Dana0715
06-11-2009, 01:57 PM
Rating - Definite smut so NC17 rating. If you're under 18, go elsewhere!
This takes place in Season 1 during Max's last heat cycle of Season 1 (the episode "Meow!"). My idea is simply if Max ran into Zack a couple of days earlier while she's in the midst of her heat cycle instead of Rafer...... you will find some of the dialogue in my fic from the episode "Meow". I'm starting this where Max realizes she's in heat and the next day she's explaining the heat cycle to her best friend Original Cindy
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OC was sitting in her apartment staring at Max in openmouthed shock. She had a dumbfounded look on her face, shaking her head at Max in disbelief, "You’re joking, right?"
Max sighed tiredly and plopped down next to OC on the couch, "I wish! It’s yet another of the frightening biological facts of my rotten, miserable life!"
"So how often does this estrus-cycle b!tch happen?"
Max shrugged, "Two, maybe three times a year." She looked imploringly at OC, "It’s awful! I get this uncontrollable craving. For sex!"
OC was thinking this over, "So, basically, because of this feline DNA that you got in you, every few months you run around acting like an average male?"
Max scoffed, rolling her eyes, "You know, somehow guys can pull it off. I just turn into this freak show!"
OC was trying to think of a plan, "You could always lock yourself in a closet until it’s over with."
Max shook her head, "Tried that. Blew the door right off the hinges."
OC's eyes widened, "Day-umn girl!"
"Trust me. It's bad! If you see me going to the dark side, do me a favor. Smack me really hard right in the face."
OC's eyebrows raised to her hairline, "For real??"
"Please! It’s the only thing that seems to work."
OC chuckles, then nods, "Okay. You got it! What are friends for, if not to knock each other around once in a while huh?"
Max wanders over to the window and looks at some men working below. She focuses on one guy, biting her lip and looking the guy over
"Oohh. Look at hot boy down there. He’s got some biceps on him. Mmm."
"Don’t make me put the smackdown on your ass already Boo!"
Max nodded and sighed dreamily as OC pulled her away from the window, "Yeah. But he's FINE!!"
OC pushes her to the door, ordering, "Walk! Let's get you outta here and into some fresh air!"
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Max was gathering her gear from her locker at Jam Pony and she asked OC, "Do I look flushed to you?"
OC was getting tired of this, "You’re trippin’, Boo! You got an itch, go scratch. It ain’t gotta be all complicated, either. The male mind understands the difference between love and sex. Let me give you an example......" She looks around and points at one of the messengers, "Sketchy! Come here!"
Sketchy approaches, trying to act suave, "Hello, ladies. What can I do for you?"
OC grabs his shirt roughly and just stated the following without warning to Sketchy, "I wanna get busy with you."
Sketchy knew OC was a lesbian, but if she wanted HIM instead, well.....
"Outstanding!" Sketchy answered with a smile
Max smiles at Sketchy in a kittenish way, then catches herself and looks away and trying to calm her hormones down.
OC had a finger waving in front of Sketchy, "But I want you to forget about it as soon as it’s over."
Sketchy shrugged, "Yeah, no problem."
OC was waving her finger and her head with it, "And don’t be following me around, all moo-eyed and 'Baby, I love you.'"
Sketchy's hands were up in surrender, "Sure! Whatever you say!"
OC turns to Max triumphantly, "See what I mean? No complications."
Sketchy touches OC's shoulders and murmurs, "Um... So when are we gonna do this?"
OC slaps his hands off of her and yells, "Get away from me, fool, ’fore I put you in a world of hurt!"
She shoves him away. Sketchy shakes his head, "Damn! I knew it! Too good to be true!"
Max and Original Cindy walk away from Sketchy, continuing their conversation
Max was mournful, "OC! I’m not gonna just hit it with some guy. That’s how I hooked up with Leo and Darren and Eric, almost. Total disasters that never would’ve happened if I wasn’t a teenage Frankenstein created by people at Manticore."
OC answered her, "Fine, so you don’t wanna be ’bout it with just anybody. What about Logan?"
Max whirled around to look at her in shock. OC grinned, "Somebody you’re into I mean." OC clarified for Max
Max was waving her hands and shaking her head, "No! That’s not what I want to happen with us." Then she narrowed her eyes at OC, "Besides! We’re not even like that!"
OC clearly didn't believe her when she replied, "Sure! Whatever you say."
Max was jumping in place, "God! Can we stop talking about scratching? I wanna beat this b!tch." She points at OC, "You got my back? Right?"
OC rolls her eyes and asks with a smile, "Who’s your girl?"
Max stops jumping, turns back around and nearly collides into a guy delivering a pizza into Jam Pony. She looks him over, checking him out and smiles flirtatiously
The cute delivery guy smiles back and asks, "Uh, did, uh, someone order a large sausage?"
Max grinned wider at the double entendre while the delivery guy turns red. OC drags Max by the sleeve of her jacket out the door, but Max's eyes never leave the delivery guy's until she's outside and out of sight
"Oh c'mon OC, he's so CUUUUTE! Why not him? You just said if I had an itch to go scratch!"
"Got any condoms on you?" OC asked her
Max pouted, "No."
"Then get protection first." OC looked across the street and saw Zack standing with his arms folded, watching them
OC smiled, "I think help's on the way Boo! Check out who's across the street."
Max turned and caught a glimpse of Zack. She turned away quickly, "Oh my God!"
"What is it?" OC asked, suddenly concerned
"It's like my hormones just went into overdrive!! Upon seeing....... ZACK!! But he's my brother!"
"Not technically Boo. You were in the same unit in Manticore, you two are close..... why NOT him?"
Zack jogged across the street and took Max by the arm. Since he was being so forceful, OC was ready to change her mind and protect Max at all costs, "Original Cindy, I got this." he told her shortly as he began to pull Max away quickly
OC stood her ground, keeping hold of Max's other arm. They were having a tug of war with Max being in the middle, "You're not taking Boo anywhere yet Bro! Not until you tell me you'll take care of her and USE PROTECTION!"
"This is a Manticore matter." Zack told her, used to people scurrying to obey his orders and was irritated that OC wasn't taking the hint
"And I'm in on it Zack. Care to explain what's up with my girl?"
Max as on her knees now, clutching her stomach, moaning. Zack stooped down and picked her up, intending to carry her away. He turned back to OC at the last second, "Manticore programmed the X5's with a primal urge to procreate." OC raised an eyebrow and Zack rolled his eyes and sighed, "Fine! To f*ck! Are you happy now?? It's to ensure the X5 line will continue. Once Max here sees another X5 male, human males no longer hold any appeal. So.... we're gonna take off for a couple of days. Can you take care of things with Normal for us? Thanks! I knew you could do it OC!"
Zack takes off without waiting on OC's reply and she yells down the street at him, "You hurt my girl and I hurt you! You hear me??"
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TBC
This takes place in Season 1 during Max's last heat cycle of Season 1 (the episode "Meow!"). My idea is simply if Max ran into Zack a couple of days earlier while she's in the midst of her heat cycle instead of Rafer...... you will find some of the dialogue in my fic from the episode "Meow". I'm starting this where Max realizes she's in heat and the next day she's explaining the heat cycle to her best friend Original Cindy
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OC was sitting in her apartment staring at Max in openmouthed shock. She had a dumbfounded look on her face, shaking her head at Max in disbelief, "You’re joking, right?"
Max sighed tiredly and plopped down next to OC on the couch, "I wish! It’s yet another of the frightening biological facts of my rotten, miserable life!"
"So how often does this estrus-cycle b!tch happen?"
Max shrugged, "Two, maybe three times a year." She looked imploringly at OC, "It’s awful! I get this uncontrollable craving. For sex!"
OC was thinking this over, "So, basically, because of this feline DNA that you got in you, every few months you run around acting like an average male?"
Max scoffed, rolling her eyes, "You know, somehow guys can pull it off. I just turn into this freak show!"
OC was trying to think of a plan, "You could always lock yourself in a closet until it’s over with."
Max shook her head, "Tried that. Blew the door right off the hinges."
OC's eyes widened, "Day-umn girl!"
"Trust me. It's bad! If you see me going to the dark side, do me a favor. Smack me really hard right in the face."
OC's eyebrows raised to her hairline, "For real??"
"Please! It’s the only thing that seems to work."
OC chuckles, then nods, "Okay. You got it! What are friends for, if not to knock each other around once in a while huh?"
Max wanders over to the window and looks at some men working below. She focuses on one guy, biting her lip and looking the guy over
"Oohh. Look at hot boy down there. He’s got some biceps on him. Mmm."
"Don’t make me put the smackdown on your ass already Boo!"
Max nodded and sighed dreamily as OC pulled her away from the window, "Yeah. But he's FINE!!"
OC pushes her to the door, ordering, "Walk! Let's get you outta here and into some fresh air!"
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Max was gathering her gear from her locker at Jam Pony and she asked OC, "Do I look flushed to you?"
OC was getting tired of this, "You’re trippin’, Boo! You got an itch, go scratch. It ain’t gotta be all complicated, either. The male mind understands the difference between love and sex. Let me give you an example......" She looks around and points at one of the messengers, "Sketchy! Come here!"
Sketchy approaches, trying to act suave, "Hello, ladies. What can I do for you?"
OC grabs his shirt roughly and just stated the following without warning to Sketchy, "I wanna get busy with you."
Sketchy knew OC was a lesbian, but if she wanted HIM instead, well.....
"Outstanding!" Sketchy answered with a smile
Max smiles at Sketchy in a kittenish way, then catches herself and looks away and trying to calm her hormones down.
OC had a finger waving in front of Sketchy, "But I want you to forget about it as soon as it’s over."
Sketchy shrugged, "Yeah, no problem."
OC was waving her finger and her head with it, "And don’t be following me around, all moo-eyed and 'Baby, I love you.'"
Sketchy's hands were up in surrender, "Sure! Whatever you say!"
OC turns to Max triumphantly, "See what I mean? No complications."
Sketchy touches OC's shoulders and murmurs, "Um... So when are we gonna do this?"
OC slaps his hands off of her and yells, "Get away from me, fool, ’fore I put you in a world of hurt!"
She shoves him away. Sketchy shakes his head, "Damn! I knew it! Too good to be true!"
Max and Original Cindy walk away from Sketchy, continuing their conversation
Max was mournful, "OC! I’m not gonna just hit it with some guy. That’s how I hooked up with Leo and Darren and Eric, almost. Total disasters that never would’ve happened if I wasn’t a teenage Frankenstein created by people at Manticore."
OC answered her, "Fine, so you don’t wanna be ’bout it with just anybody. What about Logan?"
Max whirled around to look at her in shock. OC grinned, "Somebody you’re into I mean." OC clarified for Max
Max was waving her hands and shaking her head, "No! That’s not what I want to happen with us." Then she narrowed her eyes at OC, "Besides! We’re not even like that!"
OC clearly didn't believe her when she replied, "Sure! Whatever you say."
Max was jumping in place, "God! Can we stop talking about scratching? I wanna beat this b!tch." She points at OC, "You got my back? Right?"
OC rolls her eyes and asks with a smile, "Who’s your girl?"
Max stops jumping, turns back around and nearly collides into a guy delivering a pizza into Jam Pony. She looks him over, checking him out and smiles flirtatiously
The cute delivery guy smiles back and asks, "Uh, did, uh, someone order a large sausage?"
Max grinned wider at the double entendre while the delivery guy turns red. OC drags Max by the sleeve of her jacket out the door, but Max's eyes never leave the delivery guy's until she's outside and out of sight
"Oh c'mon OC, he's so CUUUUTE! Why not him? You just said if I had an itch to go scratch!"
"Got any condoms on you?" OC asked her
Max pouted, "No."
"Then get protection first." OC looked across the street and saw Zack standing with his arms folded, watching them
OC smiled, "I think help's on the way Boo! Check out who's across the street."
Max turned and caught a glimpse of Zack. She turned away quickly, "Oh my God!"
"What is it?" OC asked, suddenly concerned
"It's like my hormones just went into overdrive!! Upon seeing....... ZACK!! But he's my brother!"
"Not technically Boo. You were in the same unit in Manticore, you two are close..... why NOT him?"
Zack jogged across the street and took Max by the arm. Since he was being so forceful, OC was ready to change her mind and protect Max at all costs, "Original Cindy, I got this." he told her shortly as he began to pull Max away quickly
OC stood her ground, keeping hold of Max's other arm. They were having a tug of war with Max being in the middle, "You're not taking Boo anywhere yet Bro! Not until you tell me you'll take care of her and USE PROTECTION!"
"This is a Manticore matter." Zack told her, used to people scurrying to obey his orders and was irritated that OC wasn't taking the hint
"And I'm in on it Zack. Care to explain what's up with my girl?"
Max as on her knees now, clutching her stomach, moaning. Zack stooped down and picked her up, intending to carry her away. He turned back to OC at the last second, "Manticore programmed the X5's with a primal urge to procreate." OC raised an eyebrow and Zack rolled his eyes and sighed, "Fine! To f*ck! Are you happy now?? It's to ensure the X5 line will continue. Once Max here sees another X5 male, human males no longer hold any appeal. So.... we're gonna take off for a couple of days. Can you take care of things with Normal for us? Thanks! I knew you could do it OC!"
Zack takes off without waiting on OC's reply and she yells down the street at him, "You hurt my girl and I hurt you! You hear me??"
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TBC