Everlasting Love Against Family

[SeriousClanaFan]

Ok...this is like my fourth or fifth post so...I hope you like it. I haven't been here more than a month so please send feedback.
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*It is the year 2012. Clark and Lana went thier separate ways when Clark decided to move to Metropilos. Lana went to move in with her sister in Greendale. Four months later....Lana had a baby girl and named her Nicole. She looked exactly like her father. She didn't know when to tell Clark about the baby because they broke up four years ago. The story goes on....
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Chapter One~Part One

Lana was putting Nicole to sleep when the phone rang. She sat Nicole in her crib and anwserd it.

"Hello?" she said in a tired voice.
"Hey sis. It's just me. I'll be home in about five minutes."
"Ok, Heather." Lana yawned.
"You ok? Is my neice tiring you again?" Heather asked.
Lana nodded. "Yea...Nicole can be a handful."
"I hear you, girl. Just try to stay awake until I'm home ok?"
"Alright. I'll see you later."
"Ok. See you sis."
"Bye"
"bye"

Lana hung up the phone and went back to Nicole's crib. 'Fhew. Good she's finally asleep.' Lana sighed and layed down on the couch. Time passed and Lana's eyes got heavier and hevier. Soon...Lana's eyelids closed and she drifted off to sleep.

*Meanwhile at Mitropilos*

Clark was looking at pictures of Lana. 'Boy, do I miss her. If I only had one more chance with Lana I would start all over.....but I can't....I blew it. I blew it didn't I?' He threw the pictures aside and put his hands over his eyes.
He wished he could go back in time with him and Lana but he couldn't. He had to move to Mitropolis because he didn't want to hurt Lana and his father died three years ago.

He got up and superspeeded to the caves. He put the key in the slot and teleported into the fortress of solitude. "Dad?" he yelled. "YES, MY SON?" Jor-El answerd. "I want to know if Lana Lang still loves me." Clark shouted. "SHE DOES LOVE YOU MY SON." Jor-El said. "Where is she?" Clark shouted. "I CAN'T TELL YOU MY SON...YOU WILL HAVE TO FIND OUT ON YOUR OWN" Jor-El responded. "What?...Why!" Clark yelled. "GOOD-BYE SON." And with that, there was a flash of light. 'Where should I go?' Clark said to himself. He superspeeded back into his apartment and called the number: 555-2739

"Hello?" a familiar voice said.
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To be continued....
Is it good? Please send feedback.

[akuma]

Nice start, seems Jor El knows everything, PPMS

[basketballstar23]

:)

[SeriousClanaFan]

Thanks Akuma for the feedback. And you too Shawna:D
I'll post more today or tommorrow....if I have time.

Thanks again!

[SmallvilleFan2001]

Keep going. It's interesting.

[deanyouk]

keep going

[maitriniazngurl]

Please continue it was great. Having a sister puts a whole new twist in a story, believe me I know cause I have the most annoying, self-center little sister of all. :D :D

PPMS:)

[SeriousClanaFan]

I hear you Mimi...cause my little sister is the same way. And thanks for the feedback. I'm doing more chapters today.

[maitriniazngurl]

No problem, as long as I can talk about my sister without her knowing... heh... heh... :lol:

[SeriousClanaFan]

Chapter Two~Part One

"Hey Chlo." Clark said in a sad voice.
"Oh, Hey Clark...is everything okay? You sound a little depresed."
"Because I am Chloe. Do you know where Lana lives?"
"Lana? Um...Yea I do but I can't tell you." Chloe said.
"Why not?" he asked.
"Because Lana begged me not to tell you. You can call her yourself and ask her. I'm sorry Clark but I have to go. Bye"
"Chloe! But I don't have her number."

Clark put the phone down in a huff. 'Why would Lana not want me to know where she lives? I mean...does she still love me? I guess not.' Clark superspeded to a big box and got out a little red box.

Inside was a red Kryptonite ring. 'I have to do this.' Clark said to himself. He put the red ring on and there was a red fire in his eyes. "I am Kal-El...now it is time to fufil my destiny."

*Meanwhile at Greendale*

"Heather, are you sure about this? I don't think it's a very wise deision." Lana said looking at the huge needle."Nonsence. I don't think this will hurt Nicole." Heather said looking at it as well. "Well, I'm not leting you put that thing in my baby's leg. She's only four months, she's not ready for shots yet." Heather looked at it again and put it away. "I think your right." she said puting the needle in the trash.

"Heather, can you feed Nicole for me? I need to go to get more dipers for her." "Ok." Lana handed Nicole to her sister, got her keys and purse and headed out the door.

*Back at Mitropilos*

Clark...or should I say Kal-El...drove to a club called The Rave and walked over to the table. "Hey you..Gimmie a beer." The man behind the table looked at him. "Sorry man..Fresh out." Kal-El grabbed his collar. "I said GIMMIE A BEAR you bi**." "Ok...Ok!" the man said frightend. He let go of his collar and looked at him with fire in his eyes.

"Clark?" someone said behind him.
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To be continued....
What do you thinkso far? Please send feedback.

[deanyouk]

Well it cant be Lana, last time I checked u cant get diapers from a club... lol or is she a rebel mom?

[SeriousClanaFan]

LOL...you'll be surprised when I say it's not Lana...you'll see I'll give you a hint...It's someone in Clark's family....not friends...well it might be Lois....so yea, friends also.
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Chapter Three~Part Two

Kal-El: Well, well, well..it's the famous Pete Ross.

Pete: Clark? Don't tell me you're on Red K again.

Kal-El: Well I am so get used to it.

Pete: Is this about you and Lana?

Kal-El: I don't know a girl named Lana.

Pete: Come on Clark. I know you still love her and she still loves you. She just had a baby and she was afraid to tell you. Clark please take off the ring.

Kal-El: Fine.

He took off the ring and there was another red flash in his eyes.

Clark: Pete? What are you doing here? What am I doing here with you at the Rave?

Pete: Come on, I'll tell you outside.

So Clark and Pete went ouside and sat on Clark's car.

Pete: Ok. I know where Lana is. She called me yesterday and I flew from California to be here to get you two back together.
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To be continued....
How is it so far? Please send feedback

[cr-rodriguez]

incredibly awesome please continue

[redraven]

Good story I like it...but you said you didn't like the year 2012 but used it in your story? :confused: Okay...but PPMS.

[SeriousClanaFan]

Well, I wanted them to be 20 so I used the year 2012. I might change it...I don't know yet.

[treker]

Originally posted by SeriousClanaFan
Well, I wanted them to be 20 so I used the year 2012. I might change it...I don't know yet.

Not to be picky....but, I have a problem with your time frame. If nicole is 4 years old and they're 20 then they would have had sex when they were both 16? And clark couldn't have gone to college 4 months after the breakup because he was 17?

just wondering?

[deanyouk]

Ok...

Make longer updates....

post soon

[SeriousClanaFan]

Originally posted by treker
Not to be picky....but, I have a problem with your time frame. If nicole is 4 years old and they're 20 then they would have had sex when they were both 16? And clark couldn't have gone to college 4 months after the breakup because he was 17?

just wondering?

Treker, she's not four YEARS old she's four MONTH'S old...now do you get the time frame?? I'm not trying to sound mad or anything...I'm just giving you the point. Besides, I was rushing with this story so I might change things a bit. I'm sorry for the missunderstanding and the confusement. And now it's making me confused?????

[treker]

Originally posted by SeriousClanaFan
Treker, she's not four YEARS old she's four MONTH'S old...now do you get the time frame?? I'm not trying to sound mad or anything...I'm just giving you the point. Besides, I was rushing with this story so I might change things a bit. I'm sorry for the missunderstanding and the confusement. And now it's making me confused?????

*It is the year 2012. Clark and Lana went thier separate ways when Clark decided to move to Metropilos. Lana went to move in with her sister in Greendale. Four months later....Lana had a baby girl and named her Nicole. She looked exactly like her father. She didn't know when to tell Clark about the baby because they broke up four years ago. The story goes on....




well, here's the problem. They broke up 4 years ago....so how can the baby be only 4 months old?

[SeriousClanaFan]

Originally posted by treker
well, here's the problem. They broke up 4 years ago....so how can the baby be only 4 months old?

Ok...so if they broke up four years ago...Nicole's four...oh sorry...I was thinking. So Treker...is 1 month better??? Can you tell me what to do cause I am REALLY confused here :confused:

[redraven]

It's your story...why are you confused? Just make a time frame that makes sense....

[SmallvilleFan2001]

It seems like you mean that they broke up 4 months ago and Lana's daughter is 4 months old. Odds are you mean that they broke up 13 months ago, just when Lana got pregnant. (Timeline would go: Clark & Lana break up, Lana finds out she's pregnant, 9 months later has the baby, and now it is 4 months after that) Does that make sense?

The overall story is good though.

[treker]

Originally posted by SeriousClanaFan
Ok...so if they broke up four years ago...Nicole's four...oh sorry...I was thinking. So Treker...is 1 month better??? Can you tell me what to do cause I am REALLY confused here :confused:

I'm sorry. I didn't mean to cause trouble. It's just that it didn't make sense to me. If you want her 4 months old then say they broke up 1 year ago. If you want them broke up 4 years ago...then the baby has to be 4.

stay cool

[basketballstar23]

:p....sorry...feeling abit goofy today...:lol:

[maitriniazngurl]

Kate, it's your story just make it the way you like it.. You don't have to make it so logic, besides this is fic anything can happen.. :D

Treker... Jeez do you have to ask to confuse her that much? :p :D

(SeriousClanaFan if you don't mind I think I'll call you Kate since it's shorter.) :)

[treker]

Originally posted by maitriniazngurl
Kate, it's your story just make it the way you like it.. You don't have to make it so logic, besides this is fic anything can happen.. :D

Treker... Jeez do you have to ask to confuse her that much? :p :D

(SeriousClanaFan if you don't mind I think I'll call you Kate since it's shorter.) :)

sorry...occassionally my logic gets the better of me.

[SeriousClanaFan]

It's okay Treker...just make sure to keep your logics under control...lol...I forgive you:D

Mimi...sure you can call me Kate...my friends call me Kate also...and thanks for the comment...that really made me feel better. ;)
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Ok, here's more of the story.
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Chapter four~Part Three

Clark: Do you know where she is?

Pete: Yea, she lives in Greendale with one of her sister's named Heather. Lana had a baby and somehow it's yours too.

Clark was amazed. 'Lana had a baby and it's mine too? Wait...this can't be right...I'm dreaming arne't I?' Clark told himself. Apparently...he wasn't dreaming. It was true. Lana had a baby.!

Clark: Take me to her. Now!

Pete: Okay...that was my job to take you to her...now let's go.

Pete and Clark got into pete's car and drove off.

~In Greendale~
Lana was changing Nicole's diper.
Lana: There. Now your all done sweetie.

Suddenly, there was a knock on te door. Lana went to the door and answerd it.

Lana: Hey Chloe! I can't believe your here!

Chloe: Me neither. Can I come in?

Lana: Yea sure, come in.

Lana closed the door behind her afer Chloe came in.

Chloe: So...this is Nicole Maria Kent!
Nicole smiled. Chloe laughed and picked her up.

Lana: My sister's here so wach what you tell her. Sometimes she's all up in your bissness.

Chloe: Ok.

Lana: I'll be in my room if you need me. I have to get something from the closet for Nicole.

Chloe: Take your time.

Lana went in her room and got a pink shirt and blue jeans from the closet. As soon as she was about to close the closet door a photo book fell to the floor. Lana picked it up and on it it read......

Clark and Lana's photo album

[B]Lana smiled and opened it. Inside was pictures of her and Clark at thier senior prom. She turned to the next page. This one was when they were at thier high school graduation. Then she heard Chloe's voice cry out:

Chloe: Lana, someone's at the door for you!
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To be continued.....
Please send feedback and sorry I haven't posted in a while. Im going on Vacation to Los Angeles and I won't be back until Monday. In the meantime....see you later!!!

[hearmewhisper]

wow, i've read this story, and it's great! continue!

[SeriousClanaFan]

Thanks! Well I'm not going to Los angeles today...insted I'm going next summer....Yay!!!!!! So I'm going to stay here!!!!!!

[maitriniazngurl]

Kate you should continue immediatly this story is great... I really want to know if there is going to be some happy Clana. :D

[deanyouk]

ppms

[SeriousClanaFan]

Sorry! I can't do my story right now I'll have to do it later.

Again Sorry!

[SeriousClanaFan]

I'm going to post the next chapter today....maybe. I'm already stressed because I had to wash my Mom and Dad's car. (Of course I had help from my sisters.) It was fun, but very tiring when you're done. Anyways....I might post it at 2:45pm or at 3:00.

[maitriniazngurl]

Kate it's 5:15 in South Carolina.... but before I complain I just want to know what part of the world you live in. In case we have different timing... :D :)

And just another question... How many brothers and sisters do you have?

I'm the oldest with one sister and one brother..... And growing up with them wasn't exactly paradise! :D

[SeriousClanaFan]

I live in Louisiana and right now it's 7:15. I have three brothers and five sisters. I'll tell you...living with them is not very special either. So far I'm the oldest of two sisters and one brother. I'm only 19. I'm planning to go to NY for College.

[maitriniazngurl]

*drops jaw* 8 siblings? I have 2 and If I have one more I think I'm going to kill myself... Well, thats what I told me parents when they were thinking about having one more... I said" Mom,Dad if you guys have one more children I'm going to run away, far away and kill myself.... " :D

Good luck with your plans on going to New York. I can't live in New York its too cold. I'm the kinda sun person. :D :D

[SeriousClanaFan]

Thanks Mi! I'm really excited and nervous about going to college there, but sooner or later I'll get used to it.

[maitriniazngurl]

Don't worry about it... College is great but it's a lot of hard work... Believe me. What are you majoring in?

Hope you update soon!!

[SeriousClanaFan]

I really don't know actually...today I just got out of working at the coffee shop and I'm really tired. I might post chapter six....or is it seven....today.

[maitriniazngurl]

Good!! Why did you change your avatar I loved it!!
PPMS

[SeriousClanaFan]

Oh, do you want me to change my avatar again? I didn't know you liked it. Actually I liked it too. Ok I'll change it if you really want me to.

Oh and 1 more thing...I posted a new story. It's called "Calling You" in the Clark and Chloe forms. I hope you read it!!

[maitriniazngurl]

Kate, I'm sooo sorry.. I loved your avatar.. but I didn't mean that you should change it. I'm sorry you got it the wrong way.. you should put it back or if you like this one then keep it.. I just said that your avartar was awesome and that zac was so hot.. sorry if you took it the wrong way.. :) :) :) :D

Can't wait for the update!! :D :D

I really appreciate the link to the iconator... thanks! :D

[SeriousClanaFan]

Actually I love my new avatar...I just got the one you see now...and it wasn't you're falt...I wanted to change it. So...don't feel bad Mimi....I'll keep this one...and thanks for you're concern.......you're really sweet:):D
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Chapter Five~Part Three

Lana put up the photo book and placed it at the top of the shelf. She closed the bedroom door and walked back into the living room. She was surprised to see Clark in her house. He was looking all around the room when he saw Lana in stiff mode.


Wow, she looks more beautiful than the last time I saw her.
Oh no, I don't want Clark to see me in stiff mode. And he looks more handsome and sexy than the first time I saw him. Oh God, look at his abs and muscles and....slap out of it Lana!!

Lana: Uh...hi...Clark
She couldn't resist looking at his abs and muscles. She dodn't know Clark had been working out more since she was gone.
Clark smiled his Kent smle.
Clark: Hi Lana.
Lana: How'd you get here?
Clark: Oh Pete brought me. He said that you called him so we could talk?
Lana hit her head.
Lana: Yea, I forgot all about that. I was just about to change Nicole's clothes.
Suddenly, Clark got stiff.
Lana: Clark? You ok?
Clark: Uh...yea. She's my daughter isn't she?
Lana: Yes she is. How'd you...?
Clark: Pete told me.
Lana: Right.
Clark: Lana can I ask you something?
Lana: Ask away.
Clark: Why did you leave Smallville? I mean did you love me?
Lana: Clark, I've always loved you. I've loved you since the first time I met you.
Clark: I remember the day when I stumbled to you're feet when I tried to talk to you. It was so imbarassing.
Lana laughed.
Lana: I thought you looked cute. I admit, that was the day I really started to like you, but I couldn't tell you because you were so distant.
Clark: I know. It's just that I've been so distant when I was younger because, I couldn't control my powers and you didn't know that i had powers and.....
Lana:Clark, I know.
Clark: Can I ask you another question?
Lana: Ok.
Clark: Can I see my daughter?
Lana: Ok.
Lana wispered in his ear.
Lana: But you have to be really quiet because she wakes up easily. Ok?
Clark smiled and nodded. Lana took his hand and Lead him to a pink room filled with baby things.

Clark: Wow, you have a lot of things for one baby.
Lana: I didn't buy most of these things my sister did. Sometimes she's a little too overprotective.
Clark walked over to Nicole's crib and looked inside. She was sound asleep. He smiled and turned twards Lana.
Clark: She looks just like me.
Lana: I know. Every time I look at her I see you. Clark I've missed you.
Clark walked closer to her.
Clark: I've missed you too. Not a day goes bye that I don't think of this beautiful face I see now. I love you Lana.
Lana: I love you too, Clark.
Clark leaned closer to Lana until thier lips meet in a soft, tender kiss.
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Fhew!! Sorry I haven't posted in a while. I've been sooooo busy with school and such. I hoped you like it. :):):)

[maitriniazngurl]

1st :D

That was great... Huray for happy Clana... And thanks for the comment.. your sweet too...:)

[deanyouk]

Wow that was easy... 2 mins and he gets some action lol

ppms

[maitriniazngurl]

Dean, As long as there's happy Clana I'm not complaining...:D lol

[superman8s]

dido w/ maitriniazngurl please i need happy clana

[SeriousClanaFan]

I'm doing the first chapter on "Lean by my side" if anyone's interested!

[superman8s]

reading it now but i want an update for this one

[SeriousClanaFan]

I'm going to post it later on today....I just got of from work at the coffee shop 5 minutes ago and I'm writing to you now from my friends comp.

[superman8s]

ok do kie just hurry! please! hurry! PPMS

[SeriousClanaFan]

Jenn, I'm not trying to sound too harsh or anything but you have to be patient.

I've been tired and stressed already because I had to work from 7to9.

And I'm only 19!! Please cut me some slack, PLEASE JENN. I'd appreciate it.

[SeriousClanaFan]

Sorry, I can't post again today.

I'll have an update sometime next week.

SORRY:(

[superman8s]

fine i shall be patient...

[SeriousClanaFan]

I'm so sorry......I haven't been posting in awhile because I've been sooooooo busy with college and stuff...........I'll post today if I can!!

[maitriniazngurl]

And I thought you went on vacation or something.. I haven't seen you around for weeks. Update soon!! :D