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SeriousClanaFan
05-18-2006, 05:38 PM
Clark and Lana are together but, During thier time together, Clark won't open up to her. Lana's 21 and Clark's 22 year's old. Lana is a fashion model and Clark is a famous reporter for the daliy planet. They aren't married, either. Oh, Chloe, Pete, Lois, Martha Kent, Jonathan Kent are also in the story.
Lex is not in the story, I don't like him.
Should I continue?
Tell me, and please be honest.
interesting... and without Baldy... should be even more interesting...
continue soon!
redraven
05-18-2006, 05:42 PM
Continue...although it would be nice if you wrote Lex in and then made him die or something...or be shunned by everyone and make him cry. :D
Seriously though, you really should write this story. :)
Smallville15
05-18-2006, 06:34 PM
please continue but dont make it a 5 yrs later they meet story please!
SeriousClanaFan
05-18-2006, 06:56 PM
Clark was working on an article at the daliy planet when Chole came in.
Chole: Hey Clark
Clark didn't answer. Chloe walked up to him.
Chloe: Is this about you and Lana again?
He nodded.
Chloe sighed and sat down next to him.
Chloe: Ok, tell me what happend.
He turned around to face Chole.
Clark: Ok...here's the story...
To be continued.......
Was it good? Should I continue? Sorry it was so short.
annaliese
05-18-2006, 07:22 PM
CONTINUE!
SeriousClanaFan
05-18-2006, 08:09 PM
Chloe: Wow, was she really mad?
Clark: Yes, she is, look I don't know what to do Chloe please, tell me what I should do. Please?!
Chloe: Clark, calm down, Lana's really angry at you because you won't open up to her and I would be really angry too if I were Lana. I mean you haven't opened up to her in 7 years.
Clark: I know, it's just that I love her and if I tell her my secret then she'll be angry with me. And I don't want her to be in danger.
Chloe: Clark, the only thing that's making her angry is you. She knows you love her it's just that she's a big girl now and you can't protect her forever. You need to tell her your secret now insted of 5 years from now. You get the picture?
Clark nodded and smiled.
Clark: Thanks, Chlo. You always know what to say. Thanks for being there for me, your like a big sister.
Clark hugged Chloe and ran out of the room.
Chloe: I try.
(At the talon)
Lana was fixing herself a latte. She sighed thinking about the fight her and Clark had that morning. Just then, Clark walked in.
Clark: Um...hi.
Lana: Clark, what are you doing here?
Clark: I want to be honest with you.
Lana: Really? Or are you here to lie to me again?
Clark walked up to Lana and kissed her softly and passionatly.
Clark: Really, I really want to be honest with you Lana. I love you.
Lana smiled and returned his kiss.
Lana: I love you too.
To be continued....
I loved the part at the talon!! What do you think?
superman8s
05-19-2006, 11:39 AM
cool ppms
maru11
05-19-2006, 04:35 PM
awesome start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon1!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!
SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 06:29 PM
Clark: So, do you forgive me or are you still mad?
Lana: I wasn't mad.
Clark: You wasn't?
Lana: No, I was furious because you kept hiding secrets from me. Clark, we've been together for three or four years and you still can't be honest with me?
Clark: Lana, I just wanted to protect you-
Lana: Protect me? Clark, I'm a big girl now I can handle myself.
Clark sighed.
Clark: Please, can I just talk to you. I don't want to have another big and stressful fight.
Lana: I don't either.
Clark: Ok.
Clark walked over to the couch and sat down. He patted for Lana to join him.
Lana: Ok, what is it that you want to tell me?
Clark: Ok. Umm..this is going to take awhile so, you might want to get comfortable.
Lana: I am comfortable.
She lied.
Clark: All right. First of all, I wasn't actually born in this planet.
Lana: What do you mean?
Clark: I was born in a planet called Krypton. When the planet blew up, my boiolgical parents sent me here during the first meteor shower. And now I feel gilty because I killed your parents.
Lana: Clark, wait, so you mean that you came from another planet, you're real parents sent you here before the planet blew up and you killed my parents?
Clark: Yea. (wispered)
Lana hugged Clark and Kissed him on his cheek.
Clark: What was that for?
Lana: For being honest with me. Clark, you didn't kill my parents. It wasn't even your decision to make. So don't be gilty, baby, I still love you.
Clark: I love you too.
To be continued.....
Was it good? Should I continue?
sure you should continue... and it is good so far!!!
PPMS :D
SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 07:13 PM
Lana: So, what else do you want to tell me?
Clark: Is this a good time to tell you that I have superpowers?
Lana's eyes opened wide.
Lana: YOU have superpowers?! What kinds of powers do you have?
Clark: Well..there's heatvision, x-ray vision, superspeed, flying, super strength, and super hearing.
Lana: Oh...my...gosh!
Clark: So...which one do you want to try first?
Lana: How about..super speed?
Clark: Ok, here it goes.......
To be continued........
Can I continue?
lol that was nice... so speed is up first...
and of course you can and should continue!!
SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 07:45 PM
Clark picked up Lana in his arms and super speeded to Lana's apartment.
Lana: We're in my apartment. You really do have superpowers!
Clark laughed and sat Lana down.
Clark: I geuss you'll have to get used to this.
Lana: Yea.
Clark: Which one do you want to do next?
Lana: Next is..heatvision.
Clark: Ok.
Clark superspeeds and grabs a candle.
Clark: Watch closely.
And in a flash of light Lana sees a lighteen candle.
Lana: WOW! Clark that's awsome!
Clark smiles and kisses Lana's nose.
Clark: Thank you.
To be continued...
What do you think? Sorry it was short, it will be longer tommorow!
well true your updates are short... but if you do more than one per day then its balancing itself...
that was nice... so the show and tell continues...
PPMS :D
SeriousClanaFan
05-19-2006, 08:32 PM
Thanks Nemu!;)
SORRY YOU GUYS! I have to go to bed. It's pass my bedtime! I'll post more tomorrow if I have the chance too! THANKS:D :cool:
SeriousClanaFan
05-20-2006, 10:16 AM
Clark: Now, the next one?
He said as he sat down on the couch.
Lana: Let's see, next..super strength.
Clark: Ok, hop on.
Clark superspeeds Lana to the loft in the farm.
Lana: Now this is what I have to get used to.
Clark: Ok, now to show you my strength you have to look out of that widow.
Lana: Ok.
Clark speeds to the tractor outside and lifts it with one finger.
Lana's amazed by the sight.
Lana: Oh..my...
Clark speeds behind Lana and puts his arms around her waist.
Clark: Gosh?
Lana smiles, turns around and Kisses him.
Lana: Thank you for finishing my sentence.
Clark: Well your quite welcome. What next?
Lana: Next, flying
Clark puts his head down.
Lana: What?
Clark: I can't take you flying.
Lana: Why not?
Clark: Because I need to get used to it. I'll take you when it's safe.
Lana: Ok.
Clark: Choose another.
Lana: super hearing.
Clark: I can't show you. But, whatever you do that's private, don't wisper it. Ok, last one.
Lana: x-ray vision is last.
Clark: Ok.
Lana: Ok superboy, what color are my underwear?
Clark uses his x-ray vision and smiles.
Clark: Red, and I like it.
Lana blushes. Clark goes up to her and hugs her.
Clark: Can I ask you something?
Lana: What is it?
Clark gets down on one knee and takes out a beautiful diamond ring.
Clark: Will you marry me?
Lana: Y..Ye..Yes. YES I'LL MARRY YOU!!
Clark smiles as he puts the ring on her finger.
(Five months later)
Clark and Lana were married. Everyone came to the wedding. A year later they had a son. He looked just like Clark. They were happy and excited about thier new lives together.
THE END
I hope you liked my story!!! I'm making another about Clark and Lana's lives together! It's called Our New Lives. You can read it and thier son too!
of course you should and have to continue!!!
So the three other coming in... I guess it has to do with the fact that Clark told Lana...
hmmm....
PPMS :D
LovinMe210
05-20-2006, 10:48 AM
ppms!
SeriousClanaFan
05-20-2006, 10:49 AM
SORRY! I had to edit it again! I'm making another story too!
lol i see... so your other fic is some kind of sequel/follow up to this one?
maru11
05-22-2006, 12:02 PM
great ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SeriousClanaFan
05-23-2006, 06:57 AM
Thanks!;)
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