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clanafoeva
11-30-2005, 01:24 PM
How Could You

this is my first fan fiction i hope u like it

It has been three years since
he's been gone, and no one knows
where he is. I miss himso dearly it's
like there is an empty space in my heart
that can't be filled and no matter how hard everyone tries they can't fill the empty space.
I've cried every day and nightsince he's been gone.

"Lana turn the light out i'm trying to sleep"Chloe yelled.



Oh yeah tomorrow is our highschool
reunion, well i wouldn't call it a reunion
when the one person you want to
see most isn't going to be there well
at least i get to see Pete.


Lana Lang
yours truely

Finally Lana turned out the lights and
went to sleep anxiously awaiting
tomorrow.

I hope u like it so far!
tell me what u think please be truthful
:D :)

goldylocks_k
11-30-2005, 01:28 PM
I think it's good. I'm intrigued. But is it meant to be like Superman 3?

maroon09854
11-30-2005, 01:33 PM
wow awsome start cant wait 4 more PPMS!!! :)

clanafoeva
11-30-2005, 01:39 PM
thanks ill post more later

NYC300Z
11-30-2005, 01:51 PM
yeah good start! Can't wait for more!:D

akuma
11-30-2005, 01:55 PM
good start! wonder what happened to clark? and shes living with chole now, i assume they are at college?

maroon09854
11-30-2005, 01:57 PM
yeah akumas back welcome back hope ur computers working ok PPMS!!

clanafoeva
11-30-2005, 02:00 PM
ill update in about 10 20 minutes k

akuma
11-30-2005, 02:00 PM
thanks maroon, comp still screwy but seems ok right now so here i am!

maroon09854
11-30-2005, 02:13 PM
ur welcome and cant wait 4 the update

clanafoeva
11-30-2005, 02:47 PM
Lana and Chloe got up at 6:30, took a shower got dressed ate breakfast and packed their bags. "Wait Chlo aren't we forgeting something" questioned Lana. "The dresses" they both screamed at the same time. So they put their bags down and went out to get the dresses. As soon as they got there Chloe saw the perfect dress she ran got it and tried it on. "Lana how do I look"asks chloe. "you look great"responded lana.Chloe looked so preety in the purple silk halter dress. Then lana grabbed her dress and ran to try it on."Chloe here i come" "lana i can't even describe how beautiful u look". Boy was chloe right who wouldn't look good in a long red silky dress with a silver diamond tiara. So they paid for the dresses ,and went up into their apartment and got their bags, car keys, and finally they called the kent's to tell them they were on there way.They rushed out to there car and were on their way.



so tell me what u think
comments allways appreciated

maroon09854
11-30-2005, 02:49 PM
awsome update cant wait 4 more

NYC300Z
11-30-2005, 02:53 PM
diamon tiara like a princess's tiara/crown?

Oh I hope Clark shows up somewhere! Where could he be if Lana doesn't think he's going to be at the reunion?

PPMS!:D

clanafoeva
11-30-2005, 02:54 PM
sorry it looks so small i wont do it like tht next time

maroon09854
11-30-2005, 03:01 PM
dont worry i had the same problem when i first started my fic it looked big on the lil screen but it dosent come out big when u post so dont worry bout it every1 will understand

linn
11-30-2005, 03:08 PM
This fic is so awesome...ppms!

goldylocks_k
12-01-2005, 04:49 AM
I found it! This fic is awesome by the way. PPMS

cufcchic
12-01-2005, 10:07 AM
awesome new fic! it is really good start! Ppms!

NYC300Z
12-01-2005, 10:19 AM
Can't wait!;)

clanafoeva
12-01-2005, 12:03 PM
thanks guys im gonna post some later

Clark&lana4eva
12-01-2005, 12:53 PM
goos so far keep it coming

clanafoeva
12-01-2005, 02:45 PM
Finally they reach the Kent's house they hurry and put there stuff away and got dressed. "Lana hurry were already late as it is"Chloe yelled."Coming now is the limo here yet"Asked Lana "yeah it just arrived lets go"chloe responded. So thye left the house and they were on there way to the reunion.

They arrive there fifteen minutes later they arrive at the reunion, they get out of the limo, and walk inside. All of a sudden the music stops and everyone starts to stare at them. No one remembers who they are. They walk down the stairs and while they were walking down they were looking for Pete, but they didn't have to he ran right up to them.

sorry i have to go out i'll post more either tonight or tomorrow i'm really sorry NYC300Z i can't post tonight

maroon09854
12-01-2005, 03:23 PM
whoa whats going on y is every1 staring at them PPMS!!!!

clanafoeva
12-01-2005, 03:37 PM
every1 is staring cause they both look so good ill post the rest tomorrow

clanafoeva
12-01-2005, 06:12 PM
im gettin ready 2 post the rest

linn
12-01-2005, 06:27 PM
okay...

Clark&lana4eva
12-01-2005, 06:27 PM
come on hurry i have 2g2 bed soon

linn
12-01-2005, 06:32 PM
mee too
at 10

binkys711
12-01-2005, 08:06 PM
glad to see you posted the fic! it's great so far! PPMS!!!:D

NYC300Z
12-02-2005, 12:49 AM
oh it's okay don't worry about it! At least you updated! No one remembered them? only Pete huh? So where is Clark?

PPMS!;)

clanafoeva
12-02-2005, 02:01 PM
Ok guys here is the rest

"Wow you guys look nice"pete said almost speechless "thanks pete" they both exclaimed.Then allof the sudden Lana froze, She hopes that she doesn't really see what she thinks she saw. Clark was there but he was kissing another girl. Lana's eyes started to water and what acoincedence the song because of you by kelly clarkson came on

I will not make the same
mistakes you did. When I let
myself cause my heart so
much misery. I will not break the
way you did you fell so hard.
Ive learned the hard way to never
let it get that far.Because of you
I never stray to far from the
sidewalk. because of you i learned
to play on the safe side so i dont get
hurt. because I find it hard to trust
not only me but everyone around
me Because of you i am afraid


sorry i didn't finish the song ill update later k

ill post more L8tr

NYC300Z
12-02-2005, 02:05 PM
oh no how could Clark do that? Lana better have not saw what she thought she saw!

PPMS!:D

linn
12-02-2005, 04:20 PM
my.....why did she have to see that.....ppms!!!!!!!!!

nellie2
12-02-2005, 08:38 PM
PPMS

NYC300Z
12-05-2005, 02:10 PM
It's been three days! Please update again!;)

cufcchic
12-05-2005, 04:07 PM
i agree!

clanafoeva
12-06-2005, 12:18 PM
Sorry it took so long for me to update i've been really busy.
i am thankful for all yoour comments, thanks again!!!!!

Chloe tried everything to get lana's attention but she couldn't. Then finally she saw what Lana was looking at, tears started coming out of her eyes too. Chloe and Lana walked over to Clark, tapped him on the shoulder and finally they both slapped him on the face. They ran away after that as fast as they could, Clark ran after them "wait stop I can explain"yelled Clark. Pete walked up behind Clark "how could you do that to them they have cried every night, since you mysteriously disappeered" said Pete while shaking his head. Chloe and Lana ran all the way to the kent's house without stopping.

I'll update a long one next time
ur comments are very sincere

sandy
12-06-2005, 12:25 PM
ppms. its good

linn
12-06-2005, 03:58 PM
oo...that was so good...ppms...asap..!!

NYC300Z
12-06-2005, 05:21 PM
Whate are they going to do at the Kents? Clark better be able to explain!

PPMS!

binkys711
12-06-2005, 05:56 PM
they ran in high heels? wow...they're tougher than I thought:p and it would be kinda hard to forget Lana and Chloe they were the ones most kidnapped!:lol: j/k plz you must update! We need to know what happens next! this is a great story! PPMS ASAP!:D

clanafoeva
12-07-2005, 07:13 AM
i promise i'll update later

linn
12-07-2005, 02:11 PM
please keep that promise cause im dying to know what happens next.....

clanafoeva
12-07-2005, 04:31 PM
Clark went back into the highschool and told his wife that they had to go, but she said she wanted to stay and Pete would take her home. So he left.

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

"It's not fair I've waited for him to come back everyday of my life, and for what to see him kissing another woman" Lana said as she cried. The Kents came home ,and saw that Lana's car was parked in the driveway. She told Johnathon to go ahead in and she'll be in later, and she was off to find the girls. When she got to the top of the stairs she saw Chloe and Lana sitting on the floor sobbing. "Whats the matter girls" martha asks sympathetically. "Well we saw Clark at the reunion" Chloe started , "that was good and all but he was kissing another girl" Lana finished. "Come here" martha said to the girls as a tear dropped out of her eye. "You now what i'm gonna go take a walk on the beach i'll be back later" Lana said as she walked down the loft stairs and exited the barn. Then she got in her car and left.

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Five minutes after Lana left Clark pulled up. As soon as Johnathan saw Clarks car he ran outside and gave him a great big hug. "Son i've missed you so much" Johnathan said after giving Clark a hug. "it's nice to see you to dad I don't mean to sound rude but i really need to talk to somebody do you know where Lana is" said Clark. "Oh its ok, the last time i saw her she was with your mother and Chloe in the loft" Johnathan answered. "Thanks dad i'll talk to you as soon as i'm done . Clark screamed as he waas running into the barn.
When he finally reached the loft stairs he saw Chloe and his mom but no Lana. "hey mom "clark says as if nothing was wrong. "What do you want " chloe hissed. " I wanted to explain do you know where Lana is " clark hisses back. "she went for a walk on the beach she'll be back later " his mother told him, and a second later he was off.

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

As Lana was walking on the beach she was thinking about what happened the last time she saw Clark.
"Hey You wanted talk says Lana as she is walking up the loft stairs. "yeah i did " Clark says afraid to face her. "hey what ever it is i promise i can handle it" Lana says as sweetly as she possibly could. "OK not to sound rude but please don't talk till i'm finished talking it's hard enough to say it as it is" Clark says very very seriously. " kk"says lana. " Okay here goes Lana i've love you and i have ever since i laid eyes on you for the first time and i will never stop and i'm not sure if you feel the same way i do but if you do you know that this feeling will never go away" " oh and also i have to leave and i'm not sure when i'll be back or if i'm even coming back" says Clark crying . "Hey don't say that your gonna come back i know you are you wouldn't just leave like that" Lana says as tears start pouring out of her eyes. "this time it's different " clark says while leaning in to kiss Lana their lips meet and they start kissing very passionately, and in a split second he was gone and she was left there to cry.
Sometimes i wish times were like that lana thought. Then she sat down on the beach. Then all the sudden she hears Clark calling her.


I promise to post some tomorrow
comments are always appreciated lol :rotfl:

where is says quote it's supposed to be in italics
srry

NYC300Z
12-07-2005, 04:36 PM
what Clark's married? Things kept getting worse and worse!

PPMS!

maroon09854
12-07-2005, 04:39 PM
aww.... awsome update i cant wait till tommorow clark is married:eek: i cant believe he would do that to lana ppms!!!

linn
12-08-2005, 02:13 PM
that was really great..I wonder how Clark will explain this one..PPMS!:)

clanafoeva
12-09-2005, 10:20 AM
I hope that was long I know it's not long compared to cardinal's, ariana, sandy, etc but i'm trying my best thanks for the wonderful comments

NYC300Z
12-09-2005, 01:55 PM
so when's the next update~!?

clanafoeva
12-10-2005, 12:25 PM
i will update tomorrow or monday sorry for the long wait i still have to come up with the next part.

NYC300Z
12-10-2005, 05:36 PM
oh ok hope you get it done~!

clanafoeva
12-11-2005, 09:37 AM
I'll update in a few min.

cody111
12-11-2005, 10:31 AM
update soon

clanafoeva
12-11-2005, 11:13 AM
ok here is my update i'll make it as long as i can.

Clark kept calling her name over and over again. Finally she gave in and screamed "I'm over here Clark". " Finally I found you I looked everywhere" Clark said sitting down next to her. "All I have to say to you is how could you" Lana said as tears started to come out of her eyes. "Doesn't what you said before you left mean anything to you. It really ment something to me, I waited for four years for you to come back. I never gave up hope, but when I saw you at the reunion. All that I had hoped for was shoved right back in my face. If you really cared for me and everyone else the way you say you do then you would have looked for us when you got back " Lana blurted out. She started to get up, but Clark pulled her back down and kissed her.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Back at the reunion Pete and Clark's wife Madison were making out. Then Madison stopped kissing and realized what time it was. "Pete we better go it's almost twelve o'clock, Clarks going to kill me".
So they left after saying goodbye. When they got to the farm they saw the Kents sitting outside with Chloe. Pete and Madison get out of the car, and run over to the Kents. "Why are you sitting outside at twelve o'clock at night" Madison questioned? " We are waiting for Clark and /or Lana to get home"Martha said. "They have been gone for three or four hours now" Chloe added. "And I have no idea whats going on" Johnathon confused.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Lana knew that the right thing to do is to pull away, but in her heart she knew this is what she has been wanting since he left. She tried so hard to pull away, but her body wouldn't let her. So finally when the kiss ended she looked at him for a minute and then got up and ran to her car. When she got to her car she got in and drove away. She turned on the radio and the song that Clark had said that as long as she loved that song their love was still there. The song is

We Belong Together by Mariah Carey

(Ooh,ooh,sweet love, yeah)

I didn't mean it
When I said I didn't love you, so
I should have held on tight
I never shoulda let you go
I didn't know nothing
I was stupid, I was foolish
I was lying to myself
I could not fathom that I would ever
Be without your love
Never imagined I'd be
Sitting here beside myself
Cause I didn't know you
Cause I didn't know me
But I thought I knew everthing
I never felt

The feeling that I'm feeling
Now that I don't hear your voice
Or have your touch and kiss your lips
Cause I don't have a choice
Oh, what I wouldn't give
To have you lying by my side
right here, cause baby
(We belong together)

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who else am I gon' lean on
when times get rough
who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh, baby baby, we belong together

I can't sleep at night
When you are on my mind
Bobby Womack's on the radio
Saying to me
"If you think your lonely now"
Wait a minute
This is to deep (too deep)
I gotta change this station
So I turn the dial
Trying to catch a break
And then I hear Babyface
"I only think of you "
and it's breaking my heart
I'm trying to keep it together
But I'm falling apart

I'm feeling all out of my element
I'm throwing things, crying
Trying to figure out
Where the hell I went wrong
The pain reflected in this song
It ain't even half of what
I'm feeling inside
I need you
Need you back in my life, baby

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who else am I gon' lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh, baby baby, we belong together, baby

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who am I gonna lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh baby, baby
We belong together

ok here is my update i'll make it as long as i can.

Clark kept calling her name over and over again. Finally she gave in and screamed "I'm over here Clark". " Finally I found you I looked everywhere" Clark said sitting down next to her. "All I have to say to you is how could you" Lana said as tears started to come out of her eyes. "Doesn't what you said before you left mean anything to you. It really ment something to me, I waited for four years for you to come back. I never gave up hope, but when I saw you at the reunion. All that I had hoped for was shoved right back in my face. If you really cared for me and everyone else the way you say you do then you would have looked for us when you got back " Lana blurted out. She started to get up, but Clark pulled her back down and kissed her.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Back at the reunion Pete and Clark's wife Madison were making out. Then Madison stopped kissing and realized what time it was. "Pete we better go it's almost twelve o'clock, Clarks going to kill me".
So they left after saying goodbye. When they got to the farm they saw the Kents sitting outside with Chloe. Pete and Madison get out of the car, and run over to the Kents. "Why are you sitting outside at twelve o'clock at night" Madison questioned? " We are waiting for Clark and /or Lana to get home"Martha said. "They have been gone for three or four hours now" Chloe added. "And I have no idea whats going on" Johnathon confused.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Lana knew that the right thing to do is to pull away, but in her heart she knew this is what she has been wanting since he left. She tried so hard to pull away, but her body wouldn't let her. So finally when the kiss ended she looked at him for a minute and then got up and ran to her car. When she got to her car she got in and drove away. She turned on the radio and the song that Clark had said that as long as she loved that song their love was still there. The song is

[I] We Belong Together by Mariah Carey

(Ooh,ooh,sweet love, yeah)

I didn't mean it
When I said I didn't love you, so
I should have held on tight
I never shoulda let you go
I didn't know nothing
I was stupid, I was foolish
I was lying to myself
I could not fathom that I would ever
Be without your love
Never imagined I'd be
Sitting here beside myself
Cause I didn't know you
Cause I didn't know me
But I thought I knew everthing
I never felt

The feeling that I'm feeling
Now that I don't hear your voice
Or have your touch and kiss your lips
Cause I don't have a choice
Oh, what I wouldn't give
To have you lying by my side
right here, cause baby
(We belong together)

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who else am I gon' lean on
when times get rough
who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh, baby baby, we belong together

I can't sleep at night
When you are on my mind
Bobby Womack's on the radio
Saying to me
"If you think your lonely now"
Wait a minute
This is to deep (too deep)
I gotta change this station
So I turn the dial
Trying to catch a break
And then I hear Babyface
"I only think of you "
and it's breaking my heart
I'm trying to keep it together
But I'm falling apart

I'm feeling all out of my element
I'm throwing things, crying
Trying to figure out
Where the hell I went wrong
The pain reflected in this song
It ain't even half of what
I'm feeling inside
I need you
Need you back in my life, baby

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who else am I gon' lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh, baby baby, we belong together, baby

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who am I gonna lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh baby, baby
We belong together
She started crying even more because she did still love this song. Her car suddenly stopped. It started going in the air. It finally landed after 30 minutes. She looked around but didn't see anyone . All of the sudden Clark superspeeds in front of her and kisses her very passionately.

ok here is my update i'll make it as long as i can.

Clark kept calling her name over and over again. Finally she gave in and screamed "I'm over here Clark". " Finally I found you I looked everywhere" Clark said sitting down next to her. "All I have to say to you is how could you" Lana said as tears started to come out of her eyes. "Doesn't what you said before you left mean anything to you. It really ment something to me, I waited for four years for you to come back. I never gave up hope, but when I saw you at the reunion. All that I had hoped for was shoved right back in my face. If you really cared for me and everyone else the way you say you do then you would have looked for us when you got back " Lana blurted out. She started to get up, but Clark pulled her back down and kissed her.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Back at the reunion Pete and Clark's wife Madison were making out. Then Madison stopped kissing and realized what time it was. "Pete we better go it's almost twelve o'clock, Clarks going to kill me".
So they left after saying goodbye. When they got to the farm they saw the Kents sitting outside with Chloe. Pete and Madison get out of the car, and run over to the Kents. "Why are you sitting outside at twelve o'clock at night" Madison questioned? " We are waiting for Clark and /or Lana to get home"Martha said. "They have been gone for three or four hours now" Chloe added. "And I have no idea whats going on" Johnathon confused.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Lana knew that the right thing to do is to pull away, but in her heart she knew this is what she has been wanting since he left. She tried so hard to pull away, but her body wouldn't let her. So finally when the kiss ended she looked at him for a minute and then got up and ran to her car. When she got to her car she got in and drove away. She turned on the radio and the song that Clark had said that as long as she loved that song their love was still there. The song is

We Belong Together by Mariah Carey

(Ooh,ooh,sweet love, yeah)

I didn't mean it
When I said I didn't love you, so
I should have held on tight
I never shoulda let you go
I didn't know nothing
I was stupid, I was foolish
I was lying to myself
I could not fathom that I would ever
Be without your love
Never imagined I'd be
Sitting here beside myself
Cause I didn't know you
Cause I didn't know me
But I thought I knew everthing
I never felt

The feeling that I'm feeling
Now that I don't hear your voice
Or have your touch and kiss your lips
Cause I don't have a choice
Oh, what I wouldn't give
To have you lying by my side
right here, cause baby
(We belong together)

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who else am I gon' lean on
when times get rough
who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh, baby baby, we belong together

I can't sleep at night
When you are on my mind
Bobby Womack's on the radio
Saying to me
"If you think your lonely now"
Wait a minute
This is to deep (too deep)
I gotta change this station
So I turn the dial
Trying to catch a break
And then I hear Babyface
"I only think of you "
and it's breaking my heart
I'm trying to keep it together
But I'm falling apart

I'm feeling all out of my element
I'm throwing things, crying
Trying to figure out
Where the hell I went wrong
The pain reflected in this song
It ain't even half of what
I'm feeling inside
I need you
Need you back in my life, baby

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who else am I gon' lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh, baby baby, we belong together, baby

[chorus]
When you left I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby, please
Cause we belong together

Who am I gonna lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh baby, baby
We belong together
She started crying even more because she did still love this song. Her car suddenly stopped. It started going in the air. It finally landed after 30 minutes. She looked around but didn't see anyone . All of the sudden Clark superspeeds in front of her and kisses her very passionately.
I hope u liked it, it took me like one hour to type this. I think it is long so i hope your happy.
hmphhhhhhhhhhh
just kidding :rotfl:

srry i think there is like three of the samme posts in this all i did was add the last part i am very srry
again

NYC300Z
12-12-2005, 12:23 AM
oh wierd turn of events....what's going to happen?

PPMS!

linn
12-12-2005, 03:29 PM
that was awesome.....PPMS!!!:)