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Minnesotagirl
06-04-2006, 12:24 PM
Hey! Long time, no see! *squints and waves back to Akuma*

I know it's been a while, so here's a link to the previous chapter to refresh your memory Chapter 26 (http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showthread.php?postid=2015190#post2015190).

O.K. Here it is...finally!


Chapter 27



“Hi,” he said again.

“You already said that.”

“Oh, yeah…Sorry.”

“So…”

“So…”

There was a silence between them. Clark ended up shoving his hands in the pockets of his jacket and staring at his shuffling feet.

“Ummm…You want to walk for a bit?” Lana asked nervously.

“Sure.”

Lana stood up from the bench and they started walking slowly towards the school’s playground. It was a few minutes before either of them said anything. They walked side by side with a distance between them. Clark felt the need to reach out and touch her, but thought better of it. He didn’t want to scare her away. It was up to her to make the first move. Clark waited for her to start the conversation, but she kept looking back and forth at him and nearly starting to say something, but then stopped.

‘Come, on, Lana! Say something!’ she thought to herself. But she didn’t really know where to start.

“So…How’s coaching going?” she said, just trying to start a conversation.

“Good. I’m learning how to handle all the kids, but I think it’s going well.”

“Yeah…The kids seem to really like you.”

“Yeah, I guess.”

“Especially Katie.”

“Katie?”

“Yeah, the little blonde girl…She seems really nice.”

“She’s a good kid…She’s been here every day this week so she can walk her little brother home.”

“That’s not the only reason.”

Clark looked at her with a questioning look.

“She’s sweet on you.”

“Katie?...No!” he said in disbelief.

“Yes! She even told me she was going to marry you.”

“Marry me?!” Clark cheeks suddenly flushed. ‘He does that a lot,’ Lana thought to herself. ‘Is that a Clark-thing or a someone-from-another-planet thing?’

“Well, you can tell her she’s not my type…I prefer brunettes,” he said gazing over at her. That last comment even made her blush. She smiled nervously at him, but then looked back down to the ground when she saw the intensity in his eyes. There was another long pause of silence between them. The kept walking and ended up at the playground.

“I’m surprised to see you here. I didn’t know if you’d ever want to see me again after-,”

“After I found out what you are?” she said, completing what he was saying.

“Yeah.”

“I won’t lie to you, Clark. I wasn’t sure if I should come here or not…I even went to see Professor Willowbrook.”

“You did? What did he say?”

“Not much. You know how he is. He said if I want answers, I should get them from you.”

“Oh.”

“And I need answers, Clark. I can’t sleep. I can’t eat. If I want any semblance of getting my life back together, I need answers. Understand?”

Clark nodded and stared at the ground.

“I want to know it all, Clark. I want to know everything.”

Clark took a deep breath and let it out. He then looked her in the eyes. “Then, you’d better sit down,” he stated, motioning to the swing.

Lana looked next to her and sat down on the swing. She looked up and waited for Clark to say something, but he looked lost in thought.

“Clark?”

Broken out of his thoughts, he spoke. “Do you know that this was where I saw you for the first time?”

She nodded her head ‘No.’

“It was the first day of Kindergarten, and it was recess. I had just met Pete and we came out to the playground, and there you were…Sitting in that swing with Emily right next to you. You were wearing a pink sweater and had pig-tails tied up with pink bows. I thought you were the prettiest thing I ever saw…I don’t know why or how, but even though I was only five, I knew I was in love with you…And I had to talk to you. So, I walked over to you. I was so nervous I thought the butterflies in my stomach were going to fly me away. Anyway, when I got within ten feet of you my head started to spin and I felt weak and-,”

“You fell face-first in the sand.”

“You remember.”

“Not until you mentioned it…I remember Emily laughing at you.”

“So do I,” he replied, flushed with embarrassment. “But you didn’t laugh, did you?”

“No…I didn’t…I never laughed when you tripped…And you tripped a lot back then...Actually, up until Freshman year. Somehow I knew that there was more to you behind the clumsiness.”

“Yeah, it wasn’t until Freshman year that I found out why I couldn’t get close to you.”

Lana looked up at him questioningly. Her brow furrowing.

“I have kind of an allergy to the meteor rock,” he admitted.

Lana then remembered and touched her neck where her necklace once resided. “My necklace.” Clark nodded. “How bad of an allergy are we talking here? Is it a break-out-in-red-itchy-spots allergy or the swell-up-like-a-balloon allergy?”

“No, it’s nothing like that.”

“Then what happens to you when you get close to them?”

“I don’t know if I can describe it, but I start to feel dizzy and sick and weak. The closer I get, the worse it gets. If I’m too close and the rock is large enough, I feel pain all over my body so intense I can barely stand. Sometimes I even pass out from the pain. The rock seems like it drains all my energy and I lose my powers. If I could equate it to anything, the closest thing it comes to is that I feel like I’m-,”

“Dying?”

“Yeah.”

“Could you die from it?”

“I don’t know, but I’m not willing to find out.” He saw the look of concern on Lana’s face and wanted her not to worry. “Besides, I’m pretty careful. At the first sign of feeling sick I back away, and little pieces aren’t as bad. I just seem like a big klutz around them…like with your necklace.”

“And here I thought you were just really nervous.”

“Oh, I was…Every time…but even without your necklace I would’ve still been tongue-tied and felt like I had two left feet.” Clark gave her a little smile. Lana looked down at her feet and rocked a little back and forth in the swing. Clark stood there in silence, not really knowing what to do next.

“Clark?”

“Yeah?”

“Are we gonna really talk about this or what?”

“Right…O.K. You said you want to know everything?” Lana looked up and nodded.

“Everything,” she stated firmly.

“O.K.” Lana watched him begin to pace back and forth in the sand. His breaths came in short, nervous pants. Clark rubbed his hands and felt his palms start to sweat from nerves. He took off his cap and ran his hand through his hair before putting it back on. To watch him, you would think he was having a panic attack, which in his mind wasn’t far from what he was feeling.

“Ummm…You don’t know how many times I’ve gone through this in my head, and it never seemed to come out right. I actually tried to tell you once.”

“When?”

“Before you left for Paris. Remember the dinner we were supposed to have?”

“You mean the one I missed because a psychotic clone stuck me in a gigantic display case?” She saw Clark nod his head. “Wait…You really were going to tell me, weren’t you?” Clark nodded. “To stop me from going to Paris?” He nodded again. “But I came back to the barn the next day. Why didn’t you tell me then?”

“Something happened with Pete. Someone started asking him questions about me, and when he didn’t give them answers, they hurt him.”

“Is that why he left Smallville?”

“Yeah…he was afraid that one day he’d slip up and he couldn’t bear it if he ever betrayed my trust. I didn’t want you going through the same thing…That’s why I chickened out.”

“So…this is what you meant by ‘protecting’ me.”

“Yeah.” Clark took a deep breath and let it out. Clark sat down in the swing next to her and rocked from side to side. “This feels so strange…being so completely honest.”

“With me?”

“With anybody. I’ve never opened up this much with anyone before…Not with Pete or Chloe or even my parents. They all knew about what I am and what I can do, but I never told them what I felt.”

“O-Oh,” Lana responded looking back down.

“Ahhh…I’m not sure where to go next…Maybe you should ask me questions and I’ll answer them.”

“O.K.” Lana thought for a moment about the first question she would ask. “Ummm…have you always known?”

“About where I came from?” Lana shook her head. “No. I was really little when I was sent away…But I knew I wasn’t ‘normal.’ I just didn’t know how different I was until my dad told me four years ago after Lex hit me with his car.”

“So…Lex was right. He really did hit you.”

“At 60 miles an hour.”

“And you weren’t hurt at all?”

“I felt the impact, but I didn’t get injured.”

“Incredible!” she said under her breath.

“That was the day I knew something was happening to me. I’ve never really gotten hurt growing up…Like the time I fell out of the treehouse and I was fine. My parents just chocked it up as being really lucky, but now I know that wasn’t it. I had strength and speed for a while by then, but this was something new…and scary. I didn’t understand what was happening to me. So, when my dad told me the truth…That I wasn’t from around here…I got angry and scared, so I ran away. That was the night you found me in the cemetery.”

“So…that’s what you were upset about. I had no idea.”

“Well, when all you wanted in life was to be normal and then to find out you’re not even human, it kinda brings you down…I realized that I would never be normal,” he said sadly.

“Must not have been easy growing up.”

“It wasn’t. Until I learned to control my strength and speed, I wasn’t allowed to play with anyone…No playdates, No parties. My parents were afraid I’d hurt someone and someone would find out and take me away. Growing up, I barely saw anyone for the first few years, but then school started.”

“Yeah. Some of us wondered if you even existed. Nell said that your mom told her the reason we never saw you was that you were really shy.”

“Well…that, too. I was really shy. I guess some things you just don’t grow out of,” he confessed, looking at her.

“How did your parents deal with it? I mean, it must have been difficult raising a child of the super-powered persuasion.”

“My parents were great,” he answered smiling and folding his hands in his lap. “They never tried to stop me from using my abilities. They actually helped me to develop them…to control them. Although, the first time they crept up they were a little concerned.”

“What happened?”

“I was only with my parents a few months and my dad and I were playing hide-and-seek. I had crawled under my parents’ big oak bed and when my dad found me, I didn’t want to come out. He tried to get me out, but when I stood up, the bed lifted up with me…I’ve never seen my dad’s eyes so big…My parents didn’t know what to do…they didn’t know what was happening to me, so they decided to take me to a scientist…But when we pulled up to the facility, my mom said they couldn’t do it. If they brought me in, then the scientists would want to keep me and my parents would never see me again. So, they took me back home and decided that no one could know about me…Not even their families. I never even saw my grandfather until I was 16. The only other family I’ve met is my mother’s sister and son when they came to visit when I was 10, but that was only after my parents were sure I could control my abilities.”

Lana listened as Clark told her about his childhood. She realized that although he could do extraordinary things, he was lonely growing up. He could never really be himself around anyone, could never really confide in someone. Although his parents were supportive of him, he could never really tell them everything that he was feeling. For the next few hours, she caught a glimpse of what it was like for him…about being scared he’d hurt someone if he ever lost control. He could never do some of the things others could do in fear that if someone suspected anything, that he’d end up locked in a lab somewhere to be studied or experimented on for the rest of his life. He’s had to hold back his entire life. Clark watched Lana’s eyes soften as he told her how as a child how many eggs he broke trying to learn to control his strength. He also saw how flushed her cheeks became, as well as his own, when he finally told her how his heat vision came about. Then, he told her about his escapades in Metropolis that one summer, confessing everything he had done. Lana’s features hardened as she listened to him tell her about the robberies, the clubs, and about how the red kryptonite brought out his true self, the part of himself that he keeps buried, the part of himself that if he had been raised as a Kryptonian, it would have been his true personality. Lana remembered back to her dreams and the description Naman told Leotie of his people, that they were a race devoid of emotion.

“Clark, do you remember anything about where you came from?”

“Of the place, no. I was just a baby when my parents sent me away, but I remember my mother.”

“Really? What do you remember about her?”

Clark looked up to the sky and closed his eyes for a moment. “I remember…that she had long red hair and the most vibrant green eyes you could ever imagine.”

“She sounds beautiful.”

“Yeah…She was,” he said with sadness in his voice. “And I remember her crying.”

“Crying? I thought that people from your world didn’t show emotion.”

“She was different…kind. I remember that she was worried that no one would love me in this place. The last thing I remember is that she told me that she loved me and then she kissed me good-bye. Then, they closed the ship.”

“Ship?”

“It’s how I came here.”

“Clark, when did you come here? I mean, you were were a baby when you came here, and I don’t remember seeing anything about any UFOs 19 years ago.”

This was the part of the conversation that Clark had wanted to avoid his whole life. He knew that telling her about how he came here was going to hurt her. Clark pursed his lips together and looked away from her.

“Clark? Come on. I said I wanted to know everything. Tell me.”

He stared at the sand at his feet and began to speak. “I wasn’t a baby when I came here. I was a baby when I left, but I was about three years old when I arrived here.”

“Three? But that would mean-,”

“Lana, I came here during the meteor shower 16 years ago,” he said ashamed.

Lana stared at him for a moment with her mouth slightly opened. When she didn’t say anything, Clark hesitantly looked over at her and saw the look of pain in her eyes.

“The meteor shower?”

“Yes.”

“The meteor shower that practically destroyed this town?”

He nodded.

“The meteor shower that created people like Tina Greer and Ian Randall?”

He nodded again and hung his head.

“The meteor shower that killed…that killed my parents?” she choked out. At this point hot tears were trailing down her cheeks.

“Lana, I’m so sorry.” He reached over to touch her, but she quickly rose from her swing. She spun around and looked down at him.

“Sorry?! You are always saying you’re sorry. Sorry isn’t going to bring my parents back!”

“Lana-,” He stood up from his swing and took a step towards her. She was so angry.

“No! Clark, just stay there.” She turned her face away from him and wiped her tears away. “I have to go.” She turned to walk back to her car.

“Lana, wait!”

She looked back towards him. “No, Clark. I think I should go before I say something I’ll regret,” she replied, trying to hold back any more tears.

“Lana, I know you’re upset and that nothing I can say can change what happened, but…” Clark then walked up to her. “I need to know…Can we go back to the way things were before? Can we at least be friends again?”

The tears began to flow again as she looked up into his eyes and answered him honestly. “I don’t know, Clark. I really don’t know…I’m sorry, I have to go.”

Clark felt like his heart sank to the ground. He watched her turn away and run back to her car. He saw her drive out of the parking lot and down the road, all the while he listened intently as he heard her sobbing the whole way. Clark turned around and slumped back into the swing. He stayed there well past sunset wondering if she would ever accept him and come back to him.

********************************


Just when you thought everything was going to be O.K., I toss in more angst!

Chapter 28 (http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showthread.php?postid=2523628#post2523628)

akuma
06-04-2006, 02:16 PM
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*Blinded by the light of a great new update* Ah tht was amazing!! Great writing and lots of emotion, not the kind of emotion i like:p but emotion nonetheless. Cant wait to see how Lana truly deals with this news, cant wait for more, PPMS:D:D

Cardinal
06-04-2006, 02:42 PM
Just when I get the angst out of my story, Minnesotagirl increases it in hers!

This is the first story I've read where Lana doesn't gloss over her parents' deaths and tell him that it wasn't his fault since he was so little.

It'll be interesting to see where you go with this. ;)

redraven
06-04-2006, 03:01 PM
Great update. I hope Lana comes to her senses and forgives Clark for what wasn't his fault. I don't really like angst but hopefully, the fluff will come soon. :) Ppms.

superman_lives_on
06-04-2006, 03:21 PM
I've never been fond of angst--but thank God you kept it firmly at the end and not spread all throughout! That would've detracted from this exemplary update.

I just hope Lana can come to her senses and realize that (a) the meteor shower was NOT Clark's fault and (b) she still wants to be with him.

Update again soon.

SVsleuth
06-04-2006, 03:30 PM
Yay! You updated! :) I loved the way you focused on Clark opening up to Lana, sharing how he felt growing up - and how she was so compassionate toward him, realizing how lonely he had been.

Then, when she heard he came in the meteor shower - well, I guess she just wasn't expecting that, so it threw her for a loop. I'm confident that with a little time, she'll come back to him, realizing that it wasn't his fault, & that he feels just as bad as can be about it. She'll want to ease his guilt - & she'll understand why he was so hesitant to tell her the truth. She'll realize that she does want him in her life, & wants to be there for him. I hope most of that is right MG. PPMS! PLEEEEEEASE don't make us wait a long time for more. ;) This is an awesome fic - one of my favorites.

superman's my hero
06-04-2006, 03:31 PM
6th!

NYC300Z
06-04-2006, 08:12 PM
7th! Yes yes you do more angst after all this time! How can Lana forgive him now if she's taking it this bad? What can Clark do?

PPMS!

closetfan
06-04-2006, 08:45 PM
oooo then long awaited update.....

when will the next one come? :)

i need to know what happens next

basketballstar23
06-04-2006, 09:50 PM
oh shoot!!! oh shoot!! :lol:.....atleast we got an update....HOO-RAY!!! PPMS!!!

MOOman0618
06-05-2006, 09:36 AM
That update started out so nice!!! They were connecting again, Lana could feel his pain of growing up, and it seemed like they were finally getting closer...then

WHAM! Hammer in the face!

Lana needs to realize that he didn't choose to come down in a the meteor shower...it wasn't his fault! :( FORGIVE HIM LANA!!

POST MORE SOON!!! PLEASE!!!

itsallinthespelling
06-05-2006, 12:53 PM
awesome update minnesotagirl, and i can't wait for the next update. i hope that they work things out soon. ppms

maru11
06-05-2006, 06:03 PM
awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

SpeedyKate91
06-05-2006, 07:33 PM
Great Update!!!!! PPMS!!!!!

Supertom72
06-06-2006, 09:36 AM
I need more ASAP

NYC300Z
06-06-2006, 05:50 PM
yes yes me too! oh and Supertom72 I almost thought u were Minnesotagirl for a sec she use to have that avatar for a long time!:lol:

PPMS!;)

justsuper
06-06-2006, 06:18 PM
Excellent writing! I am amazed. PPMS!

maru11
06-07-2006, 04:37 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dr.Willowbrook
06-07-2006, 05:12 PM
This is definitely one of the best Clana-centered stories I've read so far. I really like your writing style and your ability to inject humor into the story. Although your great Clark/Lana chemistry goes without saying, I was especially impressed by how you still managed to retain the vibrancy of Chloe and the Kents. You did a great job in portraying the Naman/Leotie storyline and tying it in with the show mythology. Bringing in outside characters like that and having it feel consistent with the rest of the show is always tricky, but I think you did an admirable job. Plus I have to give you props for making my namesake character so cool! I look forward to the next installment!

SVsleuth
06-08-2006, 11:27 AM
^^^^ Come on, MG - we need an update. Certainly THAT ^^^ reply from Dr. W. requires an update as a response, don't you think? ;) PPMS!

MOOman0618
06-08-2006, 08:42 PM
I agree!!! An update would be super!!! :)

NYC300Z
06-08-2006, 09:24 PM
I see you on MG!;) Do we get an update soon? Please?

Minnesotagirl
06-09-2006, 11:22 AM
Originally posted by SVsleuth
^^^^ Come on, MG - we need an update. Certainly THAT ^^^ reply from Dr. W. requires an update as a response, don't you think? ;) PPMS!

I totally agree, unfortunately, I don't have an update. I have the outline done, but a close relative unexpectedly ended up in the hospital this week, so my mind is more on her than the fic. So, as a little spoiler: Leotie and Naman are coming back! Yes...another dream sequence is on the way.

Dr. Willowbrook: Thank you so much for your comments. My heart went pitter-pat when I read them. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

And to all of you, thanks for your responses. I appreciate it.

Thanks for reading my fic!

-MinnGirl

NYC300Z
06-09-2006, 12:35 PM
Sorry to hear that MinnGirl. Hope she feels better soon and that you can get an update done soon too!;)

maitriniazngurl
06-09-2006, 01:14 PM
MinnGirl, I'm so sorry to hear that. I hope you update soon !! I can't wait!

Dr.Willowbrook
06-09-2006, 01:22 PM
Best of luck with your relative MinnGirl. I hope she has a great recovery!

maru11
06-10-2006, 10:50 PM
hope u can updaet soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tygershot
06-12-2006, 12:14 PM
Wow! I go away on vacation and we get an update from Minnesotagirl. I should go away more often! Post more when you can.

maru11
06-12-2006, 04:19 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cardinal
06-13-2006, 01:20 AM
Sorry to hear about your Grandma, Minnesotagirl. :(

I hope she comes through her surgery with flying colors! :)

God Bless. Hope to see you back here soon.

MOOman0618
06-13-2006, 06:32 AM
Originally posted by Cardinal
Sorry to hear about your Grandma, Minnesotagirl. :(

I hope she comes through her surgery with flying colors! :)

God Bless. Hope to see you back here soon.

ditto! :)

maru11
06-13-2006, 04:53 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!

justsuper
06-15-2006, 10:12 AM
PPMS! At first opportunity....take care!!

maru11
06-15-2006, 03:31 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

clark&lanafan95
06-15-2006, 03:50 PM
Post more soon I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maru11
06-16-2006, 02:00 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
06-19-2006, 11:14 AM
How you doing? ;)

maru11
06-19-2006, 05:00 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Minnesotagirl
06-22-2006, 03:17 PM
O.K. I'm back! Thanks for your well-wishes. Grandma's out of the hospital and doing well, but she has to have a second surgery once she's healed from this one.

In the meantime, I'll be writing, so I hope to have an update in about a week.

Talk to you later.

SVsleuth
06-22-2006, 05:07 PM
Glad your grandma is doing better. And ....

Yay! An update is coming! :)

NYC300Z
06-22-2006, 08:33 PM
A week oh well I guess i'll have to wait...

PPMS!;)

maitriniazngurl
06-22-2006, 08:57 PM
glad your grandma is okay.. can't wait for your update. :D

justsuper
06-22-2006, 09:00 PM
Yes, cannot wait!

maru11
06-23-2006, 03:58 PM
hope u can update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mysteryman1
06-27-2006, 04:00 AM
Update soon.

MOOman0618
06-27-2006, 10:01 AM
I hope a week is all we have to wait!! Can't wait for more!! :) :)

Glad your Grandma is doing well.

maitriniazngurl
06-27-2006, 12:54 PM
Yeah, Minngirl.. I can't wait for your update.. it's been a long time. :D

maru11
06-27-2006, 04:36 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
06-28-2006, 01:41 PM
Hello Hello Hello!

maru11
06-28-2006, 03:05 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
07-05-2006, 09:53 PM
Any news?

tygershot
07-07-2006, 11:37 AM
I see you lurking Minnesotagirl. How about an update?

maitriniazngurl
07-07-2006, 12:29 PM
Can't wait for an update!!

xfreak1990
07-07-2006, 12:38 PM
me niether

NYC300Z
07-07-2006, 01:29 PM
oh iono why, but I thought there was an udpate...

maru11
07-08-2006, 10:01 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

clark&lanafan06
07-12-2006, 09:28 PM
PPMS !!!!!!!!!!

maru11
07-13-2006, 05:48 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

clana1fan4ever
07-14-2006, 01:26 AM
Update Soon!!!!!!!!

maru11
07-14-2006, 10:12 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
07-15-2006, 10:59 PM
Hey if your around could you stop in and say "Hi"

Thanks!;)

mysteryman1
07-18-2006, 10:35 PM
Update soon.

buddy232
08-03-2006, 10:17 PM
Just caught up reading this fic.

Please update!

clana1fan4ever
08-04-2006, 02:28 AM
update soon!!!!

Clarkfan3000
08-04-2006, 08:52 AM
Please update soon!!!

maru11
08-05-2006, 05:10 PM
update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
08-06-2006, 12:04 AM
No news?

maru11
08-07-2006, 04:17 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

clana1fan4ever
08-07-2006, 07:07 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!1

kewl
08-07-2006, 10:38 PM
still no update? please update soon!!!

emsfan
08-08-2006, 08:07 AM
yeah please need your update!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lost_In_Clana
08-08-2006, 10:53 AM
I just started reading this and it's awesome!!
Please update!!

treker
08-15-2006, 02:31 PM
minnesotagirl where are you???

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-15-2006, 04:49 PM
yea we need you to update and i hope clark kills himself so lana will feel really sorry about leaving him there!!!

bcuz i am so digusted about lana just leaving clark there i wanna kill my self now


if i dont come back tomorro you know why so update b4 i kill my self

buddy232
08-15-2006, 05:36 PM
Clark should leave for a while so Lana can feel bad for a change!

Please update!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-15-2006, 07:00 PM
no clark should kill himself so she can kill herself and it will all be very sad but tough stuff

clark&lanafan06
08-15-2006, 09:47 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
no clark should kill himself so she can kill herself and it will all be very sad but tough stuff

What ? That isn't exactly the happy ending I was looking for .

Please update soon ! I really want to find out what happens next .

treker
08-16-2006, 11:33 AM
I think clannafan99210 is going off the deep end right now (probably due to a lack of updates) I wouldn't count out minnesota girl doing that. Her cliff hangers usually leave me screaming "NO!"

Please update soon......I'm dying here.....

clana1fan4ever
08-16-2006, 12:28 PM
still no update??
Update soon please!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-16-2006, 02:39 PM
no its not the lack of update i just want clark to make her feel pain so she can know what she gave up

<Nimrod>
08-16-2006, 05:10 PM
...now how long has it been since the last update...I have been reading this fanfic from the begining AND will continue reading it till the end but you have to hold your end of the deal and just update...please?



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clana_never_give_up
08-16-2006, 11:35 PM
Minnigirl, ur story is so good please update soon. I just read the story that u have so far and it is really awesome. I think it was a cool way how Lana found out about Clark and him telling her. When I was reading the part write before it says he came in the meteor shower, I was like oh my god here it comes the phrase that Clark was so scared to tell Lana about and he was right she didn't respond very good. She might hate him for ever. So please update soon. I dieing here, I need to know what happens!!!

NYC300Z
08-17-2006, 07:19 AM
it's been so long....can u at least let us know if ur still around?

maru11
08-17-2006, 11:34 AM
update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Minnesotagirl
08-17-2006, 12:16 PM
*Pops in...Puts on hard-hat in fear of getting a beating once someone sees I'm here*

Yes...I'm still around...Just not as much as I'd like. Summer's been so busy that I can't find the time to work on the fic, and it doesn't look like things are going to calm down anytime soon. And every time I hear this particular song that I want to write into a scene, I feel soooooo guilty! But, I AM going to finish this story...if it's the last thing I do! Promise!

Well, now I gotta get back to my hectic life. Bye!

<Nimrod>
08-17-2006, 12:44 PM
^It seems to me that if you dont update soon that writing this fanfic very well may be the last thing you ever do:D ...<kidding of course...kinda>


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clana_never_give_up
08-17-2006, 01:25 PM
Your cliffhangers r insane but if u don't update soon I think I might go insane soon!!!!!

tygershot
08-17-2006, 01:51 PM
***GASP*** Is that Minnesotagirl! I can't believe it!

clana_never_give_up
08-17-2006, 01:54 PM
Hey Tigershot, do u think Minnesotagirl will ever update? I hope she does soon!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-17-2006, 02:56 PM
well like i said im not going over the deep end i just want lana to feel the same pain that clark is feeling like grief and loss and the she will killherself to be with clark...but then again she might live a long and unhappy life with lex i still want to make her feel rejected and hurt and lonelyness and dispair bcuz she desereves to feel that way after rejecting clark twice but maybe they can get over it

clana_never_give_up
08-17-2006, 10:02 PM
well like i said im not going over the deep end i just want lana to feel the same pain that clark is feeling like grief and loss and the she will killherself to be with clark...but then again she might live a long and unhappy life with lex i still want to make her feel rejected and hurt and lonelyness and dispair bcuz she desereves to feel that way after rejecting clark twice but maybe they can get over it

Lana won't kill herself. She knows deep down that she still loves Clark with all her heart! She also won't end up with Lex because well like I said before she's too in love with Clark to think of anyone else in the world. I thought u were a Clana fan. Don't Clana fans want them to be together. It sounds like u don't want them to be together!:confused:

NYC300Z
08-18-2006, 12:45 AM
Originally posted by Minnesotagirl
*Pops in...Puts on hard-hat in fear of getting a beating once someone sees I'm here*

Yes...I'm still around...Just not as much as I'd like. Summer's been so busy that I can't find the time to work on the fic, and it doesn't look like things are going to calm down anytime soon. And every time I hear this particular song that I want to write into a scene, I feel soooooo guilty! But, I AM going to finish this story...if it's the last thing I do! Promise!

Well, now I gotta get back to my hectic life. Bye!


yay at least we know she's still alive!;):d:lol::cool:

maru11
08-18-2006, 12:08 PM
i just hope u can update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dr.Willowbrook
08-18-2006, 12:23 PM
Originally posted by Minnesotagirl
*Pops in...Puts on hard-hat in fear of getting a beating once someone sees I'm here*

Yes...I'm still around...Just not as much as I'd like. Summer's been so busy that I can't find the time to work on the fic, and it doesn't look like things are going to calm down anytime soon. And every time I hear this particular song that I want to write into a scene, I feel soooooo guilty! But, I AM going to finish this story...if it's the last thing I do! Promise!

Well, now I gotta get back to my hectic life. Bye!

I totally know how you feel Minnesotagirl... but I just wanna keep encouraging you to write because you're too good at it not to!

tygershot
08-18-2006, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by clana_never_give_up
Hey Tigershot, do u think Minnesotagirl will ever update? I hope she does soon!


If she does, it will probably be a while, but heres hoping!

maru11
08-19-2006, 06:03 PM
update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maitriniazngurl
08-20-2006, 07:50 AM
Hey!! Just caught up on the execitment going on here!! I mean.. I haven't read it in a while and the fic is Awesome!!

Can't wait for more!! :D

maru11
08-20-2006, 05:05 PM
hope u can update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

buddy232
08-22-2006, 12:18 PM
please don't abandon this story!

Update soon!

clark&lanafan06
08-22-2006, 01:23 PM
Update Soon Please !!!!!!!!

mysteryman1
08-30-2006, 02:14 AM
Update Soon.

clana_never_give_up
08-30-2006, 07:11 AM
update soon!!!!

mysteryman1
09-16-2006, 11:30 PM
Update Soon.

clana_never_give_up
09-16-2006, 11:33 PM
Please don't stop writing this story. It's really good.

We all want to know what happens with Clark and Lana, to see if their relationship survives.

Please Update Soon!!!!!

:D

NYC300Z
09-17-2006, 03:56 AM
yes please don't stop~~! I love this story!~ I really want mroe ~~! Minnesotagirl! Please come back to us~~~!!!!


PPMS!~!@@~!~~!~~!!!!!!!!

maru11
09-18-2006, 02:45 PM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pleasse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kewl
09-19-2006, 11:55 PM
need an update pls!

maru11
09-20-2006, 02:27 PM
update please!!!!!!!!!!

Clarkfan3000
09-20-2006, 08:20 PM
PPMASAP!!!

clana_never_give_up
09-20-2006, 08:23 PM
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

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NYC300Z
09-21-2006, 08:02 AM
I see you on! Does that mean an update is coming soon?

clana_never_give_up
09-21-2006, 04:23 PM
Originally posted by NYC300Z
I see you on! Does that mean an update is coming soon?

You saw her on?

I hope she updates. I've been waiting to see what happens for a long time!!!!:D

Clarkfan3000
09-21-2006, 05:19 PM
PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PP MASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMA SAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASA P!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP! PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PP MASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMA SAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!PPMASAP!

Clanafan24/7
09-22-2006, 03:37 AM
Hey if Minnesotagirl's around and is ready to update,tell her go to Belle Reive.please update or they'll make me share a cell with the meteor twin freaks..*whimper...*

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-22-2006, 02:10 PM
ian, you mean

maru11
09-22-2006, 03:51 PM
can´t wait!!!!!!!

kewl
09-23-2006, 06:25 AM
update soon please

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:55 AM
ppmasap

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:02 PM
Please update soon!!

The suspense is killing me!!!!!:eek:

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:11 PM
yea sure.....

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:13 PM
No seriously it is. I'm going to diee soon!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:19 PM
when??!!!!#@

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:21 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
when??!!!!#@

Soon maybe even before my story is over!!!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:23 PM
ur not really gonna die are you?

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:27 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
ur not really gonna die are you?

No, it's just a expression!

I'm trying to get the writer to update faster!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:28 PM
oic

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:29 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
oic

Yah, you seriously thought I was really going to die?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:29 PM
well you said it aand i wanted to laugh at you really hard

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:32 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
well you said it aand i wanted to laugh at you really hard

So you wanted to laugh but you thought I was serious so you went into concern mode!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:32 PM
well im a caring guy and a true blue romantic

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:35 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
well im a caring guy and a true blue romantic

Really a caring guy? who is really smart! WOW

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:36 PM
yea well i try since i get great grades with a 4.3 gpa i try and focus on, sort a like a different life. and i thik im pretty funnny to

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:39 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
yea well i try since i get great grades with a 4.3 gpa i try and focus on, sort a like a different life. and i thik im pretty funnny to

wow, you must be really smart with a gpa of 4.3!!!!

Oh and you think your funny eh?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:39 PM
sometimes, im a pretty big guy too

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:44 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
sometimes, im a pretty big guy too

What do you mean a 'big guy'?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:46 PM
not fat but built i go lift weights and run a mile evry other day

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:49 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
not fat but built i go lift weights and run a mile evry other day

Wow, you sound hot!!!!:p

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:50 PM
well thx

but im only 5'7 and i weigh 154lb and my forearms are bigger than my biceps cuz i play tennis alot to

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:51 PM
your welcome!:D

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:51 PM
thx AGAIN

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:52 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
well thx

but im only 5'7 and i weigh 154lb and my forearms are bigger than my biceps cuz i play tennis alot to

that's a little shorter than me, i'm 5'11 and weigh 120lbs

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 04:52 PM
wow ur tall but i will get there my dad is 6'5 and my mom is 6'1

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
wow ur tall but i will get there my dad is 6'5 and my mom is 6'1

I'm because my dad is 6'

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:19 PM
like i said my dad is 6'5 so its gonna be weird if i stay short

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:21 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
like i said my dad is 6'5 so its gonna be weird if i stay short

most likely you won't because both of ur parents are tall.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:22 PM
yea, hows the test comin along

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:25 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
yea, hows the test comin along

I'm on qustion 21!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:26 PM
out of how many?

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:29 PM
well there's ten pages and I'm on page 6

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:38 PM
send me the link for it in a pm

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:38 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
send me the link for it in a pm

What the test?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:39 PM
yes

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:41 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
yes

ok just, here it comes!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:42 PM
ok

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:46 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
ok

SENT IT

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:51 PM
i just finished

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:52 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
i just finished

ME TOO

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 05:53 PM
but it only took me 5 min.

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 05:53 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
but it only took me 5 min.

WOW, WHAT DID YOU GET?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:04 PM
i got a 178

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:07 PM
i got 115

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:09 PM
wow...........

my sister is 9 years old she just finished and she got a 134!!!! lmao lmao lmao lmao lmao rofl

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:16 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
wow...........

my sister is 9 years old she just finished and she got a 134!!!! lmao lmao lmao lmao lmao rofl

Well you must have a smart family!!!!:D

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:18 PM
well i guess

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:20 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
well i guess

How much do you love clana?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:20 PM
more than i love my girlfriend!

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:24 PM
You should watch these two clana videos on youtube. The music goes perfect with the pictures.

Do you want me to PM you the links?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:35 PM
no i've seen all the videos on youtube. i watched them this morening. really sad the one moment more was really sad

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
no i've seen all the videos on youtube. i watched them this morening. really sad the one moment more was really sad

I don't think I've seen that one.

Have you seen the Clark, Lana and Lex. ones?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:44 PM
i dont want to i hate lex and lana now they are now the worst characters on the show

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:45 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
i dont want to i hate lex and lana now they are now the worst characters on the show

Are you sure it's really good, Lana even slaps LEX!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:46 PM
awesome but i saw this one vid where lana tries to kill zod. it put a smile on my face!

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:48 PM
Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
awesome but i saw this one vid where lana tries to kill zod. it put a smile on my face!

I think I saw that one, is that the one where she tries to stab him?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:51 PM
yes that one. LOVE I!!!!!!!!

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 06:54 PM
I LOVE THAT ONE!!!! IT'S AWESOME!!!

I HOPE LANA REALZES HE'S A VERY BAD GUY AND THAT CLARK IS WAY BETTER THAN HIM!:D

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 06:56 PM
well personaly i dont thik lana is gonna go back to clark..once she finds out his secret she will feel so bad for treating him so badly

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:01 PM
I think once she finds out his secret, she will go back to him!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:01 PM
no i dont htink so lana is done with clark and they both know no mater how much they love each other

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:03 PM
I thought you said you like clana?

What's up with all the negative thinking Alec?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:04 PM
its not negative im just speaking my mind i dont think clana is ever gonna be real again. maybe in a few dreams clark has but never in reality.

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:05 PM
I don't think so, I think they will realize they are meant for each other.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:06 PM
no. kristin says she didnt work much with tom in the 6th season

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:08 PM
WHAT!?!?!?!

Are you serious?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:10 PM
yea and she isnt gonna do a season 8 if they have one

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:13 PM
WHAT!?!?!?!

She's my favorite character!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:13 PM
she is my least fav now. they have turned her into a *****

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:17 PM
Yah, your right but besides the Lex issue she's still my fav. character. When she's gone it'll be Lois.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:17 PM
yea true but chloe is gonna my fav when shes gone. i hate lois

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:33 PM
I llike Lois, Chloe's ok. I don't hate her. I just like Lois better.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:34 PM
lois is to stuck up and her boobs are to big! and long...ewwwwwwww!!!!

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:37 PM
what r u talking about, i like Lois

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:39 PM
lois is skanky and a little weird but we all have our opinion! soo lets just drop the subjects. ur turn. what do you want to talk about now=>?

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:42 PM
What's your fav episode in Season 5?

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:42 PM
mortal!and thirst

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 07:47 PM
me too. I love Mortal and Thirst. There so good.

I actually just watched Thirst.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 07:58 PM
i watch them every chance i get!

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 08:01 PM
I'm watching Season 5, i on the episode Exposed.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 08:01 PM
yea very well thought episode.but reckoning is the best episode in the 5th season!

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 08:03 PM
yah, it is, I love the song at the end of that episode.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 08:06 PM
me too

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 08:11 PM
it's so good

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 08:20 PM
yes it is....this s a very intresting convorsation, isnt it?

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 08:21 PM
yup, two word answers

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 08:23 PM
thats funny!


ROTFLLMAOLOL

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 08:24 PM
yup

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 08:25 PM
yup yup

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 08:26 PM
this is getting boring!!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 08:29 PM
a little. we have nothing to talk about! what do u want to talk about.


whats ur fav. band?

clana_never_give_up
09-23-2006, 08:32 PM
I can't think of my fav band

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
09-23-2006, 08:45 PM
lmao

superman's my hero
10-02-2006, 02:53 PM
Finally all caught up. I hope Lana starts speaking to Clark again. I've been away for a whole two months and I only missed one update?! I hope you didn't dissapear on us. PPMS!

clana_never_give_up
10-02-2006, 08:27 PM
PLease update Soon!!!!

treker
10-02-2006, 08:31 PM
she's probably saving the update as a xmas present...yeah that's it a xmas present...that means the update should be ready in 11 weeks.....<note sarcasm>

clana_never_give_up
10-02-2006, 08:36 PM
I wish she would update soon, it's a horrible place to end it!

:(

NYC300Z
10-02-2006, 08:38 PM
wow so much chatter I thought there might be an update I missed

clana_never_give_up
10-02-2006, 08:43 PM
Originally posted by NYC300Z
wow so much chatter I thought there might be an update I missed

I wish!!!:D

treker
10-02-2006, 09:21 PM
Originally posted by NYC300Z
wow so much chatter I thought there might be an update I missed


I can be critisized all you want for this...but, I don't thing anyone is so busy that they can't get out at least 1 update in 3 months.....<oh, sorry....there I go being insensitive again....>

buddy232
10-07-2006, 06:31 PM
Please don't abandon this fic. It is really a great story!

Minnesotagirl
10-12-2006, 11:41 PM
*Pops in...Waves the white flag...Quickly posts an update*

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Chapter 28



Chloe had heard about ‘The Talk’ Clark had with Lana. He had called her late that night and told her about what happened. They had talked until early morning, totally bypassing any sleep. It wasn’t until she was able to calm him down and convince him that it wasn’t the end of the world, and that everything will turn out o.k., that she was able to get him off the phone and get some rest. However, Chloe had only gotten a couple hours of sleep when a certain extra-terrestrial showed up on her doorstep madly ringing the doorbell. She finally rolled out of bed when he started banging on her front door. She didn’t even bother changing her clothes. She just stumbled to the door, still half-asleep, wearing her blue and yellow Tweety Bird pajamas. She nearly made it to the door when her foot got a little too close to the table leg when she came around the corner.

“Ouch! Dammit!” she screamed. Chloe grabbed her big toe and hopped around, trying to rub away the pain. She limped angrily to the door and opened it up. Clark took a step back when he saw her wild bed-head hair and the perturbed look on her face. He glanced down at his watch and saw how early it actually was.

“You were sleeping…Sorry…I’ll come back later.” He turned to leave when he heard Chloe take a deep breath and let it out.

“Wait, Clark…It’s o.k. Come on in.” Chloe watched as he stepped past her and headed towards the living room couch. She could tell he was still upset by the way he carried himself. As he sat on the couch, his shoulders seemed to sag, and he kept his head bowed. Chloe stopped by the kitchen first and started a fresh pot of coffee…fully leaded, of course, before she joined him in the living room. She knew this was going to be a long day and needed all the caffeine her body could handle.

Clark had spent all day at Chloe’s pouring his heart out to her, wondering if there was anything he could have done to make things turn out differently. Chloe talked with him for hours and was practically passing out from lack of sleep. After he left, she was bound and determined to ‘fix’ this situation if it was the last thing she did. He may not need sleep, but she sure did.

The next day, Chloe went over to Lana’s, bound and determined to get her to see what she’s missing out on by being so stubborn. Sure, she has a right to be upset because of what happened to her parents, but if she doesn’t see Clark for the extra-ordinary person he is, despite the fact he was born in another galaxy, then, she just doesn’t deserve him. Chloe tromped up to Lana’s apartment door and pounded vigorously.

“Come on, Lana! I know you’re in there! I want to talk to you!” Bang! Bang! Bang! If she had hit the door any harder, she would have broken her hand.

Chloe heard the clicking of Lana’s shoes on the tile floor and then heard the lock turn on the door. Lana peeked her head through the open door.

“Chloe? What are you doing here?” she asked.

Chloe took the opportunity to push her way past Lana and entered her apartment.

“I want to talk to you about Clark,” she demanded.

Lana closed her eyes and shut the door behind her. She crossed her arms and walked over to Chloe.

“So…he asked you to come over.”

“No…Actually, he didn’t. I just spent nearly 24 hours talking with him on very little sleep. I’ve been downing espressos like there’s no tomorrow, and frankly, I don’t think my brain can take much more caffeine. If the rest of this year is going to be anything like yesterday, I’m going to lose my mind! So, I took it upon myself to talk some sense into you.”

“Some sense?”

“Yeah…Sense.”

“Fine…You can talk while I finish up.” Lana turned around and headed towards her bedroom. Chloe gave a perplexed look and followed her.

“Lana…” Chloe looked around her bedroom and saw items of pink and blue clothing haphazardly thrown into a suitcase on her bed. “What are you doing?”

Lana pulled some more clothes from her closet and tossed them in the suitcase.

“I called Nell…I’m going to stay with her for a while.”

Chloe looked at the amount of clothes she was packing. She knew that Lana was packing to be gone for a long time. “This isn’t for a short visit, is it? You’re running away…Away from him.”

“I’m not-I’m not running away…Chloe, you just don’t understand,” she said with frustration.

“Well, then…Explain it to me, because whatever you are doing here, it’ll just prove what Clark believes.”

“What do you mean?”

“Clark thinks that you hate him…for what happened to your parents.”

Lana stopped packing for a moment. “I don’t-I don’t hate him.”

“Well, based on how you reacted two days ago and given the fact you are leaving Smallville, I can see why he thinks that.”

“I was upset, O.K.? I just found out the reason my parents died.”

“Then, you do blame Clark.”

“No…I don’t. It took me a while to get past the anger and realize that. He was only a child…The meteor shower wasn’t his fault…My parents were just at the wrong place at the wrong time.”

“Well, if you aren’t angry anymore, and you don’t blame Clark for what happened, then why are you leaving?”

“I just need to get away from here…to think.”

“What more is there to think about?! Don’t you want to be with him?”

“That’s the big question, Chloe…I don’t know,” Lana said as she shrugged her shoulders.

“You don’t know?! Lana, he’s the same old Clark…You know…the shy guy who single-handedly keeps the flannel industry in business, but can also bench press a tractor. Do you know how extraordinary he is? I can’t count how many times he’s saved someone’s life, including my own and your’s, without thinking about his own.”

“Exactly.”

Chloe crinkled her nose with confusion. “Wait…you’re leaving because Clark’s a good guy, does the right thing, and is a hero because of it? That makes no sense.”

“I know…this may seem a little selfish, but let me explain,” Lana said.

“Yeah…You better explain because right now I feel like Ricky waiting for Lucy to do some ‘splainin’!” Chloe sat down on the end of Lana’s bed and crossed her arms waiting for an explanation. Lana sat down next to her and tried to explain.

“Look…I know Clark’s a good guy…Always wanting to jump in and help. That’s one of the reasons I fell in love with him…But now that I know about the dangerous situations he put himself in, regardless of his own safety…Chloe, I’m afraid that one of these times he’s going to run into something, thinking he’ll be fine…But then he gets hurt…or worse. I just don’t know if my heart could take it if anything happened to him. Losing Whitney was hard enough,” confessed Lana as she turned her face away from her.

Chloe placed her hand on Lana’s shoulder. “Lana, whether or not you are in a relationship with Clark is not going to change the way you feel about him. If he gets hurt, it’s going to affect you either way.”

“I know…but I was hoping that by not being with him, it would hurt less.”

“It may hurt less, Lana, but you need to ask yourself a question…Is lessening the pain by not being with him worth all the adventures and happiness you would miss out on? In reference to a song by Garth Brooks: You could have missed the pain, but you’d have to miss the dance. And let me tell you, Lana…this ‘dance’ you are going to miss, would have been the best dance of your life. You think about that while you’re at Nell’s.”

With that, Chloe got up off the bed and left Lana to think about what she said. Lana’s eyes followed her as she left her room and knew she was gone when she heard the apartment door close. Lana sat on her bed for a few minutes in silence and stared at her fidgeting hands. She then took a deep breath and shook herself out of her thoughts.

‘O.K., Lana, you’ve got to finish packing…You can think about things in Metropolis,’ she told herself.

Lana stood up and walked over to her dresser. She opened her top drawer and pulled out her socks and underclothes. She placed them in her suitcase. She then began to pick through her pajamas but suddenly pulled her hand away, as if it had been burned. There, staring right back at her was the framed photo of the two of them at prom. She had totally forgotten that she hid that photo in her drawer the day she discovered Clark’s secret. Lana reached over and slowly pulled the picture out of the drawer. Her thoughts went back to that night as she remembered how happy she was…to be in his arms again. She sat back down on her bed and stared at the picture. Her fingers began to delicately trace the outline of his face.

“Oh, god…What am I gonna do?” she asked herself. “If anything happened to him…” She couldn’t complete that sentence. She laid down on her bed and curled up with the photo hugged against her chest. Lana closed her eyes as she tried to imagine what her life would be like without Clark. She had been emotionally drained for days, and soon, she drifted off to sleep.


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Sorry it took so long to get this done. I know you guys were getting frustrated with me, and I was getting frustrated myself. I had some things happen over the summer that knocked me out of writing mode, so that's why there hasn't been an update in a while.

Anyway, like I said...I AM going to finish this fic.

Cardinal
10-13-2006, 12:11 AM
:) Yay, you're back! I thought you had turned into 4Ever and disappeared for good. I'm glad to be wrong. :)

Chloe's got some real motivation...getting the BDA to leave her alone. :p

Lana needs to listen to Chloe, what happens to Clark will happen whether she's there or not, so she might as well be there to love and be loved, the way she's always wanted.

Welcome back, Minnesotagirl. :D

SVsleuth
10-13-2006, 12:13 AM
Wow! MG and sandy both return on the same day! (I wonder if 4Ever will join them - lol)

So glad you're back, MG. I hope whatever happened over the summer wasn't too traumatic. Glad you're back! :)

Go Chloe! Lana needs to realize that her fear i irrational.
Leaving now = life without Clark.
Staying now = much happiness with Clark, with a small chance that someday she could possibly lose him.

If she fears living without him, she must stay with him. Duh!

So Lana fell asleep. Hmmm.... might we get another Leotie dream?

PPMS!

NYC300Z
10-13-2006, 01:58 AM
Thanks for coming back! Lana's acting like Clark does lol

Can't wait to see Lana's dream hopefully it will help her change her mind!

PPMS!

happycamper
10-13-2006, 03:54 AM
Welcome! Like everyone else, I'm really glad to see you back! :)

Lana's feelings are a bit irrational, but I'm glad that her reaction wasn't due to blaming Clark. She really needs to think carefully about what it is she really wants!

Please don't make us wait months to find out what happens next. ;) :lol:


:D :D

maru11
10-13-2006, 04:33 PM
awesome u r back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great update1!!!!!!!
hope lana don´t go!!!

clana_never_give_up
10-13-2006, 04:38 PM
That was awesome Minnesota girl. I'm glad your back.

We all missed you, and your stories.

I hope Lana takes Chloe's advice!!

:D :D :D :D :D :D

clark&lanafan06
10-13-2006, 08:59 PM
Great Update ! Glad your back !!!!!!!!!!!! PPMS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

superman's my hero
10-14-2006, 05:16 PM
Amazing update!! I hope Lana comes to her senses and decides to stay. Can't wait to read more! PPMS!

basketballstar23
10-14-2006, 07:01 PM
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!!! :lol:....seriously....great..PPMS!!!

maru11
10-16-2006, 04:24 PM
cna´t wait for more!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
10-29-2006, 03:47 AM
This got all the way down to page 3! When's the next update?

Clarkfan3000
10-29-2006, 12:02 PM
nice to have you back! great update!

maru11
10-30-2006, 03:41 PM
can´t wait!!!!!!!

clana_never_give_up
10-30-2006, 06:16 PM
Can't wait for more

maitriniazngurl
10-30-2006, 08:25 PM
Can't wait for the next update... I was a silent reader on this thread for a while... :)

Minnesotagirl
10-31-2006, 09:25 AM
Originally posted by NYC300Z
This got all the way down to page 3! When's the next update?

Dang! Thought you wouldn't notice!

My Grandma had her second surgery last week, so I've been busy with family stuff. She'll be fine, but the surgery didn't fix things the way we hoped. Now we're just waiting for her to get well enough to leave the hospital.

Anyway, I'm finding time here and there for writing, but it's pretty sporadic. Maybe if you guys pray for a blizzard, I'll get trapped inside and have no choice but to write!

I appreciate how nice everyone was when I posted after so long. I was a little nervous, but you guys were soooo nice! I hope others who haven't posted in a while can see that and know that it's never too late to come back.

Thank you, everyone, and have a great Halloween! :)

treker
10-31-2006, 01:25 PM
Originally posted by Minnesotagirl
Dang! Thought you wouldn't notice!

My Grandma had her second surgery last week, so I've been busy with family stuff. She'll be fine, but the surgery didn't fix things the way we hoped. Now we're just waiting for her to get well enough to leave the hospital.

Anyway, I'm finding time here and there for writing, but it's pretty sporadic. Maybe if you guys pray for a blizzard, I'll get trapped inside and have no choice but to write!

I appreciate how nice everyone was when I posted after so long. I was a little nervous, but you guys were soooo nice! I hope others who haven't posted in a while can see that and know that it's never too late to come back.

Thank you, everyone, and have a great Halloween! :)

Does that translate into another 3 month wait for an update?

SVsleuth
10-31-2006, 01:42 PM
Originally posted by Minnesotagirl
Maybe if you guys pray for a blizzard, I'll get trapped inside and have no choice but to write!
It's a bit early for a blizzard, MG, although it did work last winter. LOL
I'm glad your grandma is getting better. I know how it is with sickness in the family delaying updates. I'm planning to update Alt. Clana this week for the 1st time since June! I hope you can get an update for us before the next blizzard, though. ;)


Originally posted by Minnesotagirl
I hope others who haven't posted in a while can see that and know that it's never too late to come back.
others? Well, like I said, I'm posting mine this week. Maybe 4Ever can join us??

Minnesotagirl
10-31-2006, 05:07 PM
Originally posted by SVsleuth
It's a bit early for a blizzard, MG, although it did work last winter. LOL


It's not really that early. We had a Halloween blizzard here back in 1991 where we got over 28". I made it to two houses trick-or-treating and gave up. At least we didn't have to go to school the next morning, but do you think I could sleep in? No! My dad made me go up on the roof and shovel off snow! Let's just say my mom wasn't too happy with him. His reasoning: "Dear, if she falls off, she'll hit the snow...unless it's the driveway." Thanks, a lot, Dad! I'm surprised I survived childhood.


Originally posted by SVsleuth
others? Well, like I said, I'm posting mine this week. Maybe 4Ever can join us??

If she and Meg101 would come back, that would be sooooo cool! Hopefully they are still around. I'm looking forward to your next update SV, and I'm sure others are, too.

Oh, gotta go. The trick-or-treaters are starting to show. But, I do have my computer up and running, so I'm writing in between.

Take care.

maru11
10-31-2006, 06:49 PM
hope u can update soon1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
11-01-2006, 05:39 PM
They had a blizzard in upstate NY in the begginig of October this year decleared a state of emergency so it's not too early let's hope lol ;)

clanalove101
11-01-2006, 08:52 PM
SRy to hear about your g-ma but GREAT story i am more addicted than chloe is to coffee!! UPDATE please

~clanalove101

Cardinal
11-02-2006, 12:32 AM
*Sung while performing ancient Irish snow dance*

Oh, the weather outside is frightful,
But the fire is so delightful,
And since we've no place to go,
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow! :D

maru11
11-03-2006, 05:06 PM
cna´t wait!!!!!

buddy232
11-07-2006, 09:43 AM
Please update!

Thanks for the story!

tygershot
11-07-2006, 02:24 PM
Hey Minnesotagirl! Sorry to hear about your grandma, but glad to see you back! PPMS!

binkys711
11-21-2006, 06:11 PM
hey MinnGirl! caught up wit ur story, thank goodness! one less on my must read list! BOOYAH! hehe, anyways....

DANG IT! and here u had me thinking the angst was over...*mumbles*.....it was a great bunch of updates! and absolutely love this fic! :D can't wait for more! I wan't these problems fixed pronto! so.....
*goes buys snowing machine*
*comes in a build-it-yourself box*
oh ho...............were'd da manual go?............this may take a while........
Card better keep doing that snow dance thing :P

hehe! PPMS!!! and sorry to hear about ur grandma :\ but now worrys she'll be dancing like Card in no time :)

SVsleuth
11-21-2006, 10:53 PM
Well, if it is 31 degrees here in South Louisiana, it MUST be time for a blizzard in Minnesota! "Lord, PLEASE send a blizzard to Minnesota Girl's house..." ;) PPMS!

NYC300Z
11-21-2006, 11:06 PM
wow it was around 60 today here in NYC.....my sis said it was like 40 in Florida very weird....but yeah minngirl hope u can update soon!

SVsleuth
11-22-2006, 12:14 AM
It was in the 60's here, too, NYC, but overnight lows will be around 31 - light freeze. Early for us, in the South.

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
11-22-2006, 08:56 AM
PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!