need to buffer updates (over 10,000 characters) because k-site changed the post length to 50,000 charaters.
Now ....... if you're 4EverSmallville, or Cardinal ......... they may still need to buffer their updates :lol: Well, that is if 4EVERSMALLVILLE WOULD UPDATE :p
Keep up the good work, DeVinde :D
maitriniazngurl
07-30-2006, 06:06 PM
Ohh!! Great update!! so Dan's on Kryptonite drugs?? This is so much more interesting!!
PPMS!!
devoted2clark
07-30-2006, 09:01 PM
kewl!!!! PPMASAP!
DeVinde
07-30-2006, 10:47 PM
Chapter Four
Lana woke up with a start, wondering where she was. She swept her eyes around the room she was in noticing the bland wallpaper that covered the walls. Her eyes stopped dead on a man who was standing next to her bed with a concern look in his eyes.
‘Am I dead? There’s an angel standing above me.’
She winced and reached her hand upward resting it on a bandage wrapped around her forehead as a slightly throbbing headache endured. She started to pull off the bandage when a voice cut across her thoughts.
Clark: Hey now! You don’t want to pull that off. It has quite a few blood stains on it. It’s what stopping the flow anyhow.
She jerked her hand back and looked up at him noticing the cutest smile she’s ever seen and couldn’t help but smile back at him.
Lana: Who, who are you? Where am I?
Clark: You’re in the Metropolis hospital. I found you in an alleyway with some blood on the wall and rushed you over here. My name is Clark Kent, a friend of Chloe’s.
She mumbled to herself when he said that as thoughts from earlier that night flooded into her head. She remembered she went into a diner to grab a quick bite. She walked out and next thing she knew she was in an alleyway getting interrogated by men in black ski masks about her boyfriend. She didn’t know what they wanted and they didn’t believe her so they slammed her head against the wall and she passed out.
He noticed the discomforted look that spread across her face she he reached down and wrapped his hand around one of hers. She felt her heart flutter and stop for a second when his hand wrapped around hers.
Clark: Don’t worry you’ll be fine. A couple of stitches it all you need. Nothing too serious.
She didn’t respond and was just staring at their hands interlaced and he quickly took his out. He started muttering an apology and thought he saw a frown for a split second after he took his hand out of hers but shrugged it off.
They sat there in a muted silence for a few minutes before a girl with short blond hair barged into the room breathless.
Chloe: Clark, I came over as soon as I got your message. Lana, are you ok?!
Chloe looked down at Lana with a hint of sadness in her eyes and Lana spit out a bunch of random words before producing a coherent response.
Lana: Yeah, I’m fine. One moment I’m walking out of a diner the next moment I’m in a hospital bed with a bandage wrapped around my bloody head. Nothing too serious though.
After a couple of minutes exchanging small talk Chloe mentioned she needed to leave.
Clark: Hey, I think I’m going take off with Chloe, you going be ok here on your own?
Lana smiled meekly up at him and told him she’d be fine, it was only a small gash though other thoughts went through her head.
‘No, I don’t want you to leave. Stay here and put my hand in yours again, please? Wait, what am I doing? I have a boyfriend who loves me. I shouldn’t have these type of thoughts going through my head. I mean, I just met this guy!’
Chloe and Clark hopped up and Clark flashed his smile back at her and saw a slight hue of pink appear on her neck as he walked out.
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Chloe: Did you notice that she seemed sort of..
Clark: Dazed? Confused? It’s weird. It was only a small cut and mild concussion. Shouldn’t have her dizzy.
Chloe: Almost like she was saying one thing and had her thoughts on something else.
Clark: Probably just thinking about what happened to her.
Chloe: What did happen to her?
Clark: I really don’t know. I was walking and heard a scream, ran into an alleyway and found her slumped against the wall with a blood stain on the wall.
Chloe: Hmmm. I’m kind of guessing she wasn’t just taking a Saturday night stroll in the alleyway and happened to trip and hit her head on the wall. Anyhow, what are the chances of you being there?
Clark: Yeah well, I was just strolling around town thinking about the game.
Chloe: I’ve never understood you Clark. You could be out partying with a million fans of yours, yet you choose the night to stroll through city?
Clark: We lost… I’m not going get any recognition for that, except maybe to get booed at.
Chloe: Oh come on Clark... Met U was ranked number one. Met U is amazing this year! They were voted preseason to slaughter any team they play. You brought your team to a touchdown of winning in the final quarter. That’s the closest score expected all season.
As they were about to head out the doors and walk to Chloe’s car, Dan threw the doors open with such force that one of the hinges popped off. He glanced over at Clark and sent him a dangerous look knowing why this Kent kid was here. He grinned when he saw fear pop up on the Kent kids face and forcefully knocked his shoulder against his.
Chloe: Ummm.. Clark, are you ok? You don’t look too good right now.
Clark’s face instantly went from the sudden pale state it was in and defaulted back into the original color.
Clark: I’ll tell you outside.
After they crossed through the doors and were a safe distance to her car she turned and looked over at him half worrying half wondering.
Clark: Look, I don’t get this. Whenever I get near that Dan guy I feel like someone just popped a Kryptonite onto me. That’s why I did so poor the first half of the game. I couldn’t get away from him.
Chloe: Well… We are in Metropolis which is pretty dang close to Smallville. Not to mention LexCorp is out buying all the Kryptonite that they can savage.
Clark: No, no. Some of it was out on the field. No jewelry on the field. That’s the only thing he could be wearing, no such thing as Kryptonite undershirts.
Chloe: Don’t worry Clark; I’ll look into it for you.
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Dan barged into Lana’s room and grabbed her hand. She looked up hoping that the angel had come back to wrap his hand around hers again and keep her company. She rolled over only to notice it was Dan.
Dan: Babe, how are you? What happened? Am I going need to kick someone’s ass?
Lana: Don’t worry Dan. I’m fine. Clark Kent found me and brought me here. Thanks to him I’m feeling better.
Lana saw anger flash across Dan’s face when she mentioned Clark Kent and he gave her a big fake smile.
Dan: I got here as fast as I could! I had to run through a whole load of people. Why weren’t you at the after game celebration party? I was looking for you.
‘Actually, I was in the dorm next to it kissing the girl who owned the room. Was just about to take her blouse off before I got a phone call from that Chloe chick saying you were at the hospital. Knew you weren’t going come to the party, so, I just told her to wait a couple of minutes.’
Lana: Dan, you know I don’t like coming to huge parties.
He kept that same fake toothy smile on his face.
Dan: Oh yeah…
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Clark sped over to the alleyway after Chloe left and began searching it for clues. After several minutes of looking around, he noticed nothing. He was about to take off when he thought about something and turned to the dumpster and x-rayed it looking behind it. He noticed a small id tag sitting behind it. Hoping it would lead to some answers he picked it up and glanced over at it.
Clark: LexCorp?
As always, comments, suggestions, anything relating to the story, much appreciated! :D
happycamper
07-30-2006, 11:04 PM
Nice update - many interesting things happening as you set your story up.
It seems that Clark and Lana can't resist each other no matter the circumstances of how they meet. ;)
Just one question, though. Why hasn't Chloe told Lana about what should now be her former boyfriend!! And why did Chloe call him to come to the hospital!
:D :D
DeVinde
07-30-2006, 11:26 PM
Chloe has made a pact with herself to never mess with any of her friend's lifes, no matter how big the story after Clark explained his secret to her when they were younger. She was also tired of pissing off Clark while secretly looking for a scoop into his life.
She called him to the hospital because she knew Lana would muck at her if she didn't.
(Psss.. that's two questions :lol: )
deanyouk
07-31-2006, 04:39 AM
cool update
clana4ev3r
07-31-2006, 02:06 PM
Update more soon! :D :D
DeVinde
07-31-2006, 03:36 PM
One question. Would you guys like me to put up a couple of small spoilers for each update? (They might alter slightly in the actual update.)
maitriniazngurl
07-31-2006, 03:38 PM
Great update!! This story keeps getting more and more interesting!! It's really great! PPMS!! :D
devoted2clark
07-31-2006, 03:44 PM
^sure! Dans a loser!!!
DeVinde
07-31-2006, 05:05 PM
Chapter Five
Two weeks later. Clark changed drastically from the first game against Met U and has lead the Hurricanes to two straight victories of where they beat out the other team by over 30 points. After dropping to #8, the Hurricanes have climbed back up to #4. The Met U Bulldogs continue to have a perfect season as lead by Heisman contender, Dan Elrod.
Lana: Hey, I didn’t know about this program.
Chloe glanced over her shoulder over at Lana who was busy shuffling through a big pile of extra curricular activities and other files related to the school when she saw her pull up a small pamphlet.
Chloe: And what program would that be?
Lana: They have a studying abroad program. It’s really weak though. Doesn’t even go out of country, just to different states.
Chloe: Well, what’s it matter then?
Lana: I’ve actually been looking for an excuse to get out Kansas for a while. I’ve needed to take a break from this state. Never really travel anywhere. Oh, but you can’t even pick your state. It’s chosen for you.
Chloe: Are you going do it?
Lana: Yeah I think I am, it looks like it could be fun.
Chloe: I hope you get sent to some famish town in Alaska!
Chloe started laughing when she saw Lana put her hand over her mouth.
Chloe: Just kidding! Just kidding! Knowing your luck, you’re going end up in Hawaii or Hollywood with a hunk as your personal tour guide. Anyhow, what do you need to do to get this Studying Abroad thing?
Lana: Just have to write an essay on why I think I should be aloud to leave state, what I mainly want to study, and have a good grade point average. Odd, I have to submit it to LexCorp.
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-A week later at the LexCorp Plaza.
A nervous looking woman is seen being ushered into Lex Luthor’s office.
Lex spun around in his chair when he saw her approaching and smiled up at her.
Lex: Welcome Miss Lang, thanks for coming.
Lana began to say something then shut her mouth rethinking what to say to the famous Lex Luthor.
Lex: Miss Lang, Miss Lang. Don’t worry, there shouldn’t be anything about me to intimidate you. I just wanted to speak to you about your Studying Abroad essay you sent in a few days ago. I haven’t received one of those in a while. I thought that program was long dead. I must say I was pleasantly surprised when I got yours. You have a knack for expressing yourself. I wouldn’t have expected that out of someone dating Dan Elrod.
Lana was smiling up at Lex until she heard him mention his line about her and Dan. A flush of red came into her cheeks.
Lana: And, what is that supposed to mean?
Lex: Oh, he hasn’t tried anything yet? Dan is your stereotypical jock. Always dates the prettiest girls. Seems all he wants them to express though is how wide they can open their legs.
Lana: Well, as you can see, I’m not one of his trophy girlfriends. I’m living under my own circumstances, not his.
Lex: Oh don’t worry Miss Lang, I’ve seen that. I’m not here to argue you, just wished to inform you that we’ve accepted your essay and have your destination picked out.
Lana instantly from slightly angry to overly excited.
Lana: Really? I got accepted! Where am I going?
Lex: I hope you like the beach Miss Lang. You’ll be heading down to Miami, Florida. You’ll spend most of your study time at the University Of Miami’s library. I also read in your essay that you had an urgency to leave Kansas quickly. That you needed a break from being in this state. True?
Lana: Well, yes. But, I’ve heard it can take up to six months for you to actually have a chance to deport to your destination.
Lex: Well, what if I told you that you could be there by the end of the weekend? I’m leaving for a lecture on biology in the Keys and would be willing to drop you off on the way.
Lana: Wow, that’d be great!
Lana waved good bye to Chloe as she walked onto the Lex’s personal aircraft. She noticed the wood lining the walls and how royal the interior looked.
Lex: Welcome to my personal aircraft. Glad you decided to come.
Lana: Wouldn’t have missed it for the world. Thanks for accepting my essay!
After a few minutes of small talk they both departed into their own worlds. Lex was checking over files on his laptop while Lana was busy reading a book. After about 30 minutes Lana looked over at a door in the back of the plane.
Lana: Does that lead to a bedroom?
Lex: Yes, it does. Are you tired?
Lana: No, but is there a shower?
Lex: Yep.
Lana: Do you think I could use it, I didn’t have a chance to shower this morning so I could reach the plane’s departure.
Lex: Of course you can.
Lana got up and was walking to the door when Lex turned to her and tossed her a set of keys.
Lex: I usually keep that door locked. I feel my most vulnerable when I’m sleeping.
Lex turned back to his laptop while Lana unlocked the door and closed it behind her. He was busy checking on surveillance devices at the plaza to make sure everything was all right when he noticed a file marked Vehicular Surveillance. He clicked on it and noticed a file marked Plane. He chuckled and clicked on that and was scrolled through two cameras until he reached the one in the bedroom and saw Lana Lang stripping out of her clothes. He gasped when she pulled down her pants to reveal very showing underwear. This entire time she was sitting in front of him he didn’t realize how beautiful this Lang girl was. He kept his eyes glued to the screen as he saw her reach behind her back to pull her bra off when he saw her notice the camera. She reached downward and threw a shirt over it.
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-A few hours later
Clark just hopped out of the shower when he heard a knock on the door.
‘Pete must have forgotten his key again. He really needs to get his priorities together.’
He wrapped a towel around his waist and headed down the stairs. He pulled the door open.
Clark: Pete man, you really need to get a chain for that key or somethin’ you’re reall-Oh..
Lana looked up to see the man who brought her to the hospital after she knocked her head against the wall. She was taken back and didn’t respond when he looked down at her because she was too surprised at finding him standing there in front of her wearing nothing but a towel around his waist while water dripped off of him. Her face instantly became red as he noticed her staring blankly at his sculpted abs. She glanced another way when Pete strolled up behind her.
Pete: Clark man, you always answers the door wearing nothing but a towel for my tourists? I told ya that someone was going come by for a campus tour today.
Clark: Yeah, well.. Uh I think I’ll excuse myself and he shut the door and bent down resting against the wood.
‘Well that was awkward.. It’s not every day that a beautiful girl is at your door. Too bad I just hopped out the shower. Probably creeped her out wearing nothing but a towel.’
As always, comments, suggestions, anything to do with the story is appreciated!
:D
Venezuelan Lana
07-31-2006, 09:51 PM
ROFL ROFL... great story so far!!! PPMS!!!!
maru11
07-31-2006, 11:02 PM
great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can´t wait!!!!!!!!!!!
deanyouk
08-01-2006, 12:21 AM
cool update....
Lex setting Clark up?? play a good friend....
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-01-2006, 12:40 AM
no i dont think that lex knows that he is setting lana with clark
well maybe u never no
DeVinde
08-01-2006, 11:02 AM
Lex setting Clark up?? play a good friend....
You're giving the Luthor name too much credit. Just Clark and one of his ten million random coincidences that effect his future. :lol:
devoted2clark
08-01-2006, 11:57 AM
PPMS!!!!! its getting realllllly good!!!
maru11
08-01-2006, 12:03 PM
update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
clark&lanafan06
08-01-2006, 12:15 PM
Update Soon Plz !!!!!!!!!
maitriniazngurl
08-01-2006, 12:52 PM
Oh!! That was so hilarious! Lex not knowing how beautiful she was... until he turns on his cameras.. and too bad for him Lana noticed the camera. heheh.. Great update!!
PPMS!!
DeVinde
08-01-2006, 02:36 PM
Chapter Six
The Next Day
Pete: Hey Clark man, I forgot to mention something to you.
Clark: Don’t you always forget to mention something to me?
Pete: Ha, ha. Hilarious. Anyway, that Lana girl is going stay at our place. We got a little basement and I put a bed down there. Felt bad that she was going be stuck in a hotel for a while, so offered up our place.
Clark: What?! You’re telling me that you invited some girl to stay at our place for who knows how long?
Pete: Calm down man, we each got our own rooms and I was just being nice.
Clark: We only have one shower, and our laundry room is part of the basement. It’s always freezing down there too.
Pete: I’m sure she won’t mind the one shower thing. She was having a staring contest with your abs the other day till I came by.
Pete grinned while Clark turned away when he felt his skin getting warm and looked in the mirror to see his face completely red.
Pete: Well Clark, she’s going be here any minute. She said she was on her way with all her luggage.
Clark looked over at their front door when they heard a loud knocking and opened it up to see her standing there holding two luggage cases.
Clark: Here, let me get those off your hands.
He bent over and grabbed one of her luggage cases and reached for the other and his hand scraped against hers when he was picking it up. He looked up and saw a light hue of pink in her cheeks.
He started walking toward one of the dorm rooms when she questioned where he was taking her luggage.
Clark: I’m not letting you sleep in the basement. It’s freezing down there, the laundry is loud, and the bed is really uncomfortable. You’re our guest; you shouldn’t have to live like you’re in a torture chamber.
Lana: Well… you really don’t have to. I mean I did just intrude into your guy’s rooms. No need to take care of me.
Clark walked into his room and tossed her belongings on his bed.
Clark: Nope, it’s decided. This is your room for however long you’re here in Miami.
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-Later That Night
Clark and Lana were sitting on opposite ends of the couch in the living area while Pete was flipping through channels on the TV in the armchair. Clark and Lana kept shifting around and sneaking glances over at each other when they thought the other wasn’t looking.
Pete: What’s with you two? You just goin’ sit there and shift around while looking at each other? I mean you’ve done that since we’ve gotten down here. You got this little lovey-dovey feeling? Why don’t you just say something?
Clark: Um Pete, you know she doesn’t know your joking around as much as I do. Maybe you should just be quiet and go back to your TV surfing.
Lana: Actually Clark, he’s right. I can’t get my eyes off of you.
She bent over and pushed Clark flat on his back and climbed on top of him. She bent over him and placed her lips on top of his. She slowly kissed him then kissed him again.
Pete turned off the TV and stood up laughing. You two lovebirds have fun. I think I’m going go take a walk. Pete headed for the door and walked out slamming the door.
Clark jumped when he heard a door slam and looked around when he heard someone walking down the basement stairs. He checked the clock to notice it said 9:30 PM and decided he must of fallen asleep early.
‘Well that dream was ummm… unusual.’
Lana was heading down the stairs and looked over to see Clark holding a pillow above him then he jumped up when she closed the door.
Lana: Sorry if I woke you Clark, somehow my clothes must of gotten dirty on the trip down here. Just came to do some laundry.
Clark: Oh, it’s fine Lana. Didn’t even mean to fall asleep this early anyway.
She giggled at him while she started placing her clothes from the laundry basket into the washing machine then he gasped when she started to pull off the clothes she was wearing and shove them into the machine. He went completely red when she reached behind herself and found the latch holding her bra together and unsnapped it tossing that into the machine. She bent over and placed both of her hands on her underwear when-
Clark woke up with a jolt when he heard a door slam and feet walking down the basement stairs. He looked over at the clock to notice it was 9:30 PM.
‘Ok, this is getting weird.’
He pinched himself once to make sure he wasn’t dreaming and saw Lana heading down the stairs with a laundry basket tucked under her arm.
Lana: Sorry if I woke you Clark, somehow my clothes must of gotten dirty on the trip down here. Just came to do some laundry.
Clark looked around a couple of times before answering.
Clark: Oh, it’s fine Lana. Didn’t even mean to fall asleep this early anyway.
She raised one of her eyebrows confused why he was glancing around before answering her. She just shrugged it off and tossed her clothes from the laundry basket into the machine and walked upstairs.
Once she got upstairs she headed outside and dialed a number into her cell phone.
Dan was pacing around his room wondering if Lana somehow saw him with another girl somewhere and was too angry to speak to him so that’s why she hasn’t talked to him all day. He heard his cell phone ring and rushed over to it and saw Lana’s number on the ID and immediately answered it.
Dan: Lana! I haven’t seen you all day, what have you been doing?
Lana: Well Dan, that’s kind of why I called you. I joined a studying out of state program and I’ve already moved to my destination. I wanted to call you and tell you that I don’t think a long distance relationship is going work.
Dan: Oh… Well um, where’d you go?
Lana: Miami, Florida. But, I need to go Dan. I have things I need to do.
Dan hung up the phone and looked out the window wondering what the hell just happened.
‘Wait, she said Miami, Florida. That’s where that Kent kid is. She probably ran off to be with him! It’s time I pay him a visit and end his football career.’
maitriniazngurl
08-01-2006, 02:51 PM
Oh.. It's getting really good!! That jerk!! If he doesn't love her.. then he should at least let her be happy!! :)
update soon. :D
devoted2clark
08-01-2006, 07:20 PM
ITS SOOOO GOOD!!!:D:D:D:D:):):):):)!!!! PPMS!!!
clark&lanafan06
08-01-2006, 07:31 PM
Good Update ! PPMS !!!!!!!!!!
Laotion_flower
08-01-2006, 07:32 PM
GREAT UPDATE!! PPMS!
deanyouk
08-01-2006, 07:32 PM
good update
closetfan
08-01-2006, 09:01 PM
haha great update...loved the double dream......
emogirl*88
08-01-2006, 10:42 PM
loved the update!
happycamper
08-01-2006, 11:50 PM
Nice update!
Be careful when you have Clark waking up from successive dreams. I tried that with Lana as a joke after the end of my last story, and did not get a good response from the board! :lol:
Our friend Dan seems a real piece of work, but I admire how Lana dumped him. I'd feel bad for a normal guy, but since it's Dan, I guess that she acted appropriately. :)
Giving up his room was really nice of Clark. It fact, it was quite endearing, so I'm expecting to see some type of Clana soon. :p
Anyway, hope to see more very soon!
maru11
08-01-2006, 11:53 PM
grea update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeVinde
08-01-2006, 11:53 PM
Originally posted by happycamper
Nice update!
Be careful when you have Clark waking up from successive dreams. I tried that with Lana as a joke after the end of my last story, and did not get a good response from the board! :lol:
Eep! Thanks for the warning. I just felt like I was pulling the story in a direction that looked like Clark thought she was attractive but never thought of her outside of when he saw her. Had to stick in that he in fact has those feelings! Muah! :rotfl:
Clarkfan3000
08-02-2006, 07:26 AM
Hey! i just found this story and am loving it! PPMS
DeVinde
08-02-2006, 02:42 PM
Chapter Seven
-Three Days Later
In an airplane over the Georgia/Florida boarder.
Sam: Dan, you sure this will work? I mean, there have been some crazy plans but this has got to take the cake. I mean, you know what overdosing this stuff does to people. Remember all those reported “meteor freaks” from Smallville?
Dan: Yeah, yeah I know. We’ve been safe so far and I think a little excitement could be what we need. I mean we’re overdosing once. It’s not like we overdose every game.
Sam: So, what’s got you all worked up about this guy anyway? You kicked his butt at the Miami game anyhow.
Dan: Well, my girl called me and told me that she left for some studying out of state program in Miami. I started putting two and two together. I mean, that guy was at the hospital when my girl got injured and now she ran off to where he lives. He’s planning out all this crap. He’s trying to steal my woman!
Sam: So what do the meteor drugs have to do with this?
Dan: Oh, this is the fun part. Going find this guy while he’s by himself and give him a nice whack to the jaw. You know to make his head spin and rethink about what he did.
Sam: You brought enough of the stuff to pump our entire team including the back-ups. I mean how hard do you want to hit this guy?
Dan: Oh, when I said make his head spin, I meant literally.
Dan bent over and started to cackle to himself. Sam looked away and out the window fearing that the drugs were starting to make Dan mentally unstable.
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Clark and Lana were in the dorm alone talking about the past few days and how crazy they’ve been with her moving in.
Clark: So hey, I got nothing to do this afternoon and I hear there’s a good flick on TV right about this time. You want to sit down and watch it?
Lana thought about how she just wanted to cuddle up with him on the couch and watch the TV for the rest of the afternoon.
‘Why do these thoughts keep coming into my head? I barely know this guy! The only time we ever see each other is in the room. It’s not like we’ve gone out and done anything together yet.’
Clark and Lana both headed to the sofa and sat down in the middle. Neither of them apologized and backed off they like they usually do. Instead of reaching for the remote Clark sat there for a second processing what was going through his head. Lana finally looked over at Clark.
Lana: Clark, it’s been really nice of you to let me stay here while I’m in Miami. It was also sweet of you to give up your room.
Clark: Oh, it was no problem Lana.
Lana then started to lean closer to Clark. Clark gulped and knew this time it wasn’t one of his dreams. He started to lean closer to her, their noses almost touching. They both closed their eyes and then
BAM! They both jumped with a startle when they heard the front door slam open. Pete walked in with groceries under both arms. He raised one of his eyebrows over at them seeing how they both jumped when he opened the door.
Pete: Am I interrupting something?
They both grew red when he said that then Clark fumbled around with the remote.
Clark: No, we were just going sit down and watch Anchorman. It was showing on TV, you want to watch it?
Pete: Yeah, sure. That movie’s hilarious.
He set down his groceries and sat down on the lazy chair while Clark and Lana sat down on opposite ends of the couch. Halfway through the movie Pete started to laugh frantically.
Pete: Man that phone box scene is hilarious! Clark you always love that part, why you so quiet tonight? …Clark? Earth to Clark!
He started waving his hands around and Clark snapped out of his thoughts.
Clark: Ummm. Sorry. I guess I was concentrating on something other then the movie. I think I’m going go take a walk around campus. I’ll be back later guys.
Pete: Well, whatever man. You enjoy that walk. Hope you clear your mind of whatever’s bothering you.
Clark headed out the door while Lana gave him a meek wave. Clark super sped to a quiet part of town and was walking silently past the slums of town thinking what almost happened between him and Lana.
He was just moving past an alleyway when he started to feel sick and someone yanked him into the alleyway. He saw it was Dan and knew that Dan must be using whatever Kryptonian substance he was using doing the game right now. Clark felt the Kryptonite overpowering him and he fell down on his knees.
Dan: You see Kent, my girlfriend runs off to Miami and I remember you’re here. Now you spent some time looking over at her doing the party and that most not be coincidence, eh? You’re messing with the wrong guy. I’m going make sure she never sees you in the same light again. Then she’ll run back to me saying how she shouldn’t have gone down here and that she loves me. You’ll see!
He bent over laughing hysterically.
Clark: I.. I don don’t know what you’re talking about.
Dan: Oh, shut up!
He grabbed Clark and threw him down into the ground. He then picked up Clark and clasped his hand in Clark’s hair and delivered a punch that would have twisted any mere mortal’s head in a 360 degree angle killing them instantly. Clark flipped through the air and landed on his face on the ground feeling the blood begin to pour of his mouth. Dan then came over and grabbed the back of Clark’s head and then slammed it into the wall breaking his nose on impact. Clark rolled around in the dirt moaning and Dan kicked him three times in the ribs. Clark grunted as he felt two ribs shatter. Dan looked down at Clark surprised that he was still breathing.
Dan: I knew you were something special when I saw you lift up the side of an SUV, kid. But, you shouldn’t still be breathin’ after all this punishment. Well, let’s see how you do with a nice injection of the stuff that makes me so powerful. What happens when someone already bursting with strength gets even stronger? Maybe they explode!
Dan bent over laughing hysterically again. He then pulled out a needle and tested it once to make sure it worked correctly and injected it into Clark’s arm.
Dan: Sweet dreams, lover boy.
Dan started to walk away when Clark let out a painful scream of agony. He turned and looked at Clark and was confused when he saw all of Clark’s veins begin to turn green and wondered if that was a weird side effect of the drug on someone who’s injured. He just shrugged it off and walked out of the alleyway and back to his rental car.
Clark continued to scream in agony with what felt like fire coursing through his body and igniting everything it touched in pain. He finally couldn’t take it anymore and passed out feeling his life slip away quickly.
As always, suggestions, and comments are appreciated!
:D
deanyouk
08-02-2006, 02:55 PM
good update
maitriniazngurl
08-02-2006, 02:58 PM
Ouch!! Dang!1 That must be painful!! I wish Clark could give Dan and good butt whooping fast!! :D
devoted2clark
08-02-2006, 03:26 PM
Dan, I hate you. PPMS!!!
DeVinde
08-02-2006, 04:05 PM
:eek:
maru11
08-02-2006, 04:59 PM
awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hate dan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeVinde
08-02-2006, 10:21 PM
Ok, new character! Dr. Willow is Clark Kent's personal doctor. Clark has gotten sick a few times in his life before and Dr. Willow was his first doctor that the Kents had to turn to. She has devoted herself to becoming a personal doctor to the Kents since she's found out that he's different. All she knows is his body makeup is different of an average being and that he has a sickness with the metor rocks. Also that his body is basically invurnable.
Chapter Eight
Lana just sighed when the movie finally ended. She wondered where Clark ran off. He probably got uncomfortable when she tried to make a move on him and ran off to get some fresh air. She wanted to find him and apologize. Pete went up to his room to study some materials for an exam he was having soon so she snuck out of the house and got into her SUV to drive around and find him. She went a couple of laps around the campus and couldn’t find him so she decided he must have gone jogging off campus and left his truck here. She drove off and went into a direction where a trail led. After a couple of minutes she found herself in the slums of town. She drove past rows of beaten down houses noticing how lucky she was to be living in what she was living in. She was driving past one of the seedier alleyways when she noticed a crowd of all ages gathered around it. She let her curiosity get to her and parked her car. She walked toward the alleyway and then peeked over someone’s head to see what they were all looking at. What they were looking at made her gasp.
Lana: OH MY GOD!
She pulled some people to the side and ran over to Clark’s side and pulled him over to see his veins pulsing black.
Lana: Clark! Clark! What the hell happened here people? Has anyone called an ambulance?!
Person: No hun, people die in the slums all the time. It’s just a part of life. The cops don’t even care anymore.
Lana: HE’S NOT DEAD! NO WAY!
Lana shook her head not letting her believe what the person was saying. She flipped open her cell phone and dialed 911 and waited until the ambulance arrived. When it finally arrived and whisked him away to the hospital she hopped into her SUV and wiped some of her tears away. She punched in a number into her phone and waited for someone to answer.
Chloe: Hellooo?
Lana: Chloe, its Lana! I was driving when I saw Clark Kent in an alleyway completely bruised and battered. Someone must of beat up Clark while he was jogging! I mean it’s horrible! He looked completely destroyed!
Chloe: What?! That’s impossible! ‘No really, it is impossible!’ Lana I’m going have to call you back, there’s someone I need to talk to.
Chloe closed her phone and turned on her TV and flipped to ESPN to see a camera crew walking down the Miami Hospital. She dialed in Martha Kent’s number.
Chloe: Mrs. Kent you need to turn on the TV and flip to ESPN now!
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Martha could hear the urgency in Chloe’s voice so she did what she was told and gasped in complete horror in what she saw.
Reporter: It seems that superstar athlete Clark Kent was found beaten severely in an alleyway. He has several broken ribs, a broken nose, and his veins are throbbing uncontrollably and have become black in color. It seems someone has injected Clark Kent with some sort of toxin that can’t be identified at the moment. A specialist is being flown in.
Martha hung up the phone and dialed in Dr. Willow’s personal emergency line for the Kent’s.
Dr. Willow: Don’t worry Miss Kent, I’m on my way to Miami right now and I’ve told the hospital that absolutely no one can touch him till I get there. The question though is who attacked him with the green meteor rocks and how did they know or if it was on purpose. The meteor rocks most also be still inside of him if his veins have turned black.
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Lana parked her SUV and rushed into the ER section and asked which room was Clark Kent’s, only to be told that they have been told that no one is to see Mr. Kent till the specialist arrives. She sat down in one of the plastic chairs out in the lobby waiting for the specialist to arrive. An hour passed before the specialist came in. She immediately rushed back to where Clark’s room must have been and quickly shut the door behind her.
Dr. Willow examined Clark knowing he didn’t have much time before the poison from the meteor rocks completely engulfed Clark and killed him. She had to act quickly and find the source and remove it from his body. She pulled up his shirt and jabbed a needle into his chest to pull out some of his blood. She noticed there were green specks in it. She figured someone must have deliberately poisoned his blood stream with a liquefied version of the meteor rocks. She brought out a machine that was made to cleanse the blood of toxins and placed Clark on it. After about five minutes Clark began to stir.
Dr. Willow: Mr. Kent, I’m glad you’re awake. You’ll be able to spend the night in the hospital while your blood cleans itself. You’ll need to come with me back to Metropolis and stay at your farm in Smallville for a week though starting tomorrow because all the media attention on you would surely catch on to if your body suddenly completely healed in a day. Can you explain to me what happened?
Clark: I was jogging outside, next thing I knew I felt myself going weak and was pulled into an alleyway. Now I look like this.
Dr. Willow: Ok, Mr. Kent. Thank you. The local PD will have more questions for you next week when you officially wake up and you’re healed.
Dr. Willow walked out of the room and saw Pete rush into the hospital and look around frantically. She knew who he was because Mr. Ross and Mr. Kent have been best friends since high school. She motioned to him that he was allowed to visit Clark in his room. Pete turned and started talking to a young girl sitting in a plastic chair in the waiting room and they both got up and went into Clark’s room.
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Pete and Lana winced when they saw how badly bruised Clark was and the machine pumping his blood.
Pete: Clark, man. What happened?
Clark: I got beat up in an alleyway. Then they bent over and injected me with some needle. That’s why I’m having my blood pumped, it needs to be cleansed.
Lana: Do you know who did this?
Clark looked uncertainty toward Pete and Pete caught his eye wondering why Clark had that look on his face.
Clark: No, probably just some deranged junkie.
Pete: Well Clark, I’m sorry for what happened and I came by to make sure you’re ok. I’m glad you are. I need to take off to study for classes tomorrow. The university never sleeps.
Clark: Yeah thanks for coming by, means a lot.
Pete waved and walked out the door.
Lana: Clark, I just want to say I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to approach you the way I did when we were sitting on the sofa. I don’t know what came over me. If I hadn’t done that, then you would have never gone jogging and gotten hurt.
Clark: You can’t blame yourself Lana. I go jogging all the time. I mean, it means a lot to me that you came too. It’s very kind of you.
Lana: Well, you did the same for me back in Metropolis when you found me injured.
She pulled out a chair and placed it next to his bed and sat down.
Lana: I’m going stay here with you for the night, I still feel bad about this.
Clark just smiled up at her and reached out his hand toward her and opened it up. She looked down at it and placed hers inside of his. He wrapped his hand around hers and pulled it a bit closer. He smiled up at her once more then fell asleep.
This update seemed pretty short to me, but I'm brain dead at the moment!
As always, suggestions, comments, anything to do with the story appreciated! :D
treker
08-02-2006, 10:36 PM
Clark needs to tell Lana what dan did. otherwise she might see him and not be on her guard....otherwise it was great....
DeVinde
08-02-2006, 10:41 PM
That is one of the reasons he glanced over at Pete. He was letting Pete know that he knew more then he was going say.
Of course he won't tell Lana. He never lets her in his life! :lol:
Venezuelan Lana
08-02-2006, 10:56 PM
wow... great few updates... ppms! please, let Clark tell Lana what Dan did... *puppy dog eyes*
DeVinde
08-02-2006, 10:59 PM
Not the puppy dog eyes, not the puppy dog eyes! Oh God, the puppy dog eyes! :eek:
Venezuelan Lana
08-02-2006, 11:02 PM
pllllease?!?!?!? Can you let Lana in? *puppy dog wider eyes!!! *
clana1fan4ever
08-02-2006, 11:09 PM
PPMS!!!!!!!!!!
maitriniazngurl
08-03-2006, 02:58 PM
Clark needs to let Lana so he could dump Dan's sorry ***. I mean he's such a jerk!! :D
Update soon!! :D
maru11
08-03-2006, 03:27 PM
awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope u can update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
devoted2clark
08-03-2006, 05:00 PM
I HATE DAN MORE NOW!!!! ppms!!!:)
happycamper
08-03-2006, 07:36 PM
So Clark is just hiding the culprit's name from Lana?
Hiss...:mad: :mad:
DeVinde
08-04-2006, 10:41 PM
Chapter Nine
Clark woke up and the first thing he noticed was his hand sitting in her lap while she slept in the chair she occupied last night. He didn’t want to move his hand in case he woke her. He just sat there mesmerized by her natural beauty. Even when she was sleeping and her hair was a mess she still looked on top of the world. As if to answer his question to rather he should move his hand she grunted once in her sleep and shifted around moving her hand on top of his and smiled. He also smiled thinking she must be having a good dream. He frowned when someone opened the door and it banged against the wall awaking Lana.
She turned around wondering where she was and then remembered where she fell asleep and smiled down at Clark.
Dr. Willow: Miss, I’m sorry but you’ll need to leave. Mr. Kent has to be rushed to a special hospital in Metropolis.
Lana: Sure thing Doctor. I just wanted to make sure he was doing ok.
Lana got up and smiled at Clark. She waved to him and left.
Dr. Willow: Ok, Clark. I’m going fly you down to Smallville and drive you over to your parent’s farm. You’re going stay put for a week then I’m going come over, wrap a few fake bandages on you, and you’ll be on your way.
Clark Kent: OK Dr. Willow. Thanks, you don’t know how nice it is to have a trust-worthy doctor to look after me.
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-A few hours later at the Kent farm
Clark picked up the phone and dialed Pete’s cell. After a few rings Pete picked it up.
Pete: Clark, man. How you feelin’?
Clark: Oh it um hurts a lot. I mean this sucks. Ouch.
Pete: So, what’s the deal with that look you gave me when Lana asked if you knew who did this to you?
Clark: That’s actually why I’m calling you Pete. I know who did this. It was Dan Elrod. He said something about Lana running off to be with me. I don’t know where it came from or how he found me.
Pete: Oh, that dude makes my blood boil. I can get some pals to go down to his place and kick his ass for you if you want. Or there’s always the legal route. Could get some of Lex’s lawyers from his army he has.
Clark: No Pete, I don’t want you to do anything. I just want to figure out what he was doing.
Pete: Yeah, well about that whole running off to be with you thing man? Is it true? I mean I remember I walked in that morning and you both jumped up like you were kids caught going through the cookie jar.
Clark: No way! I mean she’s still dating that guy. I doubt she’d cheat on him, and we didn’t jump up, you just have a habit of slamming doors.
Pete: You didn’t hear? Chloe told me Lana broke up with him because she said she couldn’t handle a long distance relationship. It really pissed him off so he went and blew off his steam making out with a bunch of sorority girls. This guy’s a real joke. I still say I send some people to find him and kick his butt. Get a taste of his own medicine.
Clark: You couldn’t even if you wanted to. He did all this with his bare hands. He told me whatever he injected me was what he juiced himself with. It’s what caused me to have an allergic reaction and why my blood has to be purified.
Pete: You have any clue what the stuff was?
Clark: Yeah, it was green. It must be related to the meteor rocks from the meteor shower.
Pete: Oh, he’s another meteor freak. Man that really complicates everything. Those guys always go crazy with power.
Clark was about to respond when he heard a call waiting beep.
Clark: One second, I got a call on the other line.
He switched lines.
Muffled Voice: OK, don’t talk. I know what is happening to Dan. He’s getting mentally unstable from the meteor drugs. He’s going kill himself if he doesn’t stop using them. You two are the only ones who have had them in your system recently so you need to find a cure or somethin’ and soon!
Before Clark even had a chance to respond the line went dead.
Clark: Ok, sorry bout that Pete. Some mystery guy just called me and told me that the drugs are lethal if taken too long and they cause you to become mentally unstable.
Pete: Hey man, that sounds horrible. I’ll check up some stuff online and see what I can figure out about the meteor rocks. You rest, and I’ll call you back later.
Clark said good bye then hung up the phone. He had no intention of resting. He starting super-speeding his way to Metropolis where he was going encounter a journey that was far more dangerous then a kryptonite-infused power junkie.
Venezuelan Lana
08-04-2006, 10:48 PM
WOW... great update, de vinde!!!! I like little baby Clana in this fic!!! PPMS
devoted2clark
08-04-2006, 10:59 PM
great update devinde!!!
DeVinde
08-04-2006, 11:00 PM
Whoopsies! For anyone who read the story early, it was cookie jar, not cookie jaw. Mistake corrected!
happycamper
08-04-2006, 11:56 PM
Nice update!
I still don't like Dan, and I hope that you've thought up a suitable fate/future (or lack thereof) for him.:)
And here are Pete and Clark trying to save him...:mad:
clana1fan4ever
08-05-2006, 02:15 AM
nice update!!!
PPMS!!!
deanyouk
08-05-2006, 04:32 AM
cool update
DeVinde
08-05-2006, 10:50 AM
Originally posted by happycamper
Nice update!
I still don't like Dan, and I hope that you've thought up a suitable fate/future (or lack thereof) for him.:)
And here are Pete and Clark trying to save him...:mad:
Well, we are talking about Clark here. :rotfl:
devoted2clark
08-05-2006, 12:33 PM
When will you update!!!:/
maitriniazngurl
08-05-2006, 02:29 PM
Great update!! Clark should just let his sorry self die.. I mean blowling steam with Sorority girls?? That's just too wrong.. cheating.. and all... If it was up to me.. I'd let him Die!!
But this is your story... so do it just how you like. :D :D
PPMS!! :D
DeVinde
08-05-2006, 03:19 PM
I'd let him die too! But Clark said he'd do something to me if I didn't make him sound like the heroic idiot he is. :(
maitriniazngurl
08-05-2006, 04:16 PM
I know what you mean... if we don't make Clark heroic.. he loses his nice and kind side.. :D
Update soon. :D
maru11
08-05-2006, 06:20 PM
great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!
Kryptonite 1
08-11-2006, 05:29 PM
Hey could he be heroic and get a kiss from the girl of his dreams in the next update. Oh yeah and please please please let Clark tell Lana about his powers. In every single fan fic I read he never tells her until he absolutely has to. It is getting increasingly annoying.
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-12-2006, 10:10 AM
man where is the clana need more clana
51 in 1 week *thats how many posts i have in one week im not turning 51 so dont be alarmed*
maitriniazngurl
08-12-2006, 12:50 PM
PPMS! Can't wait for more!! :D
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-14-2006, 10:01 PM
man almost 100 post in 2 days man i have no llife and whenare you going to update
treker
08-15-2006, 02:09 PM
need to find out what happened in Metropolis......
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