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smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 10:34 AM
This is my first fanfic so I hope you all like it




(Clark is sitting at home not really watching tv and really upset over his dad)

Martha- Clark i'm going to the store, did you wanna come with me?(trying to sound cheerful)

Clark-Sure mom(not really wanting to go but wanting to help his mom out)




(They arrive at the store)

Clark-I'll go get you some bread a few aisels over ok?

Martha-Sure Clark, thanks.

(As clark is heading down to and aisel someone taps him on the shoulder)

Lex-Hi Clark I uh haven't gotten to see you in a while and I was wondering how you were doing?

Clark-(angerly) If you really wanted to see or talk to me you would of shown up at my dads funeral.

Lex-I was there, I guess you didn't see me I am really sorry about your loss clark. I know no pain is worse than to loose a parent.

Clark-If you really cared about me you would've shown your face to me at the funeral.(leaves him really angery and upset)

Martha-So, what kind of bread did you get?

Clark-Oh ya, the bread, i'm sorry I forgot to get it.

Martha-(looks at clark worriedly) it's ok Clark i'm sure we have some bread left at home. I'm done shopping so lets go home.



At home


(Clark goes back to watching tv where there's nothing on when his phone starts to ring)

Clark-(not feeling like talking to anyone) Hello?

Lana-Hi Clark, how are you doing?

Clark-fine

Lana- You can't be doing fine Clark. You just can't keep everything bottled up inside, or your just going to erupt. Please talk to me...

Clark-Look Lana you don't know everything...

Lana-what do you mean?

Clark-(in a faint voice) it's all my fault...

Lana-what?

Clark-(starting to get mad) I just really don't feel like talking ok?

Lana-Ok well can I come over and just be with you?

Clark-Lana I really don't wanna be with anyone right now I just wanna be alone and maybe I should stay alone for a while so I can't hurt anyone else.

Lana-Clark I love you, your not going to hurt me and I really don't understand what your talking about.

Clark-(almost crying) There's nothing you or anyone else can do for me right now so I just wanna be here by myself. I gotta go eat dinner...

Lana-(feeling helpless with tears running down her cheeks) Ok Clark but you know whenever you need me i'll be there for you. Goodbye (he hangs up the phone) goodbye....



Ok well that's all I have right now so I hope you guys like it more to come soon

maitriniazngurl
06-25-2006, 12:04 PM
Contine!! It's good!! :D

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 12:04 PM
Next part of the story....


(lana really upset decides to go and talk to chloe)

(lana goes to the daily planet where she sees chloe working)

Chloe-hey lana whats up?

Lana-I'm just dealing with a lot right now.

Chloe-I know what you mean. So how's Clark doing?

Lana-Not good at all he doesn't want anything to do with me or anybody. I'm just afraid that he'll do something out of his anger that he'll regret.

Chloe-I know you really want to be there for him right now but the best thing to do right now might just be to leave him alone.

Lana-I can't just leave him suffering by himself. What kind of a girlfriend would that make me.

Chloe-He know's you love him Lana. He loves you so much that he wanted to keep his secert from you just so you wouldn't be in danger.

Lana-I know it's just...

Chloe-I know, you love him and wanna be there for him.

Lana-Well I guess i'll go home now. bye chloe thanks for being there for me. Your the only person who I can really talk to now.


Next scene at the kent house


Clark-Mom I'm going go in the barn and do some chores and then I might go out.

Martha-Ok, Where are you going?

Clark-I'm not sure yet. I just wanna go somewhere

(Clark goes into the barn)

(Clark's thinking: Nothings right or normal anymore and it's all because of me. I lost my dad, my best friend, and now i'll probably lose the only person I've ever loved. I wish everthing was just back to normal, I wish I felt normal...but I can. The rock that i buried in this barn can. The red kryptonite that makes me feel like a new person.(heads over to the hiding place his red rock is in)I know I can't control myself though. My dad would never want me to do it. But why did he have to die and leave me here to suffer without him. I can't help it.(he picks up the red ring and right when he does he feels the best rush he's ever felt before)(smiles and exits the barn)


that's the next part so I hope you all liked it. feedback is always appreciated:)

maitriniazngurl
06-25-2006, 12:09 PM
Cool, the next part already!! :D It was great!!

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 12:14 PM
Thanks maitriniazngurl i'm really glad you liked it :)

emsfan
06-25-2006, 01:20 PM
I like your writing it sounds interesting.. please update soon... im looking forward to it..

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 01:38 PM
ok emsfan i'll update soon thanks for your feedback:)

closetfan
06-25-2006, 01:41 PM
NO!!!! not red K!!

yarrrrg!

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 01:45 PM
lol do you not like the story or you don't think he should put the red k on?

closetfan
06-25-2006, 02:00 PM
no no i like the story, i just hate red k

:)

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 02:12 PM
oh lol kk i'm glad ya like it:)

smallvillewolf17
06-25-2006, 02:37 PM
I love it so far. PPMS!

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 02:38 PM
thanks for the feedback smallvillewolf17 i'm glad you like it:) what does ppms mean? lol

clana4ev3r
06-25-2006, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by smallvillesweetie
thanks for the feedback smallvillewolf17 i'm glad you like it:) what does ppms mean? lol

Please Post More Soon...that's what PPMS means and by all means...

PPMS!!! :D :D

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 03:49 PM
lol thanks for telling me and i will :)

The story Continues...


(clark enters his house just as martha is done making dinner)

Martha-Hey Clark just in time for dinner

Clark-I ate

Martha-where'de ya go

Clark-out

Martha-ok well wanna help me finish doing the dishes

Clark-mom when do I ever wanna help with the dishes?

Martha-ok? well lana called when you were gone

Clark-oh her again... well i better call her back to make her happy

(martha a bit confused by clark's behavior)

Martha-well i'm goin to bed so i'll see ya tomorrow morning

Clark-maybe(picks up the phone and goes in his room and dials lana's number)

Lana-Hello?

Clark-hey babe, you called?

Lana-Ya I wanted to see if you wanted to hang out.

Clark-sure I have time for ya

Lana-Time for me?

Clark-ya, we could fly you around if you wanted

Lana-That would be fun. Are you sure that's what you want to do?

Clark-Well isn't that what you wanted to do ever since you found out my secert?

Lana-No clark if you don't want to do that then that's fine. we could talk in the park?

Clark-All you ever do is talk and complain

Lana-I know your feeling bad right now but don't talk to me like that.

Clark-Now I hurt your feelings. I told you to stay away from me cus that's all I do is hurt people.(his temper starting)

Lana-No you don't always hurt people clark. Your just not being that nice to me right now.

Clark-your mad at me now so are you gonna tell everyone my secert?

Lana-Clark what has gotten into you? I love you and I already promised you I wouldn't tell anyone your secert. Do you think that lowly of me where I would do something like that?

Clark-Ya know what I really don't have time for your nagging so i'm gonna go.

Lana-(starting to cry) fine clark maybe i'll talk to you when your not acting like your drunk. bye

Clark-Laters

(just then the phone rang again)....




well that's the next part so i hope everyone likes it

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 06:39 PM
The story continues....


(Clark picks up the phone starting to get annoyed)

Clark-hello?

Chloe-Clark hey I called to see what you were up to?

Clark-Nothing but I think i'm goin out partying later

Chloe-Clark partying? Now that's something that would be worth seeing.

Clark-I'm not joking chloe i'm sick of always doing the same thing all the time.

Chloe-Well does Lana know that your going?

Clark-I don't really care if she knows or not.

Chloe-Well you should care because she's your girlfriend

Clark-Not anymore i'm a fee man now.

Chloe-Clark I know you, you wouldn't break up with her right after you finally told her your secert.

Clark-Maybe you really don't know me then

Chloe(starting to think something really wrong was up with Clark) Hey Clark, can I come partying with you? You know I always love a good party.

Clark-Sure Chloe wanna drive there or go by flight?

Chloe-(rolls her eyes) I think driving will be fine.

(Clark picks up his car keys and goes out the door to pick up Chloe)
(Arrives at Chloes)

Clark-hey

Chloe-hey i'm ready, I haven't seen you in so long(goes and hugs him trying to find the red K)(she reaches in his jean pocket and snatches it out and throws in onto the lawy)there!

Clark-Hey, what am I doing at your house?

Chloe-Clark! you know what red kryptonite does to you! Why did you put it in your pocket?(really upset)

Clark-Because I wanted to be happy and feel normal again.

Chloe-(gets up real close to clark)Clark I wish so bad that I could take the pain away from you but you will be happy again. And there's still people that are happy just to be around you.

Clark-Thanks Chloe for taking the red kryptonite out of my pocket before I really messed things up. Wait, I did mess things up with Lana really bad. I hope she forgives me for what I've done.

Chloe-Just tell her the TRUTH and and i'm sure she'll forgive you. She knows your having a really hard time now and she's a very forgiving person.

Clark-Ok Chloe well i'll just go to her house now so bye and thanks again. Your a true friend Chloe.

(Chloe smiles and heads back inside while she watches Clark leave)

(Clark arrives at Lana's and rings the doorbell)



Stay tooned to see if Lana forgives Clark.... I hope you all like the next part in the story

clark&lanafan95
06-25-2006, 08:24 PM
Great updates ! I hope Lana forgives him . PPMS!!!

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 09:53 PM
will haveta wait and see.... lol i'll prolly update it really soon

basketballstar23
06-25-2006, 11:05 PM
i hate red kryptonite!!!!!! but...it makes stuf interesting...:lol:....PPMS!!!

smallvillesweetie
06-25-2006, 11:26 PM
thanks for your feedback basketballstar23 he's not on red k anymore so no need to be upset lol i'm glad ya liked it :)

emsfan
06-26-2006, 01:35 PM
Soo good i love it . fantastic writing.. i can't wait for the next post... Great job;)

smallvillewolf17
06-26-2006, 02:23 PM
Don't Stop! It's addicting.

smallvillesweetie
06-27-2006, 04:13 PM
ok i'll try and update it tonight thanks for your feedback i'm really glad all of you like it :)

smallvillesweetie
06-27-2006, 06:52 PM
The story continues...


Clark-(very nervous)Hi Lana

Lana-Hi

Clark-I'm really sorry how I talked to you ealier and I know being upset about everything is no excuse.

Lana-No it isn't, Clark I just don't understand the way you were talking...

Clark(interups)I know it wasn't myself

Lana-I've seen you this way before it's like you have a whole other side to you. You can be so caring and sweet at one moment and then you go on a rage and hurt everyone around you when your upset.

Clark-I can't explain Lana

Lana-Can't explain what Clark? You were mad and you didn't care what came out of your mouth.

Clark-I'm really sorry Lana and I don't know what else I can do to make you forgive me. I love you Lana and you are the only thing I got left. I just can't lose you too.

Lana-Your not gonna lose me Clark(goes up to him and hugs him)I love you Clark I aways have and I aways will.

Clark-I love you more than anything.

Clark-I'm just scared one day I'm gonna accidently do something to push you too far where you'll never come back to me.

Lana-Clark nothing could do that(not completely reasured)

Clark-Well I gotta go so i'll call you later ok?

Lana-Sure i'll be waiting(smiles)

(Clark walks off of the portch and heads towards home)

Ok that's the next part of my story I think i'm gonna change the part where Lana knows his secert and have her not know it do you guys think that's a good change or not cus if you don't think it is i'll leave it where she does so please tell me thanks

clark&lanafan95
06-27-2006, 07:09 PM
Good Update !!! PPMS!!!!!!!

smallvillesweetie
06-27-2006, 07:45 PM
thanks for the feedback glad you like it:)

smallvillewolf17
06-27-2006, 08:07 PM
I like hoe she know his secret. I think you should keep it like it is.

LovinMe210
06-27-2006, 09:09 PM
Me two, I like her knowing his secret ppms!

smallvillesweetie
06-27-2006, 09:34 PM
ok i'll keep it that way then thanks for the feedback

maitriniazngurl
06-28-2006, 10:56 AM
Good updates!! I'm really looking forward for more...

Btw, Red K brings out funny Clark and he looks a lot hotter so I don't mind. :D

smallvillesweetie
06-28-2006, 11:12 AM
haha ya i know what you mean he really does dress a whole lot hotter than his usual plaid lol