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SVsleuth
07-05-2006, 01:22 AM
Note: This fic has been revised & updated to take into account seasons 6 & 7. Click here for the new version:http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showpost.php?p=3705799&postcount=1 (http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showpost.php?p=3705799&postcount=1)

(Rated G)

What REALLY happened…


Lana turns back to look at Clark as they stand upon an icy platform in the Fortress of Solitude.

Clark looks at Lana and begins to speak. “Wh…When you asked me if I believed in life on other planets you had no idea how ironic that question was.”

Lana stares at him, confused.

Clark gathers up his courage and speaks the words he had for so long avoided, “I'm from a planet called Krypton.”

Lana walks towards him slowly, reaching her hand out cautiously to touch his face. “But you're just like everyone else,” she says softly.

Clark then lifts Lana into his arms, and looks up, determined to follow through with his plan. In a moment they begin to fly straight upwards. Lana turns her face toward Clark’s, a smile breaking over her features, in awe of what is happening. They fly to a platform on the top of a huge column of ice, high above the floor of the fortress. Clark sets Lana gently down on her feet and she steps away from him, gazing around in wonder.

“This isn't the first time you've done that, is it?” she asks him straightforwardly. “How many times have you been there when I didn't know it, saving me?”

“It doesn't matter, Lana,” Clark replies with much emotion. “I couldn't let anything happen to you.”

“And no one knew,” she says in amazement, unable to tear her eyes away from his face.

“There were so many days I wanted to tell you,” Clark declares with deep sincerity.

Lana looks at him, a bit puzzled. “What makes today any different?” she asks.

Clark looks into her eyes lovingly. “I want you to know who I really am.”

Clark holds out his hand, showing Lana a lump of coal. He clenches his fist around it, and golden light shines from between his fingers as he squeezes tightly, frowning with effort. He holds out his hand to Lana, and blows away the coal dust to reveal a diamond. Lana looks at it and then at Clark in wonder. Clark smiles as he takes a gold band from his pocket and places the diamond on top of it, then uses his heat vision to solder them together. He goes down on one knee in front of Lana, holding the ring up for her to see.

He asks simply, “Will you marry me?”

Lana’s eyes widen as she looks down at him, breathing hard.

Before she can say a word, a booming voice calls out, “Kal-El! Kal-El, come. I must speak to you. It is urgent!”

Lana’s eyes widen and she looks to Clark, “Who was that?”

“That is my Kryptonian father, Jor-El,” Clark replies, sounding annoyed with Jor-El for having interrupted his proposal. “Come, I must speak with him. Then we can continue our talk.”

Clark again lifts Lana into his arms, and floats down to the floor of the Fortress. He sits her on the platform, then moves toward the console of crystals. Lana watches in awe as one crystal rises of its own accord into the air, right in front of Clark. Clark grasps the crystal, and is immediately enveloped in a bright beam of light. Lana is frightened at what she sees happening to Clark. His eyes seem to be transfixed on one spot, his head tilted back, his body stiff. Lana watches, not daring to move from her spot on the ice table. A few tears fall from her eyes, and immediately freeze on her cheeks. Lana cannot bear to watch the scene before her. She closes her eyes tightly, hoping that when she opens her eyes, Clark will be alright. Every minute or two, she peeks out, and, still seeing Clark in the trance-like state, she cannot bear to watch, and closes her eyes again.

After about an hour, when Lana opens her eyes, the beam of light is fading, and Clark slumps to the ground, seeming to be exhausted, defeated. Lana jumps up and runs to him.

“Clark! Clark! Are you alright? Clark, please be alright!” Lana sits on the ground and pulls his head into her lap. She strokes his face with a gentle hand, toying with his unruly locks as well. She blinks back the tears that try to form in her eyes, but won’t because of the cold. She leans down and kisses Clark upon the lips, then continues to caress his face.

Clark opens his eyes and looks up in confusion. “Lana? Lana, what are you doing here? How did we get here?”

Lana stares at him with concern. “Clark, what do you mean? You brought me here, through some kind of transporter in the caves. Don’t you remember? You told me who you really are and where you are from - and then you asked me to marry you. Don’t you remember that, Clark?”

Clark looks at Lana in disbelief. He blinks his eyes several times, and shakes his head as if attempting to clear it. “Lana, I do remember - but that seems like months ago. So much has happened since then…”

“Clark, what are you talking about? It’s only been an hour. Right after you proposed, Jor-El called out to you. You grasped a crystal that floated up from that display, and then you were engulfed in a beam of bright light. You were that way for an hour before it faded. And now we’re here.”

Clark still looks incredulous. He sits up and his mind begins to race. “It can’t be. You mean, none of that really happened? You didn’t die in that car accident? I didn’t rewind time to save you? My dad didn’t die? There was no masked vigilante named Andrea? Chloe wasn’t possessed by the spirit of a dead girl? You didn’t hit Victor Stone with your car - and he didn’t turn out to be a Luthorcorp experimental cyborg? Simone didn’t hypnotize me, and cause us to break up horribly?”

Lana interrupts him, “Break up? Clark, you must have been hallucinating. There is no way I would ever break up with you.”

Clark still cannot believe this is reality. “Lana, I never lied to you and said that I didn’t love you anymore?”

Lana is taken aback. “Clark, why would you ever do that? Of course you never did that!”

Clark continues his questioning. “So you never used an experimental drug to try to see your parents - and I never got accidentally injected with that drug & saw my deceased father?”

Lana shakes her head in the negative.

Clark begins to believe, and a smile begins to spread across his face. His questions become more exclamations than questions now. He grasps Lana’s upper arms, and looks into her eyes. “You never went to Lex and began to get…intimate with him! My mom never got pulled into a dangerous plot against Lionel Luthor that nearly killed her! There was no “Graham” who tried to kill Lex to give you and me another chance! Lionel Luthor doesn’t know my secret - and he isn’t making my mom fall for him! Lex was never the “Vessel of Zod” - and Zod never escaped the Phantom Zone! Brainiac never caused the breakdown of society by releasing a nasty computer virus! I was never trapped in the Phantom Zone! I’ve just been here all along! Right here with you, Lana?”

Lana nods in the affirmative. Clark pulls her into a tight embrace, taking in the scent of her, burying his face in her hair, holding her close to him as if he will never ever let go. “Oh, Lana,” he whispers into her ear. “It was such a horrible nightmare. The worst part of it was losing you.” He pulls back just enough to look lovingly, longingly into her eyes. “Lana, I love you so much. I can never go on to fulfill my destiny without you. You are my strength, my stability. You keep me steady, no matter what I’m up against. I love you with my entire being. I always have and always will. It’s always been you, Lana. Only you.” Clark draws her lips to his own, pouring into it all of the love it seems he was unable to express to her for so long - in the nightmare, or the visions, or whatever it was.


When they finally break the kiss, Jor-El’s voice is heard again. “Kal-El. What you have seen - no, what you have experienced is one possible course of events that could actually happen when you leave here. I have shown it to you as a warning, in hopes that you will not allow it to happen. That sequence of events will send Earth to its doom, to the same fate as Krypton. You must never allow events to turn to that path. Your destiny is to save this planet from such doom. Kal-El, you are the only one who can prevent it. Choose your actions wisely. Allow Lana to help and support you, and you will succeed in saving this planet and its people. Farewell, Kal-El.”

Jor-El’s voice fades away. Clark stands up, and pulls Lana to her feet, and then into his arms. He holds her close, feeling her shivering, even under the heavy parka. He gazes into her sparkling hazel eyes, and longs to kiss her again, at length. But he knows it is time to get her out of the cold. Giving her a quick kiss, he scoops her up into his arms and activates the transport back to the caves. Safe in the warmth of the caves, he keeps her in his arms, her arms around his neck. Their eyes meet in a long gaze that expresses so much more than words could ever say.

Clark smiles and whispers, “So, Lana, will you marry me?” He sees the depth of her love for him shining from her eyes. She smiles beautifully as she whispers to him, “Oh, yes, Clark. I will marry you. Nothing will ever take me away from you. I will love you always.”

Her lips move to his, softly, tenderly, at first, then deepening into a true expression of passion and commitment to each other. Clark knows deep in his heart, that Lana is his forever and always.

THE END

Cardinal
07-05-2006, 01:25 AM
Clana!!!

'nuf said. ;)

KKfan4ever
07-05-2006, 02:39 AM
all i got to say is WOW!!!! Wish the writers of the show would actually look at some of these fan fics to see how it really should be done. :D

Chad

deanyouk
07-05-2006, 03:48 AM
Shame it wasnt a dream on the real show....

Nice little story :)

happycamper
07-05-2006, 04:15 AM
Originally posted by Cardinal
Clana!!!

'nuf said. ;)
Concur!

:) :)

xfreak1990
07-05-2006, 04:19 AM
that's the way it should have gone i like this a lot

MOOman0618
07-05-2006, 08:04 AM
HOW IT SHOULD HAVE HAPPEND!!! If only they would listen to you. :)

redraven
07-05-2006, 08:41 AM
Nice standalone. :) Glad it was all a dream, especially the Lexana.

superman_lives_on
07-05-2006, 09:00 AM
BRILLIANT! I wonder how Season Five would have gone if Lana were in the know? SVM showed us one possible version. Hopefully, the declining ratings will be sufficient to knock some sense into the writing team and make them do a Season Six where Lana is in on the secret. All this yo-yo bs has gotten old and rotten.

Nice work, SV. :D

Totalclanafan614
07-05-2006, 10:12 AM
Genius!!!!!!
That was awesome!!!
Shower us with more of your great stories, SV!!

ClanaLover
07-05-2006, 12:22 PM
Awwww...Yay! Now THAT'S a the season premier that we all want! ;)

Nemu
07-05-2006, 12:45 PM
You know as much as I like this... I have to say I hate you :p ;)

You made a lot of ideas to form in my head with this stand alone... and now im stuck with them too... Hope you are happy now ;)




(and for those slower of mind out there this post was filled with playfulness... the only real thing in there are the fact it is good and that it gave me ideas...)

maitriniazngurl
07-05-2006, 01:28 PM
Wow, that was a awsome one shot SV. Loved it!! My favorite episode was Reckoning I wish the writers would have stuck to the "Happily Ever After Clana"

Awesome update!! :D

SVsleuth
07-05-2006, 03:04 PM
Originally posted by Nemu
You know as much as I like this... I have to say I hate you :p ;)

You made a lot of ideas to form in my head with this stand alone... and now im stuck with them too... Hope you are happy now ;)
LOL - Yay! Now I'll be waiting for you to DO something with those ides, Nemu. More fics from you on the way? ;) :p PPMS! :lol:

Dr.Willowbrook
07-05-2006, 03:24 PM
Ciao! Just saw this on my lunch break.

The whole crystal thing is like Jor-El's way of saying "psyche!" to Clark, kind of like a Punk'd episode where some celebrity thinks their car got smashed when it's actually sitting safely in the back lot. :p

I think this could serve as a cool jumping off point for an alternate saeson 5 with Lana in the know... just a suggestion (I think you already have plenty on your plate with your Clana future series, so no pressure)! :)

Good work!

clark&lanafan95
07-05-2006, 08:19 PM
PPMS!!!!!!!

akuma
07-06-2006, 11:05 AM
Well that was a lot better than the stupid show lol. Great job and that was a nice short read tht was well done!

treker
07-27-2006, 04:53 PM
ppms

Nemu
07-27-2006, 05:15 PM
you know... I just re-read this piece of work... and damn the ideas came back... I guess since I am off work for a whole week starting tomorrow evening I'll have to try to get some of them out of my head and also work on Heroes Rising...

and this is still an excellent standalone...

lanalang1234
07-27-2006, 05:33 PM
omg that was without a doubt the things that should have happended on the show im crying so hard right now u have no idea how much that means to me that anyone would FINALLY WRITE THAT LITTLE PIECE OF FICTION!!!!

happycamper
07-28-2006, 03:13 AM
I thought I'd give you a second comment...just because I like the story so much (and because I had forgotten I already read it when I opened it again :lol: ).

Thinking about your story...didn't one entire season of the 'Dallas' show turn out to be a dream of one of the characters? So is asking than 10 1/2 shows of season five turn out to be a dream asking for too much? Especially, in such a good cause? ;)



:D :D

emsfan
07-28-2006, 08:35 AM
wow what a wonderfull ending!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!:)

SVsleuth
07-28-2006, 09:06 PM
Originally posted by happycamper
Thinking about your story...didn't one entire season of the 'Dallas' show turn out to be a dream of one of the characters? So is asking than 10 1/2 shows of season five turn out to be a dream asking for too much? Especially, in such a good cause? ;) :D :D
Well, Cardinal did point that out to me about Dallas - I never watched the show & never paid attention to it, but, hey, you're right, if Dallas could erase an entire season, then Al/Miles can erase10 1/2 episodes. LOL. Glad you enjoyed my Season 5 "fix" - twice. :) This was one of those things that just came to me and I just HAD to write it. :D

Iowanmom
08-12-2006, 10:10 PM
Well SVsleuth,
I have finally read one of your fics. Well, one that isn't so darn long. :lol: I must say, I liked this take better than the script form that I saw you use once. It seems to flow better and draws us in deeper with your characters. Great job... I know you probably don't do the script form anymore, but that's all I've experienced from you, till now. As a matter of fact, the words 'script form' I learned from you. :)

Anyway, I'm glad Clark took Lana to the FOS. And I don't know if this is your true take on the events in Reckoning, but do you really think Clark flew with Lana??? I always thought he jumped. No matter. I don't want to turn this into a debate, I just didn't know if this event was your gifted muses coming through or if you believed he actually flew. Either way... I could feel the air billowing through Lana's hair... the cold slicing through her. Great vision, SVsleuth.

Then we have Jor-El taking Clark to 'educate' him. I've always wondered how long it would be if Chloe hadn't interrupted Clark when she found him in the FOS. Your twist here is very interesting. Everything a dream... the guilt, pain, trials and lessons forced to learn, and the lives lost never happened.

And through out the nightmare playing out behind trancelike eyes, Lana was there. Watching, loving, vying for him. Needing him to come back to her, yet unable to watch completely for fear that Clark would be whisked away.

When she closed her eyes I was disappointed. Forcing me to think back to my impression that Lana isn't strong enough to withstand the knowledge, loneliness, and burdens this secret will require her to bear. She must be able to stand and watch as he is Crushed before her eyes and be the force that lifts him and drives him when he falters.

As she goes to his collapsed from on the Fortress' cold floor, she comforts, gives him strength and shows her devotion with words of love and promise. Beautiful work here, SVsleuth. You redeemed her glances away in my eyes. Lifting my opinions of her instantly. My goodness, you do Clana good. It was a pleasure to read this. :)

emogirl*88
08-12-2006, 11:10 PM
loved it!!

Nemu
08-12-2006, 11:16 PM
ok after that comment from Io... I'm getting nervous about doing what I wanted to do...

SV.. .I said I would do it and I will... but I know it will be a pale imitation to the wonderful setting you did in this piece of work...

And now that I have some of my writing 'spirit' back I'll be able to start this...

SVsleuth
08-12-2006, 11:25 PM
Hi, IO! So glad you got to read one of my fics! :)

As for Clark flying, I guess they'd say he "jumped" on the show, but to me it seems really close to flying, so I'd prefer he just fly - after all, the only reason they want it t be a "jump" is that they weren't allowed to have him fly, according to their agreements, etc., etc.

As for the form I use - I don't know why I at first started writing that "script" way - probably becaue I hadn't ever written a fic before, & that's what a lot of other writers were doing. I changed from that when I got to the sequel of Hidden, & now write those updates similar to this standalone. I like it much better.

Thanks so much for reading and for your encouraging reply.

*****
Welcome, emogirl*88 - glad you enjoyed it. Hope you'll read my other fics too, thogh I know they are quite long.

*****
Yes, Nemu, by all means, write the ideas that this fic gave you. Can't wait! ;)

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 11:32 AM
i absolutley loved that story even if it is a stand alone

NYC300Z
11-15-2006, 02:42 PM
I can't believe I haven't read this sooner! Great one shot! Don't we all wish this would happen!;)

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
11-15-2006, 05:32 PM
thats definatley how it should have been

happycamper
11-15-2006, 10:50 PM
Now I got to enjoy it for a third time...couldn't resist! :lol: ;) :lol:


:D :D

SVsleuth
11-15-2006, 11:37 PM
Originally posted by happycamper
Now I got to enjoy it for a third time...couldn't resist! :lol: ;) :lol:


:D :D

Thanks, hc - but you might like my new update on Alt. Clana instead of x3 here ;)

kewl
01-07-2007, 08:28 AM
great story!

JEWCY
03-29-2007, 03:44 PM
wow really good. that was a different spin on jor-el.

clana_never_give_up
03-29-2007, 06:55 PM
Whoo, nice standalone. It would have been interesting if it was continued. To see what could happen now that Clark saw the future. That gives me a great idea for a story for when I finish one of my other ones. If I decide to do that, you know continue off your story, would you mind if I did that SV?


Anyways, I loved it great story. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

SVsleuth
03-31-2007, 07:26 PM
Thanks, JEWCY & clana never give up. :) Glad you both enjoyed it. I believe I already gave Nemu the first crack at continuing this fic, but I don't mind if others take a stab at it too. I may even come back & do a sequel myself someday. But, first, I've just GOT to finish Alt. Clana & Clana Journals. So I'm reisisting all new ideas until those are done.

Here's a link to all of my completed fics: http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showthread.php?postid=2603033#post2603033

Nemu
03-31-2007, 08:38 PM
oh they can try if they want... this project is 'on hold' like the rest of my work...

Clana2009
03-18-2008, 08:19 PM
Totally shoulda happened like that. Yes i know I'm the new kid, but give me a break..... on sweet I am a Junkie!!!

escout
03-23-2008, 12:01 PM
:rotfl::rotfl:Steph,

I just stumbled accross this short story. Well done thanks for sharing!!!!!:)

This is the way it should have been. Keep writing i love your style!!!!

clana_never_give_up
04-05-2008, 08:11 AM
Awe....:)

That is definitely the way it should have gone. :D