View Full Version : If I could turn back time- Clana
ClarksGirl21
10-01-2006, 08:27 PM
Hey everyone, thanks so much for all the feedback =]
hahah. ajfinn i've missed you and thanks!!:D . i actaully just read my e-mail yesterday, yes, I definately haven't checked it in like 5 months. i had about 3.000 messages, it was CRAZY! haha. anyway, yeah it's been awhile since I've been on the k-site I realize, I just got busy and then sort of didn't think about it. But I do apologize, and I've missed everyone! I'm glad to hear from everyone. i love you guys =]
I'll be updating tonight or tomorrow night. so be ready!!:D
NYC300Z
10-01-2006, 08:55 PM
I'm Ready!
post number 10007 my zip code lol
ClarksGirl21
10-01-2006, 09:05 PM
haha. nicee NYC =] ... welp.. here's my next update as I promised. Tell me what you think...
"Brooke, I'm not expecting you to understand everything I'm about to say, because to be honest, I don't understand most of what happened to me either. But, I'm asking you to try. I'm asking you to try for your Dad." She shook her head showing that she understood. "Brooke, the other day I woke up, and I was old, and I was married and I had two beautiful kids. But, before the other day when I woke up, I was a senior in high school, I was just a kid myself. I don't have any idea how I got here, but now I have to find a way back. I've completely missed the last 8 years of my life, and I have to find a way to get them back." He took a deep breath and looked at the little girl. She didn't anything, nothing at all. She stared blankly at the crazy man in front of her.
"So, if your name's not Daddy, what is it?" She asked him.
"My name's Clark," he said smiling at Brooke.
"My name's Brooke," she said smiling back at him and shaking his hand.
"I know, so do you believe me?" he asked very serious but sweet.
"Yeah.. I think so."
......................
As Lois and Lana were walking through the jelwery department, Lana stopped and just stared at a beautiful silver men's watch.
"I'd love to get something like that for Clark, I think he'd love it." Lana said with her eyes fixed upon the shining silver.
"Uhh.. yeah, I guess." Lois responded trying to avoid thinking about Clark all together. It was practically impossible, she was shopping with his wife. The memory of Clark pushing her away kept playing over and over again in her mind. She supposed she deserved this torcher, it was only fair, she was cheating with her best friend's husband. Lois had never really thought of it in these terms before now, but now that it finally dawned on her the only thing she wanted to do was cry. Not only for herself neccesarily, but for the other woman who loved and trusted him unconditionally, and had no idea the lies hidden from her. Lois was guilty. She was scared. For the first time in a long time, she felt entirely alone.
"Lana," Lois began. "Oh no, what am I doing?" she thought to herself. "Lana, I think I have to tell you something." She gulped hard.
"Okay? Sure, is there something wrong, Lois?" Lana asked questioning Lois's sudden strange and sudden change in personality. Lois took a deep breath in.
"Not here," she said as she pulled Lana's hand and headed toward the car.
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
10-01-2006, 09:17 PM
nooooo dont do it!!
Cardinal
10-01-2006, 10:00 PM
Bad cliffie, bad I say!
Why does Lois have to pick NOW to develop a conscience?
She's such a beach! :p
SVsleuth
10-01-2006, 11:04 PM
Oh no! Lois CAN'T tell Lana before Clark does! No, No, No!!!!! PPMS! Quick!
superman's my hero
10-02-2006, 12:48 PM
OMG!! That was like the biggest cliffie ever! you can't just stop there! Would you write more please? I'm sick today and it would make me feel better. but great update! PPMS!
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
10-02-2006, 12:51 PM
yea write more plz!
NYC300Z
10-02-2006, 09:42 PM
omg I can't believe Lois is about to do what I think she's going to do! It will cause more problems for Clark and he still doesn't know what's going on~!
PPMS!
happycamper
10-03-2006, 01:29 AM
Yeah, Lois is about to do a very bad thing...:(
Still, if Clark can make it back "home" then it really doesn't matter so much, other than as something to avoid in the future. ;) :)
:D :D
buddy232
10-03-2006, 06:11 PM
I love this fic. I did not realized it was being updated again! Thanks for this great story!
ClarksGirl21
10-03-2006, 07:57 PM
ur welcome buddy232 ;) i may be updating tomorrow evening if I have time. I would tonight but I have a Biology Quiz I have to study for. Thanks for the feed back everyone!!!! :D
SVsleuth
10-04-2006, 02:49 PM
Hoping for more, ClarksGirl. Hope the Biology Quiz went well. How dare those teachers delay our Clana update! ;) PPMS!
buddy232
10-07-2006, 06:56 PM
I wish you the best on your Biology Test.
Patiently waiting for the next update!
buddy232
11-07-2006, 02:50 PM
Please update
Trent083
02-03-2007, 09:42 AM
Bumpage
binkys711
02-04-2007, 12:49 AM
WHAT?!?!? Y do I always miss the updates! OMG! u updated?!!?!?*is in shock* :p well I read them and u better not take so long to update again ClarksGirl especially since it was left on a cliffie! oh man I hope Lois doesn't say it! NOO! :p
Glad to have ya back dude! :) we missed ya!
superman's my hero
02-04-2007, 12:34 PM
Update soon please!
buddy232
03-17-2007, 08:46 PM
Please update!
i have to read back a few updates so i can remember what this fic is all about..... please give us an update more often...;)
buddy232
04-28-2007, 07:11 PM
Please update
buddy232
06-09-2007, 04:19 PM
Please update
need an update over here, please
superman's my hero
06-10-2007, 04:15 PM
Ooh an update would be great. Especially since it is summer and all...
clanaalltheway
09-23-2007, 04:45 PM
PPMS!
You have to finish this story I've been looking for it for ages!!! It's great!!! PLEASE
yeah, you just have to finish this story clarksgirl!
kentfamily
11-29-2007, 03:13 AM
Please update.
kentfamily
11-30-2007, 05:04 AM
This a great story deserves an ending, a happy one.
Please update.:D :( ;) ;)
kentfamily
12-10-2007, 03:13 AM
Great story.
Please update.
ClanaGirl
05-13-2009, 03:42 PM
i'm begging you please update! i lvoe this story more htan almost anyhting!
#7superherofan
06-07-2009, 03:30 PM
"And here" she said handing him a pair of glasses and some sort of uniform, "wouldn't want to forget these." she said walking into the other room to help the kids get ready.
"What is this?" Clark whispered as he inspected a blue spandex suit with a red and yellow emblem , with a big "S" in the middle. Just then Lana came back into the room.
"Uhh.. okay.. Lana? What is this?" he said feeling stupid like he should know.
"Ha Ha.. very funny, Clark. What would Metropolis do without thier Superman?" she said smiling at him and coming closer to him. Then she put her hands around his waist and looked up at him grinning. "And what would I do without mine?" she said kissing him. Hey, ClarksGirl, I just discovered this story and am completely hooked. It definatley has one twisted plot line, wothy of a "Twilight Zone" episode. Poor Clark. One second he's an angsty, teenager dancing with his LadyLove, and the next second he's become a full fledged adult with a job, a family, and not to mention a super secret identity. I can't wait to read how the story further develops.:D Hopefully there won't be too much extramarital Lois. Yuck!:mad:
#7superherofan
06-07-2009, 04:22 PM
From the window, watched the stranger. "Yes, they've both just left Mr. Luthor."
"Lex?" Clark uttered with sheer amazement. "... is that you?" Clark said stepping closer to the bald man about 40 years of age now.
"Has it really been that long Clark?" he laughed. "Do I really look that old?" he stepped in and patted Clark on the back. "What brings you to the Metropolis Flower Shop? I
just figured you'd be running off somewhere, writing big stories about me and the LuthorCorp scandals, or maybe Superman saving the day." he said in a mocking way. At
first Clark didn't know how to respond. Did Lex know his secret? He couldn't take that chance, so he just disreguarded the comment.
"Oh, well, it's mine and Lana's anniversary tonight, and I wanted to surprise her." Clark said with a smile. "And what brings you here, Lex?"
"Oh, just my latest infatuation, that's all." he said dismissing the question all together.
"Well, Lex, I've really got to run, I've got to pick up the kids. Great to see you." Clark said as he picked up the flowers, quickly slipped the cashier cash, and quickly walked
out the door and got into his car.
"Yeah, nice to see you again too," Lex whispered to himself, "Superman." he let fall from his lips. Okay, so its only been a half hour or so since I posted to tell you how much I AM ENJOYING YOUR STORY, ClarksGirl21, but what else can I do? Its a gloomy Sunday afternoon, and I'd much rather sit and read this FASCINATING FANFIC THAT I AM COMPLETLELY HOOKED ON, than try to work up the energy to do anything else(like clean my room.Sigh) And that last update was amazing. I hadn't noticed that Lex was missing from the plotline until the mysterious stranger called him.The scene in the flower shop was so well written, ClarksGirl21, for the drama and tension lept of the page. It was also kind of weird, 'cause Clark seemed very friendly to Lex, and I didn't remeber at first that they weren't enemies yet at the beginning of season five. Lex seemed friendly enough too, though he clearly knows Clark's secret. I wonder if he's the one that caused Clark to take a trip through time?
#7superherofan
06-07-2009, 04:40 PM
Um, an ending please,if you would be so kind.PLEASE!!! ON MY KNEES BEGGING!!!
ClanaGirl
06-19-2009, 04:46 PM
I am on my knees too please update I will do anything PLEASE!!!!!!!!! please we need an update or we will die.
Desii
10-05-2009, 07:03 AM
Just read the story and it's great
To bad, she probably forgot the whole thing
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