Spoonie
07-21-2006, 06:57 AM
A little something i've been working on for some time now. Not finished yet but i do have a small synopsis for you all. Hope you like it and some feedback would be awesome!.
Pilot
The treaty between Heaven and Hell which states that none of the two must interfere with human business, has been broken by the latter side (hell). Heaven, although Hell has broken the agreement, cannot try to stop the mob of demons on Earth that are possesing human beings in order to join Hell and Earth together. The Archangel, Michael, refuses to let the forces of Hell triumph and has a plan.
A young African American lady had given birth, unfortunatley she lost her child that had no right hand. The Archangel revives this Child and cuts part of his right hand (the part would obviously grow back) and makes a new one for the Child. From that day, the child was no longer human, he had the right hand of the Archangel with which he would destroy demons, the child was called Adam.
On the day Adam turned 16, another Angel, Gabriel, visited him and explained his purpose in the world. Adam would evolve as time went by, he would gain the power to heal, be able to wield the sword of the Archangel himself and be able to grow wings enabling him to fly.
I know, quite a bit of religion in it. I try my best not to mention God TOO much in it.
iI really need some feedback though.
Pilot
The treaty between Heaven and Hell which states that none of the two must interfere with human business, has been broken by the latter side (hell). Heaven, although Hell has broken the agreement, cannot try to stop the mob of demons on Earth that are possesing human beings in order to join Hell and Earth together. The Archangel, Michael, refuses to let the forces of Hell triumph and has a plan.
A young African American lady had given birth, unfortunatley she lost her child that had no right hand. The Archangel revives this Child and cuts part of his right hand (the part would obviously grow back) and makes a new one for the Child. From that day, the child was no longer human, he had the right hand of the Archangel with which he would destroy demons, the child was called Adam.
On the day Adam turned 16, another Angel, Gabriel, visited him and explained his purpose in the world. Adam would evolve as time went by, he would gain the power to heal, be able to wield the sword of the Archangel himself and be able to grow wings enabling him to fly.
I know, quite a bit of religion in it. I try my best not to mention God TOO much in it.
iI really need some feedback though.