Emotional Detachment

[superman_lives_on]

I don't mind being second...it was worth it to see all that!

And all I can say is...

IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME!!! WAAAAHOOOOO!!!!

The next update is gonna be so good... Things are really coming to a head now! PPMS!

[SVsleuth]

Ahhh!!!! It's here!!!! off to read.....:)

I had to stop readng & go somewhere, and I FINALLY got to get back to my PC to read the rest of this AWESOME UPDATE! Ashley, this story is absolutely the BEST fic ever! - that's why we're all craving more all the time. :) You have an amazing talent with words. You blow me away the way you describe everything so vividly, with so many rich words. I LOVE your writing and I LOVE this fic!!! I really appreciate these last two updates you've given us. They were both fantastic! I'm biting my nails wanting to know what happens next. I know we are all in for a real treat as you complete this story. :):):):):):):):):):)

It was cool that you brought in New Year's fireworks while posting this on New Year's Eve. You are so clever. :D Well, I could go on and on, but my words pale in comparison to yours. so, thanks again, & have a very HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
:):):):):):):):):):)

P.S. "Hi" to somebodyfrommetropolis.;)

[Cardinal]

Whew! First, I need a cold shower after reading that.

Second, 4Ever is one post way from 10,000. I assume she did that on purpose since she was more than 100 posts away yesterday.

Third, it's been two days short of six months and it's taken eighteen long updates, but we finally have a confirmed sighting of actual Clana on this fic.

Sure, sometimes you earn your name, 4Ever, but if you keep up writing like this, we will forgive just about any transgression short of letting Jason and Lex win.

[superman_lives_on]

Originally posted by Cardinal
Whew! First, I need a cold shower after reading that.

Second, 4Ever is one post way from 10,000. I assume she did that on purpose since she was more than 100 posts away yesterday.

Third, it's been two days short of six months and it's taken eighteen long updates, but we finally have a confirmed sighting of actual Clana on this fic.

Sure, sometimes you earn your name, 4Ever, but if you keep up writing like this, we will forgive just about any transgression short of letting Jason and Lex win.

Well said, Card. I really can't follow that up! Lol.

[Clark&lana4eva]

aswome ur updates are definatly worth the wait

[NYC300Z]

It's amazing! A feat I never though I'd see duplicated again! 4Ever updates again in a short time! I hope the next one comes soon again! It's getting really exciting! What will they find at the lighthouse? Will Jason be ready with Kryptonite? Will Lex be helping him? What's going to happen?

PPMS!

[sandy]

geez. Lana as an angry mother is scaring the crap outta me! that update, although, was too good for words, so I'll let Card speak for me!:D off to take that cold shower!:lol:

ppms!

[SVsleuth]

Congratulations on 10,000 posts, 4EverSmallville!

[ajfinn]

Brilliant updates, 4Ever, and SO SO yummy :) Ahhhh........ the kissing, the passion ...... the Clanalicious dance.

I'm *sigh* wanting to turn on some Lifehouse and enlist my husband ... hee hee :)

That would be better than the the rest of ya'll's cold shower, I think :lol:

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

:) Hey :)

Once again, I am bouncing up and down with this update, only this time it's IN the cold shower (I haven't got a husband)...congrats on your 10000th post and thank you so much for your update!

Hooray! Happy new year!

[SmallvilleMan]

:D :eek: cold shower...... Nice update 4ever, i have to say i'm impressed.

[midnite_spark]

this year's starting off great already!! great update!! super hot with the Clana and i thought it was pretty funny that clark was intimidated by lana lol.

and jason...well he's an ass....lol

PPMS!!!

Happy New Year Everyone!!!!

[C.A.chick]

YES!!!!!!!! AWESOME UPDATE! LOEVELY CLANA! THAT WAS SOOOO COOL. AND I LOVED THE DANCE...SO BEAUTIFUL!

BUT STUPID JASON HAD TO RUIN IT ALL! THAT WAS IMPRESSIVE . Sorry about the font and size, I'm just soooooooooo happy! All the waiting has been worth it!!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPMASAP!

[SVsleuth]

Hey, Ash,
I spent a good portion of New Year's Day re-reading a lot of Emotional Detachment. You seriously should write books & have them published. I can read this over & over & still be entranced by your writing. Keep it up. You have so much talent. :)

[Kal-El & Me]

WOW, ASH! THAT WAS AWESOME. NO, AWESOME IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT. IT WAS ABSOLUTELY CLANALICIOUS. WHICH IS WAY BETTER THAN AWESOME! YOUR UPDATS GET BETTER AND BETTER AS YOU KEEP WRITING! PLEEEAAASSSSSE... AND I MEAN IT. PLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

I THINK I'M GOING TO GO BACK AND READ IT AGAIN!

[4EverSmallville]

Thanks everyone! :D. I had to come on and laugh about the cold showers :rotfl:. Believe it or not, I had to do major cutting on that scene because I thought it was a bit to vivid and illicit for PG 13. That was very innocent compared to the first few drafts...I think you guys are in withdrawal or something :lol:. I think I'll reply to everyone in a minute...

But I got some inspiration on my home last night/this morning. So...the next chapter is tentatively Confession or something of that nature. It won't max 20K though :lol:.

[Cardinal]

That sounds great!

You come up with another superlative update and I'll make another lame attempt at matching it.

[IluvCLANA]

well, i finally got to read this update....... im breathless, and speechless.........ill let aj and card talk for me...........

thanks for the update 4ever, no words can describe how beautiful it was, the emotions inveloped me, and had me clinging to every word.....

[SVsleuth]

Oh, cool, Ash. I'm glad your creativity is flowing into your keyboard. :) This story is great!

[4EverSmallville]

SuperNes: Thanks about the 10K, took long enough :lol:. I'm worried about Clark, too ;). Meteor rocks do hurt Clark :lol:. Lana might save him, Lana might not :rotfl:. And you know, this isn't the first time someone has asked if Sean is Clark's. I'm sorry lol, but in the story, Lana and Clark don't see each other after the third season, and neither of them were active at the time. Sorry :(.

superman lives on: It is isn't it :lol:. This is, what, the 18th chapter? :rotfl: I don't know how I lasted that long, let alone you guys :lol:.

SVsleuth: :o. I don't know what to say...don't bite your nails - bad habit :p. Seriously, however, it is such an extreme honor to have people read my story, let alone leave comments like that. I’m a bit clueless as to how one would respond to that outside of insistent thank you’s. You certainly have given me a standard to live up to; I’ll do my best to appease you.

Also, I did the New Years mention on purpose, glad you caught it lol. And thanks for the Congrats :D. You've been re-reading? SV...that's almost one-hundred fifty pages in Word! Wow!

Books? :o aj's the only professional around here, I'm honored you would say that though :o :o :o.

Cardinal: There go those cold showers :lol:. Wow, it's a good thing I did edit some things :lol:. Very observant also, I did do it on purpose :lol:. I wanted to have 10K before the new year. Thanks for counting down to the day :rotfl:. That's got to be a record lol.

I hope you did update, I'm looking forward to the rest of that date.

Clark&lana4eva: Thanks :o.

NYC300Z: Whatever! :lol: What will they find at the lighthouse? Danger. Will Jason be ready with Kryptonite? Among other things. Will Lex be helping him? Along with himself. What's going to happen? I don't know :lol:.

sandy: Angry Lana was so fun to write :lol:. You guys are making me laugh out loud with this cold shower talk.

ajfinn: :eek: No Clark bound to a chair in your closet? I'm shocked! :lol:

somebodyfrommetropolis: Thanks for the congrats, don't hurt yourself bouncing in the shower :lol:.

SmallvilleMan: Thank you, that means a lot coming from you.

midnite spark: I can see why you feel that way about Jason, but I suppose there are things about Jason that can't be helped... .

C.A.chick: The only time I ever used a font that large I did it unintentionally :lol: j/k. Glad you enjoyed it.

Kal-El & Me: Thanks :lol:. Clanalicious? Who came up with that one? :lol:

IluvClana: Thanks as well, aj & card do have a way with words.

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Got everyone, I hope. So that's that. I hope everyone is well and have a great New Years. Welcome to 2006 (the year of Clana) :lol:.

[Clark&lana4eva]

i hope its the year of clana but i thin kthe proposal will ruin it between them

[Dr. Jeckyll]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
Kal-El & Me: Thanks :lol:. Clanalicious? Who came up with that one? :lol:
:. I think it was Card. That's where I heard it first at least. It's actually one of my favorite words. Clanalicious.. It really says it all :D

I almost feel guilty to not have read your update before now. It was definitively one of the best I've ever read! You're a true genius with words and that clana-scene was HOT! I would've taken a cold-shower myself, but it's kinda late here so I'll have to drop it :p

It’s so cool to see you're writing again. I really hope you'll squeeze in another update soon, because this fic is BRILLIANT!

[MOOman0618]

I don’t even know where to start…

I guess first I have to apologize for being so very late in my reply to these updates. This it the first chance I have had to be on any sort of computer for over a week!

Let me tell you, the long months we have waited for you to update were well worth it when you come out with updates like those. Don’t get me wrong…the few days between ‘Heedless’ and ‘Passion’ are much preferred, but we have learned to be patient. :)

Now, on to the Yummy Clana Goodness...

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville

A small part of her wondered what she was doing. Why she was giving in to temptation. But she listened not to her mind and only to her heart. She wasn’t giving in to temptation; she was giving in to love.

Wow…just incredible writing, so sweet and passionate all at the same time. And I am with the many other Clana fans who now need a cold shower. Even if it was toned down to fit the PG-13 rating, it still was VERY affective. Definite edge of my seat reading, biting of lips and shouts of joy when the first kiss was finally realized.

I can’t wait for another update. I really can’t. I hope that you are able to find time to keep your throngs of fans at bay.

[binkys711]

*faints at the thought that Ash actually updated in such a short period of time*
*reads update*
"I think I went to clana heaven!" then....fell and hit earth again

That update was so outstanding! I think you should have left it they way you had planned it before....much more clana;) but this update was incredible anyways! they always are! I was jumping like crazy! they finally gave in! hooorayyy!:D:D:D:D then Jason came and ruined it:mad: c'mon Clark, Lana, got beat the crap out of Jason so we can get more happy clana!:D Your writting is amazing! PPMS!;)

[IluvCLANA]

welcome back to 4ever's wonderfully amazing story binks...glad you enjoyed the update as much as everyone else did...

PPMS 4EVER :D

[linn]

hey just caught up with the story it was so great...loving it..:D

[C.A.chick]

:(...... sorry 4ever, but I got a little too excited! you really should write a book! or at least print it out and turn it at school for extra credit or something, or let teachers read and realize that you have an amazing aptitude for writing...maybe they can convince you to publish it! PPMASAP!!!

[binkys711]

yeah, you could make a new Smallville book!;):p

[IluvCLANA]

it would be our very own clana book!!!!!!!! o wow, 4ever...... you really should, you have SO much talent, the teachers would be blown away.....

[cufcchic]

i loved the update 4ever!!!!! please update again soon

[NYC300Z]

:lol: 4Ever! Glad to be seeing you in here more!;)

[Kal-El & Me]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
Thanks everyone! :D. I had to come on and laugh about the cold showers :rotfl:. Believe it or not, I had to do major cutting on that scene because I thought it was a bit to vivid and illicit for PG 13. That was very innocent compared to the first few drafts...I think you guys are in withdrawal or something :lol:. I think I'll reply to everyone in a minute...



The power of love should never be considered R- rated in my opinion. Especially Clana love. I think it should be out there for the whole world to see. Anyone agree!?!:eek:

[kewl]

awesome!!!!

[TomWelling'sSecret]

Caught up too with this amazing story...I love this fic so much!!! This chapter impressively written...made me wish this story was a movie to instant replay it over and over again. :D Please post more soon!

[akuma]

WOW!! that was freakin awesome! i wonder if clark will be forced to reveal his powers!?! yes, no, maybe? i cant wait!!!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Oooohhhh...that would be cool! Clark having to reveal his powers! To Lana or Jason or Lex or...PPMS!

:D

Ooh! Just thought of something! What if Sean learns about his powers and they have to keep them from Lana?!

Aaahhh...post before I self destruct! :eek:

Thanks :lol:

[midnite_spark]

i think it'll be a GREAT idea for clark to reveal his powers to lana!! it could be like:

clark and lana make it to wherever jason's holding sean. and lana tries to stop him...jason threatens lana with her life....clark goes *zoom zoom zip zip* there's a *crash! bam! boom!* and jason's out, sean's saved....and lana's all like "oh my hero!"

....something along those lines lol....u can fill in the details....;)

[SVsleuth]

But there's kryptonite there - a LOT of it. I think Lana will have to save Clark...........

[annaliese]

i love it midnite_spark!!!!! lol :rotfl:

post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[4EverSmallville]

I really want to say something right now...but I must resist :lol:. Anyway, you guys are good about making me laugh when I wake up - and yes I do wake up at noon most days :lol:.

[NYC300Z]

that late Ash? oh well i'm usually up later than that if I don't have anything to do~! I hope your using your free time for writing the next update!;)

[midnite_spark]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
I really want to say something right now...but I must resist :lol:. Anyway, you guys are good about making me laugh when I wake up - and yes I do wake up at noon most days :lol:.

dude me too! cuz i'm like going to bed at like 4AM or 5AM cuz of watching Naruto lol....but have to stop that now that spring term is bout to begin....bah

[IluvCLANA]

come on 4ever.... im now getting on not as much bc of school.... plz update soon......

[superman_lives_on]

Yes, come on, 4Ever! I dislike the thought of waiting more than a week between updates! PPMS!!!

[SVsleuth]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
I really want to say something right now...but I must resist :lol:. Anyway, you guys are good about making me laugh when I wake up - and yes I do wake up at noon most days :lol:.

You're killing my with that tease, Ash!! :lol: I am so much craving more of this fic.

Fairy Princess Lana asks SVsleuth if she wants to make a wish.

SVsleuth: Yes, Lana, I would love to make a wish. I wish that 4EverSmallville will wake up this morning with an insatiable desire to write more & more & more of Emotional Detachment.....

Fairy Princess Lana waves her magic wand and touches SV on the head with it, then waves it again, flies off to 4Ever's bedroom & touches Ashley with her wand, sprinkling pixie dust for good measure.....


LOL - PPMS, Ash! I love your fic!

[pacifichic]

Hey 4Ever...I JUST had my 2 wisom teeth pulled yesterday, so I have nothing to do ALL day today! PLEEEEASE help ease the pain a little...POST! :)

[4EverSmallville]

Originally posted by SVsleuth
You're killing my with that tease, Ash!! :lol: I am so much craving more of this fic.

Fairy Princess Lana asks SVsleuth if she wants to make a wish.

SVsleuth: Yes, Lana, I would love to make a wish. I wish that 4EverSmallville will wake up this morning with an insatiable desire to write more & more & more of Emotional Detachment.....

Fairy Princess Lana waves her magic wand and touches SV on the head with it, then waves it again, flies off to 4Ever's bedroom & touches Ashley with her wand, sprinkling pixie dust for good measure.....


LOL - PPMS, Ash! I love your fic!

:o :lol: Sorry, SV, I don't think your wish will come true...I just woke up :lol:. And what's the tease? Me posting without an update or me wanting to say something but can't? Like I said, you guys make me smile when I wake up lol.

I'll probably have to post for pacifichic though, 2 wisdom teeth. I'm very sorry about that, get well soon!

[Clark&lana4eva]

yess post for pacifichic and 4 the rest of us!!!

[SVsleuth]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
:o :lol: Sorry, SV, I don't think your wish will come true...I just woke up :lol:. And what's the tease? Me posting without an update or me wanting to say something but can't?

You wanting to say something, but you can't. I want to know what YOU know.... so I need you to write it for me. LOL! Sleepyhead! Enjoy your holidays, sleeping in.... won't last, I know...

[pacifichic]

Thanks 4Ever! I'll be looking for your post! :)

[IluvCLANA]

yea!! post for pacificchick.........and the rest of us....plz!!!!!!!!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Yeah..PPMS!

:lol:

[IluvCLANA]

please? *gives puppy dog eyes*

[C.A.chick]

Oh please 4ever?!!!!!!!!!!!! Its not fair! You don't even have to go to school yet! PPMASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[NYC300Z]

yeah come on Ash update for her! i know how that is i had all four of my wisdom teeth pulled and I only needed one of them pulled! it took me weeks to recover!

[spacewalker_33.3]

hey Ash, i report myself like a silent reader, don't you think that we deserve an exquisite, extra long, varied, wild, and very rebellious clanalicious update? :p :lol: no rush Ash, ur updates are worthy the wait :D

[SVsleuth]

So how many pages are done now, Ash? Progress report? - LOL
(P.S. - you're ahead of me. I only have two sentences written so far...)

[TomWelling'sSecret]

When are you going to update? :(

[clanafoeva]

Please update if you don't want to do it for us than please do it for pacificchic. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee ppmsasap

[Clark&lana4eva]

please and i thought i took long w/ updates sheesh

[SVsleuth]

Of course she wants to do it for us. I happen to know that 4Ever was woking on her update until after 2 a.m. this morning. She's working on it, in between everything else she has going on. Her updates take a bit longer because she makes them SO good and SO long. :) PPM whenever you're ready, Ash. ;)

[TomWelling'sSecret]

So it's coming?? Yay!!!

[midnite_spark]

updates always come...its just when....that's the million dollar question. heh.

hmmm.............

i'll try wishing on a star tonite....maybe that'll work....

[4EverSmallville]

Maybe...:lol:

[Cardinal]

Originally posted by SVsleuth
Of course she wants to do it for us. I happen to know that 4Ever was woking on her update until after 2 a.m. this morning. She's working on it, in between everything else she has going on. Her updates take a bit longer because she makes them SO good and SO long. :) PPM whenever you're ready, Ash. ;)

I think this quote proves that SV is an Ash-kisser! :p :p :p

[4EverSmallville]

Who was it who helped Card out on his last update? ... The name escapes me. But I doubt the clever, yet less than subtle puns are going to earn you any points. I wonder...are we still feeling bitter about the avatar? :lol:

[Cardinal]

I'm a punny guy, what can I say?

I do it just for the halibut...no particular porpoise.

As far as TW goes, the first two pictures in your avatar STILL make him look gay!

[4EverSmallville]

I believe Lana would ask, "Where did you get that, a fortune cookie?" Either there or google :p.

*cough*jealous*cough* :o Just admit it, Card.

[SmallvilleMan]

We all know you're both rookies in the pun department. There's only one person who brings the best pun to the table:cool: :D

[Cardinal]

Envious, maybe, but jealous? Never! Why, I'd never let the green-eyed monster take...dang, there it goes again! Oh, nevermind.

[SmallvilleMan]

Hmmm.... Well played, let's see what 4ever brings to the table.

[4EverSmallville]

Card, jealous is synonymous with envious, just so you know ;).
SVMan if we're rookies, then you're hardly a pro.
All is well, but one more piece of knowledge I ought to bestow,
my talents lie as much in rhyming as they do in my prose. ;)

Can I go to sleep now? :lol: ... K-Site keeps freezing up on me anyway so I won't be around much longer.

[SVsleuth]

How about back to your fic writing - ALL of you... Hee-Hee- :lol:

[Cardinal]

Haiku (God bless you!)

4'ver writes slowly
Her stories inspire our dreams
Will she write faster?

[4EverSmallville]

Haikus are five -seven- five, Card. ;). It was nice, though :). But SV's right, back to work. :lol:

[MOOman0618]

What a pretty poem Card. :)

[Cardinal]

There, happy?

[4EverSmallville]

Better, but I still count six on that bottom line :lol:. Don't worry about it lol, I'm going to bed.

[MOOman0618]

LOL...I just yelled at him for that. :lol: Heehee

[Cardinal]

All you poetry critics can go to heck! :D

[kewl]

nice 1 card! :)

PPMS 4ever, plz? ;)

[SmallvilleMan]

SVMan if we're rookies, then you're hardly a pro.

That's right hardly a pro, just the master:p

[MOOman0618]

So I have been hearing some rumors that an update may be happening in the near future. Are these rumors true? I can only hope they are!


Maybe if you and Card stepped out of the ring and put down the gloves, both of you could get some updates cranked out. :p

[midnite_spark]

haha agreed!

[iloveit]

Originally posted by Cardinal
I think this quote proves that SV is an Ash-kisser! :p :p :p
:rotfl: lol! and ya post whenever, cuz your updates are sooo good and sooo long! but hopefully whenever = soon:p

[4EverSmallville]

I never start anything with Card :rotfl:. But it's just not in my nature to sit idle :lol:. Whenever you're ready, Card ;) :lol:.

I just got back from my first day of the writing workshop, it was fun and it put me in a writing mood. So, after practice and the homework for the workshop, my evening will be all about updating. So, iloveit, whenever = soon.

[akuma]

In the words of my favorite characters from family guy, that news is Gigidy!!:p

[SVsleuth]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
I just got back from my first day of the writing workshop, it was fun and it put me in a writing mood. So, after practice and the homework for the workshop, my evening will be all about updating. So, iloveit, whenever = soon.

YES!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D

[binkys711]

HOORAY! SOON!!!! WOOT WOOT!

and I was :lol: when reading your fights in previous pages:p

[midnite_spark]

YAY!!!!!! :D

[Kal-El & Me]

Can we please just get an update? Pleeeeaaasssse? I'm dying here. *Wipes persiration from forehead and reaches for only source of fluid just out of reach. Which happens to be behind Clarks lips.*

[iloveit]

Originally posted by Cardinal
Haiku (God bless you!)

4'ver writes slowly
Her stories inspire our dreams
Will she write faster?
*tear* thats such a beautiful poem card!

[kewl]

yay, another update's coming!!! i just can't hardly wait!!!! PPMS!!!!

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!

[NYC300Z]

I will be stunned if she updates soon! Like before this week is over! ;)

PPMS!

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

You sure do have a lot of confidence in her:p

[4EverSmallville]

I think you all want me to update out of spite :lol:. If I can't finish today, I know I can appease Matt's week-long window of opportunity.

[superman_lives_on]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
I think you all want me to update out of spite :lol:. If I can't finish today, I know I can appease Matt's week-long window of opportunity.

No, take as long as you need to, just not forever. :) I have faith in you.

[midnite_spark]

i think u should post for whatever and whichever reason u want...just as long as u post an update i'll b happy:p

[NYC300Z]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
I think you all want me to update out of spite :lol:. If I can't finish today, I know I can appease Matt's week-long window of opportunity.


oh I sure hope so! I'm counting on u this time....don't disapoint me again!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Take as long as you need, but I think that I'll put my vote in by the end of the night Monday. After all, the Writing Workshop does put you in the mood...and, of course, we will all be badgering you until you do...

:D

[SVsleuth]

PPMS, Ash. I hope you are enjoying the Creative writing class. :)

[NYC300Z]

Yeah and hope it really gets you writing!;)

PPMS!

[kewl]

yeah. and hope to hear more from u the soonest!!!

[IluvCLANA]

hey you guys!!! hope you update soon 4ever!!!

[iloveit]

ppms!

[C.A.chick]

Ash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPMASAP! We're all sitting on our butts waiting for an update. CAn't wait!!!!!!!!!!!1

[nellie2]

cant wait for an update!!!!

[midnite_spark]

i wonder if we should start a pool on when 4ever is going to update :lol: ;) :p

[iloveit]

ya thats a good idea! who bets friday?

[IluvCLANA]

look iloveit!!!!!!!!! ur almost a regular!!!!!!

[C.A.chick]

I bet 2 months from now! PPMASAP!

[iloveit]

ooo i am! its so exciting :D 2 months? hmm lets hope not!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

It took me until now to Settle In, and I came in the beginning of November. :lol:

Anyway, I bet 4ever will update on Saturday night. I don't know why, but I do. :)

[NYC300Z]

yeah she told me she'd update before today....and well you know she didn't! I pick Sunday!;)

[kewl]

so i'd better check again on sunday morning!!! :D

[NYC300Z]

:lol: Kewl I doubt that i'm right

[midnite_spark]

hmmmmm.......i think i'll pick........

next friday....i kinda want to pick valentine's day...but that's kinda far away but then again it is 4Ever we're talking bout lol.

but i'll give her the benefit of the doubt and say next friday.

[4EverSmallville]

Originally posted by NYC300Z
yeah she told me she'd update before today....

I feel like I'm constantly being misquoted :lol:.

I'm working though guys, honest :). It's just hard to find the time to turn my notes into updates... I will though. Soon seems like the best and most vague word for the moment. So I will update soon :) lol.

[superman_lives_on]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
I feel like I'm constantly being misquoted :lol:.

I'm working though guys, honest :). It's just hard to find the time to turn my notes into updates... I will though. Soon seems like the best and most vague word for the moment. So I will update soon :) lol.

I hope so.

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

I smile happily because every second brings us closer to an update...and Lockdown is in 10 minutes! :lol:

For my time, anyway. :D

[superman_lives_on]

Originally posted by Somebodyfrommetropolis
I smile happily because every second brings us closer to an update...and Lockdown is in 10 minutes! :lol:

For my time, anyway. :D

For my time, too.

[C.A.chick]

its over now for my time......... it was sad that Lana's getting close to Lex......ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Lexana is NASTY! And, I hope we get clana goodness here soon, cause we're gonna need it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPMASAP!

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

I know I hated all those lexana moments! I feel dirty even saying that word, I hope you can update soon

[midnite_spark]

yes that episode upsetted me greatly!!! the lexana was GROSS!!!! EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

we really need u to update soon with the ever-so-great-CLANA!!! after that episode....i'm pretty sure everyone on this board needs a clana pick me up :)

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

I know! But Clark really does have nice hair...anyway, Clana is absolutely the best so therefore...

PPMS, 4Ever! :rotfl:

[NYC300Z]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
I think you all want me to update out of spite :lol:. If I can't finish today, I know I can appease Matt's week-long window of opportunity.


Yes and that week was over the day I posted that you said you said you'd update by then!

[iloveit]

i think i lose the bet:p i hope whoever said saturday wins!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

me too!

[cufcchic]

me three!!!

[NYC300Z]

yeah me four!;)

[midnite_spark]

seems like the person for saturday loses....:(

go friday! tho i wouldn't mind if i lost...if the update was sooner :D

[iloveit]

fridays waaaay too far! lets cheer for sunday!
SUNDAY! SUNDAY! SUNDAY! lol now that reminds me of that discovery channel thing, "sunday sunday sunday, only on sunday sunday sunday!" lmao! okay just had a little moment with myself there...back to cheering for sunday!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Oh man, I lose. My excuse? Wishful thinking. PPMS, 4Ever!

My next bet is President's Day weekend. I know it's far, but it's less than a month away and better than nothing!

:lol:

[clana56]

wow i liked the update but when do we get an update?
i hate cliff hangers! please update soon.

[MBCorp]

I'd forgotten about this story! :eek:

It took me like, three hours to scroll back to the last chapter I'd read. Thank god somebody had posted an index of 4Ever's chapters or I'd still be looking. This fic is like over 70 pages long with all of the replies. :lol:

4Ever, I'm still lovin' this story even though I don't ship Clana, it's awesome. :D Have you ever thought of putting it on a website or posting it at fanfiction.net so it would be easier for people to read it without scrolling back so far?

(btw, I really hope my avatar doesn't get me bombarded by tomatoes in here:p)

[iloveit]

*hides tomato behind back* heh. heh. *looks around innocently* come on tuesday!

[NYC300Z]

Wasn't there a cartoon about man eating tomatoes back in the late 80's... I think I remember watching it when I was little. oh yeah 4Ever you need to update! Presidents day weekend doens't sound too bad if 4Ever writes a really long update for us!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

See? Rally the troops!

:rotfl:

PPMS, 4ever!

[C.A.chick]

hah, wishful thinking Somebodyfrommetropolis. I remember the time when she took at lest 4 months to updat. I had just about given up on ash ever updating, but then out of the blue, with absolutely no warning, she upates. Kaboomy! Just like that. Lmao! I love you 4ever, no matter how mean I sound. We all await a beautiful update.

MBCorp, we would never throw tomatoes on this thread. *Looks under the tarp at the crates of juciy tomotoes and grins.* Emphasis on the "on this thread" part. nah, you have your own opinions, whether we clana lovers agree or not. PPMASAP 4ever!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Wishful thinking comes with expectations and, later, letdowns. I'm going to allow myself to dream! And besides, the updates are certainly worth the waits!

lol, C.A.chick! :p

<3 4ever!

[kewl]

i thought there's gonna be an update sunday????? :(

[NYC300Z]

yeah I was hoping for that too Kewl!

[akuma]

Soooo quiet, i need an update!

[iloveit]

of course we dont throw TOMATOES! bananas are much gooier :) jk we are nice people, who dont hassle other people to update really soon:) *cough*

[midnite_spark]

i tend to throw shoes :lol: ;)

now...it's closing in on my day...friday...i wonder if i'll win or not? hmm...

[iloveclanamorethanu!!!]

hey guys im new here but i have been reading all these threads for at least 6 months. my favorites are how this time will be different, bless the broken road, sequal: the past can haunt us, and emotional detachment, 4ever, plz update

[SVsleuth]

Welcome to the Clana posting frenzy club, iloveclanamorethanu!!! Hope to see you around. Glad you finally decided to come out of hiding. :)

[IluvCLANA]

DITTO PPMS

[iloveit]

ya welcome iloveclanamorethanu! i hope you win too midnite_spark, cuz your so smart and...oops wrong person to be flattering...heh heh. ppms!

[iloveclanamorethanu!!!]

as for the bets of when 4ever is gonna update, i say sometime next week . . . hopefully

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Hi, iloveclanamorethanu!!! welcome.

I still say that Presidents' Day weekend will the our best bet. PPMS! ;)

[midnite_spark]

awww my day is coming dangerously close to coming to an end...:( i wonder if she'll post anything at all...hmmm...

oh and iloveit..:lol: gee thanks..

and welcome to the board iloveclanamorethanu!!!

[iloveit]

np midnite_spark ;) although i do think your avis pretty cool :lol: im gonna pretend i didnt bet yet, and go for...tuesday. ppms!

[kewl]

yeah welcome!! PPMS 4ever!

[midnite_spark]

crap...i guess i didn't win

ahhh well, hope 4Ever posts soon

[hellowelling]

Absolutely fantastic writing, I only see one problem with this, it's been way too long since the last update.

[NYC300Z]

Please update soon! Please!

[kewl]

pleez update soon 4Ever!
welcome aboard the clana ship bellowelling :D

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

Is 4ever ever gonna update?!?! she just posted on reuinion

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

I still say Presidents' Day weekend. If 4ever does not update at this time, you have official rights to egging me and my avatar.

:lol:

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

Starts counting eggs in fridge, ha I have um... let me see *counts on fingers* 16 eggs. I'll get you and your little avatar too...lol

[hellowelling]

thank you kewl......I think we need to start pestering her to update.

[superman's my hero]

hi!! i've been reading this story from the beginning and i hafta say that this is soo amazing!! i really hope that u post more soon. im really anxious to find out what happens!!

[NYC300Z]

Yeah I sure hope she gets it in by President's day weekend!

[iloveclanamorethanu!!!]

come on forever, plz update, plz!, all threads for some reason dont update as much, u left us hanging when sean got kidnapped, and when clana started. plz update!

omg! did any of u see the wb description for cyborg. lana calls clark which doesnt show if they are together or not but i think they are ( lana hits cyborg with car and immediately calls clark )

[hellowelling]

Now I can understand she's pretty busy with school and all, so we shall leave her alone, but I think we all need reassurance that she IS working on something...That's it, just a short note, "hey guys, it's coming." It's all we need................for now :-)

[Kal-El & Me]

4Ever???

[linn]

hey 4ever see you out there sometimes on....Please aleast drop by and tell us....Please:(

[Kal-El & Me]

Oh and welcom, Hellowelling!

[hellowelling]

thank you, thank you

[iloveclanamorethanu!!!]

4ever please update!

[LLane_Adict_47]

sweet story! i flippin luv it. i'm new to the boreds but i've been a smallville fan ever sence i can remember. i've always read fanfiction but not smallville ff then all of a sudden i just snapped and was like 'y the hell don't u read smallville ff?!' and i'm so glad i started too! this story is amazing! i'm luvin every chapter!
could i get a PM? plz n ty


<3~Kimmi~<3

[clana4love]

OMG! THis is SUCH a good story! PLEASE update 4ever! I'm counting on you!

[iloveit]

wow theres like a whole bunch of new people here! welcome, hellowelling, LLane_Adict_47, and clana4love! and ppms 4ever!:D

[LLane_Adict_47]

wut does ppms mean???


<3~Kimmi~<3

[iloveit]

ppms means please post more soon so ppms!

[LLane_Adict_47]

lol wow, i could have figured that out. lol
yeah PPMS!


<3~Kimmi~<3

[Kal-El & Me]

You wouldn't happen to give us a surprise superbowl update after the Steelers win would you, 4ever?

[NYC300Z]

Yeah that would be awesome Ash! Go Steelers!;) They haven't won yet Kal-el & me

[Kal-El & Me]

Well they have now!:D :D :D
;)

[4EverSmallville]

Originally posted by hellowelling
Now I can understand she's pretty busy with school and all, so we shall leave her alone, but I think we all need reassurance that she IS working on something...That's it, just a short note, "hey guys, it's coming." It's all we need................for now :-)

Wish granted :D. I have a big paper due Friday, monstrous more like... so anyone who's talented with photoshop and dreamweaver and wouldn't mind doing my grade a good justice... ;) :lol:.

Anyway, this week I'm zoned in on the paper, so no go there, sorry. However, Saturday I will be traveling to the middle of no where with the rest of the basketball team and it sounds as if I'll be gone all day. Since I won't have this paper and basketball just chewed out my Saturday, I'll write on that long trip.

So that's the "hey guys, it's coming." Thanks for being patient and insistent :).

Oh and about the Super Bowl...once the Bears were out it didn't matter to me :lol:. I'm glad you guys' team one though ;).

And welcome to all the new posters! :D

Ashley

P.S. A couple weeks ago I added the index to the first page of the thread so those who want to go back don't have to dig deep for it.

[superman's my hero]

that sounds great!! i'm looking forward to it already! good luck with basketball and ur paper!

[iloveit]

^ditto!

[clana56]

first of all awesome story, second of all i hate cliff hangers! thrid of all i need an update im going out of my mind just thinking of the possibilities.ppms

[hellowelling]

sounds good, thanks

[NYC300Z]

Yeah can't wait!;)

[kewl]

PPMS!

[midnite_spark]

AWESOME!

hope u have fun on the trip :)

[sandy]

Would giving you my 500th comment help you in updating sooner?:D

BTW, I only post milestone comments on my FAVORITE fics!;) I'm really glad to hear you're writing a lot!:) Keep up the amazing work!

[kewl]

congrats on ur 500th post sandy! :D

PPMS 4ever!

[NYC300Z]

Yeah hurry and post 4Ever! Congrats Sandy!

[SVsleuth]

Originally posted by 4EverSmallville
Saturday I will be traveling to the middle of no where with the rest of the basketball team and it sounds as if I'll be gone all day. Since I won't have this paper and basketball just chewed out my Saturday, I'll write on that long trip.

So that's the "hey guys, it's coming." Thanks for being patient and insistent.

So, 4Ever, did the writing go as planned yesterday? Yes, I'm keeping tabs on you. :p I'm still very eager for your next update. I hope it will come soon. And if you haven't found it yet, check AJ's "This Time" thread for her Teaser of her new fic! :)

Please Post Soon! :)

[4EverSmallville]

Keeping tabs on me? :lol: Well the writing went well, but I'm not finished yet guys, :o. Please bear with me. I'm trying to tie everything together and not leave anythig out; it's taking longer than I anticipated.

I have to do something else tonight but I will be writing when I get the chance, promise.

*Runs*

[SmallvilleMan]

it's taking longer than I anticipated.

Really? I couldn't tell.......:D

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

I still say President's Day weekend! :lol:

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

Pinky Promise?!? j/k

[SVsleuth]

You don't have to run away, 4Ever. I am very happy to know that the writing went well, & you are tying everything together well. I KNOW it will be an AWESOME update when we finally get to read it. I LOVE this fic!! However long we wait, it is ALWAYS worth it when you post. The quality of your updates is impressive. Keep us posted on your progress, ok? :)

[iloveit]

when IS Presidents Day weekend? i dont know over in Canada here :p

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Oh...sorry...just so you all know, that's this weekend! We talk about presidents of our country from the past, but it isn't all that big except we get off school and work for an extra day (Monday). Soooo...I'm thinking that extra day may give us some luck...:lol:

[midnite_spark]

get...a...day off....from school.....

yeah...no. not for me anymore...man i wish i was back in high school....

[NYC300Z]

midnight spark you don't get off in College? I do!:D oh well Hope you won your game 4Ever and had fun in that Mc Donalds in the middle of no where! lol oh well get to writing! This was on the second page!

[iloveit]

okay then YAAA GO PRESIDENTS DAY WEEKEND!!! ;) ppms!

[kewl]

hope we get an update soon 4ever!

[C.A.chick]

I get a week off! We can't wait 4ever, and we know that once you produce an update, that it will be amazing, even if t takes another couple months.

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

No fair! A week! I just get off Friday-Monday. I guess that's good enough...and I hope that 4ever has enough time... :lol:

[midnite_spark]

i get a week off in march....cuz of spring break...other than that...i get NO long weekends or anything...college bites :lol:

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

What about winter break?

[4EverSmallville]

Originally posted by C.A.chick
I get a week off! We can't wait 4ever, and we know that once you produce an update, that it will be amazing, even if t takes another couple months.

It won't take months! :lol:

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Wohoo!

:D

[iloveit]

wow its like days-off week! i get today off cuz its a snow day and tomorrow cuz its a PD day! :D

[IluvCLANA]

we dont get snow here....so i only get monday off....
o well have fun on your day off!!!!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

Originally posted by iloveit
wow its like days-off week! i get today off cuz its a snow day and tomorrow cuz its a PD day! :D

What exactly is a PD day? And snow! Wow--we're getting cold rain here right now. Chicago weather...:lol:

Anyway, I'm rambling...so enjoy your days off!

PPMS, 4ever!

[iloveit]

lol thank you! a PD day is a day where we get no school and the teachers have some conference or something :\

[NYC300Z]

:lol: this is all very funny but when is 4ever updating?

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

I dunno...but you know what her post said...not months...my guess is this weekend...:D

Anyway, iloveit, thank you for telling me what it is...actually, we called them Institute Days in high and grade school. So, I guess I know what you're talking about! Thanks for letting me know!

:lol:

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

**Smiles happily**

Still waiting...hoping, actually...maybe...

:D

[IluvCLANA]

lol yea so am i.....waiting eagerly.......... :D

[clarkandlana2]

please post more soon....im BEGGING you :(

[hellowelling]

*rocks back and forth while in fetal position in corner* i need an update.

[clarkandlana2]

lol
i agree with hellowelling

[IluvCLANA]

LOL YEA.........

*goes back into corner*
*starts rocking again*

[hellowelling]

*sending telepathic message to 4ever*, server busy........... waiting to resend................... your message, *look what you've reduced us to* was sent at 3:13 pm mountain standard, will continue to send every 5 minutes, for the rest of your life.........until you update anyway. haha, take your time, I know you just enjoy torturing us.

[clarkandlana2]

almost a hundred pages of posts for this fic
we should celebrate with an update......;)

[iloveit]

np somebodyfromMetropolis! and ya, almost 100 pages, we should celebrate this grand occasion with an update!:D;)

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

100 pages yet? Dang we need more posts!!!

[superman's my hero]

Yes we should celebrate with an update! Is my post going to make this story 100 pages? We shall soon see!! Update soon we love your story!!

[kewl]

99 -> 100! yay, congratulations card, ur fic is only a few post away to reaching 100 pages! this calls for a celebration and the best way to do that, is by giving us an update! so PPMS! :D

[clarkandlana2]

Update!! Update!! Update!! UpdateUpdate!Update!!! Update!! Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!
Update!!Update!!
Please????

[Kal-El & Me]

Yes please update, 4ever. Pleeaaasssse?

[basketballstar23]

WOOT WOOT!!!! *chants* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! come on CFC members! join me!!! WOOT WOOT!

[hellowelling]

update please, pretty please

[clarkandlana2]

WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT
come on guys!! *looks accusingly at other CFC members*

[basketballstar23]

WOOT WOOT!!!!!!!

[hellowelling]

can i get a woot woot

[clarkandlana2]

WOOT WOOT

YAY!!
finanly we turned over the 100 page mark

it is SERIOUSLY time for an update
who's with me:p

[basketballstar23]

ME!! WOOT WOOT!!!!

[hellowelling]

to add to this celebration, i shall add my 15th post, yes ladies and gentlement, 15th. I know, I know, it's a lot, but bear with me in the celebrations. WOOT WOOT and update soon!

[IluvCLANA]

WOOT WOOT!!!!!!!!!!! LOL :D

[superman's my hero]

WOOT WOOT!! WOOT WOOT!! WOOT WOOT!! WOOT WOOT!! LOL :D

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

WOOT WOOTs R Contagious!

[superman's my hero]

I know it!! lol You should see that thread!! We have like 10 replies like that or sumthing already!! HOORAY!!

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

I know WOOT WOOT

[hellowelling]

*WOOT WOOT* while dancing the pepto bismal!

[Somebodyfrommetropolis]

WOOT! President's day weekend is nearly over...plz update and save me from the eggs...:lol:

[hellowelling]

*remembers, and grabs handful of eggs*

[*~KrYpToN619~*]

...and your avatar lol j/k
YAY! Your doin the pepto bismol dance!

[hellowelling]

now everybody together, nausea heatburn indegestion, upset stomache diarrhea...yay pepto bismo

[clarkandlana2]

NAUSEA, HEARTBURN, INDEGESTION, UPSET STOMACH, DIARRHEA,
YAY PEPTO BISMOL


p.s. dont forget...now it comes in cherry, too :lol:

[hellowelling]

maybe that's what's been preoccupying 4ever, she has a little digestion problem, throw her some pepto quick:o