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SeriousClanaFan
05-18-2006, 05:38 PM
Clark and Lana are together but, During thier time together, Clark won't open up to her. Lana's 21 and Clark's 22 year's old. Lana is a fashion model and Clark is a famous reporter for the daliy planet. They aren't married, either. Oh, Chloe, Pete, Lois, Martha Kent, Jonathan Kent are also in the story.
Lex is not in the story, I don't like him.



Should I continue?
Tell me, and please be honest.

Nemu
05-18-2006, 05:41 PM
interesting... and without Baldy... should be even more interesting...

continue soon!

redraven
05-18-2006, 05:42 PM
Continue...although it would be nice if you wrote Lex in and then made him die or something...or be shunned by everyone and make him cry. :D

Seriously though, you really should write this story. :)

Smallville15
05-18-2006, 06:34 PM
please continue but dont make it a 5 yrs later they meet story please!

SeriousClanaFan
05-18-2006, 06:56 PM
Clark was working on an article at the daliy planet when Chole came in.

Chole: Hey Clark
Clark didn't answer. Chloe walked up to him.
Chloe: Is this about you and Lana again?
He nodded.
Chloe sighed and sat down next to him.
Chloe: Ok, tell me what happend.
He turned around to face Chole.
Clark: Ok...here's the story...
To be continued.......
Was it good? Should I continue? Sorry it was so short.

annaliese
05-18-2006, 07:22 PM
CONTINUE!

SeriousClanaFan
05-18-2006, 08:09 PM
Chloe: Wow, was she really mad?

Clark: Yes, she is, look I don't know what to do Chloe please, tell me what I should do. Please?!

Chloe: Clark, calm down, Lana's really angry at you because you won't open up to her and I would be really angry too if I were Lana. I mean you haven't opened up to her in 7 years.

Clark: I know, it's just that I love her and if I tell her my secret then she'll be angry with me. And I don't want her to be in danger.

Chloe: Clark, the only thing that's making her angry is you. She knows you love her it's just that she's a big girl now and you can't protect her forever. You need to tell her your secret now insted of 5 years from now. You get the picture?

Clark nodded and smiled.
Clark: Thanks, Chlo. You always know what to say. Thanks for being there for me, your like a big sister.

Clark hugged Chloe and ran out of the room.
Chloe: I try.

(At the talon)
Lana was fixing herself a latte. She sighed thinking about the fight her and Clark had that morning. Just then, Clark walked in.

Clark: Um...hi.
Lana: Clark, what are you doing here?
Clark: I want to be honest with you.
Lana: Really? Or are you here to lie to me again?
Clark walked up to Lana and kissed her softly and passionatly.
Clark: Really, I really want to be honest with you Lana. I love you.
Lana smiled and returned his kiss.
Lana: I love you too.

To be continued....
I loved the part at the talon!! What do you think?

superman8s
05-19-2006, 11:39 AM
cool ppms

maru11
05-19-2006, 04:35 PM
awesome start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon1!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!

SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 06:29 PM
Clark: So, do you forgive me or are you still mad?

Lana: I wasn't mad.

Clark: You wasn't?

Lana: No, I was furious because you kept hiding secrets from me. Clark, we've been together for three or four years and you still can't be honest with me?

Clark: Lana, I just wanted to protect you-

Lana: Protect me? Clark, I'm a big girl now I can handle myself.

Clark sighed.
Clark: Please, can I just talk to you. I don't want to have another big and stressful fight.

Lana: I don't either.

Clark: Ok.
Clark walked over to the couch and sat down. He patted for Lana to join him.

Lana: Ok, what is it that you want to tell me?

Clark: Ok. Umm..this is going to take awhile so, you might want to get comfortable.

Lana: I am comfortable.
She lied.

Clark: All right. First of all, I wasn't actually born in this planet.

Lana: What do you mean?

Clark: I was born in a planet called Krypton. When the planet blew up, my boiolgical parents sent me here during the first meteor shower. And now I feel gilty because I killed your parents.

Lana: Clark, wait, so you mean that you came from another planet, you're real parents sent you here before the planet blew up and you killed my parents?

Clark: Yea. (wispered)
Lana hugged Clark and Kissed him on his cheek.

Clark: What was that for?

Lana: For being honest with me. Clark, you didn't kill my parents. It wasn't even your decision to make. So don't be gilty, baby, I still love you.

Clark: I love you too.

To be continued.....
Was it good? Should I continue?

Nemu
05-19-2006, 06:51 PM
sure you should continue... and it is good so far!!!

PPMS :D

SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 07:13 PM
Lana: So, what else do you want to tell me?

Clark: Is this a good time to tell you that I have superpowers?

Lana's eyes opened wide.
Lana: YOU have superpowers?! What kinds of powers do you have?

Clark: Well..there's heatvision, x-ray vision, superspeed, flying, super strength, and super hearing.

Lana: Oh...my...gosh!

Clark: So...which one do you want to try first?

Lana: How about..super speed?

Clark: Ok, here it goes.......


To be continued........
Can I continue?

Nemu
05-19-2006, 07:19 PM
lol that was nice... so speed is up first...

and of course you can and should continue!!

SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 07:45 PM
Clark picked up Lana in his arms and super speeded to Lana's apartment.

Lana: We're in my apartment. You really do have superpowers!

Clark laughed and sat Lana down.
Clark: I geuss you'll have to get used to this.

Lana: Yea.

Clark: Which one do you want to do next?

Lana: Next is..heatvision.

Clark: Ok.

Clark superspeeds and grabs a candle.

Clark: Watch closely.

And in a flash of light Lana sees a lighteen candle.

Lana: WOW! Clark that's awsome!

Clark smiles and kisses Lana's nose.

Clark: Thank you.

To be continued...
What do you think? Sorry it was short, it will be longer tommorow!

Nemu
05-19-2006, 08:04 PM
well true your updates are short... but if you do more than one per day then its balancing itself...

that was nice... so the show and tell continues...

PPMS :D

SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 08:32 PM
Thanks Nemu!;)

SORRY YOU GUYS! I have to go to bed. It's pass my bedtime! I'll post more tomorrow if I have the chance too! THANKS:D :cool:

SeriousClanaFan
05-20-2006, 10:16 AM
Clark: Now, the next one?
He said as he sat down on the couch.

Lana: Let's see, next..super strength.

Clark: Ok, hop on.

Clark superspeeds Lana to the loft in the farm.

Lana: Now this is what I have to get used to.

Clark: Ok, now to show you my strength you have to look out of that widow.

Lana: Ok.

Clark speeds to the tractor outside and lifts it with one finger.

Lana's amazed by the sight.
Lana: Oh..my...

Clark speeds behind Lana and puts his arms around her waist.
Clark: Gosh?

Lana smiles, turns around and Kisses him.
Lana: Thank you for finishing my sentence.

Clark: Well your quite welcome. What next?

Lana: Next, flying

Clark puts his head down.
Lana: What?

Clark: I can't take you flying.
Lana: Why not?
Clark: Because I need to get used to it. I'll take you when it's safe.

Lana: Ok.
Clark: Choose another.

Lana: super hearing.
Clark: I can't show you. But, whatever you do that's private, don't wisper it. Ok, last one.
Lana: x-ray vision is last.
Clark: Ok.
Lana: Ok superboy, what color are my underwear?
Clark uses his x-ray vision and smiles.
Clark: Red, and I like it.
Lana blushes. Clark goes up to her and hugs her.
Clark: Can I ask you something?

Lana: What is it?
Clark gets down on one knee and takes out a beautiful diamond ring.
Clark: Will you marry me?
Lana: Y..Ye..Yes. YES I'LL MARRY YOU!!
Clark smiles as he puts the ring on her finger.

(Five months later)
Clark and Lana were married. Everyone came to the wedding. A year later they had a son. He looked just like Clark. They were happy and excited about thier new lives together.

THE END
I hope you liked my story!!! I'm making another about Clark and Lana's lives together! It's called Our New Lives. You can read it and thier son too!

Nemu
05-20-2006, 10:44 AM
of course you should and have to continue!!!

So the three other coming in... I guess it has to do with the fact that Clark told Lana...

hmmm....

PPMS :D

LovinMe210
05-20-2006, 10:48 AM
ppms!

SeriousClanaFan
05-20-2006, 10:49 AM
SORRY! I had to edit it again! I'm making another story too!

Nemu
05-20-2006, 11:28 AM
lol i see... so your other fic is some kind of sequel/follow up to this one?

maru11
05-22-2006, 12:02 PM
great ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SeriousClanaFan
05-23-2006, 06:57 AM
Thanks!;)