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Superboy2
07-22-2006, 09:24 PM
One Tree Hill: Favorite Brother. PG13
Spoilers: Most of S3, just not The Show Must Go On, the Season 3 finale.
Nathan and Haleys 2nd wedding hasn’t happened yet, and Rachel didn’t meet Cooper yet. Peyton and Brooke are still friends, and Jake didn't tell Peyton about her saying she loves Lucas in her sleep. Nathan didn't jump in the river etc. Everything else has happened. Enjoy

Part 1

“The Ravens are down by 2 points against the Wolverines,” Mouth announced. Nathan Scott has the ball, he fakes a pass to Tim, and its going.” The crowd is watching as Nathan shoots a 3 pointer. “The Ravens win 29-28,” Mouth announces with a burst of energy. “Nathan Scott has won the game,” Mouth shouts on the microphone and jumps up. The team picks Nathan up and he puts his arms up with a bog smile on his face. Haley, Brooke and the other cheerleaders put up their arms in excitement. As Nathan waved to the crowd, he looked right at Haley and smiled. She looked back at him and smiled back. Haley said I love you to him, and he did the same. “Al right guys let me down,” Nathan said to them. Walking up 2 Haley, he gave her a firm kiss on the mouth.
“Always,” Haley said. “And Forever,” Nathan replied. Lucas walked down from the bleachers and smiled as he walked up 2 Nathan and Haley. “Good game Nate,” Lucas said as he and Nathan pounded their fists together. “Thanks man,” Nathan said back. “Haley, bad cheering,” Lucas said smiling. “Don’t make me hurt you in front of Brooke or Nathan Luke,” Haley said as she slugged his shoulder and bit her lower lip. “Please Haley, don’t hurt me,” Lucas said joking as he put his hands up. “No come on, I wanna see it,” Nathan said as he laughed a bit. “Well Nate, I have to go, I gotta date with a hot cheerleader,” Lucas said to him. “Alright man, I’ll see you tomorrow morning then,” Nathan replied. “Yep, see ya tomorrow,” Lucas said. “Take care man,” Nathan said. “Bye Lucas,” Haley said as she gave him a hug. “See ya Hales,” Lucas said as he walked over to Brooke. “Hey pretty girl,” Lucas said as he wrapped his arms around her waist and kissed her neck. “Who are you again,?” Brooke said, turning around with a smile. “Oh I’m sorry, you’re not my girlfriend, I think I got you mixed up with somebody else,” Lucas said. “Oh really, can you describe her?” Brooke asked, playing along. “She has dark hair, beautiful eyes, a cute little nose, a laugh that makes you smile every time you hear it, and an @$$ that makes you want to.” Lucas was cut off when Brooke put her finger on his mouth. “Oh, that is me,” Brooke said as she kissed him firmly. So what are we doing tonight?” Lucas asked her. “I don’t know, as long as its with you,” Brooke said staring into his eyes. “Well, I was thinking of calling Anna, inviting Peyton, and….,” he paused and smiled. “Maybe I’ll just spend the night with you,” Lucas said giving her another kiss. “Well….ok,” Brooke agreed. “As the two stood there, a guy came up to them as if nothing was happening between the two. “Are you Nathan Scott, star of the Ravens basketball team?” The guy asked, the question coming out of nowhere. “No, I’m Lucas Scott, his brother,” Lucas said to him with a confused look on his face. “Oh, I came here to meet my brother, but I guess I have two,” the guy said back. “I’m Todd, Todd Saunders,” Todd said as he put his hand out. Lucas shook his hand with a confused expression on his face.

Superboy2
07-22-2006, 10:48 PM
What do you guys think so far?

Superboy2
07-26-2006, 11:04 AM
Should I even continue? Not one comment?

paigey213
07-27-2006, 02:31 AM
yes you should continue it's good! :)

Superboy2
07-28-2006, 12:18 AM
Wow, I at least got 1 fan. I'll post a new chapter in the next 2 or 3 days. I was about 2 start a different fanfiction. I could do both. Hmmm. Thanx 4 the comment.

kcox6751
08-01-2006, 08:23 PM
nice, very good! :D

Superboy2
08-03-2006, 02:39 AM
I got a little sidetracked tryin 2 get a job. I'll post part 2 in a few days.

Superboy2
08-06-2006, 10:54 PM
Part 2. By the way, its kind of leads up to the season finale. Also, Rachel and Cooper did meet, but they aren’t big characters in my story. This is probably a few weeks to a month before the season finale.
“I’m sorry, my brother?” Lucas asked. “Pending a blood test from Dad, yeah,” Todd said to him. “Look, I can see your busy, why don’t me, you and Nathan discuss it over coffee, I hear theres a great café in town,” Todd replied. “Here’s my cell, give me a call tomorrow,” Todd said as he smiled. “See ya,” Lucas said, still stunned at what Todd just told him. Lucas’ mouth was a bit open, and Brooke pushed it up. Lucas was in a dazed state until she touched him. “Do you think he’s for real, could Dan Scott have a third son?” Brooke asked Lucas, looking deeply into his eyes. “I don’t know, I mean, its not like he’s abandoned a child before, Lucas joked. “I don’t know, maybe you should talk to Dan, before talking to Nathan,” Brooke suggested.
“No, I think I should talk to Nathan, I don’t really wanna talk to Dan, plus he’d probably lie about it,” Lucas replied. “Besides, I think it would be kinda funny, telling Dan he has another abandoned son out there, I wanna see if he gives a damn,” Lucas said, with a bit of anger and hurt in his voice. “Lucas, you don’t need Dan, you turned out fine without him, and I do mean fine,” Brooke said as she grabbed his behind and pushed herself up to his lips. This made Lucas smile. “Thank you Brooke,” Lucas said right before as he gave her another kiss. “Should we get going,” Lucas recommended, as Brooke dropped down. “Yeah, where to,” Brooke asked. “I don’t know, how about I cook you dinner,” Lucas said with a small grin. “If you insist,” Brooke said smiling and reached for his hand to hold. “Let’s go then.”

Meanwhile, at Karen and Lucas’ house:

“Please Keith, come back to me,” Karen said as she was crying and sitting down on the floor. She blew her nose and wiped the tears from her face. “Why, God, why did you take him from me,?” Karen asked rhetorically. “All I wanted was to be with him, was that too much too ask?” Karen pulled out a scrapbook from under her bed, and opened it.
It had many pictures of Lucas when he was a baby, and when he was little. She saw his very first picture, where she was holding him. She had a flashback of holding him, and Keith was there. He had taken that picture of them. Karen looked at Keith. “Nurse, could you take a picture of the three of us?” Karen asked the nurse who was folding blankets. Keith didn’t expect this. “You want me in it to,” Keith had asked. “Of course, you’re his uncle, and you’ve helped me through the pregnancy,” Karen said smiling, with sweat still in her hair. “Ok,” he said quietly. “Ok, smile,” the nurse said as she took a picture of the trio. “Thank you,” Karen aid to the nurse. “Keith, why don’t you hold him,” Karen suggested. “Are you sure, I’ve never held a baby before,” Keith said, a bit afraid to hurt Lucas. “Neither have I, you just hold him, your body won’t let you hurt him,” Karen said to him. Keith walked over to them, and Karen put him in his arms. “See, its not so bad,” Karen said, smiling. “Until he starts taking dumps 24/7,” Keith joked. “Ewww, that’s gross,” Karen said with a chuckle. “I’m serious, it runs in the family, you’ll see,” Keith said as he looked at Lucas. “Hey little guy, I’m you’re uncle Keith, and I promise to help you and your mom whenever you need it,” Keith promised him. Karen came back to reality, and this made her smile. “Thank you Keith,” Karen said, looking up to the heavens. Karen thought she heard a voice say “You’re welcome,” but it must have been in her head.

Sorry it took awhile, but I also haven't got that many replies either. Doesn't help that not many people visit this section either.

kcox6751
08-07-2006, 11:33 AM
great new addition.

if you want more readers, i suggest you go to a One Tree Hill forum. there's a bazillion out there. i suggest:

http://www.othforums.com/

Superboy2
08-07-2006, 02:20 PM
Thanx. I and another member on some other site have been trying to get the Mods to create a fanfic section. But they have been on vacation for the summer. So hopefully they will let us know in a month or less. Also, I just posted it on that site. My username on that 1 is Ravenhill67. Same title and everything. Its got the first part, with part 2 coming if I get replies, which I'm sure I will. kcox6751, r u a member there 2?

kcox6751
08-07-2006, 11:08 PM
yes i am... ;) i visit every once in a while

Superboy2
08-08-2006, 12:45 PM
Whats your name there? I just posted part 2 a little while ago in there. I may not update this that much. I get way more replies at OTHforums.

kcox6751
08-09-2006, 07:17 PM
its kcox6751 :)

i think...lemme check ;)